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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Raj ke dad usse bahut gussa hai.

Veena tries to console Raj..hope everything works out

please continue soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

nice update 👏👏 👏..............
& bechare mere raj ko danta 😭 😭 😭😭😭...............
continue soon............ missed raj's dialogue............😛 😛 😛
ud soon ASAP😊

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Hey Ria

update was nyc n emotional
dadi n veena scene is good
Raj k dad usse gussa hi n his mother tring to console him
feeling bad for Raj
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

nice part dear

cont soon

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Star

@starasdf

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Great Updatee

cont.soon

Star⭐️

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Prerna

@prerna1

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

that was good
plz continue soon

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poojabi

@poojabi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

hey rya i am so sorry for being late.ihave tried to comment in ur fic wenessday.bt it was not getting posted at that time.so now i am again typing.thank u very much for restarting this fic.kaash sab tumhare jaise hote.i thought that this the very begining of the fic.so mai kya kahu samajh nehi araha.bt i want to see rn together as soon as possible.unko milao.

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neha10.for.u

@neha10.for.u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

hi Ria...
thanx for ur pms....
and sorry....(ab ye mat poochna kyu...reason to tum jaanti ho...)

coming to ur ff....its really gud, somewhere resembling the daily soaps...tum to script writer ban sakti ho...👏👏👏
all the characters were introduced very well...👏
but ye raj ke dad itne strict kyu hai??Raj ne sahi naam dia hai- HITLER😆😆😆ab dekho na pooja ke phool ek din pehle nahi aaye to kitna gussa ho gaye...aree pooja se pehle to aa gaye the na...and raj ko kuch jyada hi nahi scold karte...but chalo koi nahi, baki logo ka nature inke nature ko balance kar deta hai...and may be he is like coconut....bahar se strict, andar se soft....
and bhua ji😡😡😡 well i am not going to comment on her....
All other characters are very sweet...veena ji, lata ji and specially Dadi 👏👏👏

but ab tak itne saare uds me Naina ki family kaha hai...specially naina kaha hai?????
well i guess i know...Paris me...haina???? ab Raj Paris ja raha hai....to may be destiny ne naina aur Raj ko wahi milane ka decision liya ho.(waise decision destiny ka hai ya tumhara...ye to sabhi jaante hai😆😆😆)
to pls Raj ko jaldi Paris bhejo...so that we can see our RN together....
i am eagerly waiting to see RN together....
so ud soon.....

dekho maine apna promise advance me hi poora kar diya...to ab tum bhi jaldi ud karna....

Edited by neha10.for.u - 14 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

veena jee raj ko nasta khilla ke neeche aate haai ghar baki sab ke liye nasta banane

subhe ke 8 baaje ghar ke sab log nasta karne liye baithte haai sivaye raj ke raj ko na dekh ke amar jee raj ke baare mein veena jee se pucchte haai par isse pahele ke veena jee koi jabab de sake sukriti jee bol utthte haai in her as usuall teasing tone "are bhaiya aap bhi na kaise sawaal pucch rahe haai abhie toh sirf 8 baaj rahe haai humara raj toh dopher 12 baaje se pahele kabhie aapne aakhen he nahin kholta naa "yeh bol ke sukriti jee veena jee ke taraf dekh ke wicked smile dene laagte haai kunki sukriti jaante the yeh baat sunke amar jee ko bohot gussa aa jaayeaga aur woh raj ke uper phir se barasne laagenge par veena jee sukriti jee ka yeh plan successful hone se pahele he amar jee ko bata dete haai that raj had already left for the office veena jee yeh baat sun ke jaise sukriti jee ka bolte he bandh ho jaate tha she was feeling like eating veena jee woh aapne irritated face leekar naste table utthte aapne kamre mein chale jaate haai sukriti jee ko aaj aase jaate hue dekh ke ketan aur ,rajshree dono zor zor se hasne laagte haai kunki woh dono bhi sukriti bua se bohot pareshan haai aur aaj sukriti bua ko aase dumg dabake bhaagte hue dekh ke sach mein unke mann ko bohot sukun milte haai

aase he dekhte dekhte kuch din beeth jaate haai raj ab office ke kaamo mein bohot dhayan dene laaga haai yeh dekh ke amar jee ko bohot khushi milte haai kunki woh jaise raj ko dekhna chahate the wohi ho raha haai kal subhe amar jee aur kamal jee dono paris jaa rahe haai isliye veena jee amar jee ka saman pack rahe haai achanaak veena jee dekhte haai ke amar jee aapne files karte hue muskura rahe haai veena jee ko amar jee ko aase muskurate hue dekh kar bohot he ajeeb laagta haai woh amar jee se pucchte haai"aap muskura kun rahe haai jee ?"veena jee ka sawaal sunke amar jee bolte haai ke"woh bohot khush haai kunki raj ne itne aache tarike se office ka sara kaam samal liya haai "amar jee ke muh se aaj pahele bar raj ke tarif sunke veena jee bohot hote haai woh amar jee se kahete haai"mainne kaha tha aapko ke humara raj bohot samedar haai woh aapne zimmedari kabhie nahin bhul sakta " amar jee veena jee baat sunke aapna sar haan mein hilake kahete haai"bilkul sahi kaha tumne veena raj ko bhalle he waqt lkaaga ho par he is really a responsible person isliye toh main befikar hoke paris ja sakta hu"

aagle din subhe amar jee aur kamal jee dono paris jaa rahe haai isliye raj aur ketan unhe see off karne ke liye unke saath airport jaate haai finally amar jee aur kamal jee dono paris chale jaate haai aur raj jo ke is pal ka besabar hoke intezar raha uska toh dil kar raha tha ke woh jitne jaldi ho sake aapne dosto ke pass chala jaaye kunki itne dino se uske life se jaise enjoyment he khatam ho gaye the but now he is free there is no boundness in his life he is free to enjoy life as he wants so raj aur waqt barbad na karte hue ketan ko leekar club jaane ke liye airport se nikal ne waala hota haai ke he collids with someone and they both fell on the ground

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neha10.for.u

@neha10.for.u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

hey riya...

nice ud....
Finally Raj ek responsible bete ki tarah behave kar raha hai and his Hitler Dad is also happy...😆😆😆
u actually surprised me....i was thinking Raj will go to paris and meet Naina there....but he is not going....infact wo to wait kar raha tha ki kab use freedom mile and wo fir se apni old lifestyle me aa sake...oh...to office jana...khud ko responsible show karna..etc etc...was just a DIKHAWA to fool Mr Hitler😆😆😆
lekin never mind....matlab to RN ki meeting se hai na....whether in Paris or outside airport....ab Raj jis se takraya hai...wo to surely naina hi hogi....i hope is baar mera guess sahi ho...

continue soon....and see isbaar mera comment bilkul bhi late nahi hai.....infact i am 1st...ye ye😊😊
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