I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 112

Originally posted by: vvdn

Rocking update .......!

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb update Thanks Nisha...😃

Ayaan is enjoys teasing Asmi while all she can do is blush.Yup....maine uske liye koi aur kaam nahi chhoda na....hehe....

Samay is surprised to see Asmi and ayaan talking over the phone for soo long. But samayji yeh bhul gaye hai ki shaadi se pehle who bhi aise hi batein kiya karte the. Exactly....insaan khud apne karam aksar bhul jate hai....😆😆

Mauli thinks that couples shadi ke pehle itni batein kar lete hai ki shadi ke baad kuch bachta hi nahi. Hmm...ab kya kare....uski number nahi ayi na ab tak....isiliye samajh nahi rahi hai....😉😉

Samay on the other hand had the most sweetest explanation. He says that both the groom and bride to be are soo nervous ki kahin kuch ho na jai. Awe....am glad u found the explanation sweet dear!!

Asmi and Ayaan go to meet the kids at the music class. Saare bachein sawal kar ke un dono ka bura haal kar dete hai. Aaj kal ke bacche hai....wat more to say abt them!!

Ab ayaan aise jaldi mein kahan chala gaya? what is he upto now? Hmm....sab uske surprise k pichhe hai lagta hai...dont worry...jaldi pata chalega!!😉

Dono ke outfits bahut beautiful hai. Thanks...am glad u liked them...😃Ayaan , asmi ko dekh kar kho jata hai. No doubt on that...😉

Asmi feels very proud and happy to hear Pratyush priase Ayaan. Hmm...he deserves it all na...😛

Please continue soon I'll try my best dear....thanks for the wonderful comment.😃

Originally posted by: sun_423

sumaiya dear i'am here with my comments on the part you have posted.. sorry comment karne mein thoda late hogayi....Hey Suri Dii......aap bilkul late nahi ho....late to main hu....aur shayad hoti rahungi....😆😆...cant help it....😕 well the part was very nice.. the story is progressing very well.. Thanks Dii....am glad u liked the progress....😃asmi & aryan are so very sweet.. unke phone conversations se lekar unke mulaqaaton thak sab kuch is soo cutee... aur yeh aryan aur asmi kitne betuke, meaningless baatein karthe rehthe hai phone par.. lekin mere hisaab se in choti choti baaton mein, in choti choti khushiyon mein hii unka pyaar chupa hua hai.. Even I agree wid that Dii....mujhe actually ye chhote chhote scenes me hi romance dikhta hai....and am glad u think the same....😃😃i agree with samay's explanation kii there is a nervousness in both the bride & groom's mind kii kahiin woh apna rishtha kho na de, kahiin woh ek dusare ko kho na de.. aur issi wajah se these long phone calls give both of them a sense of security..Awe....am glad again....as u again agree wid me....😆....actually maine na ye baat aise hi likh di thi....but its gud to knw that it was quite true...😉 hmmm.. mauli ko yeh baat abhi samaj mein nahii aayegi, kyunke yeh baat sirf un logon ke samaj mein aathi hai jinhe kabhi pyaar hua hotha hai.. aur mauli ko tho abhi pyaar nahii hua hai.. lekin is baat par main mauli se kehna chahoongi, mauli fikar not bohat jald tum bhi pyaar mein girogii, mujhe iske poore asaar nazar aa rahe hai.. aur mujhe tumhara dulhe bhi wahii par dikh raha hai.. hai na wahaan asmi ka best friend nishant.. waahhh kya jodi hogi asmi ka best friend weds aryan ki best friend... hehehe..nicee... Arre best frnd wali baat maine notice nahi kii thi....dont knw why....but haan....pyar ke chakkar me to main usse jald hi phasa dungi....and then unka phn bill bhi kuch kam nahi ane wala....for sure!!😉very nice... tho phir se aryan has called asmi to meet him.. & they go to the music school & spend some time with the kids.. woh kid 2 is sooo sweett.. kitne pyaare sawaal kartha hai.. aur aryan ko irritate kartha hai.. too funny... hahaha...Am glad u found it funny....actually ye part mujhe khud khaas pasand nahi aya tha....but am glad to c.....it was not that disappointing!! ab main soch rahii hoon yeh kya mystery hai aryan kaha gaya jaldi mein woh bhi for a day without telling asmi... hmm... i think shayad woh is baat ka arrangement karne gaya hoga kii asmi's dad attends asmi & his wedding... this is my guess...Ayaan arrangements to karne gaya hai.....for sure....and kis cheez ki wo bhi bahut jald pata chalega....but I wud say....a very gud guess!!😉 next the function secene was nice... good that shaadi mein abhi bas kuch hii din bache hai aur taiyaari zoron-shoron se chal rahii hai... aryan ka asmi ko tease karna mujhe achcha laga... unke beech mein bhale hii khatti meeti nok-jhok chalthi hogi, rootna manana tho chaltha hii rahega but they both make a damn sweeettttttt pair..... Yup....in fact mujhe lagta hai nok-jhok se mithas aur zyada badhta hai....😆😉😉😃😛😛 pratyush ka aryan ko praise karna mujhe bohat achcha laga.. after all our hero aryan deserves all the praises... So true....waise raaz ki baat ye hai....Pratyush ka character maine introduce isiliye kiya tha taaki Ayaan ki jamke taarif kar saku....other than that ye role zyada imp nahi hai....😆😆 now i wish the shaddi comes in the wink of the eye & asmi, aryan tie the knot & they are bind in the sacred relationship of marriage.... keep up the good work going.... very well written....👏Dear jaldi se next part post karna.. waiting for the next part eagerly..😊 I'll try my best to UD ASAP....and yeah....wedding part likhne k liye main khud bahut excited hu...wanna knw wat I can do....😆😆

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiii sumi....Hey Yogi....😃

Fabulous part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks dear...😳

Ayaan n asmi such a cute n lovely couple.... ..Samay ne tikh hi kaha yaar ki ye dono bina kisi topic ke hi ghanto baatein kar sakthe hain ..but i loved their phone convo ..its so cute ....Ayaan saying ' poori zindagi mein itni lambi chutti nahi milegi ...too funny 😆 😆 Ohh...am glad u thought the baseless phn convo was sweet....and yeah....guess Ayaan ki chhutti wali line sabko achhi lagi....well I'm more than just glad!!😉

The kids r so naughty..specially the kid 2 ..wo kitne sawal poocha tha ..bechara ayaan to tak gaya jawab dete dete..utna hi nahin wo kid asmi pe line bhi marr raha tha 😆 😆 😆 Aaj kal ke bacche I tell u....Ayaan pe bhi bhari padh rahe the....just see yaar....kya zamana aa gaya hai!!😆😆

Ayaan ko kaha bhejdi tune bich main ??? usne mauli ko bhi nahin bataya where he is going Arre bahut sahi kaam ke liye bheja hai....mujhe yakeen hai jab pata chalega to tu khush hi hogi...and meri tarif karegi....😆😆....waise aaj tak kabhi usne Mauli ko kuch bataya hai jo aaj batata???😆😆

Ayaan n asmis dresses r so beautiful ...ayaan to asmi ko dekhtha hi rehgaya Glad u liked the dresses...and yeah...this tym I let him stare a bit...😉

Pratyush is so nice ..usne ayaan ki kitni taarif ki..actually karni bhi chahiye..ayaan hain hi aisa ...asmi felt so proud about ayaan Arre maine Pratyush ka role daala hi tha....taaki main uske zariye Ayaan ko khooob taarif kar saku....😆😆...after all he deserves it all!!😳😳

totally loved the whole part dear...wish tumhari lappy jaldi tikh hoajaye n we get lovely uipdate soon Am glad u liked the part Yogi....but I do hope laptop jaldi thik ho jaye...and main achhe se wedding part likh pau....sumthing that will satisfy me....😆😉


Thanks for the lovely comment yaar....will try to UD soon....😃

Originally posted by: sun_423

sumaiya yaar jaldi se continue karo na please..😊

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Sumi Hey Sur....😃
Is fic ko itne dino baad updated dekh kar sach me dil khush ho gaya!
Really great! I'm glad tumhara dil khush hua....though I dont knw how u found the part....and yeah....even I was happy to hav finally updated the part!!😆😆
No doubt Asmi is surprised to see the romantic side of her fiance. Hum bhi kafi surprise huye hai. But its good. Finally he is getting over Pari...:) Yeah he needs to move on.....and he can do that only wid Asmi.😃
Phone conversation kafi sweet thi. No doubt ayaan ko apni jaan pyari hai. IB officer hua to kya hua, har admi apni gf se darta hai...:D Bilkul.....aur hamesha aisa hi hona chahiye....no matter wat!!😉😆
Viase ye baat to sahi hai- ayaan ko itni lambi chutti fir kabhi nahi milegi...lekin agar usey chutti nahi mili, to Asmi se maar bhi to khayega...I think u shud do something abt this Sumi. Arre mera bas chale to maon usse ghar pe bithake hi puri mahine ki salary de du....😆...but haan...fic me hero ko special consideration to zarur milegi....😉
It was really sweet of him to meet those kids like that...ussey kya laga, saare bachche Ghajini ki aulad hote hai jo sab bhool jaye?
ha? Lolz....I was really laughing reading this line....waise baat to sahi kii tumne...😆😆
I wonder ye usne kis film me dekha k baar baar shadi se pehle sausral nahi jana chahiye It has to be a film which was not released....😆😆
Kinjal aur Samay ko shadi k pehle aur baad ka kafi experience hai...badiya hai, they can advice Asmi nd Ayaan. though Im sure they dont need it. Exactly....even I was abt to say this only....they dont need or rather they wont follow any advice....hamesha kuch hatke karenge na....😉😉
Bechara Samay...bekaar ban gaya
Ab Asmi se chote bachche bhi flirt karne lagey hai...man Ayaan ko comp dene ki himmat! ye agar kuch saal bada hota, to iska kya haal hota na! Ayaan ka reaction dekhne layak tha! I'm glad u liked the portion....par haan....agar wo thoda bada hota uski guitar, piano, band.....sab baja deta Ayaan!!😆😆
Ayaan bhi kafi samakhdari ki baate kar leta hai...aur flirt bhi karta hai!
wow Guess....he is learning all this very efficiently!!😳
Ab ye Ayaan shadi se pehle bhi stuntman bana fir raha hai...Isko pata nahi hai, agar Asmi ko pata chal gaya k ye yaha nahi hai, to wo usey kisi layak nahi chodegi, Mauli se badla lena to door ki baat hai! Wo baat to sahi hai....lekin mujhe nahi lagta Asmi uska reason dekhne k baad usse kuch kahegi!!😆😆 Waise....stuntman wala dialogue badhiya tha.😆😆
Ayaan shayad kabhi nahi sudhrega..aur na hi Asmi ko publically koi compliment dega...phew...style hai boss. Awe....how coolly u said that!! Love it yaar!!😳😳
Mauli aur Nishant sari zindagi yuhi ladte rahenge! mast hai entertainment to fix hai humara. So to hai!!😆
Its really good k Ayaan k juniors usey itna respect karte hai.
Beautiful ud Thanks yaar!!😛
Ab jaldi mere sone se pehle ud post karo! Ohh mujhe to pata hi nahi chala tum kab soyi....😆😆....jokes apart next UD maine post kar diya hai....hopefully kal aapko dikh jayega....😆😆😉
Take Care U too dear....
Sur

P.S. Suhana Di, congrats on moving to US and best of luck to you nd your husband! love you!


Thanks for the wonderful reply....and am glad u liked the part!!!

:D

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey here comes the reply for the update on pg. 123,
Really wonderful update yaar. Thank u Vertika....😃
Ayaan really did a nice thing by bringing Asmi to meet her father. Har pita ki iccha hoti hai na ki itne badi khushi k mauke pe vo apni beti k saath rahe par jab kismat me nahi tha to vo vahan nahi aa paaye. Fir bhi ashirvaad ki kami Ayaan ne poori kar di Asmi ko vahan la k.Hmm....Ayaan did a noble thing I guess....U c...jaisa maine kaha....ye uske lye zaruri nahi tha...yet he did that....so this was indeed very sweet of him!!😳😳
Kitna khayal rakhta hai na vo Asmi ka, kahin Asmi k man me bhi ek feeling rahi hogi ki us k dad us k saath hote kaash is mauke pe. Par ek baar fir se Ayaan ne bina kuch kahe sab samjah liya. Yup....after all he doesnt claim to love her too much....without any reason!!😉😉Their scenes wid each other were really cute. Thanks...am glad u liked yaar!!
Ayaan bhi romantic ho raha hai ab, night me call kiya us ne. Hehe....naughty n romantic Ayaan....😳😳😉😉