LOVE STORY (some relations live forever) - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

contted.....

shimla ki unhi khobsoorat waadiyon main..sameer aur khushi ka rishta phir
se jeene laga tha,jo har beette pal ke saath aur bhi gehra hota jaa rahaa
tha...

khushi ko to is baat kaa ehsaas bhi nahin tha ki wo kaise khushi se nandini banti
jaa rahi thi..har pal uski nazarein sirf sameer ko hi dhoonti,sameer to jaise
ek khobsoorat sapne ki tarah uski zindagi par chata jaa raha tha...

or aisa ho bhi kyon nahin, ye zaroori to nahin ki humaari ankhen jo dekhen wahi sach
ho ,,or aise sach ke liye,apne dil kii aawaaz ko ansuna nahin kiya jaa sakta.
akhir prithvi or nandini ne apni ek poori zindagi is jagah bitaayi thi...ek
saaath...to unka kareeb aana to natural tha.

magar iska ehsaas khushi to us waqt hua jab wo ek shop par kuch cheezen dekh rahi thi

khushi ki nazar ek wrist watch par padi ..

khushi: "bhaiya,,ye watch dikhaiyega"

shopkeepar ne wo watch khushi ko de di...she thought for a moment and said

"theek hai aap ise pack kar deegiye"

tabhi wahan diya aa jati hai "hey khushi kuch liya kya"

Khushi: "yaaa ...see (she showed her the watch) how is it?"

Diya: "very nice...oohhhooo ab tune bhi gift shift lena shuru kar diya,,well i m sure Raj ko
ye watch zaroor pasand aayegi"

khushi hesitately said "but maine ye raj ke liye nahin lee hai"

Diya: "to phir.............(she stared at khushi) don tell me ki ye tune sameer ke liye liya hai"

Khushi nodded her head very innocently....

Diya: "kya yaar.,i know ki sameer is ur friend but ....mujhe sach mein laga ki ye tune raj ke liye
liya hai,,akhir sameer is just a friend or raj! usse teri saadi hone wali hai,..
but theek hai,tu yahan se raj ke liye bhi kuch select kar le..ok"

khushi: "ok.."

but she started thinking on it..."diya sach hi to kah rahi hai,.main sameer ko itna seriously
kyon le rahi hoon kyon main har waqt sirf uske ke baare main hi sochti rehti hoon,"

MERE MANN YE BATA DE TU
KIS ORR CHALA HAI TU
KYA PAYA NAHIN TUNE
KYA DHOON RAHA HAI TU
JO HAI ANKAHI JO HAI ANSUNI
WO BAAT KYA HAI BATA
MITWA ..KAHE DADHKANEN TUJH SE KYA
MITWA ..YE KHUD SE TO NA TU CHUPA

khushi apne khaylon main khoyii hue thi,ki sameer ne uske paas aakar kaha "kahan khoii hue ho,,"

khushi (came in her senses): "kahin nahin"

they started walking in the market place

Sameer: "mere baare main hi soch rahi thi na"

Khushi (ghabrakar): "nahin to...(see relexed) or tumhe aisa kyon lagta hai ki main har waqt tumhare
baare main hi sochti hoon,,"

Sameer: "maine aisa kab kaha ki tum har waqt mere bare main sochti ho..maine to bas itna kaha tha ki
tum abhi mere baare main soch rahi thi...kyon?"

khushi: "nahin main apne baare main soch rahi thi"

Sameer: "kya farak padta hai ,baat to ek hi hai na....coffee"

Khushi: "thanks........waise shimla ki sardi main coffee peene ka mazza hi kuch aur hai"

door se kahin jai ki aawaz aayi "hey SK" or phir wo saamne aa gaya

Jai: "waise mujhe pata tha ki tum yahin miloge,kabhi hume bhi coffee offer kar diya karo"

Khushi: "ok guys,mujhe kuch kaam hai,u carry on...bye"

Sameer: "byee.......yaa to tum kya kah rahe the jai"

Jai: "ye tum dono ke beech chal kya raha hai..i mean ....kya jo main samajh raha hoon woo."

Sameer: "jaiiiii we are just friends."

Jai: "yaaa,hum bhi to just friends hain na,par lagta hai yahan aakar tum humme to bhool hi
gaye ho,,ab chalo sab tumhara upar restorent main wait kar rahe hain"

Sameer: "ok ok theek hai,ab bacha saara din tunhare saath,ok"

Jai: "din ke liye bacha hi kya hai..3 to baj hi chuka hai,but chalo..lets see"

jaise ki sameer ne jai se kaha,wo poore time unhi logon ke saath raha...par zara sochiye humaari
khushi ka kya haal hua hoga..she really missed him .and in the night time she came out in the loan
of the hotel,and started waiting for sameer....

uski nazerien,bas sameer ke room ke door ki taraf thi...and at last..he came there.

Khushi: "tum saare din kahan the?...maine tumhe itna dhoona"

Sameer: "kyon..kuch kaam tha kya"

Khushi: "nahin,....kuch kaam to nahin tha...but.."

Sameer: "wo actually yahan ek church hai,,or mere sabhi dost wahan jana chahte the,to bas unhi ke
saath gaya tha"

Khushi: "church??"

Sameer: "yaa,its india's 2nd oldest church,,thoda door hai,..its in the city side,,,,tum wahan
nahin gayi ho,but ek baar jana zaroor..i m sure tumhe asli shimla wahin nazar aayega....
and main wahan se tumhare liye kuch laya tha,"

he gave a chocolate box in her hands "i m sure tumhe bohut pasand aayengi"

Khushi: "wooowwww i lov chocolates,,,tum mere dil ki saari baatein kaise jante ho??
are haan .main to bhool hi gayi...main bhi tumhare liye kuch layi hoon"

she took a packet from her side and gave him.

Sameer: "isme kya hai"

Khushi: "kuch nahin,bas ek chota sa gift hai,i hope ki tumhe pasand aayega...
ab do din baad hum yahan se wapas chale jaaenge,,or phir tum bhi london chale jaaoge,
par jab bhi tum ise dekhoge ,to tumhe humaari ye choti see mulaakat yaad to aayegi"

sameer just smiled..on it and asked "khushi ..do u love me"

Khushi: "what???" she asked in a very shocked voice

Sameer: "do.. u .. love ..me.."

Khushi: "ye kaisa sawal hai??,"

Sameer: "its a very simple ques, kya tum mujh se pyar karti ho ?? yes or no!!!!"

Khushi: "but how can u ask me such a question..abhi humein mile hue din hi kitne hue hai,,aur
main to tumhare baare main kuch theek se jaanti bhi nahin hoon"

Sameer: "okk,i see ..to kya jaanna chahti ho mere baare main"

Khushi: "are u mad???"

Smaeer: "that all,bas yahi jaanna hai"

kHushi stood up..and said "i m going from here,kyonki agar main yahan thoda aur ruki to main
zaroor pagal ho jaaongi"

she left the place and gone into her room....

Sameer smiled and said..."ye main acchii tarah se jaanta hoon ki tum mujh se pyarr karti ho,
but maine ye sab sirf isliye kaha taki tum bhi ye baat jaan jao...kam se kam ab tum is baare main
sochogi....."

he opened the gift wrap..."woww ,nice watch....mujhe subah ka intezaar rahega"

he wore that watch in his wrist ..and left for his room.


bas ek haan ke intezaar main raat yuhi guzar jaaegi
ab to bas uljhan hai saath mere need kahan aaegi
subah ki kiran na jane kon saa sandesh laaegi
rimjhim se gungunaaegi yaa pyaas aduri rah jaaegi.....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
hey huni sowi for the late comment ....jus give me two hours ...i will read it and comment it...sowi bout that...bbz
i will definately comment after 2 hours
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
really nice kiya pucha khusi se sameer ne 😆😆😆bechari khushi sach jan kar bhi anjan hai abhi hope she knew the truth soon about their first life😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Great part dear.Khushi ne abhi bhi realsie nehi kia par she loves him lot aur smaeer toh usse pyaar karta hi hain..
Wait for the next part dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: maria_awan

really nice kiya pucha khusi se sameer ne 😆😆😆bechari khushi sach jan kar bhi anjan hai abhi hope she knew the truth soon about their first life😉

yaaa..actually he is too bad in proposing but ..he is like this only..
lets see wat happen next..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Great part dear.Khushi ne abhi bhi realsie nehi kia par she loves him lot aur smaeer toh usse pyaar karta hi hain..

Wait for the next part dear.

yaa rakhi..khushi loves him..love never dies ..it is as pure as the souls are..
but its hard to realise it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

contted....

khushi wahan se wapas to aa gayi,,but wo sawal ab bhi uske saath tha..

she closed the door..and asked herself "kya main sach main us se pyar karti hoon,do i really
love him"
is sawaal ne uski or sameer ki wo pehlee mulaakat tazza kar di,,wo har pal uski zindagi ka jo
usne sameer ke saath share kiya...all was rewinding in her mind.

EK AJNABEE SA EHSAAS DIL KO SATAYE
SHAYAD YAHI TO PYAR HAI
KHAMOSHIYON MAIN DADHKAN MERI CHAN PAYE
SHAYAD YAHI TO PYAR HAI
KUCH BHI KAHA NA,KUCH BHI SUNA NA
PHIR BHI...BECHAN DIL HAI HUMARA
BEHKE KADAM HAIN,MUSHKIL MAIN HUM HAIN
DEKHO...SAMBHALEN BHALA KAISE YAARA
CHAHE BINA HE NAZDEEK HUM CHALE AAYE
SHAYAD YAHI TO PYAR HAI


sameer ke saath bitaaye har ek pal ki yaad khushi ke chahre par ek ajeeb se muskurahat le
aayi..."sameer kya main jo tumhaare liye feel karti hoon,wahi pyar hai?"

khushi sat on the bed,,where diya was sleeping .she tried to wake her up "diya uth na,,please
mujhe tujh se kuch baat karni hai"

Diya: "please sone de na,,subah baat karenge" or karwat badal kar wo pjir se soo gayi..

KHushi: "accha theek hai,,main to tujhe bas ye batana chahti thi,ki sameer ne aaj mujhe propose kiya"

ye baat sunte hi,diya ek dum se uth kar bali "kyaaa?"her eyes were blinking like a tubelight..

Khushi: "ab kya hua,,ab sona nahin hai"

Diya: "are yaar, tujhe to pata hai,ab poori baat sune bina bhi to neend nahin aayegi,,(she said exictedly)
accha bata usne tujhe kaise propose kiya.....mmmmm...let me guess,,
he must hav bent down on her knees,,or ek rose dekar kaha..khushi i love u,,,,ya phirrrrrrrrrrrrrr
london style ,drink ke glass main ring dalkar diya ...yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ab jaldii bata na"

Khushi: "aisa kuch bhi nahin hua yaar..usne to bas baaton baaton main hi pooch liya"

Diya: "kya poocha??"(she asked in a very eger manner)

Khushi: "usne mujhse poocha 'do u love me'"

Diya: "dam yaar,,how unromantic....i m sure usse koi ladki nahin pat sakti..mujhe nahin pata tha
ki sameer itna bhuduu hai...chal khod ye sab phir aage kya hua"

KHushi: "aage ...mujhe kuch samajh hi nahin aaya,usne ek dum achaanak se pooch liya..i was not
prepared for it.."

Diya: "phir usne kuch nahin kaha?"

Khushi: "usne kaha,ki its a very simple ques. answer me yes or no"

Diya: "bas...ab tera jawab kya hoga ye main jaanti hoon,,pichele 5 saalon main ...8 boys
sabki ek hi kahani...kya karen tujhe koi pasand hi nahin aata... bichaare "

Khushi: "but diya..is baar maine 'na' nahin kaha"

Diya: "sachii main"

Khushi: "actually main ....main use na kah hii nahin paayi,,"

Diya: "then what u said..'yes'"

Khishi: "maine use kuch bhi kaha...mujhe kuch samajh hi nahin aaya"

Diya: "ek baat main poochon ..kya tu us se pyar karti hai? "

Khushi: "pata nahin.....wo mujhe acchaa lagta hai,,infact bohut acchaa lagta hai...usse milna
usse baatein karna..i love his company,,jab bhi wo mere saath hota hai,,main apni saari
pareshaaniyan bhool jati hoon,pata nahin kyon but ek ajnabee hokar bhi wo apna saa lagta hai"

Diya: "khushi..in sab maamlon main tu mujh se zyada samajhdaar hai,,but main tujh se kuch kehna chahti hoon,
dekh meri tarah ..sirf masti ke liye hai to theek hai,,but tu is baat ko seriously mat lena...jo
ki mujhe lag raha hai ki tu le rahi hai...............

dekh pehle to teri engagement ho chuki hai,, ye itni badi problem nain hai but phirr bhi..
secondly,,sameer...ek forigner hai,,kuch din bad wo london wapas chala jaaega,,u can't trust him
.....i mean its good till friendship but....aage...
but agar us par trust kar bhi lo....bhi.....
sabse improtant baat,,he belongs to a muslim family,,tum dono ka koi match hi nahin hai;;;;
no body will support u....
or phir jis relation ka koi future hi nahin hai its better not to start it...kyonki phir
wo baad main takleef deta hai

see darling maine kahin padha tha,,,pyar ka rasta is a one way road,,so its better ki tu apne
kadam pehle hi rok le...kyonki aage jaakar lautna will not be possible"

diya ki baatein sun kar kushi ko aisa laga ,ki jaise wo ek khoobsoorat sapna dekh rahi thi
or kisi ne use jaga diya...or ab wo sirf ek sapna hi bankar rah gaya...

khushi: "shayad tu theek kah rahi hai...but ab main kya karoon"

Diya: "its very simple,,tu kal usse baat mat karna,just ignore him...wo khud hi
samajh jaaega that u r not interested..................or agar phir bhi kuch hota hai..to
use do char baatein suna dena..u are expert in that ...ab tak kitnon ko suna chuki ho"

Khishi: "yaa but agar main aise behave karoongi to use bura lagega"

Diya: "khushi its getting serious yaar..tune apne colledge ladkon ko kitna sunaya hai..tab to
nahin socha ki unhe bura lagega,or jab ki unke saath to tuhje pura saal guzaarna tha..
ye sameer ..isse hume kya lena dena ,do din ki baat hai phir hum kahin aur
or wo kahin aur....kuch din baad use to yaad nahin rahega ki koi khushi bhi thi...ab tu
aaram se so ga..subah jo hoga wo subah dekhenge
good night"

Khushi: "good night"

khushi ko diya ki baaton ne convince to kar liya,,but utna hee confuse bhi kar diya....
kyonki dhoonaa wahi se uthta hai ,jahan aag lagi ho..
agar sach main khushi ke dil main sameer ke liye kuch bhi nahin hai to use ye sab karne ki
kya zarooorat???
yahi sochte hue poori raat juzar gayi.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: rajatrangini

yaa rakhi..khushi loves him..love never dies ..it is as pure as the souls are..
but its hard to realise it..

Yes dear.U r right.Very true said It's as pure as souls but very hard to realise it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Superb update.Khushi almost in the way of realisation but dia is doing again big mistake and khushi confused.

Wait for the next part dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice part khusi is in such a dilemma ab kiya hoga sameer belong to muslim family and she love him but cannt says yes either and no either whats gonna happen nw dear

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