Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi

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šŸ˜›HI FRIENDS,

iwrite a fan fict. first time.plz tell me you like it or not.

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arjun becomes very upset about the letter written by bhoomi & all about her behaviour.he went to his room & remembers all sweet memories of them.

next morning someone knocked at arujun's bedroom's door. arjun open the door. it was non other than shefali.

shefali:arjun tumare liye breakfast layee hoon with your fav. orange juice.

arjun: thanks, lekin main breakfast ke liye neeche aa hi raha tha.

shefali:jaanti hoon lekin jara time to dekho, tum office ke liye late ho jaate iseeliye main le ayee.

(now arjun remembers past memories when bhoomi did the same thing)

s: kya hua arjun kahaan kho gaye.

a: no, nothing.

s: achha main chalti hoon mujhe bhi office jaana hai.

arjun go to the office but all the time he think about bhoomi.

in evening he is returned to home. shefali again come to his room with a cup of cofee.she give it to him& said.

s: arjun ,tum fresh ho jaao main khaana laga deti hoon.

a: thanks shefali par mujhe bhookh nahin hai.

s:arjun tum nahiin khaooge to main bhii nahin khaoongi

a: shefali pz jid mat karo.

s: arjun chalo na(holding his hand)

a:shefali plzzzzzzzzz(with anger)

shefali leave the room with tears in her eyes, arjun realiase that he mis behaved with shefali.

next day he meet shefali & say

a: i am sorry shefali.

s: its, ok arjun main samajh sakti hoon.

then she often bring breakfast& dinner for arjun &take care of him.it's going for two weeks.

one day shefali go to arjun's room & said

s: arjun maine papaji aur mamaji ko baat karte suna wo yuv aur mera divorce karwana chahtein hain.

a: kya???? lekin kyon.

s:pata nahin, ismein bhii unki koi nayi chaal hogi.

lekin main yeah soch rahi hoon kii isse pahale ki yuv mujhe divorce de kyon na main use divorce de doon.

a:lekin shelfali, yeah theek nahin hoga.

s: to kya tum ye chaaate ho ki yuv mujhe divorce dekar meri insult kare.

a: mera yeah matlab nahin tha shefali.

s: tum sirf itna batao kii tum mera saath doge ya nahin.

a: main tumare saath hoon shefali.

s:thanks arjun(smiles)

after one week shefali comes to in arjun's room with a enevolope.

a: yeah kya hai.

s: divorce papres(put the papers on bed &put her hand on arjun;s shoulder)

s:ab tum dhekana kaise main papaji ke plan per pani pherti hoon.,papaji se pahale main unhein ye papers doongi.

suddenly yuv call her shefli, shefali.

s: ab main chalti hoon, yuv bula raha hai.

(she forget the papers in arjun's room&leave, next morning arjun bring the papers to her room he calls her but she is in bathroom so arjun want to place them on bed but suddenly the papers drop on the floor. he want to pick up but when he pick up the papers he saw a crushed paper just slightly under the bed. he also pick that one.)

in the mean while shefali comes ,arjun put the paper in his pocket to see shefali.

s: tum yaahan.

a:haan yeah papers dene aaya tha.

s: oh! thanks.

a:ab main chalata hoon office jaana hai..

guys you know what is that crushed paper that is the bhoomi's original letter .when shefali copied the handwriting of bhoomi she crushed many papers & also the original one . she throw all of them .but that one remain stay there unknowingly.

guys this is my imagination if you don't like it then i am sorry.plz tell me i will continoue it or not.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for your response guys here it is the next part
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arjun come to his room &open the letter. he read it, then he becomes shocked to know the truth.


he thinks if it is the real letter then who wrote that letter he brings that fake letter & compared with the original one . he can't understand anything

now arjun talk to himself( bhanvari ne dikhawa kiya tha , lekin kyon aisi kya majboori thi) suddenly ganukaka enters to the room & said ;


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ganukaka: beta bhoomi ne jo kuch likha hai sab sach hai usne kuch nahin kiya usse karwya gaya hai.

a: lekin kisne karwya ye sab kuch bhoomi se

g: shefali ne.

a: what, lekin kyon.

kyonkii ------------------ then he tells all the truth to arjun . arjun becomes very amgry & said;

a : uss shefali ko to main------------ .


g : nahin beta pehale tum bhoomi ko doondh kar lao phir shefali ki asliyat sabke saamne laana. par haan tab tak tum shefali ke saamne ye jaahir mat karna kii tum sach jaante ho


a : lekin kaka.

g : arjun tumhe bhoomi kii kasam , tum yeah baat abhi kiisi se nahin kahoge.

a : theek hai kaka.

ganukaka leave the room &arjun say to him self (yeah maine kya kiya bhanvri, na jaane tum kahhan ho ,kis haaal main ho . lekin ab main tumhen wapas iss ghar main laoonga tumhe wo hak, wo rutba dilwaoonga jiskii tum hakdaar ho. aur jisne tumhaare saath aisa kiya hai use iski saja jaroor milagi . yeah mera waada hai tumse


friends tell me i am going to the right way or not i will cont. with it or not.

Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pl continue it is to googd plplplplplplpl continue 😊 😊 [:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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next day when arjun is paking his suitcase suddenly shefali comes& surprised;

s: arjun tum kahan ja rahe ho.

a:business ke silsilay se bahar ja raha hoon shefali, 5-7 din mein aa jaaonga.

s:lekin arjun yuv ko divorce papers main poore pariwar ke aur tumhaare saamne deena chaahti hoon, taaki main sabko yeah bata sakoon kii main sirf tumse pyaar karti hoon aur tumhein se shaadi karoongi.

a: don't wory shefalii main jaldi aa jaaonga.

s: main intzaar karoongi, arjun.

arjun went from there
&
reaches to the bus stop.
he sit on a bench & think "kahhan dhoondhoo bhanvri ko .he saw a big crowd there. arjun asks someone"yahaan itni bheed kyon hai" stranger said"aaj shripur mein shri krishan ke mandir mein bahut bada utsav(function) hai sab wahin ja rahein hain. arjun thinks that"bhawari krishanji ko bhahut maanati hai, ha sakata hai kii wo wahaan aaye." so he decided to go there

when he reach there he saw abig crowd there. hesaw all around to mandir for bhoomi but he can't find her there he becomes disappointed.

then a man giving "prasad" to everyone including arjun.

arjun take that &eat. suddenly one thing is strikes on his mind "the taste of prasaad is so familiar."he asked to that man;

a:ye prasad kisne banaya hai?

man:pujarii jii kii beti ne.

a:(surprised, because the taste is same as bhoomi had made) pujaari jii ki beti-----------

a villager: haan bhai pujaari jii kii apni to koi aulad hai nahin so wo aur unki patni uss ladki ko apni beti ki tarah mantein hain.

a : ladki! kaun ladki.

villager : wahi jise yahaan aaye lagbhag ek maheena hua hai .

a: ek maheena, kahaan se aaye hai woh, naam kya hai uska?

v: kahaan se aaye hai yeah to nahin pata , haan lekin hai badi bhali . sabka bahut khayal rakhti hai.bhoomika naam hai uska.

a:(open his eyes with surprise) bhoomika!!!!!!!!!

v; haan.

a: kahaan hai wo yahaan to nahin dikh rahi hai.

v:wo -- abhi to yahiin thii,shayad ghar gayi hogi aur prasad banane.

a; mujhe wahaan le chalo plz.

v: theek hai chalo .

what happend then, arjun will meet bhoomika or not, read next time.

what happend then. arjun willl meet bhoomika or not . read next timewhat happend then . arjun meet bhoomika or not. read next time.what happened then . arjun will meet bhoomika or not. read next time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part pakhi joshi šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
great job you are doing so well in writting your fan fiction!
i hope arjun and bhoomik reunite!
please write soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really great šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ plzzz cotinue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks friends , now i am back

arjun reaches at pujari's home with the villager . he saw pujari's wife savitri there & he asked her
a: bhanvari kahaan hai.

savitri : bhanvari! kaun bhanvari

a: oh! mera matlab hai bhoomika.

s:oh bhoomika ,wo ander hai abhi bulati hoon .
bhoomi beta , dekho tumse milne koi aaya hai.


now the girl come from inside & ask " kaun hai kaki " arjun becomes surprised &say

a : ye!!!!!! kaun hai????????????

s: bhoomika aur kaun.

a: lekin ye bhoomi kaise ho sakti hai.kya yehi ladki aapke yahhan ek maheene se reh rehi hai.

s: haan beta par tum aise kyon pooch rahe ho.

a:nain wo kuch nahin main chalta hoon.


actually friends bhoomi saw arjun in temple. he came to the home & call her neibhour's daughter '"RADHA" &reqest to her for playing duplicate bhoomika's role.

s; ye tumne theek nahin kiya bhoomi.

bhoomi : jaanti hoon kaki , lekin mere paas sirf yehi ek raasta tha. us pariwar ke log mujhe kabhi nahin apnayenge aur main arjun ko aur dukhi nahin dekh sakti(tears came from her eyes continously)

s; theek hai beti jaisa tum theek samjho lekin arjun tumhen bahut pyaar karta hai.

arjun reaches at bus stop sit on a bench & say to himself "aisa kaise ho sakta hai kuch to hai jisse main anjaan hoon , kyon mera mann ye maanane ko tyaar nahin ki bhanvri yahaan nahin hai. nahin main abhi yahhan se nahin jaaonga." pick his beg & returns to the village. he asked to someone

a: suniye yahaan rahane ka koi intzaam ho sakta hai.

villager : haan bhai ek dharamshala hai.

a: theek hai mujhe waan le chalo.

arjun went to dharamshala & seen by radha . radha told bhoomi about it . bhoomi surprised & say

b : kya !!!!!!!!!! arjun wapas aaa gaya aur wo dharamshala main ruka hai kaise rah paayega wo wahaan.
arjun tum kyon mere liye itna dukh saha rehe ho.

lord krishna : dukh to sahna hi padega bhoomi prem jo karata hai arjun tumse , prem ke marg main badhayein(difiiculties) to aati hi hain.

b :(to savitri) kaki aap mera ek kaam kar deejiye . arjun ko ye khana phuncha deejiye.

lk: ye kya kar rahi ho bhoomi arjun tumhare haath ke bane khaane ka swad pahachanta hai

savitri ;theek hai beti (bring tiffin for arjun)

savitri meet to arjun & give the tiffin to him

a: aap yaahan!

s: haan beta tumhe yahaan aate dekha to socha ki tumhare liye khana le chaloon.

a :iskii kya jaroot thi .

s:jaroorat thi beta tum is gaaovn(village)ke mehaman ho.

a:theek hai kaki(open the tiffin&eat)

a:kaki ye khana kisne banaya hai

s: bhoomi ne kyon achha nahin hai .

a:bahut achha hai kaki , bas ise khakar kisi kii yaad aa gayi.(tears came in his eyes)

s:accha beta ab main chalti hoon , apna khayal rakhana.

a:ji, kaki.

next day its cloudy day . bhoomi returns from

the mandir & arjun walk there in search of bhoomi. suddenly rain is started

bhoomi take shelter under a tree. arjun also take a shelter dnder the same tree but they were just opposite from each other.now arjun remenbers bhoomi &say a shayari

a: dil doondh raha hai tumko in fizaon main,

kahaan ho tum;

hawayein tumhara pegam lati hai;

par nishaan nahin miltey hain tumhaare kahin;

dil ki tanhaaiyeon ko aabad karne;

in dooriyon ko mitaane ,ek baar aa jaao tum

dil doondh raha hai tumhein in fizaoon main;

kahaan ho tum;

bhoomi hears arjun's shayari &became cry & run from there

friends how arjun meet the bhoomi , read next time.i write a shayari for first time if you don't like it plz fogive me. plz give me a big respose if you like my fan fict.

Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
that was a nice poem pakhi joshi!
i want arjun to find bhoomi and they should reunite soon!
please continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
wowww its really great part specially your "shayari". That was really amazing. keep it up 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow great!!! the poetry is nice! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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