Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#461

Awesome dear
mazaaaaaaa aa gaya

thanx for pm

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....Anchal....

@....Anchal....

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#462

mahak u actually wrote this?

no wonder u were so red while asking me to read it!

i never knew that u can really write this good!

brilliant one yaar!

i never blush while reading mills and boons and today i blushed like a bride!

there is something in ur writing for sure....

it really pulls me towards ur work.....

kinda magnetized.....

and how u manage to change ur style everytime u write something?

awesome blossom and magnificent.....

brilliant and he last line made me blush even harder....

r u writing that os? i mean that "crush" one? do tell me ok?

loved this oneshot yaar....

love u for writing it....and love u deepika for asking her to write this...

shy,
Anchal

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wind453

@wind453

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#463

awesome os mahak

it was just too romantic

loved it to the core

thanks for pm

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#464

gr88 part...luved itt..

thnks for da pm

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Mehek

@-DarkFantasy-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#465

OMG,That Was Really Romantic
Loved It 😳
Blush Blush Blush Awesome
Write More
Thanks For The PM

-Mehek-

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#466

Awesome OS mahak...
Every word You write is MAGICAL

Welcome back dear

lekha

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ardhana

@ardhana

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#467

it was too romantic

wow awesome os

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#468

awesome os..!!!
really amazing..😳
superb..!!
loved it

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#469

oh my god!! is it u mahak?? writing blatantly dis so called things which u had once said u cant put in words??😎...though m nt complaining!!!😊it's jst dat i've never saw sch a true-blue romantic os frm u...is it realy u??#pinching myself!!# oh yeah.. it's u only!!! d beautiful penning style cant be nyone's xcept urs...👏...

well from where do i start, right frm d beginning.. d os moved with such an apt yet sensible pace..d inner voice of mayur wre marvwllous,n mainly d concept or plot is though cliched yet it's looking fresh due to ur superb way of presentation!!!⭐️ 👏 also i wanna mention d starting line of d concluding para,"She pulled off his shirt and they were involved in an act which in terms of biology is defined as the act by which two organisms come closer to produce offspring. " dis line jst tickled me lyk crazy!!! simply excellent...!! 20 out of 10.. if i may say so..👍🏼

do write more such stuffs huny..god bless..👍🏼

luv mayur always!!!🤗