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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks to all of u my frnds. 😃 😊 😃

after 6 month later......now bhoomika textile have a reputed name in business world n it have a big support of roy indus 😊 .......bhoomi n manasvi did so many efforts 4 dis 😊 .....and manasvi n bhoomi start beleiving blindly on tanya.and all of us knows dat tanya sent by maansen....and its a part of his evil planning.


maansen: yuvraaj ab manasvi aur bhoomika tanya per blindly believe karne lage hain....ab hum apne kaam ko anjaam de sakte hain.

y:absolutely ryt dad.

in a-b room;

arjun enters in room n see dat manasvi try to hang a photo at the wall.

a:kya kar rehe ho bhabhi. 😕

m: arjun bhoomi ne kaha ki tumhaari pho enlarge karwakar yahan lagwa doon ,to bas wahi kar rahi thi. 😊

a:wo kyon. 😕

m:(gently hit on his forhead 😆 ) are buddu kehte hain kii , pregnent lady jiska chehra her waqt dekhti rehti hai......hone waala bachha bilkul waisa hi hota hai. 😊

a;kya bhabhi aap bhi. 😳

m:achha ab main chalti hoon....aaj bhoomi kii pregnency ko 6 maheene poore ho gaye aur saatwan maheena shuru ho gaya.......isiliye ghar mein god bharaayi kii rasam hai.



arjun: bhanwari dekho main ye baby names kii book lekar aaya hoon....aur ye soft toys ...ab main ek poora room apne bachhe ke liye decorate karwaonga.jismein uske liye bahut saare soft toys honge. 😊

b:arjunji abhi 3 maheene baaki hain aur aap abhi se ye sab le aaye. 😆 😆 😆

a:to kya hua....(getting so exited n thinking)achha bhanwari main soch reha tha kii , hum hamaare bahcce ke liye na.....

b:arjun ! arjun ! arjun !.......itna mat socho 😆 jaao jaakar tyaar ho jaao , god bharaayi ki rasam shuru hone wali hai. 😊

den all of dem gathered in hall .......and whole heritage house is decorated wid flowers ,ligths, silk curtains etc .

den arjun n bhoomi comes dere.....arjun in blue sherwani which have a golden work on its neck..wid cream-golden dupatta 😊 he looks so cute (ab blue dress mein arjun mujhe to cute hi lagega na. 😆 😳 )....bhoomi wears pink lehnga dress. 😊

den biasa tell dem to sit at the "special-jhoola "which is bring dere 4 dis ocaasion.

here is the jhoola 4 ur imagination. 😳



den arjun n bhoomi sits on dat jhoola....den shaku put the tilak on arjun n bhoomi's forhead.and then do the aarti. 😊

shaku:arjun beta ab tum yahaan se uth jaao , hum bhoomi ki god -bharaayi ki rasam shuru karenge.

a:arey maan main kyon uth jaaon... 😕 😕

b:beta aisa hi riwaaj hai.

a:ok ,maan.

den all the ladies of goenka family n their relatives give the gifs as jwellary set , bangles to bhoomi n say something in her ear.

its manasvi's turn: manasvi gives her a beautiful diamond set.n say something n bhoomi laughs.

den arjun -bhoomi do the special worship , and hawan which is done by panditji 4 kid's wellness. 😊

in a-b room;

a:bhanwari manasvi bhabhi ne tumhein aisa kya kha kii tum hans rehi thi. 😕

b:kuch nahin arjun bas aise hi...smiles. 😳

a:bataao na bhanwari. 😕

b:manasvi bhabhi ne kha kii agar tumhaare twince hon to ek mujhe de dena 😆 ......tab mujhe tumhaari baat yaad aa gayi thi aur isiliye main hans rehi thi. 😆 😆 😆

a:oh toh ye baat thi.

b:waise bhawari time kitni jaldi beet jata hai na....kal ki si bat lagti hai ki hum dono dost the, fir shaadi hui ,aur ab......

a:lekin pata hai bhanwari hamaare bachhe ke sath hum apna bachpan fir se ji sakte hain...jab wo hansega, muskuraayega ,to kitna pyaara lagega na .

waqt beet jaata hai yoon ki, pata bhi nahin chalta;

kyonki apnon ke sath waqt ka pata hi nahin chalta.

ek chote se fool se kal makega aangan hamaara.

uss farishte ki hansi se goonjega ghar ye saara.

uski muskuraahat mein mehsoos hogi khushi tumhaari.

uske aane ki aahat mein mahsoos hogi aahat tumhaari.

kyonkii usmein hogi parchaayi(shadow) hamaari.



hey bhagwaan...plz save me.... pehli baar "out of track "jaakar kuch likha hai 😆 ...i know its not good.....but i have to write it...coz tuhina says me to write it 😳 .....plz tell me honestly.....coz i know very well ki its not good.....coz first time maine kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai 😳 ...otherwise baaki poems yo apne-aap hi likhi jaati hain 😳 ....coz all of u know dat its not my track. 😳
Edited by poonam kg - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
well i still feel u've the gift of writing..im enjoyin every bit of ur fan fic..keep writing..👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ur awesome 😃 👏 👏 nice poem 👏 👏 Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovely honey 👏
the part was fab.... n the poem was amazing ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👍🏼
its sooooooooooooooooooo wonderful that u wrote a poem cos i said..... i'm sooooooooooooooo touched.... &nb sp;love ya girl 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
u r really good at writing ...esp..those poems...too good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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di da parts where really amazing wonderful sweet and great
i wish the the directors of saarthi do somehting like this but they enjoy separting a n b 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
kaha hai aap poonam jee?!?! fan fic ka wait ho raha hai.😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Pammu apne aap ko underestimate karna band kardo.Tum accha likhti thi,likhti ho and likhti rahogi.BTW GR8 PART.Post soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi dear frnd, 😊

thanks alots for ur lots of love...😳....but sorry dat i give a break to my ff for 1-2 months coz my exams r coming, 😭
so i have to prepare 4 dem, but after it i will be back wid more twist😉 n some twist r totally unexpected coz i have the climax episode of my ff in my mind 😳
plz don't curse me, 😳hope u understand my problem. 😳
i really miss all of u😭coz all of u r so sweet..... 😊
love u all 🤗miss u all.😭bye............
Edited by poonam kg - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey thts okay...we understand...u study well n give great papers..we'll wait fer the twists n turns n climax for the coming months..n u give gud papers...cya...all the best... 👍🏼

love u too... 🤗

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