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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi guys yeh mere naaye ff ha on our fav jodiRN par

toh pahele aate ha is kahani ke characters par

yahaan is kahani main do families ha ek ha ALLUWALIA FAMILY AUR SHEKHAWAT FAMILY

SHEKHAWAT FAMILY - 1sab se baare ha dadi.inke do bete aur beti ha yeh ha toh sab se baare ghar main par inhe aaddat bilkul baccho jaise ha matlab ke inhe aapne pota poteo ke saath baate karna unke saath gosspic magazine parna ihne bohot zada pasand ha

in ke bad aate ha ghar ke beto ke baare ghar main baara beta ha amar -yeh bohot he perfection rakhte ha kam main ghar inke hisab se chalta ha sab log ghar main inke baate maante ha yeh sab kuch perfect chahate ha aur inke is perfection life ko maintain karte ha inke patni mrs veena shekhawat -in ke aadat ha bilkul maa jaise yeh ghar main sab ko ek saath badhke rakhna chahate ha yeh sab se bohot paar karte ha

ab aate dusre bete pe-in ka naam ha kamaljeet -in ke haapy go lucky nature par ha aapne pavivaar se bohot zada pyaar karte ha in ke patni matlab lata jee -dil ha bohot he aacche aapne aur dusro ke baccho main kabhier koi farak najhin samajhte hain ke sirf ek dukh ha ke inka koi maaiya nain ha bacchpan main he lata jee ke maa baap ke mat ho gaaye the kamaljeet ke pitajee inhe dekh ke aur inke sanskar se khush hoke inhe aapne parvaar ke bah banake lee aaye inke is dukh ke liye yeh hamesha thore dukhi rahete ha par veena inhe bhi aapne chotte bahen maante ha

yeh gaaye baate baare logo ke ab aate ha baccho ke taraff -amar aur veena ke do bacche ha ek beta raj aur ek beti rajsree

raj-ek bohot fun loving insan ha woh abhie abhie usne mba kiya ha aur amar chahate ha ke woh ab business samale par raj he wants to enjo his life usse bilkul aacha nahin laagta aapne papa ke tara abhie bsiness man ban jaana woh aapne zindage ko enjoy karna chaharta ha party girls he usse life ha

rajsree-abhie college main ha isse bhi aacha laagta ha dosto ke sath ghumna phirna par aapne papa se yeh bohot darte ha aur eh ek larki ha isliye amar jee bhi rajsree ko bohot he displines ke saath badhke rakhte ha

ab aate ha kaml aur lata ke baacho par-inke bhi do bacche ha ek beti gitika aur ek beta ketan

gitika-ek aadashbadi larki ha inhone Ma kiya ha aur abhie ghar main baith ke aapne maa aur bare maa se ghar ka kam sikh rahe ha

ketan-ha rajsree ke hum umar dono ek saath college main parte ha aur yeh sab raj ko aapna sab se aacha dost maante ha

ab aate ha baare buajee par yani ke dadijee ke beti-inka naam ha yogita inke shaadi nahin huye ha dil ke ek dam bure ha hamesha ek vaamp ke tara sab ko pareshan karte rahete ha

ab aate ha ALLUWALIA family main-is family main sab se baare ha dadijee yeh bhi bohot he sweet ha ghar main inke sab se ladli ha inke bete ke beti naina naina main maano inke jaan baase ho hamesha naina ke zidd ko yeh pure karte ha

ghar main inka bhi raaj inke baare bete ka he chalta ha yani ke mr gurdeep alluwalia ha inhe bhi ghar ko sanskaro ke saath badh ke rakhna aacha laagta ha inka bhi pura saath inke patni debina dete ha -debina ek bohot aache patni ke saath saath ek bohot aache maa aur bah bhi ha

inke 2 baacche ha -ek beta nishikat aur ek beti naina

nishikat-ek army officer ha inke papa ka sapne ko pura karne ke lie yeh officer bana yeh aapne papa aur ma ko bohot maante ha aur aapne chotte bahen se duniya main sab se zada pyaar karte ha islie woh jo chaharte ha usse nishikat laakee deta ha

naina-ek bohot he chulbuli larki ha ghar main sab log isse bohot pyaar karte ha dadi ha yeh ladli abhie yeh college main parai kar rahe ha aapne bhaiya ko satana hamesha utt patang baate karna iske aadat ha college ke larke bjhi isse darte ha aur sab isse phollan devi kaheke bulate ha

kripa-yeh ha naina ke bacchpan ke saheli kripa ke maa baap ek accident main guzar gaaye the tab se yeh naina ke famil ke saath he rahete ha n ke maa papa ko yeh ma papa ke bulate ha ghar main isse bhi sab log bohot pyaar karte ha kripa thore shant ha naina se bilkul aalag

ab dekhte ha sab log kaise milte ha ka hota ha kahani main par woh toh tabhie likhe jaayege na jab aap log aapne coments denge toh plz plz aap jaldi se aapna comment dijiye

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiiiii riya....

u know this fics title really suits for my present condition....yaar mujhe bilkul samjhe main nahi aaraha hain ki main is nayi fic ko leke khush hu ya nahi....are yaar main aisa kya kardiya tumne my name raj ki us badi buajee ko rakh diya ...i didnt complete my studies yet....aur tumne mujhe bhuda bandiya....itna hi nahi us character ko vamp bhi kaha.....ab sab usse galiyan denge....kissi auron ki baat hi kyun main hi khudh apne aap ko galiyan dungi....ye tum ko accha lagega kya

any ways nice intro

loved all the characters ...expect me

plz continue soon

Edited by Sanskruthi - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

Nice intro....the characters r interesting. Wondering if Raj will get into Army or not. Anyways, pls continue soon.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Nice introduction!!!!!

The character sketch is great and the characters are interesting!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ki dadi seems a really fun loving and interesting character!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I wonder if Raj will join the army or not!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The title is a bit strange and different!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

nice intro.

naam thoda sa ajeeb hai...

cont soon.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

Intro was very nice...

All the characters are unique and interesting

please continue soon

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

that was nice start
will love to read it

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

thanks for ur reply guys

note: mainne raj ke buajee ka naam badal diya ha kunki humare pyaari sanskruti ka naam wohi ha so decided that raj buejee ka naam hoga aasita

pahele hum log chalte mumbai yani ke raj ke ghar main

raj ke ghar main abhie sab log pooja ke taiyari rahe ha

veena-chotte tune pooja ka sab saman rakh diya ha na

lata-jee didi mainne pooja ka sab saman rakh diya ha par

veena-par kya chotte

lata-didi woh mainne pooja ka phool laana bhul gaae

veena-hey bhaagwan ab kya hoga tujhe toh pata tere bhaiya kitne perfect ha in sab ke baare main agar unhe pata chal gaaya na toh

lata-didi mere bhi toh haath pair thande ho rahe ha pata nahin bhaisahab kya sochenge mere baare main

veena-tu fikar mat kar chotte main abhie laxmi ko bej ke phool maaga leete hu

lata-par didi agar bhaisahab ko pata chal gaya toh

veena-are tere bhaiya aur devarjee ko jogging se aate aate laxmi phool leeke aa jaaega tu bas tention mat lee main hu na tu jaa jaake dekh tere woh dono ladle utthte ke nahin agar inhone aake dekha na ke yeh log abhie tak ghottebej kar so rahe ha toh pata nahin ka haal karenge lata-didi main abhie jaake dekhte hu

lata raj aur ketan ko utthane ke liye jaate ha aur idher veena laxmi ko pooja ka phool laane ko bejte ha

lata raj aur ketan ke room main aata ha toh dekhta ha floor par raj aur ketan ke saare kapre bheekre pare ha lata jaake raj ke sar par firate ha aur usse utthne ko kahete ha par raj toh raj ha woh thore na utthaga woh toh bas aur maza leeke aapne need pure karne main laaga

lata-raj beta utth jaa dekh suhha ke 7 baaj gaaye ha

raj-hmm

lata-beta agar tu abhie nahin utthtega na toh tujhe pata ha na ke tere papa aa jaayenge aur yeh kaheke lata rukh jaate ha aur usse uske galati yaad aate ha jo usse kiya ha lata ke aakhon se tap tap karke raj ke haatho ke uper lata ke aakhon assu aa ke girte ha lata ke aasu girne se raj jhat se utth jaata ha aur lata ke taraff dekhta ha

raj-chachi yeh kya aap ro rahe ha

lata-are are nahin nahin beta woh toh bas aase he

raj-chachi baataye kya hua kisine kuch kaha aapse

lata-are nahin pagal mujhe kon kun kuch kahega

raj-plz chachi mujhe pata ha aapko sayed buajee ne zarur kuch kaha ha i know her she is just

lata-are are nahin beta unhone mujhse kuch nahin kaha

raj-toh phir aap ro kun rahe the

lata-beta mere aakhon main hul chala gaya tha isliye aakhon se paani nikal aaya aacha ab tu mere fikar chor aur jaake jaldi se taiyar ho jaa tab tak main tere is naalayak bhai ko utthate hu

raj-ok chachi

raj freash up hone jaata ha

idher

neeche

veena ,gitika,rajshree sab log milke pooja ke taiyari kar rahe ha

door rings

veena-zarur laxmi aaye hoge

veena jaake jaldi se door kholte ha par samne amar aur kaml ko dekh ke woh thora darr ho jaate ha

veena-aap log

amar-kya hua aap toh mujhe dekh ke is tara ghabra rahe ha jaise ke hum koi gair ha

veena-jee nahin woh bas aap log aaj jaldi wapis aa gaaye jogging se isliye thora

kamal-bhabhi ghar main aaj pooja ha islie hum jaldi wapis aa gaye

amar-sunie pooja ke sab taiari ho gaye ha

veena-jee

amar-aacha pandit jee kab aa rahe ha

veena-jee panditjee ne toh kaha tha ke woh 7 baaje tak pahch jaayenge

amar-hmm thik ha aap taiyari samaliye hum pandit jee ko phone kar ke aate ha

amar pandit jee ko phone karne jaata ha

lata raj aur ketan ko leeke neeche aate ha

veena-chotte laxmi abhie tak nahin aaye aur tere bhaiya aur deverjee bhi jogging se wapis aa gaaye

lata-kya hey bhaagwan didi kab kya hoga

lata starts crying

veena-are ro mat chottee aa jaaege laxmi phool leeke aur abhie tak toh panditjee hi nahin aaye ha toh bas tention mat lee

raj-are are ladies kya baate ho rahe ha aap logo ke beech

veena-aacha tu tu kya pucch raha

veena zor se raj ke kan ko pakkarte ha

raj-aahhhhhhh maa ka kar rahe ho dard ho raha ha choriya na

veena-nalayak kitne bar tujhse kaha tha ke aaj ghar main pooja ha tujhe jaldi utthna hoga par nahin aaj bhi tere chachi ko he jaake tum dono nalayako utthana para

raj-toh kya hua chachi mere aapne ha kun chachi

lata-bilkul sahi kaha tune raj

veena-chotte tu isse hamesha support karna badh kar tu isse nahin jaanta bohot badmash ha yeh

lata-jaisa bhi ha didi mere ladla ha

veena-ha ha rakh le aapne ladle ko samal ke mere betia jo ha mere pass woh tere is nalayak se bohot aache ha

veena aur lata dono baccho ke saath baate karte karte aapne tention ko hl jaate ha par jab woh amar ko dekh ha unke taraff aate hue toh phir se tention main aa jaate ha

amar-suniye mainne pandit jee se baat karle ha woh humare samane ha

bas do min pahuch rahe ha

veena-hmm

amar-kya hua aap ko koi tention ha kya

veena-nahin toh main thik hu

amar-hmm

door rings

amar-banse dekh toh kon aaya ha

banse-jee sahab

banse jaake door kholta ha