ETERNAL SOULMATES:- RN FF update page 55

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

preet yaar pata nahi pahle kabhi comment kiya ya nahi kyonki mere dimag se ye fic completely gayab hai... to socha fresh comment ki jaye... PROLOGUE is really good... naina and rajveer having some misunderstanding ans she is married to him.. still she is angry with him.... its really interesting
CHARACTER SKETCH is also well define..

firat full upd is long as well as really good...their childhood is really cute .. it shows their inocent love in their past ... and i like your song slection also

why naina is against of RAj,.... aisa kya ker diay specially kya hua vo bhi hsadi ke baad.. aur ye ladki kon hai ...

koi ni i hope mujhe jald hi jwab mil jayega sab hi chijo ka...

per ek baat thi... RAJ ki mom bhut sexy hai😆😆😆😆.. couldn't stop myslef by saying it

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

preet kahi achi thi second ud or sath hi bhut ache se describe bhi hui thi.. RAJ NAINA bachpan ke stahi hai... pyar kerte hai shadi ho chuki har samya ek dusre ko miss kerte hai phir bhi alag hai ...ye mystery sach mein ajib hai aur interesting bhi...

cadets convo at mess is good .. i like the way you shows that nair face when he become junior of RAJ... i like ali is always like the same usolon ka pakka..and everyone is happy at kma excep;t naina .. ya shayd vo bhi per dikhana nahi chati.. kyonki its shows he can help he rin naveen case...khair to baat ye hai raj finally kma aa gaya hai ... aur humari naina ji ko bhi mil hi gaya ate hi...

next upd obvoisuly interesting hone vali hai😉😉😉😉

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

3rd upodate is beautiful ..

special secen was obvoisu past fresher ball and dress are really gorgeous ...you did potrai that scen very well their confession is relly beautiful

and yes laughing moment was very good... raj teached him right lesson ..tit for tat.. and yes it was hard to stop laughing if i were at cadets place...

and i love that conco at bc office between rn... what i like most he trying to use her own anger against her own anger itself......

he know her so well

dehan ye hai ki age aap kya kya naya dikhati hai

now moving to next ud

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

4rth update

it was awsome yaar... those two dresses she was looking stunning an the place was really heavenly... like it.. poem was the most beautiful part of update..

best scene afcouse naveen ki murgi banna ...

that ud was happiy happu ud...

per jab sab acha tha tune kha pe inki kismat mein rula diya

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

in 5th ud

Aalekh: - "Apun ko to lagta hai ki Sir samajh gaye ki yeh dono saath me yahan rahe to huda aur 15-20 lapad to kha hi leta." this was the on which i have to put my hand on my mouth so n one can hear my laugh mujhe muchad jka scene sach mein acha lga...and yes mishra ji yahan bhi agayi ... per acha hais hayd ise dekh naina ko kuch asar ho.. and raj aur uski mil ka ph sequence vakehi touchy tha
i like the scene between raj and sanjana

and mess secen between mishra ji and nia was brilliant

aur ye naian kya chati hai kitni upadhi degi ritu ko"chitiya utha ke le jaynge" "bhootniyaan "😆😆😆 or to aur "chipkaliya"😆😆😆 sachi thats was another best secne

and snajans is already engagge yaar huda kya hoga bechara...uska to khana hi hhajm nahi hua apple bhi bich mein atak gaya

awasome

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#376

6th ud is awasome mind blowing

all swt secne was there

i like that saree that breclets... yaar ye raj sabki gift deta rahta hai .. is ekhud pata na ata hai .. aur sari ladkiya isek jadu mein hai... i mean shalini ho ya nandini snajana ho naina ...kisi bhi trah bas isi ko priase kerti hai yahan tak ki ladke bhi alekh ho ya neev

i like it when you did tha cahin scene and fb also.. best wes alekh and raj scene in office

and tyes whennaina says ki use pata hai raj ne use gift kiya i like it the most

aur uska use taiyar hone mein help kerna use bhut acha laga

per ye ud bhut bhut din pahle hui thi preet

ab tum kab ker rahi hun 2months hone vale hai yaar jaldi se ud kerd o

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

Hi Friends…

I know I have not updated any of my Fic from long time but I was really busy and had met with an accident… So, my mom didn't allow me to touch my lappi for once…So, sorry for such a big delay…

As for updates, they r ready but as for now, m very busy in my studies, so can't find time to update. Still, I will try to update in a week or two. I will reply to ur comments then and will post the next parts….

Once again really very sorry for the delay…

Luv Preet

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ayesha

@AdorableAyesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#378

hey preet...nice pro dear...n thanxxxxxxxxx a lot...ek naya RN fic start karne k liye...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

obviously hum sab apne Rajveer sir ko jyada dukhi nahi dekh sakte...isiliye aisa kah rahe hain...aur humain yeh bhi pata hai ki yeh sab jaldi se thik ho jayega...aur hamare pyare rajveer sir phir se apne killer smile se sab ka dil jeetenge...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

lekin mujhe sab se jyada khushi is baat ki hai ki maj nair yahan par capt hai...ab aaya oont pahad k niche...dekhna yeh hai ki raj kaise band bajata hai nair ki...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

do ud fast dear...😃n thanxxxx for d PM😃

love u ayesha