Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#451

Mahak !!
oh god u wrote a os
well only one word for that ☺️
it was so so so romantic !!!!☺️
i loved it soo much and simply ☺️☺️☺️☺️
i call this your ' blushlicious' os ☺️☺️☺️☺️
im still blushing
les see if i get out of ths blush o mania
do write more ☺️☺️☺️
pebz

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#452

wow it was so romantic

amazing os dear....just loved it

mayank is so caring and cute....too good

thanks for the pm

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#453

it was so romantic dear..loved it

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#454

Haay marjawa Mahak dear!!! I m all red at the end😆😆😆😆

This was really a superb romantic OS. Lucky u Deepika !! So sweet of u Mahak to write such a beautiful OS for her.

N i also noticed some change in style of writing. good one. M more impressed 👏👏👏👏👏

Even i love to do the dusting of my house, all on my own. N i would to continue even after getting married. Servants' work doesnt give that so called self satisfaction. uuuhhh!! Mr. Not So Perfect Husband is right on time. U know that part was really showing so much trust on him by her. i liked that. N So sweet of Mayank yaar. So much care. too good.

N omg !!! That not kissing her and intentionally teasing her was so naughty of him. Well she deserves that😉😉😉. n those doctors - 😡😡😡😡😡. But thank god sab settle ho gaya baad mein. 😉😆😳

Awesome OS dear.

loads n loads of love
vinu

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#455

awesomeeeeee oneshot!

it was really good.....loved it!

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#456

lovely one shot!!!
really loved mayur in this....
thanks 4 the pm

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#457

woow awesome os mahak.
so romantic.
loved it.
keep writing more.

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#458

heyyy dear,
awesome one
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss

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varsha

@rose.three

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#459

awwwwwwwww..it's a wonderful OS....

it was soo romantic... 😳
vry beautiful....!

i cant stop blushing....
it was awesome....!!

make more OS like tis.... 😃

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#460

mahek the OS was amazing ..........it wasoo romantic nd sensuous .......i was blushing badly while reading it ........... mayank is such a sweet heart he cares for hiw wife sooooo much ....................the way you have written its beautiful ............... and finally all the problems in mayur's life got over and they were blessed with a baby girl deepika ......... dat was shoooo cute .......... lovely one short mahek ......... it was very well written loved it lots ..............