Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

Loved it as always

luckily no one was around me when I read it

awww Mayank is soo sweet

today Mahi,

I saw the new side of you 😆

I loved the ending

"in an act which in terms of biology is defined as the act by which two organisms come closer to produce offspring."

LOL

I smiled at that

keep it up dear!

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

awww........mahak........ loved it!!!!!.................it was so damn romantic!!!.......

so passionate!!........i got goosebumps while reading it!!!!!!.........

loved it to the core!!!!..........

thanx a lot dear for such a wonderful os!!!!!

ab to tumhare "unexpected" ff se to ummeedein aur bhi badh gayi......lolzz......

loved it dear!!!!!!.......... plzzzz write more such os.........

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Marium

@maloo19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#443

it was so so romantic

i was lyke

superb

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#444

Awesome os
totally loved it
so romantic
mayank is so cute
thanks 4 da pm

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

awwww Mahakkk can't stop blushing !!!!

ufff tkitna romantic tha !!
just loved the whole thing !!

ufffffffffffffffffffffffFFFFFFFFFFfffffffff

😍 😍 😍

am speechless now !!
have no wordzz for it !!!

and aww in the end they had a child name Deepika !!!
awwwwwww

just loved it loved it !!

keep writing loadzz more na sis!
-Lina-

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Aisha

@theaisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#446

Momo, It was so romantic :D

GOSH :D love how u describe MayUr love **

the kiss was unique,

ohh what a memorable night,

they have a baby a girl "deepika" love her,

you rock,

Your Aisho [im ur fan forever.. you know that?] 🤗

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Divya

@myownarea

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Posted: 15 years ago

#447

ahahh!! Mahak, ye kya kar diya..LOL...itna romantic..and I was like getting all embarrassed 😆
I think I m prudish LOL...but u wrote this one wonderfully,..it had beauty and style and the comments that went with the narration were just too good..keep writing:)