Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
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meri di tusi great ho ๐Ÿ˜ณ mujhe toh yeh bohat acha laga
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Posted: 19 years ago
Boring!!!!!no way its really good.I enjoyed it really.
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Posted: 19 years ago
o!!!!!!!! thanks to all of u. actually its too long, main to likhte-likhte hi thak gayi thi. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ
kya baat hai aajlkal sabhi bade funny hote ja rahe hain. ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow......i luved that....especially arjun-bhavri's scne...and when suraj-manasvi smiled at each other....i also liked it when suraj cut off yuv's kite.... ๐Ÿ‘ anyways...contiue soon.....brilliant๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
thankss alots to my all dear friends.

next morning in heritage house

b: arjun aaj mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai, maine to aaj tak kabhi koi presentation nahin di.

a: aisa kyon sochti ho bhanwari , jindagi mein koi na koi kam to pehali baar karna hi padta hai.aur fir mujhe tum per poora vishavaas hai, maine tunhein sab sikhaya hai na, ab chalo.

then all the family members getherd there and bhoomi takes their blessings.

bhoomi infront of lk: bhagwaan aaj mere jeevan kii pahali pareekhsha hai,mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai ,pata nahin wahaan aaj kya hoga? mujhe aashirwaad dijeeye.

lk; mera aashirwaad sadev tumhaare saath hai bhoomi,tum ye mat socho kii kya hoga sirf apna karya(work) poori lagan ke saath karo;
kyonkii manushya(human) ko karm karne ka adhikaar hota hai, phal(result) kii ichha(wish) ka nahin.
"karmanya wadhikaaraste maafaleshu kadachana"

then arjun and bhoomi comes outside and bhoomi touch arjun's feet;

a: are bhanwari ye kya kar rahi ho?

b: tum mere liye sab kuch ho arjun mere pati, mere dost, mere bhagwaan ho tum.

a: bhanwari tum apne kaam mein jaroor safal hogi, ye mera vishvaas hai.

then both of them reah to bhoomi's office.

b: arjun tum mere saath raho naa.

a: kyon nahin bhanwari main to hamesha tumhaare saath hoon to fir aaj to bada special din hai.

then they go inside and go to the confrence room.

mrs. roy: bhoomika aaj tumhaara pehala presntation hai, so best of luck for dat.

b: thanks mem , aap kab aayeen.

m.r.: aaj subah hi aayen hoon.

naina; mem wo log aa gaye.

mrs. roy: aaiye sir inse milye ye hain hamaari compani kii designer and MD mrs. bhoomika goenka and he is mr. arjun goenka.

then all the members sits there and bhoomi gets nervous and look towards arjun, arjun shows his thumbsup, then she start to explain wid some hesitation and she also decribe her report wid the help of projector.

after presentation everyone stands-up and gives her a big round of appualuse.

clients: mrs. bhoomika u r wonderful, amazing designs , we really like dat.

everyone becomes very happy, then they gives the check to mrs. roy and said: hamein aapke designs bahut acche lage aur hum aapko ek bada order dena chahte hain.ye uska advance hai.

then they talk to mrs. roy and then leaves.

mrs. roy: ye lo bhoomika, ye tumhaara first check, abhi aise bahut se check milne baaki hain tumhein.

b: mem ye to bahut jyaada hai.

m.r.: ye tumhaara hissa hai bhoomika , tumne iss project ke liye bahut mehanat kii hai . tumhaari wajha se hi hamein ye project mila hai.achha ab main chalti hoon ,meri flight ka time ho gaya hai.

then she leaves.

a:(becomes very happy) bhanwari ! bhanwari! bhanwari! tumne to kamaal kar dia.

b:(become shy) maine kahaan, ye sab to tumhaare kaaran hua hai, tumhine mujhe itna hausla diya, itna sab sikhaya ,jisse main ye sab kar paayi.

a:achha theek hai, hum iss khushi mein ek bahut badi party denge.

naina; may i come in mem.

b: aao naina.

n: mem khandelwaal group of indus. se phone aya tha , wo aapse appointment lena chahate hain.

arjun and bhoomi become shocked;

b: achha fir tumne kya kaha?

n: maine kaha kii main hmaari MD se pooch kar aapko call kar doongi.

b:(look towards arjun) achha tum unhein parson(day after tomorrow) 10.00 am ka time de do.

n: ok mem.

a: ye mr. khandelwaal roy indus se kya chahate hain.

b: wo to pata chal hi jaayega arjun.

a:(smiles) haan lekin wo ye nahin jaante kii roy indus. kii MD kaun hai?

precap:yuv talk to suraj and become very angry , party in heritage house.
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part pakhi ๐Ÿ‘
write soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww. arjun and bhoomi scenes sooo sweet!!! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
well, it took me a long time to read it, cuz im really bad at the language ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ but got there in the end!!
and i can always understand arjun and bhavri scenes! ๐Ÿ˜†
Best show the next episode soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
wooopi... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i had to catch up from all the way page # 15 so it took time...but its been great reading the story.....yaar bhumi ko english sikha do it will be funny hearing her....but the laddoo scene was well described...love ya sister ๐Ÿค—
please continue....
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hetal

.....yaar bhumi ko english sikha do...

sure di ๐Ÿ˜ณand love u too๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 19 years ago
Pakhi I really don't know how I will appreciate your work!!!!!I really don't have any words.Pls post soon.

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