Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 12

No problem Di
have a wonderful vacation you need a break from the exams 😛

i am back friends and now i am wid my computer , wid my saarthi fourm's friends .i feel really very happy from ur comments.all of u are really very friendly and so sweet.
in btw welcome here urewera and thaks for ur response.

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recap: arjun and whole family came to know the suraj's truth.

manasvi came there and said

m: arjun main tumhaara gussa samajh sakti hoon, lekin tum khud socho ismein bhoomi ka kya dosh, aaj ka din to uske liye khushi ka din tha, lekin usne apni khushi na dekhte hue iss pariwaar ka bhala socha kya tum use is baat ki saja doge.

arjun look towards bhoomi and realize his fault. manasvi leaves.

a:(holding his ears)mujhe maaf kar do bhanwari , aaj ke din maine tumhaara dil dukhaya.chalo hum mandir chalein aur uske baad hum jaayenge ek surprse date per.

b:achha theek hai lekin hum mandir sabke saath jaayeinge.

a:(making faces )achha theek hai.

then bhoomi called all the members and they go to the temple. panditji do the special worship for them.
then all the family members go to the home and arjun takes bhoomi for surprise date.

friends i am so tired today coz i am back from vacations today so sorry for the short part but tomorrow u read the romantic and long part of their surprise date.loves u all.

👏 I read the other parts as well, zabardast.....really well written scenes! I hope there's a cute scene between arjun-bhavri on their date 😉

Originally posted by: shazy

👏 I read the other parts as well, zabardast.....really well written scenes! I hope there's a cute scene between arjun-bhavri on their date 😉

yeh!!! i noe aiye?!

i LUV all the cute scenes of Arjun and Bhavri!!!!

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lol, ok, now pakhi, uve got me hookd...now, no excuses bout why u dun update as often, coz i wud like them to be fast! :D:D:P:P

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welcome back di
it was great can't wait to read the next part

Its as usual very good.Waiting for the next romantic part.I know you are tired but post soon.

brilliant..... 👏 keep it up....and nice 2 have u back....dear.....i really liked the part where arjun was holding his ears and was saying sorry 😛 😃

👏 👏 👏 aww poo welcme bak jaanu i m lubing it 👏 👏

welcome here shirley snd thanks for ur wonderful response , and thanks to my all dear friends for their support.

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b: lekin arjun hum jaa kahaan rahein hain?

a: (smiles) yehi bata doonga to fir surprise kiss baat ka?

then arjun take her to a very beautiful place which has lots of greenery and near a lake .

b: arjun ye hum kahaan aa gaye, pahle to kabhi nahin aaye yahaan?

a: ye jagah aaj ke special din ke liye , acha ab apni aankhe band karo aur jab tak main naa kahoon aankhein mat kholana.

b: lekin kyon???? kahaan le jaa rahe ho mujhe?

then arjun open her eyes and she saw a well decorated dinner table wid beautiful candles and table is surrounded by special arrangments of white and blue curtains and white and red roses .

bhoomi surprised to see all this,
b: ye sab kya hai arjun.

a: meri bhanwari ke liye uske arjun kii taraf se ek chota sa tohafa.

b: o arjun main bata nahin sakti kii mujhe kitna achha lag raha hai.

a: tumhein kuch kahne kii jaroorat nahin hai , tumhaari aankhein sab kah rahin hain.

then arjun bring a bottle of shampane ;

b: tum drink karoge??????

a: jab maine aaj tak drink nahin kiya to aaj kyon karoonga, ye to bas hamaare celebration ke liye hai.

b: achha to lao main ise kholoongi.

a:(laugh) tum khologi !!!!! kyon kya hua?

b:(hesitating)wo mujhe khol ke dhekhni hai kii kaisa lagta hai.

a: ok ye lo per , dhyaan se .

then bhoomi open dat bottle but few drops fall on her, arjun laughs.

b:making faces; ab hans kyon rahe ho.

a: nahin kuch nahin aise hi.tum bilkul chote bachhon kii tarah behave karti ho.

then both of them laughs and talk to each other, then arjun lights up the candles and they have their dinner,then arjun start the music system and they have dance.

arjun look in bhoomi's eyes and say;

a: bhanwari tum hamesha mere saath rahogi na.

b: haan arjun tumhaari bhanwari hamesha tumhaare saath rahegi.

then arjun pulls her towards him and hug her.then both of them go to their car.they sits in the car.

b: arjun aaj hum open car main kyon aaye hain?

a: take her in his arms: kyonkii aaj mousam bahut achha hai ,aur shaher se door open car mein aane kii baat hi kuch aur hai. uper deho jara aaj aasmaan mein chaand -taare kitne khoobsoorat lag rahein hain.
kitna achha lag raha hai na bhanwari yahaan , main hoon tum ho aur ye khula aakaash.

b: haan arjun aur tumhaara saath iss samaan ko aur bhi khooobsoorat bana raha hai.


then arjun say ;achha bhanwari maine tumhaare liye kuch likha hai ,sunaaon?

b: haan, haan arjun sunaao na.


a:-------------------------------------

jab se mila hai saath tumhaara badla-badla sa hai jahaan;

aaj kuch lag raha hai yoon mehaka- mehaka sa ye samman;

aarjoo bas itni si hai is dil kii, ke jindagi bhar paayein saath tumhaara;

door talak jab bhi jaaye nighahein ,milein hamaare hi pyaar ke nishaan;

jab se hue ho tum jindagi mein shaamil, lagne laga hai khoobsurat sa hai ye jahaan.


b:(wid tears in her eyes )arjun tum mujhse itna pyaar karte ho.

a(holding her hand) sabse jyaada and he gives her a warm hug.


tell me frnds how it is??????????

precap: arjun gets up in night and see dat bhoomi work on her project.

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that was so sweet and romantic 😳
di the poem was beatiful 😭