Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#471

OMG its amazing u made me blush sooo hard 😳😳😳😳 beautiful OS loved it plz do write more and thx alot for the pm

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#472

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

hehehehhe mahak... sooo very romantic!!! hehehe

very well written...like always!!! heheh dunno what else to say!

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#473

mahak

ek din tum mujhe maar kar hi rahogi

itna romantic os maine kabhi nahi pada hai yaar

i am still blushing while commenting

but tumhara har ek update aur os hamesha ever lasting impact chod jata hai

you are indeed the most bestest writer on if yaar

hamesha ki tarah picture perfect and totally different update

amazing...... simply amazing

i toh love this os a lot

nupur falling and mayank catching her

and then the romantic kisses

and finally making love

and their daughter deepika......... wow

mindblowing

fantastic

and your personal views........ omg that was so cute

your all writings always leave me speechlees

continue writing more and more

just pray i don't loose the ablity to comment

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#474

Mahima do u always have to make me blush so deep?

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#475

aww.. wat a lovely os yaaar.. amde me blush thruout..grr88888888 job..well written..really enjoyed reading itt..thnhks a ton for da pm..

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-Sindhu-

@-Sindhu-

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#476

Hey Mahak!🤗

That was amazing! Indeed a very romantic one!😳

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#477

soooo sweet

love it😛

Edited by .rumki. - 15 years ago

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Aqsa

@awsumgirl

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#478

Mahi this is the most romantic one shot I have ever read.....

You have written it so beautifully.......No words...........

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Divya (Divz)

@ch0c0lates

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#479

Very very romantic.....enjoyed reading it :)

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#480

Hey Mahak.

I am so sorry for the late reply. whoa man I am still blushing hehe! That was very well written Mahak. Keep it up!

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