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Part 7

Raj moved towards Naina and take Mangalsutra from her hands then he placed it in her neck. Raj smiled to which Naina replied with a smile. They were lost in their eyes when Sanjana came inside.

Raj: - "Sanju; tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ki knock karke aaya karo."

Sanjana: - "Kya bhai; ab aapke room me aane ke liye bhi knock karna padega kya; ya phir aisa hai ki aap aur bhabhi kuch romantic mood me the aur mene achanak aa kar us mood ko kharab kar diya'hmmm..bataiye?"

Raj: - "Tum bhi na bas har waqt mazak hi karti rehti ho."

Sanjana: - "Itna mazak to chalta hai na; kyun bhabhi?"

Naina: - "Haan chalta hai; vese tum yahan aayi kyun thi?"

Sanjana: - "Bhabhi, mujhe aapki ready hone me help chahiye thi."

Naina: - "Theek hai; aao bhetho."

Raj: - "Me bahar tum dono ki wait karta hoon."

Naina nodded. Raj was about to leave when Sanjana called him again: - "Bhaiya."

Raj: - "Haan."

Sanjana: - "Aapse ek baat bolni thi?"

Raj: - "Haan bolo na phir"

Sanjana: - "Wo kya hai na ki aap aur bhabhi saath me bahut ache lagte ho; hamesha saath hi rehna."

Raj and naina looked at each other and then raj replied: - "Hamesha saath hi rahenge."

Saying this, raj left the room and came in garden. He was lost in some old memories.

Flashback: -

Raj and naina were planning to go on a dinner and Naina was getting ready while Raj is waiting for her.

Raj: - "Nia, tum aur kitni wait karvaogi."

Naina: - "Thodha time aur veer; mein bilkul perfect lagna chahti hun."

Raj: - "Nia, tum aise hi perfect lagti ho."

Naina: - "Par me chahti hun ki jab me tumhare saath hun; tab log dekh kar yeh bole ki me tumhare liye perfect hun."

Raj: - "Acha aur kya tum janti ho ki mein kya chahta hun."

Naina: - "Kya?"

Raj: - "Mein chahta hun ki jab hum dono saath me ho; to log humhe dekh kar kahe ki hum dono saath me perfect hain."

Naina: - "Matlab?"

Raj: - "Nia. Koi insaan perfect nahin hota. Par do insaan saath me perfect zaroor ho sakte hain. Meri jo kamiyaan hain unhe tum poori karo aur tum mein jo kami hai wo mein poori karun; to ho gaye na hum ek dum perfect."

Naina: - "Hmmm."

Raj: - "To bas jab hum dono perfect honge to log to dekh ke yehi bolenge na ki hum dono perfect hain."

Naina: - "Bilkul sahi kaha."

Raj: - "chalo phir chalte hain."

Naina and raj left.

Flashback ends.

Raj: - "Dekha Nia, humhe sab perfect mante hain; jaisa ki emne kaha tha."

Tears came in his eyes. He closed his eyes and was trying to calm himself. When he felt something on his shoulders; he turned to see Aalekh there.

Raj: - "Are Aalekh tum yahan kaise?"

Aalekh: - "Wo apun ne aapke diya suit pehna na to aapko dikhane aa gaya Bhaiya."

Raj smiled and then reply: - "Bahut ache lag rahe ho; I am sure is baar ka Mr. Fresher ka award tumhe hi milega."

Aalekh: - "Kya bahiya aap bhi mazak akrte ho."

Raj: - "Nahin, me mazak nahin akr raha; mein abhut serious hun." He said making a serious face tow hich both of them laughed. Then he continued: - "Vese tumhe ab chalna chahiye; varna late ho jaoge."

Aalekh: - "Ji Bhaiya, aur aap?"

Raj: - "Mein tumhara bhabhi aur tumhara behen ki wait kar raha hun."

Aalekh: - "Phir to shayad aap late hi ho jayenge."

Raj: - "Chalo dekhte hain. Tum jao; hum aate hain aur haan all the best aaj raat ke liye."

Aalekh: - "Ji Bhaiya." Aalekh turned to go but he stopped and turned towards raj.

Raj: - "Kya hua Aalekh?"

Aalekh: - "Bhaiya mein bas yeh kehne aaya tha ki sab theek ho jayega; aap chinta mat karna."

Raj nodded and Aalekh left. Aalekh went towards his friends.

Aalekh: - "Kya kar rahe ho tum log?"

Huda: - "kya baat hai qaidi; tu toh badha sahi lag raha ahi; yeh kiske yahan se chori kiya hai."

Aalekh: - "Chori kiya hoga tunhe jatt; apun ko yeh apun ke bhai ne diya hai."

Huda: - "Ooye tera kaun sa bhai aa gaya?"

Aalekh: - "Bas hai; apun tere ko batana zaruri nahin samajhta."

Huda: - "Kya baat hai ab is qaidi ke bhi badha thath ho gaye hain."

Ali: - "Kya huda bhai; aap har waqt aise baat kyn karte rehte hain; kisi waqt to bakiyon ki izzat karna sikhiye."

Huda: - "Kya tu bhi asool bhai."

Yudi: - "Guys, please aaj ke liye yeh behans band kar do; yeh sab hum kuch din baad krenge; abhi hum please party me chale."

Saying this all guys moved from there as they want to meet their partners on the way but Ali didn't join them as he was waiting for Pooja. After 15 mins, Pooja arrived there and she was looking really very sweet.

Ali: - "Pooja, aap baut achi lag rahi hai?"

Pooja replied shyly: - "Thanks Ali."

And they moved towards the ball. Here in the hall, many couples have arrived and now, it's the turn for BC. He came there with his wife Chitra ji. They entered and the hall went into applause. They move towards the meter. The meter scores 7 for both of them and 7.5 together as a couple. All clapped and they thank everyone. Now, Ali and Pooja enters and the meter scores 8 for Pooja and 8.5 for Ali and 8 for them as a couple. They thank everyone and moved towards a side.

Pooja: - "Dekha ali; hamari Jodi kitni kamal ki hai."

Ali: - "Ji Pooja. Dekh liya."

Pooja: - "Acha, hamare group ke baki handsets kahan par hain?"

Ali: - "Ji wo aate hi honge, sab apne apne partners ki wait kar rahe honge na."

Pooja: - "Haan, vese wo to hai; acha ek baat bata ki is baar best couple ka award kisse milega."

Ali: - "Humhe to lagta hai yeh award Rajveer Sir aur Naina Mam ko hi milega."

Pooja: - "Haan yaar, yeh to tunhe bilkul sahi sms bheja. Unki Jodi jaisa signal to koi aur Jodi catch hi nahin kar sakti."

Ali was about to speak something when they saw Huda entering the hall with Ritu Mishra.

Ali: - "Humhe to pata hi nahin tha ki Huda bhai Ritu mam ke saath aa rahe hain."

Pooja: - "Is sms ki to mujhe bhi koi khabar nahin thi."

As ali and Pooja were shocked to see Huda coming with Ritu. On the other side, it was their turn to check the scores. The meter scored 8.5 for both of them but the couple has been scored as 6. Almost everyone in the hall wanted to laugh; but no one did it due to BC's presence. Now, it was Aalekh's turn to enter in the hall with Neelu. They entered and everyone present in the ball encouraged them. The scoring meter scores 9 for Aalekh and 8 for Neelu and the couple has been scored as 8.5. After thanking everyone, they joined their group.

Pooja: - "Kya baat hai qaidi; aaj to tu bahut chamak raha ahi; yeh suit to bahut jach raha hai tujhpe; tere pass iska signal kaise aaya?"

Aalekh: - "Apun ko yeh apne bhai ne diya ahi."

Pooja: - "Ooye tere kaun sa bhai hai is academy mein?"

Aalekh: - "Rajveer sir."

Pooja: - "Ooye, wo tere Bhaiya kab se ban gaye?"

Aalekh: - "Apun ki unhone hi kaha ki ab se apun akela nahin hai aur wo hamesha apun ke saath apne bahi ban ke rahenge."

All smiled at this and then they turned to see the entry of shalini with Yudi.

They came down and the meter scores 7.5 for both of them and the couple has been rated as 7.5 again. They thank everyone and yudi join his friends; while shalini move towards BC to greet Chitra ji.

Pooja: - "Yaar, yeh Sanjana ka signal kahan jam ho gaya; room se to kab ki nikal gayi thi; par yahan abhi tak kyun nahin aayi?"

Ali: - "Aati hi hogi Pooja."

Aalekh: - "Aati nahin hogi blki aa gayi hai."

He said and pointed towards the entry. All of them turned to see Sanjana with Neev.

Both of them entered in the hall and moved towards the scoring meter. The meter scores 9 for both of them and the couple has been rated as 9.5. Thanking everyone they moved towards their friends.

Pooja: - "Ooye tum dono ne to sab ke signal out of reach kar diye."

Neev: - "Wo to hona hi tha. Aisa ho hi nahin sakta ki me aur Sanju saath me aaye aur koi dhamaka na ho."

Yudi: - "Chalo, ab sab dhamake ho gaye hain to party enjoy karte hain."

Sanjana: - "Abhi to sab se badha dhamaka rehta hai."

Ali: - "Matlab?"

Neev: - "Are abhi Raj Bhaiya aur naina bhabhi ki entry nahin hui na."

Yudi: - "To chaliye dekhte hain ki unke aane pe kya dhamaka hota hai."

Sanjana: - "just wait and watch."

They continued their chatting when everything stopped and all were looking in one direction. When the group turned in that direction; they saw raj and naina standing there. All clapped to welcome them. They came down and move towards the meter. They got a score of 10 as individuals and 10 for them as a couple. All went in a big applause; they thank everyone and then move aside. Then there is an announcement saying that the ball has begun and it proceeds with official dance of BC with chitra ji and other staff members. While our young gang is getting really bored so neev went upto DJ and changed the music. They played a pop number and all the cadets join the stage while other staff members came down.

They all were enjoying a lot when neev knowing changed the music to a romantic number and they pushed raj and naina on the floor, neev and Sanjana also joined them on floor.

As the music starts; raj slowly offered his hand to Naina. Naina first look at raj and then slowly placed her hand in his hand.

Sajde kiye hai lakho
Lakho duayien mangi
Paya hai maine phir tujhe
Chahat ki teri maine
HAq mein hawaien mangi
Paya hai maine phir tujhe

Naina was trying to avoid raj's gaze as she knew that she can't avoid his deep eyes.



Tujhse hi dil yeh behla
Tu jaise Kalma phela
Chaahoon na phir kyun main tujhe

Raj was looking unblinking towards Naina as this day has bring a lot for him and in each and every moment, he wants to believe that his nia is again with him in his life.


Jis pal na chaha tujhko
Us pal sajayein mangi
Paya hai maine phir tujhe


Raj called naina's name and naina look towards him; she saw a lot of emotions running in his eyes and she is feeling very helpless as she finds herself drowning in his eyes.


OoooOO
Sajde kiye hai lakho
Lakho duyaien mangi
Paya hai maine phir tujhe


Raj: - "Kya hua nia? Tum itni chup kyun ho?"

Jane tu sara woh
Dil mein jo mere ho
PAdh le tu aankein har dafa

Naina: - "Kuch nahin veer wo bas'."

Raj: - "Haan soch lo koi bahana."

Naina: - "Nahin bahana kyun?"

Raj: - "Mujhse nazre churane ka koi bahana to hoga hi"

Naina look in his eyes and get lost in them.

hoo hoo
Jane tu sara woh
Dil mein jo mere ho
PAdh le tu aankein har dafa
Haan
Nakhre se na jee bhi
Hoti bhi razi bhi
Tujhse hi hoti hai khafa

Naina remembers the old time when she was with raj and they share some memorable moments. She was forced to think the reason behind their separation. But she doesn't receive an answer because somehow she herself knows the reason behind their separation; which is her ignorance and rough behavior towards raj.

Jane tu baatein sari
KAtte hain raatein sari
Jalti diye se unbujhe
uth uth kar raaton ko bhi
Teri wafaien mangi
Paya hai maine phir tujhe


Naina: - "Veer tum mujhse gussa kyun nahin hote?"

Raj: - "Mein kuch samjha nahin."

Naina: - "Mene tumhare saath itna kuch kiya phir bhi tumne mujhse kabhi kuch nahin kaha aur na hi kabhi naraz hue; kya reason hai iske peeche?"

Raj: - "Mera aur tumhara pyaar."

Naina: - "Par'"

Raj placed his finger on her lips and then said: - "Bas, ab kuch mat kaho; sirf is pal ko mehsoos karo Yeh pal humhe bahut mushkil se mile hain."

Naina nodded and placed her head on his shoulder.


OooOO
Sajde kiye hai lakho
Lakho duyaien mangi
Paya hai maine phir tujhe

Chahat ke kajal se
Kismat ke kagaj pe
Apni wafaein likh zara

Haannnnan
Chahat ke kajal se
Kismat ke kagaj pe
Apni wafaein likh zara

Bole zamana yun
Mein tere jaise hoon
Tu bhi to mujhsa dikh zara
Mera hi saya tu hai
Mujh mein samaya tu hai
HAr pal yeh lagta hai mujhe

Khud ko mitaya mene
Teri balayein mangi
Paya hai phir mene tujhe

Chaha tu chahe mujhko
Aise adayein mangi
Paya hai mene phir tujhe

As the music ends, raj and naina came out of their world by a huge round of applause while both of them felt a little bit awkward. They came down and moved towards the gang.

After sometime, Suriji ordered to stop the music.

Suriji: - "Ab waqt hai is saal ke mr. and ms. Fresher chune jane ka; to cadets is saal ki ms. Fresher ka award jata hai cadet Sanjana ko aur is saal ka mr. fresher ka award jata hai cadet Aalekh ko."

Everyone present in the hall clapped for them and both of them came forward. They were given their badges and then, Suriji make an announcement again.

Suriji: - "Ab waqt hai hamare best couple of the night ka; aur yeh award jata hai'..Major Rajveer singh shikhawat aur Captain Dr. Naina Singh Shikhawat'"

Everyone cheered for them and they thank everyone.

BC: - "Congrats Cadet Sanjana, Cadet Aalekh, Captain Singh and Major Shikhawat. Jaise ki aap sab dekh rahe hain ki aaj ki sham sab masti mazak me itne khoye hue hain ki mujhe nahin lagta wo kal apni routine follow kar payenge. That's y I aanounce tomorrow's holiday in the campus." Everyone clapped and BC continued: - "So, Enjoys cadets. Gud nyte."

All: - "Gud Nyte Sir."

BC left the hall and after sometime; raj and our gang also left the hall and all of them gathered in Raj's room.

After settling down, Naina: - "So guys, anyone interested in coffee?"

Raj: - "Of course."

Shalini: - "Raj, naina ne hum sab se coffee ke bare me pucha tha; na ki tumse akele; phir sirf tumne hi answer kyun kiya?"

Raj: - "Are mene to aise hi'"

Shalini: -"Kya aise hi raj'.. hmmmm'. Mana naina tumhara patni hai par us par hamara bhi to kuch haq hai na; aur aaj job hi dance floor par hua uske baad to hmmmmmmmmm'.."

Raj: - "Shalu bas; ab meri tang khichna band karo aur koi kaam karna sikh lo."

Shalini: - "Haan Haan kyun nahin; par humhe bhi party chahiye."

Raj: - "Kis baat ki party?"

Sanjana: - "Bhai, aaj aap logon ko best couple ka award mila hai to party to honi hi chahiye."

Yudi: - "Yes sir, humhe party chahiye."

Raj: - "Nahin, koi party nahin hogi."

Sanjana: - "Par kyun Bhaiya; itni kanjusi kyun kar rahe ho?"

Raj: - "Kyunki kal hum party nahin karenge; balki hum ghumne bahar jayenge."

Pooja: - "Sach me sir."

Raj: - "haanji Pooja, sach me."

Ali: - "Par sir, humhe permission kaun dega."

Aalekh: - "Ooye sir ko kisi se permission lene ki zarurat hi nahin hai; Sir to khud hi yahan ke bole to vice-pransipal hai."

Sanjana: - "Vice-Principal Aalekh."

Aalekh: - "Haan voich."

Raj: - "Mein manta hoon ki mein KMA ka vice-principal hoon par isse aap logon ko rules todhne ka koi haq nahin mil jata. Samkhe aap log."

Ali: - "Ji Sir hum samajhte hain."

Neev: - "Kya Bhaiya; aap par itni seriousness achi nahin lagti."

Raj: - "Neev, jab hum responsibilities badh jati hai na to unhe pura karne ki maturity apne aap insaan me aa jati hai; aur yeh maturity usse serius bana deti hai; par tumhe is baat ka ehsaas abhi nahin hoga; tumhe iska ehsaas tab hoga jab tum par khud ek badhi zimedari dhali jayega."

Neev: - "Bhaiya aapki behen se badhi aur bhari responsibility is duniya me aur koi nahin hai."

Sanajana: - "neev, tum ab mujhse bahut maar kahoge." Saying this, she ran towards him. Neev ran from his place and he ran behind Naina who just brought the coffee for all of them.

Sanjana: - "Bhabhi, aap hatiye."

Neev: - "Nahin bhabhi, please mujhe bachahiye'"

Naina: - "Are tum dono ruk jao; varna coffee gir jayega."

Sanjana: - "Nahin bhabhi, aaj mein neev ko nahin chodungi."

Neev: - "Are pehle mujhe pakad ke to dikhao phir chodhne ki baat aayegi na." He said running behing Raj.

Sanjana: - "Bhabiya, hatiye na'"

Raj: - "Are Sanju, bas karo na'.Itna gussa nahin karte'"

Sanjana: - "Kya Bhaiya, aap hamesha neev ki side lete rehte ho."

Neev: - "Wo meri side isliye lete hain kyunki unhe pata hai I am always right."

Sanjana: - "Bhabhi'dekhiye na."

Naina: - "Tum dono ab bacho ki tarah jhagada karna band karo aur chup chap coffee peo; phir sab cadets ko apne rooms me bhi jana hai."

Sanjana: - "Tumhe to mein kal dekh lungi.."

Naina: - "Kyun? Kal kya hai?"

Neev: - "Kal Raj Bhaiya humhe dinner par bahar le kar ja rahe hain."

Naina: - "Par kyun?"

Neev: - "Kyunki kal meri shaadi hai'"

Naina: - "Neev'"

Sanjana: - "Bhabhi, aap bhi kis ki baat sun rahi hain; aap logon ko aaj best couple ka awar mila hai na isliye kal Bhaiya humhe party den eke liye bahar le ke ja rahe hain."

Raj: - "Ji Haan, aur hum sab kal sham 6 baje yahan se nikal jayenge'"

After this, they took their coffee and about after half an hour, all of them left for their rooms. Raj and naina were alone in the room now.

Naina: - "Veer, yeh party kis liye?"

Raj: - "Nia, dekho na sab itne khush hain aur thodha enjoy karna chahte hain; inhe enjoy karne ka aur mauka kahan milega; isliye mene socha ki in sab ki outing hi ho jayega; aur vese bhi tum janti ho na ki ab academy me training bhi bahut mushkil ho jayega aur yeh sab us mein itne busy ho jayega ki is masti mazak ka mauka hi nahin milega."
Naina: - "Yeh to tumne bilkul theek kiya veer; is break ke baad inhe is academy me apne aap ko sabit karke dikhana hai."

Raj: - "Haan, tumne bilkul theek kaha. Chalo ab tum so jao. Mujhe kuch kaam hai; mein abhi aata hoon."

Naina: - "Itni raat ko kya kaam?"

Raj: - "Wo mein tumhe baad me bataunga; kyunki yahan yeh batana itna safe nahin hai."

Naina senses some seriousness and nodded. Raj left the room and returned about after half an hour. Then, he changed his clothes and go to sleep.

Next day he woke up at 7 a.m. and he just followed his routine by going on a morning walk. When he returned, he found naina cooking something in the kitchen.

Raj: - "Nia, subah subah kitchen me kya kar rahi ho?"

Naina: - "Kuch nahin, bas breakfast ready kar rahi thi."

Raj: - "Par hum to breakfast mess me karte hain na; to tum khud kyun bana rahi ho?"

Naina: - "Aaj humhe chuthi hai veer; aur mein free bhi thi to mene socha ki kyun na me khud hi breakfast bana lun."

Raj: - "Good'vaise bana kya rahi ho?"

Naina: - "Aloo wale paranthe."

Raj: - "Kya?"

Naina: - "Haan, kyun itne shocked kyun ho?"

Raj: - "Kuch nahin; mein bahut khush hoon. Acha me fresh ho kar aata hoon; tab tak tum breakfast ready kar lo."

Naina: - "Haan theek hai; jaldi aana."

Raj left the kitchen area and entered his room. Raj murmured: - "Pichli baar naina ne aloo ke paranthe banaye the to 2 din tak kuch khane ka man nahin kiya tha; is baar pata nahin kya hoga. Pichli baar to Naveen saath me tha par is baar me akela hi phas gaya hoon. Hey bhagwan!!! Bachao mujhe'" Raj was lost in himself when naina called him to come outside. Raj left the room after 5 minutes.

Now in hall

Naina: - "Lo veer; khao."

Raj: - "Haan'do."

Raj took the first bite carefully and he tasted the food. It was delicious.
Raj: - "Wow Nia, breakfast to bahut tasty bana hai. Mein to aise hi dar raha tha." He bite his tongue after saying this.

Naina: - "Tum dar kyun rahe the?"

Raj: - "Wo bas aise hi."

Naina: - "Veer tum batate ho ya nahin?"

Raj: - "Wo kya hai na nia, mene socha ki aaj bhi tum vaise hi paranthe banati hogi jaise tumne pahli baar bana ke humhe khilaye the."

Naina: - "Veer, tum aaj bahut maar khaoge?"

She said running behind raj and she threw some pillows on him.

Raj: - "Nia, bas karo yaar; cadets dekhenge to kya sochenge?"

Naina: - "Yehi sochenge ki sabki band bajane wale unke major rajveer ki bhi band baj sakti hai."

Raj: - "Sorry nia, par mein kya karun pichli bar tumne aise paranthe kilaye the ki meri aur Naveen ki bahut buri halat ho gayi thi."

Naina saddens on the mention of Naveen. She stopped and sat on the chair silently. Raj cursed himself for mentioning the name of Naveen because he knew that how much this affect naina. Slowly, Raj moved towards naina and sat on the floor near her. He keeps his hand on her knee and called her.

Raj: - "Nia, m sorry. Mujhe maaf kar do."

Naina: - "Nahin veer, tumhara koi galti nahin hai."

Raj: - "Galti to hai Nia; par mein tumse vaada karta hoon ki mein Naveen ko begunah sabit kar dunga; aur ek baar phir uska pride and honor uske pass hoga."

Naina: - "Sach Veer; kya aisa hoga?"

Raj: - "Haan nia, aisa zaroor hoga. Itne saal hum dono ne alag alag koshish ki; par ab hum ek saath mil kar koshish karenge; aur dekhna safal bhi zaroor honge."

Naina: - "Haan veer; hum zaroor kamyab honge."

She said with a smile and then both of them took their breakfast silently. After breakfast, raj told naina that he is going out of academy in order to check preparations for the party. Naina said ok and raj left.

The whole day passed as such. Naina checked some papers regarding Naveen's case and raj check the preparations for the party. He returned in the evening at about 5 p.m. Before coming to his room, he went to meet Sanjana and the whole gang; and he told them something. They all agreed with Raj.

Raj entering the room saw naina lost in the papers.

Raj: - "Nia, tum abhi tak ready nahin hui?"

Naina: - "Sorry veer, mein na kaam me itni kho gayi thi ki mujhe time ka koi clue hi nahin raha."

Raj: - "Koi baat nahin; ab ready ho jao."

Naina: - "Haan, bas 10 min me hoti hoon."

Raj: - "theek hai."

Naina goes to get ready and here, raj was waiting for her. Naina came out after 10 mins. Wearing a beautiful saree.

Raj: - "Bahut achi lag rahi ho nia."

Naina: - "Thanks Veer; par kya tum aise hi chaloge?"

Raj: - "Matlab?"

Naina: - "Matlab Mr. shikhawat ki kya aap ready nahin honge?"

Raj: -"Oh haan, mein to bhool hi gaya tha. Roko mein abhi aata hoon."

Naina: - "Ok'be fast."

Raj came back after 5 minutes and they leave the room. All of them met at the gate and then, they left for the party.


Hope u guys will enjoy this part and yes, I will reply for the last part comments now. Today, I just thought to do the update.

Waiting for ur comments guys.

I know I have been very irregular with my updates but still if you guys will want me to continue; then I will post the updates of other fics too.

Sorry guys, But m really confused regarding this.

Thanks.

Please comment or criticize or press the like button if you feel that the update is worth it.

Luv Preet

Edited by preet09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Preet
Welcomeback....😃 🤗
Update was really gud👏👏👏
Sanjana is always teasing Raj when he is with Naina...😃😆
Raj was so right when he said that no1 is perfect..but do log sath mein perfect ho sakte hain..so very right😃
I hope there is no misundertsnding between Raj and Naina now..😊
All the couple scored gud points except Huda and Dr.Mishra😆 and our favourite couple got perfect 10..😛
That song is very gud and the lyrics just suited the situation completely..
As expected Sanjana and Alekh won Ms nd Mr fresher respectively..
Raj is so sweet..he is throwing a party for all his favourite cadets...😊
Raj was so scared when he saw that Naina is preparing aloo ke paranthe for him.😆😆😆 but when he had them he was actually impressed😃
I hope Raj is able to proove Naveen innocent...😊
Pls do continue your other fictions too along with this one😃
Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi the up is good so raj is remembering his past days
how sweet
i like neev bcoz of him raj and naina danced on a romantic no
so sweet i loved it
so they are going for outing
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Firstly...thank youuuu for the update 🤗 I knw....lyf gets soo busy sumtyms....and so its ok regarding the delay....but just remember one thing....u gotta continue all ur fics...and finish them even if it takes ages...😆😆.....

Now coming to the part....shuru me laga tha....pichhla part padhna hoga...but then sab yaad aa gaya...😆😆.....loved all the Raj-Naina scenes for sure!! Koi aur chaara hi nahi tha....coz they r actually very sweet....but guess they were even sweeter before....as the flashbak scene says...😆

Apart from that.....Raj-Aalekh scene....was really nice...and I loved that...😃😃....whereas Fresher's Ball was gr8....that ranking meter is always pleasant....😉😃....and I love that song...😍

Waise my fav RN scene was the Aloo ka Paratha wala scene....😆😆....loved the murmuring of Raj....😳😳....though I love him anyways!! 😆😆😆😳😳😳

And now...they plan for an outing....am w8ing for that...😉😉...but yeah....Neev-Sanjana ka chasing scene bhi cool tha.....another fav of mine apart from RN scenes...😆😉

In short.....such a sweet return of urs....wid this beautiful part!! Hope to get the UD of other fics as well...😆😆....perhaps u knw am w8ing for "Love will find its way"...😆😆

But yeah...either way am happy....😃😃...so welcum bak dear....and wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR!! Hope to see more of u this year...😆😳...take care and stay well. 😛

Luv,
Sumi. 😳
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome
plz continue soon

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