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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks friends for ur support.

next morning in heritage house

arjun: bhanwari jaldi karo office ka time ho gaya hai.

b: bas abhi aayi.

then she comes outside and arjun gives her the keys of car.

b: ye car ki keys tum mujhe kyon de rahe ho.

a(put his both hand on her shoulders); kyonkii aaj car drive kareingii mrs. bhoomika arjun goenka, ok.

b: kyaaaaaaaa main, na baba na,itni jaldi.

a: tumhein jaldi lagta hai,itna time ho gaya tumhein sikhate hue , and its just a trial for ur confidence, aur fir main tumhaare paas hoon na.

b: achha theek hai,then she sit on driving seat and arjun sits next to her.

finally they reach ;

a: wah bhanwari, tumhein to kaafi achhi driving aa gayi,achha ab main chaloon shaam ko milte hain.

then bhoomi go to her cabin, and her PA naina comes;

naina; mem ye fax aaya hai, hammare london waale clients kaa,wo do din baad aa rahein hain.

b(surprised): kyaaaaa do din baad!!!!!!!!! lekin wo to ek week ke baad aane waale the.

n: yes mem ,but u don't worry, waise bhi aapne saare designs to mujhe de hi diye the bas ,unki presntation tyaar karni hai.

b: kitna time lag jaayega?

n: agar hum din -raat lag kar is per kaam karein to do din mein ho jaayega,achha mem main chalti hoon shaam tak aapko saari files mil jaayengi, but final reports to aap hi banayeingi.

b:ok.

in evening naina gives all files to bhoomi and she reahes at home,in the night she read dat,

a: kya hua bhanwari pareshaan lag rahi ho?

b: arjun wo jo hamaare london waale clients the na, wo next week ki bajaaye do din baad aa rahein hain.

a: o to tumhaara project tyaar hai?

b: haan arjun lekin abhi poora nahin hua hai.

a: ok lao main tumhaari help karta hoon.

b: nahin arjun abhi tum thak gaye hoge , kal subha dekh lena ye files.

a: are u sure, ok, tum bhi so jaao , subha jaldi uth jaayeinge.

then arjun sleeps but bhoomi not,after some time she gets up slowly and take the files and sit on sofa,lk comes and sits beside her.

lk: tumhaari aankhon mein neend nahin hai bhoomi, hogi bhi kaise tumhaare jeevan ki pehali pareeksha jo hai.lekin tumhaare saath tumhaara arjun jo hai, tumhaara sachha saarthi.

b:(to herself) kya karoon kuch samajh nahin a raha.

lk: (making face) haan aapke arjun ji bhi soye hue hain, ya jaagne waale hain.

then suddenly arjun gets up,

lk:(laugh) lo uth gaye apke arjunji , ab main chalta hoon.

a: are bhanwari kya kar rahi ho, mujhe sulaker khud kaam kar rahi ho.

b: arjun wo tum bahut thak gaye the na isiliye---------

a: kuch thaka-vaka nahin hoon main,laao dikhaao kya karna hai.

b: baaki to maine kar liya hai bas ye laptop waala kaam bachta hai.

a:ok laao main tumhaari help karta hoon.

then both of them work to 3.00 am at night.

a: chalo bhanwari kuch der terris per chalte hain, mood bhi fresh ho jaayega.

then both of them go to terris and walk;

b: arjun mujhe dar lag raha hai ,pata nahin iss project ka kya hoga, mrs. roy ne mujh per itna bharosa kiya hai,
kya main use poora kar paaongi?

a(take her in his arms)kyon nahin kar paaogi ,main hoon na tumhaare saath, aur jindgi ke her mod per tumhaara pati tumhaare saath hoga.

b: arjun ,ye tumhaara sath hi to hai , jisne mujhe itna hausla diya.

a: (hug her) o bhanwari!!!!!!!

b: pata hai arjun jab tum mere saath hote ho to lagta hai,ye pal, ye waqt, yahin tham jaayein ,aur mein her pal tumhaari baahon mein rahoon.

a: tum to jindagi bhar mere saath rahogi bhanwari.



precap: shefali tells the plan to his father to ruining arjun.

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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 too good pakhi! It is soooo well written. I really enjoyed reading it 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 👏
di that was so wonderful
i hope shefali doesn't succeed in runing Arjun 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
im sooo sorri im late pakhi!!

but man...i dunno wat else to say!! amazing!!!!

and lol, mamta....shefali CANT be successful in ruinin Arjun...not if Pakhi has nefin to do with it! hehehe 😉

Ciao!
Ena
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Posted: 19 years ago
don't say sorry ena.
ya ena and mamta , shefali never be succesful in her plan.
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 👏 wow itz so cool re 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
I really don't know What to say!!!I just want to say keep it upppppp 👍🏼.It's wonderful.
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow......that was gud pakhi......i really liked the terrace scene 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
thankss alotssss friends ,all of r sooooo sweet.

shefali:dad aapko yaad hai na maine aapse kha tha kii hum ek -ek karke sabhi badi compniyon se deal krenge.

dad:haan beta kaha to tha.

s: to maine faisla kiya hai kii sabse pahale hum roy indus se deal karenge kyonkii unkii branch poore india main hain.

dad: ok beta hum unse appointment le lete hain.


in heritage house

b:(slightly bent on arjun and moves her fingers in his hairs) arjun uto subah ho gayi.

a: ummmmmmm sone do na bhanwari, waise bhi tumhaare project ke chakkar mein raat ko kitni late soye the hum. 🥱

b: koi bahaana nahin jaldi utho.tumhein pata hai aaj kya hai.

then he gets up and his hairs are not set and he looks soooooo cute in his "bikhre-bhikhre se baal" 😳😳

a:(moves his head in no) kya hai????????????? 😕😕

b: aaj sankraant hai.ab jaldi se fresh ho kar tyaar ho jaao , aaj tumhaara office cancil.

a: ok, its so sweet , i have spent more time wid u(wid sweet smile) 😉❤️

b: ab jaao bhi.

bhoomi call in her office: hello naina , main aaj office nahin aa rahi.

n: per mem wo report.

b: wo maine aur arjun ne kal raat hi poori kar li, ab tum jaldi se apna kaam poora kar lo, kal tak to ho jaayega na.

n: yes mem, aaj shaam tak hi ho jaayega.

then arjun and bhoomi get ready bhoomi wears beautiful blue colour's net saree , wid blue dimond work on it,wid beautiful bangles and jwellary and arjunji wears white sherwani style kurta ,choodidaar wid maroon duptta.

a: wow bhanwari aaj to tum badi khoobsurat lag rahi ho, then he come closer to her.

b: chodo arjun mujhe aaj bahut kaam hai, maanji kitchen mein mera wait karti hongi and she run from there.

a: are bhanwari suno to---------

in kitchen----------------

b: maanji til ke ladoo bana rahi ho lao main aapki help karti hoon.then she makes lodoos.

arjun comes there;

shaku: are arjun tum yahaan?????

a: maan wo dhekhne aaya tha kii ladoo kaise bante hain.

s: achha aaj tak to kabhi dekhne nahin aaye(looking at bhoomi and smiles)

a: acha maan chodo na ye sab, bhanwari kar legi, aap jaayiye aur dekhiye kii shakti ne kites and music system terrace per rakha ya nahin.

s: achha theek hai.

then arjun put his hand around bhoomi's waist and say: lao ladoo taste karwaao na jara. 😉

b: arjun chodo kya bachpana hai, koi aa jaayega,aaj tumhein kya ho gaya hai.

a: koi nahin aayega.

sudenly ganukaka comes and arjun gets free bhoomi.

ganu: bhoomi beta chalo terrace per sab tum dono ka intzaaar kar rahein hain.

b: ji kaka chaliye.(look at arjun and smiles arjun making faces)

on the terrace .

preeti : chalo na bhiya-bhabhi patang udaate hain .

b: haan preeti ek minute.

bhoomi to bade dadaji: dadaji aaj main chahati hoon ki kakasaaheb , baaouji sab iss kite- game main shaamil hon.

maansen: mujhe aisa koi game nahin khelna .

bd: maansen ye to parampara(tradition) hai, aaj hamaara poora priwaar yahaan hai , to tum kyon naa kaha rahe ho.

gunwanti : ji tauji theek kha rahein hain.

maansen maiking faces and say ok.

b: to hum do teems bana lete hain , leaders dadaji choose kareinge.

bd: mere hisaab se arjun aur yuvraaj.

b: theek hai iss tray mein jo slips hain unmein sabke naam likhe hain , dono leaders ek- ek karke slip utha leejiye.

then arjun and yuv pick the slips .

and coincidently all arjun's family in team of arjun and yuv's family in team of yuv.but arjun shocked wid last slip , its suraj's slip.

a: bhanwari mujhe suraj ko apni team mein nahin lena.

b: surajji tumhaare bhai hain arjun.

a: bhanwari maine tumhein pahle bhi kaha tha , suraj ko kabhi mera bhai mat kehna.

b: achha apna mood mat kharaab karo , abhi sirf itna yaad rakho kii tumhein ye game jeetna hai, isilie ek baar sab bhool jao.

a: ok.

then the game is starts bhoomi holds arjun's roll of string and preeti holds shakti's, shaku holds sidhharth's, and gunvanti holds maansen's, vishakhaa holds yuv's, but suraj holds itself then bhoomi says to manasvi: are bhabhi aap surajji ki roll pakad leejiye na.

manasvi agreed and take his roll.suraj and manasvi both smiles.

now everyone flies their kites, first maaansen cut the siddharth's kite and become very happy , but next time siddharth cut his kite, on other hand yuv try to cut arjun's kite but suraj's kite in b/w them ,

arjun forget dat dis is suraj , he imagine him as satya and says;

a: yes bhaiya , u r expert,aapko kaun hara sakta hai.
aap yuvraaj kii patang kaat deejiye. 😃

suraj , bhoomi ,and all are shocked to hear dis.

then arjun realize what he was say.

suraj: arjun tumne mujhe bhayia bulaaya.

a(wid a confused look😕) ji nahin, mujhe satya bhayia kii yaad aa gayi thi,isilye--------

s:(to himself) satya ke bahaane hi sahi tumne mujhe bhaiya to bulaaya.😊and then he cut the yuv's kite. 👏

yuv getting so angry, and he wanna cut suraj's kite but arjun cut yuv's kite.

suraj look at arjun and smiles. 😃


frnds this is a very long part , i am sorry if u bored wid it. main likhte- likhte thak gayi to kahin aap log padhte - padhte naa thak jaayein. 😆😆😳


precap: bhoomi go to her presentation, yuv talk wid suraj , and he is very angry.
Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
pakhi.....I luv ur fanfic yaar! 😃 The scenes between arjun n bhavri r so cute!!! aur arjun-suraj ka scene bhi kamaal ka tha 😉
keep it up 👏

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