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hi...m a huge fan of RN and tried to write a FF on RAJ-NAINA. This is my first attempt. so please help me to improve. I will continue only if if u guys want *********************************************************************
PROLOGUE:-
The scene starts from a party which is given in honour of CAPTAIN PAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT who had recently returned from ladakh by completing a mission and due to this he has been promoted to MAJOR.
MAJOR GENERAL ARJUN SHARMA proceed towards the mike and make an announcement:- JAI HIND officers, aaj hum sab yahan CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT ko honour karne ke liye ikhate hue hain. Our ARMY is really proud of him. In such a short time, he has been promoted. He was the best shooter of his batch. I am really proud of him and m really honoured to have a protgee like him. Now i would ask CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT to step forward.
As the announcement ends, we see a young man stepping forward and saluting his seniors. Now the stars have been added to his uniform and he is declared as MAJOR in INDIAN ARMY. The hall went into applause for MAJOR but in turn he can only manage a small smile and thanks. Par agar koi uski aankhon mein dhyaan se dekhe to usse uski gehri aankhon me ek sunapan dikhayi dega.
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At about 11 pm, we see a room which has very dim light and a person is weeping badly and saying:- "kyun nia, kyun gayi tum mujhe chood kar. Kyun tumne ek baar bhi meri baat nahin suni aur chalegi vahan se. Mujhe ek baar batane ka mauka to diya hota tumne nia. Agar tumne meri baat suni hoti to aaj hum yon alag nahin hue hote. Mein tumse bahut yaar karta hun nia. Nahin ji sakta me tumhare bina. Please vaapis aa jao" and then we see his face and its none other than RAJ.
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The scene shifts to a room where a girl is weeping and is saying that:- "veer, kyun kiya tumne aisa. Tumhari ek galti ne sab kuch cheen liya mujhse. Me tumhe kabhi maaf nahin karungi. Tumhe tumhare kiye ki saza zaroor milegi. me tumhari zindagi narak se bhi buri bana dungi RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT" when we seen her face, then it's none other than naina
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A song is played in the background:-
Pyaar hum ko bhi hai pyaar tum ko bhi hai to kya yeh silsile ho gaye (Rajveer crying while holding naina's pic in his hand)
Bewafa hum nahin bewafa tum nahin to kyungile ho gaye (naina crying while remembering old memories)
Chalte chalte kaise ye fansle ho gaye (screen divides in two parts showing both raj and naina)
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plz tell me that i continue or not.
thanks
luv preet
PROLOGUE:-
The scene starts from a party which is given in honour of CAPTAIN PAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT who had recently returned from ladakh by completing a mission and due to this he has been promoted to MAJOR.
MAJOR GENERAL ARJUN SHARMA proceed towards the mike and make an announcement:- JAI HIND officers, aaj hum sab yahan CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT ko honour karne ke liye ikhate hue hain. Our ARMY is really proud of him. In such a short time, he has been promoted. He was the best shooter of his batch. I am really proud of him and m really honoured to have a protgee like him. Now i would ask CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT to step forward.
As the announcement ends, we see a young man stepping forward and saluting his seniors. Now the stars have been added to his uniform and he is declared as MAJOR in INDIAN ARMY. The hall went into applause for MAJOR but in turn he can only manage a small smile and thanks. Par agar koi uski aankhon mein dhyaan se dekhe to usse uski gehri aankhon me ek sunapan dikhayi dega.
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At about 11 pm, we see a room which has very dim light and a person is weeping badly and saying:- "kyun nia, kyun gayi tum mujhe chood kar. Kyun tumne ek baar bhi meri baat nahin suni aur chalegi vahan se. Mujhe ek baar batane ka mauka to diya hota tumne nia. Agar tumne meri baat suni hoti to aaj hum yon alag nahin hue hote. Mein tumse bahut yaar karta hun nia. Nahin ji sakta me tumhare bina. Please vaapis aa jao" and then we see his face and its none other than RAJ.
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The scene shifts to a room where a girl is weeping and is saying that:- "veer, kyun kiya tumne aisa. Tumhari ek galti ne sab kuch cheen liya mujhse. Me tumhe kabhi maaf nahin karungi. Tumhe tumhare kiye ki saza zaroor milegi. me tumhari zindagi narak se bhi buri bana dungi RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT" when we seen her face, then it's none other than naina
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A song is played in the background:-
Pyaar hum ko bhi hai pyaar tum ko bhi hai to kya yeh silsile ho gaye (Rajveer crying while holding naina's pic in his hand)
Bewafa hum nahin bewafa tum nahin to kyungile ho gaye (naina crying while remembering old memories)
Chalte chalte kaise ye fansle ho gaye (screen divides in two parts showing both raj and naina)
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plz tell me that i continue or not.
thanks
luv preet
Mangal Lakshmi
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