Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi

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newkidontheblok

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Posted: 19 years ago

#121

👏 👏 👏 aww i lub dose lines a lot i noe u wrote it 👏 👏 👏 poo i lub u re

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poonam tanwar

@pakhi joshi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#122

ya shiva i wrote dat poem , but u know i am little hesitate dat all of u like it or not .and thanks alots to both of u for liking it. 😳😳😳

Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago

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fizzles

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Posted: 19 years ago

#123

That's really nice!!! Good job Pakhi 👏 I could imagine the scene, so well written! And u write just the way arjun n bhavri would talk....isliye mujhe acha laga 😃

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Shirley

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Posted: 19 years ago

#124

brilliant.........the poem was beautiful......yur story is better than a star plus serial....u should give yur stories 2 a director...ek hit banega........anyway continue....and bring more romantic scenes between them two......i like romantic stories 😳 😳 welld one again 👏

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poonam tanwar

@pakhi joshi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#125

thanks shazu ,dat u could imagine it coz if we imagin a story then its like a real scene.😛😳
and shirley thanks for liking my poem, i am also like romantic stories but only soft romantic stories which have depth. 😳

Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago

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newkidontheblok

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Posted: 19 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: pakhi joshi
ya shiva i wrote dat poem , but u know i am little hesitate dat all of u like it or not .and thanks alots to both of u for liking it. 😳😳😳

awww u shudnt b like dat re u shud b confident on wat ur doing dun think wat ppl will say do wat ur heart says😊

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poonam tanwar

@pakhi joshi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#127

o!!!!! thanksssss for encouraging me shiva, aur rahi mere dil ki baat to, my heart always say"arjun" arjun ke baare mein soch kar hi likhi thi ye poem. 😳 😳

Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago

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newkidontheblok

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Posted: 19 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: pakhi joshi
o!!!!! thanksssss for encouraging me shiva, aur rahi mere dil ki baat ,to my heart always say"arjun" arjun ke baare mein soch kar hi likhi thi ye poem. 😳 😳

nytimee lub u 🤗