LOVE STORY (some relations live forever) - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice add me to pm list pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
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o my god...wat hav u done...sameer is from a muslim fam....thats gona be a obstacle in their love....well written...great work...please update the update quickly and do pm me thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Superb update.Khushi almost in the way of realisation but dia is doing again big mistake and khushi confused.

Wait for the next part dear.

yaaa she is pritty confused...but she is confused means that its not 'no' from her side..
thats see wat happenes next
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

really nice part khusi is in such a dilemma ab kiya hoga sameer belong to muslim family and she love him but cannt says yes either and no either whats gonna happen nw dear

ab kya hoga..???bas dekhte jaaeiyee..hum apko kya kya dikhate hain..
but one thing i could assure u that is....u will enjoy this journey..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: narutolion

nice add me to pm list pls

thankss and surly i will pm u..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

o my god...wat hav u done...sameer is from a muslim fam....thats gona be a obstacle in their love....well written...great work...please update the update quickly and do pm me thanks

ohh my god....just wait and watch ..sorry i hav delayed this update..but my pc was having some problem..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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contted.....

IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL MORNING

jiska intezaar sameer ne poori raat kiya...
he was standing in his balcony...tabhi khushi bhi apne room ki balcony main aayi
sameer passed a smile,and waved his hand to say hiii
but khushi,,wo bina kuch react kiye wahan se wapas apne room main chalii gayi.

phir saare din kuch yahi hua...sameer ne jab bhi khushi se baat karne ki koshish ki
khushi ne kisi na kisi tarah use ignore kar diya

sameer is baat se bohut pareshaan tha ,ki akhir aisa kya hua,,jo khushi is tarah
se use ignore kar rahi hai...
he tried to talk to her many times ,,par khushi ne to uski taraf dekha bhi nahin

ab usne decide kar liya,,ki wo khushi se directly jaakar saari baatein clear karlega,

THIS DAY WAS FOR MARKETING--

Mr dayal: "see students,,market is all urs,bas aap log kahin idhar udhar na jaayen..
at 9 o'clock we will hav dinner ,,to aap sab tab tak hotel wapas aa jaayenge
clear too all??"

sabhi log market main window shoping karne nikal diye...

Emma: "sk ,jai ..chalo na lets see that side"

SK: "no emma actually ,tum log jaao ,mujhe kuch kaam hai"

Emma: "ok.,jai will u come with us??"

Jai: "no yaar ,hum bhi to dekhen inhen konsa kaam hai.,i mean main sk ke saath hi hoon.,
shayad inhen humaari zaroorat padh jaaye "

Emma: "ok,,take care,"

sameer ki aankhen to bas wahan khushi ko hi dhoon rahi thi...achaanak se uski nazar
diya par padi,,and what he saw ki khushi diya ke saath nahin hai..

he got it ..use khushi se baat karne ka isse aaccha mauka nahin mil sakta tha..

usne khushi ko ek shop se bhahar nikalte hue dekha...or bas...he followed her

when khushi realised ki sameer use follow kar raha hai...she stared praying
"ohh god please..please sameer tum yahan se jaao,main tunhe or ignore nahin kar sakti
and i really don want to hurt u..please"

sameer uske peeche peeche chalta gaya...or jab use kuch samajh nahin aaya wo
khushi ke paas gaya . or ,uska haath pakad liya and said
"ye sab kya hai khushi ,main sabah se tum se baat karna chah raha hoon ,or tum ho
ki ...."

khushi,,very agressively said "leave my hand ;,i said leave my hand"

sameer uska hath chod diya..

Khushi: "tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho,jab koi tum se baat nahin karna chahta
then why are u following me....
haan!! tumne meri jaan bachayi thi na ,,,(she more agressively joined her hand )
ehesaan kiya tha mujh par..
isliye do meethi baatein kya kar leen,,tun to sir par hi chad gaye.."

sameer ko to jaise kuch samajh hi nahin aa raha tha ,,akhir ye sab ho kya raha hai
he was surprised by khushi's behaviour or isse pehle ki wo kuch kah pata
khushi added

Khushi: "or tum kal kya pooch rahe the..? do u love me...?
tumhe kya lagta hai,,main itni bevakoof hoon ki tumhari baaton main aa jaaungi'''
tum jaante bhi ho ki PYAR hota kya hai..????
tum jaise ladkon ko main bohut acche se janti hoon..

ye tumhara london nahin hai,mr ,jo raah chalte ksi bhi ere gare ko propose kar diya
aaj kisi aur ke saath ,to kal kisi aur ke saath..
ye india hai,,yahan rishtey vishwaas se bante hai,,

i know ye sab tumhare liye sirf timepaas baatein hain,,but i m sorry ,,,main koi timepaas
karne ke cheez nahin hoon ,or na hi mere paas itna faaltoo time hai..
waise don't get soo depressed... yahan india main bhi tumhe one night stand waali bohut
mil jaaengi..or unke saamne tumhe ye pyar vyar ka drama bhi nahin karna padega..."

itna sunne ke baad shayad kuch or sunne ke liye bacha bhi nahin tha...sameer couldn't
control himself or wo khushi par haath utha deta hai 'he slaped her'

khushi was stunned..but she was a bit prepared for it,,kyonki wo janti thi ki usne jo kuch
bhi kaha hai,uske baad she deserve that slap.

sameer ki ankhen nam thi,,he was almost crying ...uska dard uski aawaz main mahsoos kiya ja sakta
tha.

Sameer: "tumhe jo sochna hai soch sakti ho ;;;jo samajhna hai samajh sakti ho
par aaj mujhe sirf ek baat a afsos hai ki uuparwale ne mujhe kyon sabse alag banaya...
kash..kash jo kuch tumne kaha.. wo sach hota...to......kam se kam main bhi apni zindagi..auroon
ki tarah jee to sakta....(then he controlled himself, smiled a bit and said) ...kitna kuch kah diya na khushi,
magar mere sawal ka jawab abhi bhi nahin diya..."

aaj sameer sach main bohut hurt hua tha..,agar khushi usse kuch bhi kehti to shayad use
itna bura nahin lagta ,but usne uske pyar par sawaal uthaya tha,,us pyar par ,jise usne apni
poori zindagi dedi..

Jai wahan khada khada sab kuch sunta raha,,bas wo sameer ko wahan se lekar chala gaya,,shayad us waqt
use yahi sahi laga.

khushi jaanti thi ki usne jo bhi kuch kaha hai wo sahi nahin hai...uska dil ye baat janta tha ki
sameer ek acchaa insaan hai,or kahin na kahin wo bhi use chahne lagi hai..magar wo apne or sameer
ke beech ki doori ko badhana chahti thi,,par kya aisa ho sakta hai??

nahin,,wo jitna apne kadam sameer se door le jaa rahi thi,,uska dil sameer ke utne hi kareeb hota
jaa raha tha..

sameer ne jo us se kaha,,wo usi baare sochti rahi...or sahi hi to kaha tha usne,,khushi ne usse 'na' to
abhi bhi nahin kaha,,wo kah hi nahin sakti kyonki wo bhi to us se pyar karne lagi thi...
and she too get back to her room in the hotel..

usne sameer se jo bhi kuch kaha tha,us baat ka giult use kamzor bana raha tha...
she just get into the bed,,and started crying,,kyonki aaj pehlee baar ..she was feeling bad
for what she has said...
kahin na kahin sameer ko hurt karne se pehle she has hurted herself for doing such a disgraceful act.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice going dear sorry for late comment i was little busy
nice part dear
plz continue soon
love sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, what a part dear.Wonderful part.Khushi ne iye sab kaise kehe dia sameer ko.he is hurt by her word. Anyway, continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow its was damn good yaar do continue post next part soon cannt wait yaar😉plz

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