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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 31

Its just a few more days to go before the wedding'.everyone is very busy wid the preparations'..and even the bride n groom r busy wid each other. Everyday Ayaan cums up wid sumthing new to romance his wud-be wife'..and Asmi wud be all the more surprised'.but then she cud not be happier either!!

A phn conversation:

Asmi: So tumhe mil gayi apni outfits?

Ayaan: Hmm'

Asmi: Try kiya?

Ayaan: Yup'.and blv me'I'll be looking cool ok?

Asmi: I thought u r my Super Hot Driver!!

Ayaan: Hot ho ya Cool'.Banda driver bas aap ka hi hai Madam.

Asmi: Well'it dare not be otherwise!!

Ayaan: Dpnt worry sweetheart mujhe apni jaan ki kaafi fikr hai'..Waise lagta hai'shaadi karke hum dono kaafi saare logo ka dil todne wale hai'maza ayega!!

Asmi: Tumhe logo ka dil todne me maza ayega?

Ayaan: Dil todne ka to pata nahi par dil jodne me mujhe kaafi maza ayega!!

Asmi: Ek baat kahu?

Ayaan: Nope'.bore hone ka mann nahi hai'

Asmi: Shut up'.aur meri baat suno'..tum bahut excited ho na iss shaadi ko le kar?

Ayaan: Hmm'meri pehli aur aakhri shaadi hai'.saari kasar puri karni hogi'.aur to aur'.mujhe puri zindagi me itni lambi chhutti phir kabhi nahi milegi'..so I must make the most of it'

Asmi: (laughs) Tum sach me ek unique piece ho'.do u knw dat?? Kya kya sochte ho yaar!!

Ayaan: Arre'.tumne to bataya hi nahi tha tumhara ek duplicate bhi hai'.c'mon Asmi that's not fair!!

Asmi: Kya matlab?

Ayaan: Arre abhi abhi tumne kaha main unique piece hu'.iska matlab tum sabka double piece hoga'.ryt?

Asmi: (laughs) Wow'tum aur tumhare cute cute logics Ayaan!! Cho chweet'..coochy coochy coo'.(and she pretends as if she is pulling his cheeks)

Ayaan: (his eyes have gone round and his hand is already on the cheek) Tumhe ho kya gaya hai? I did not knw u love kids that much!! (and he has an unusual naughtiness in his voice which surprises Asmi)

Asmi: Tum na''.

Ayaan: Haan haan'.ab apna dialogue pura kar bhi do'.keh do'.ki main dramebaaz hu'.

Asmi: To nahi ho kya?

Ayaan: Main apni dramebaazi ka kala baad me aapko privately dikha dunga'.ok? Filhaal ek zaruri baat suno'kal na tum breakfast ke baad'.Music school k saamne aa jana'.hamein unn baccho se milna chahiye'

Asmi: Ayaan'.ek saal ho gaya hai'..wo log ab tak music sikh rahe honge kya?

Ayaan: Arre haan'.wo to bilkul bacche hai'.unhe kuch bhi nahi ata tha'.itni jaldi unki lessons khatam nahi ho sakti'.

Asmi: Don't sound so mean!!

Ayaan: Arre baba'.sach kahu to mean?? Kya zamana aa gaya hai!!

Asmi: (murmurs) Phir se nautanki!! (to Ayaan) Achha thik hai'.main pohuch jaungi!! Waise tum kyun mujhe lene nahi aa sakte??

Ayaan: Baar baar shaadi se pehle sasural nahi jana chahiye'.tumhe itna bhi pata nahi hai kya??

Asmi: Achha?? Tumhe to bahut kuch pata hai!! Par kaise??

Ayaan: Kisi film me dekha tha!!

Asmi: Tum kab se films dekhte ho??

And the conversation goes on'.Ayaan-Asmi were totally engrossed while Samay smiles from the door only'..as he had cum to meet his sister'.however she was perfectly busy!!

As Samay keeps standing there smiling to himself Kinjal n Mauli stop by him.

Kinjal: Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Samay: Kuch nahi'.bas dekh raha tha'.Asmi kitni bakwas baatein kar sakti hai'.Ayaan k saath!!

Kinjal: That's extremely bad Samay'.tum yaha khare ho kar unki baatein sun rahe ho?? Give ur sister sum privacy okay?

Samay: Arre nahi'not in that way baba!! Main to Asmi se bas milne aya tha'lekin yah aaa ke dekha'..madam to phn pe busy hai'.and mujh bas laga ki ye dono bina kisi topic ke hi ghanto se baatein kar rahe hai'..

Mauli: Well Bhaiya'.maine bhi ye ajeeb baat notice kii hai'.pata nahi shaadi k pehle ke kuch din'.ladka ladki ek dusre se itni kya baatein karte hai!! Aur ye dono to itna bak bak kar rahe hai'.that I doubt inki married life dumb hogi'.coz baat karne ko to kuch bachega hi nahi na'.

Kinjal: Actually Mauli'.shaadi ke pehle ke kuch din na bahut scary hote hai'.

Mauli: Scary??

Samay: Yes'.becoz they r scared to lose that one person who soon wud be defining their very existence!! Actually tab to ek pal ki doorie se bhi darr lagta hai'.ki kahin yehi ek pal zindagi na badal de'.so they intend to be in touch as much as possible!!

Mauli: Really?? Aisa lagta hai?

Kinjal: Yes Madam'aisa hi lagta hai'.jab tumhari shaaid hogi'.tab pata chalega!! By the way'.I'm pretty impressed Samay'.tum kab se itni gyan ki baatein karne lage ho??

Samay: Main to hamesha se hi intelligent hu yaar'.bas tum zara der se samajhti ho'.

Kinjal: Huh'.chalo ab aise hi bekaar mat raho'.kuch kaam karo'.kitna kaam baki hai'.Mauli tum chalo mere saath!!

And the girls leave while Samay keeps wondering!!

Samay: Bekaar?? Subah se kaam hi to kar raha tha'.ek pal k liye break kya le liya'.isne to mujhe bekaar bana diya'.kya zamana hai yaar!! (and he leaves to work)

The next day'.Ayaan n Asmi visit the music school'.as Ayaan predicted those kids were still learning their lessons!!

Ayaan: (whispers to Asmi) Kaha tha na'..ye yehi honge'.ab dekhte hai'inhe main'.I mean hum yaad hai ya nahi!!

Asmi: Inhe yaad hai'.actually wo naughty sa baccha hai na'wo mila tha mujhe!!

Ayaan: Tum yaha mere bina hi ayi thi??

Asmi: Arre nahi'.main to tahelte tahelte iss taraf aa gayi thi'..aur uss bacche ne mujhe pehchaan liya tha'.mere Mumbai jaane se kuch din pehle ki baat hai bas!!

Ayaan: Hmm'.achha chalo'andar chalte hai!!

As they the kids got happy to see them'..but at the same tym they were troubling them wid various questions!!

Kid 1: Aap log itne dino ke baad kyun aye?

Kid 3: Pata hai'hum na pehle pehle aap dono ko miss karte the'.aur Bhaiya'hamein to laga tha aap kabhi wapas nahi aaoge!!

Ayaan: Kyun?? Main to zinda tha!! (at this Asmi smacks his arm)

Kid 2: Lekin aap ne kaha tha na aap yaha nahi aaoge'.aur phir jab maine Didi se poochha tha'unhone bhi kaha tha ki aap nahi aaoge!! Aap dono kitna jhooth bolte ho!!

[ The naughty kid is Kid 2'..even before he was Kid 2'.so I didn't want to change this'.however main isse koi naam nahi dene wali'mujhe Kid 2 kehna hi pasand hai]

Ayaan: Arre beta'.jhooth nahi bola tha'.actually mujhe pata nahi than a kismet kabhi kabhi mujhpe bhi meherbaan ho jata hai!!

Kid 2: Matlab?

Ayaan: Kuch nahi!! Tum log batao yaar'.kaise ho?? Aur ye music lessons kaise chal rahe hai? Kuch ata bhi hai'.ya ek saal se aise hi'.

Kid 2: Arre nahi nahi'.hamein to bahut kuch ata hai'.mujhe to sabse achhi tarah se piano bajana ata hai'.main to Didi ko takkar de sakta hu'.

With the mention of piano Ayaan saddens a bit'.coz it reminds him of Pari'.. [Ayaan had gifted Pari a piano on her birthday'..may be u remember it now'hehe]'..however Asmi just looks at him and he quickly diverts himself from that!!

They spend sum tym with the kids and their music'.and then'

Ayaan: Achha suno'.hum nay aha aap logo se kuch kehne aye the'.we hav got a news'main na aapki Asmi Didi se shaadi karne wala hu'.

Kid 2: Ohh'iska matlab ye hamari Bhabhi ban jayegi?

Ayaan: Exactly!!

Kid 2: Lekin pehli baar jab maine inhe Bhabhi kaha tha'.aap ne mana kar diya tha na'..to ab kyun inhe Bhabhi bana rahe ho??

Ayaan: (murmurs) Ye itna kyun bakta hai?

Asmi: To kya aap nahi chate main aapki Bhaiya se shaadi karu??

Kid 2: Arre nahi'actually main na bahut chhota hu'.isliye aap ke liye Ayaan Bhaiya hi sahi hai'.

At this Ayaan drops his jaw while Asmi just laughs!!

Ayaan: (to Asmi) Kya isne abhi abhi tumpe line mara??

Asmi: May be!!

Ayaan: Ye kuch zyada hi bolta hai'.

Asmi: He serves u right!!

Ayaan just shakes his head n smiles at the kid''he very much reminded him of Pari!!

Ayaan: Achha ab hamein chalna chahiye'.lets go!!

And now they start walking'.but Asmi was silent at first!!

Ayaan: Kya hua? Any problem?

Asmi: Mujhe na bahut darr lag raha hai'

Ayaan: Kis baat se?

Asmi: I donno'I mean'meri shaadi ho rahi hai'I'm nervous'and I'm excited as well'.lekin dil me ek ajeeb si feeling hai'.a sinking kinda feeling!!

Ayaan: (smiles) Aisa hota hai'.mujhe bhi bahut darr lag raha hai'.u knw'no matter how much we love each other'.or how well we knw each other'we r now going to enter a new phase of our life'.it may be very very beautiful'.but its all NEW!!! And that's where this sinking feeling gets in'.hum hamesha nayi cheezon se katrate hai'.and I guess'its all a part of this!!! I'm sure'sab hi ko aisa feel hota hoga!!

Asmi: Hmm'may be u r right!!

Ayaan: (hugs her sideways) Now c'mon don't be so thoughtful'..tum aisi soch me dubi hui'

Asmi: Achhi nahi lagti??

Ayaan: Aree nahi'tum aise kuch zyada hi achhi lagti ho'.and at this point of tym'tumhara zyada achha lagna mere liye hanikarak sabit ho sakta hai!! (Asmi just smiles wid a blush) I always want this smile on ur face'.u get that?

Asmi just nods in a yes'.and then Ayaan drops her home before leaving for his hotel!!

At night'.Ayaan calls Mauli'.

Mauli: Ok'lekin tum jaa kyun rahe ho?

Ayaan: Tum nahi samjhogi!!

Mauli: Kya?

Ayaan: Uff'apne sawalo ka teer chalana bandh karo'.aur dhyan se suno'agar Asmi ko bhanak bhi lag gayi ki main yaha nahi hu'.to zindagi bhar iska badla lunga yaad rakhna!!

Mauli: Okay baba'.lekin tum ek din me aa jaoge na!!

Ayaan: Arre haan yaar'warna shaadi kaise hogi'chalo ab rakhta hu'.bye!! Sab sambhal lena!!

Mauli: Don't worry'bye!!

Today is the Mahendi & Sangeet'''every1 is at the Shergill Mansion where Ayaan n others were already present'.and Asmi was to come down from her room'.she was getting ready!! Now how Ayaan managed to reach before her'.is sumthing unexplainable!!

However'..Ayaan is wearing this:

Nishant: So tell me Ayaan'kitni bechaini ho rahi hai??

Ayaan: Kis baat ki?? (he knew wat Nishant was talking abt'.but then why wud he admit?)

Nishant: C'mon yaar'.bano mat'.tumhara dil bechain ho raha hoga na'.Asmi ko dekhne k liye'.

Ayaan: Well'.jab wo niche aa jayegi'.tab apne aap mujhe dikh jayegi hai na?? Main bechain nahi hu'.(and he looks away)

Nishant: Okay then'I'll see!!

After a while'.Asmi was cuming down wid Kinjal'.

Asmi:

As Ayaan sees her'.he keeps looking in that direction!! How cud he deny that she was'.ahh'. 'Beautiful'!! But as Nishant sees him lost'.he clears his throat and Ayaan realizes that he was staring'..meanwhile Asmi also raises her eye-brows at him'.in return he just smiles n proceeds towards them.

Ayaan: I knew u wud look beautiful'.after all aise hi to main aapko Ms. Beautiful nahi bulata na? (he was talking to Kinjal'.Kinjal was surprised n laughed at his naughtiness'..while Asmi & Nishant just shook his head)

Asmi: Bhabhi'chaliye iski nautanki to chalti rahegi!! Huh!!

Ayaan: But I didn't lie'.did I??

And there he was'.again right!! He actually didn't lie'..so Asmi cudnt reply to that'.so she just made a face'.and went away!!

Nishant: Tum bhi na'..ajeeb insaan ho yaar'apni hone wali biwi ko koi aise naraz karta hai kya??

Ayaan: Wo naraz nahi hai'samjhe? She is never angry wid me'.she is too sweet for that'.and mujhe bas lagta hai'unki sweetness ko utilize karma chahiye'.aise hi zaya nahi hone dena chahiye!! Waise'.main to hamesha se hi 'ajeeb' hu na Nishant?

Nishant: Matlab??

Ayaan: Nothing'.tumhe baad me pata chal'

Before he cud complete Mauly cums towards them.

Mauli: Hey'kya chal raha hai??

Ayaan: (he completes the line to himself as he sees her) Jayega!! (now answers Mauli) Bahut kuch chal raha hai'jaise ki ghadi chal rahi hai'.ye dharti chal rahi hai'apni axis par'and'.

Mauli: Shut up!!

Ayaan: Now wat?? Tumhi ne poochha tha'kya chal raha hai!!

Mauli: I really hate u!!

Ayaan: U wish!!

Mauli: Tum saare ladke aise hi hote ho'.bure!! Huh'.(and she leaves)

Nishant: Naraz tumne kiya'.aur bure hum sab ho gaye? Now how can this be justified??

Ayaan: Actually'I cannot be blamed solely'.I am too sweet for that u c'.isiliye isse generalize kiya gaya!! (and he grins while Nishant shakes his head)

Nishant: Tum ruko'main zara Samay ko dhund ke ata hu'.

Ayaan: Yeah'don't worry'.apni shaadi ka sangeet chhorke main kahin nahi jaane wala!!

Afetr a while'.Pratyush cums to Ayaan'and this tym wid his girlfrnd'Nikki!!

Pratyush: Hey Ayaan'congrats!!

Ayaan: Thanks'.am glad u made it!! Though I'm more surprised ki tum sabko chhutti mil gayi'.waise Saket nahi aya?

Pratyush: No'.wo shayad shaadi me hi ayega!!

Ayaan: Well that has to be obligatory for him!!

Pratyush: Waise'.lagta hai'Mauli ko apni shaadi me chhutti nahi milegi!!

Ayaan: Don't worry'.I'll make sure she doesn't get that! Just kidding'.by the way'.I think u r forgetting sumthing'.or rather sum1 very important!! (and he indicates towards Nikki)

Pratyush: Oh yeah'.sorry!! This is Nikki''(and he didn't complete further)

Ayaan: Hello Nikki'.thanks for coming!!

Nikki: Thanks for inviting me'and congrats!!

Ayaan just replies wid a smile'..while Nishant calls him'.and he leaves excusing himself!!

Nikki: Tum inse itna darrte ho?? He seems sweet!!

Pratyush: Arre darrta nahi hu'but I hav to be lot more conscious!! And yeah'.when did I say'.he is not sweet'its just he is way too bitter when he is bitter!!

Nikki: Ab kaam ke waqt wo tumhari aarti to nahi utaarenge na?

Pratyush: Phir bhi'main bahut zyada conscious ho jata hu'.may be I just don't wanna let him down!!

Nikki: Seems like u admire him!!

Pratyush: Sure I do'.wo hain hi itne admirable. I just really admire and respect him!! U knw wat'.he does the least necessary thing wid utmost necessity'.

Nikki: And wat abt the most necessary things?? (and she laughs while he just makes a face)

Pratyush: Well'during that tym'.he is not this much sweet'blv me!! But really Nikki'maine jis officer ko iss team me replace kiya'.wo coma me the'and I heard'.Ayaan used to hav every detail abt his condition!! Isnt that admirable??

Nikki: (smiles) Yes it is'.and Pratyush'.main na samajh gayi'.ki tum inhe kuch zyada hi admire karte ho'.but cud u pls stop this for now? Ek ladke ko kisi dusre ladke ki itni tariff nahi karma chahiye!!

Pratyush: Gosh'tum'

Just then Mauli cums to them'.and introduces them wid sum frnds'.so that they wud not feel bored!!

However amidst all this talking'they didn't realize sum1 was unintentionally listening to their conversation'.and at the end that person bore a smile on the face!! Well'it was none other than Asmi'.who was just passing by'.and got to hear sum sweet admiring words for her husband to-be!!

Asmi just looked thru the ppl to find Ayaan standing at a corner n talking to Nishant n Samay!! How cud she deny that he was actually very much 'admirable'!!

Just at that tym'.Ayaan looked at Asmi's direction'.to find her staring at him!! He raised his eye-brows in an asking matter'.Asmi just shook her head n smiled'.while he returned her shy smile wid a killing one!! Love was undoubtedly in the air!!

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Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Okay....maine do din pehle UD kar to diya tha...lekin ye note post karne me hi mujhe do din lag gaye....coz I cudnt find any opportunity to do that!! Ye hai meri haal....as my laptop is DEAD!!! Mujhe iske zinda hone ki ashanka kam hi lag rahi hai....as of now....to ye delay justified thi guys!! Main apni cousin k PC se OL hoti hu....hardly for one hour a day....that too if I can manage to use the PC due to the most familiar thing on earth....LOAD-SHEDDING!!!

Anyways...mera xam to khatam ho hi chuka hai...and I wud say PHY achha gaya.....at least better than CHEM...hehe. Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ye UD kuch khaas tha....pata nahi kya likha hai maine....maine to isse second tym padha tak nahi.....isse bear karne k liye shukriya.....apki sahenshakti se main bahut prasanna hu....😆

Thank u evry1 for the gud luck wishes....and am really happy to hav sum new readers....though at the very end of the fic...hehe. I'll try to UD soon as I dont want this to hang in the air.....but I'm sure u knw....I'm helpless myself!! And yeah....I'm not able to cum OL so often.....thats y I am not very able to reply to others' fics as well.....sorry abt that too!! Blv me....I'm the one suffering the most here not being able to read and comment on the beautiful fics!!

Ab main ye raam katha yehi samapt karti hu....dua kijiyega....mere Dad tak meri awaz jald pohuch jaye....and wo jaldi se laptop thik kare....its terrible for me!!

Luv,
Sumi.

@Dhara Dii: Mujhe iss part k comment me pichhle part ke bhi reviewsd chahiye....at least this much k the previous part was nice....(I knw u wont say that was NOT nice hehe)
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Hi Sumi

How r u???It has been a really long time..How were your exams..
I want to tell u that I shifted to US..Rishabh got a gud job dere so we decided to move..
Tumhara pyara lappy theek ho gaya ki nahin???
Now coming to the update,it was really gud..👏👏👏
Asmi n Ayaan r one really cute couple..Ayaan was teasing Asmi n she was blushing..😆😉😉
They can talk non-sense for hours.😆😆
Samay was surprised to see his sister talking like dis..But why is forgetting dat he too behaved in a similar manner when he was getting married to Kinjal..😃😉
Mauli was somewat right..Shadi se pehla boys n girls itni baatein kar lete hain ki shadi ke baad kuchh kehne ke liye bachta hi nahin..😆😆
But samay ki reasoning acch thi..Shadi se pehle koi bhi door nahin rehna chahta kyunki sabko hi yeh darr rehta hai ki kahin kuchh ho na jaaye..
Waise aajkal ke kids kuchh zyaada hi smart ho gaye hain..Ayaan ko bhi unhone chup karwa diya😆😆Waise kid 2 ki baatein hain bhi cute..
Ayaan uske questions ke answers dete dete thak gaya tha....😃😆
yeh Ayaan ja kahn raha hai???Kahin Asmi ko koi surprise to nahin de raha???
I can really imagine Ayaan wearing that sherwani..It was really cool.
he was lost after seeing Asmi but he wont admit it..after all he is THE great Ayaan..
Pratush really respect Ayaan a lot..Afterall he is such a gud officer..😃
Asmi was feeling so proud of her husband..he is indeed MAD(My adorable Darling)
God has really been kind to them.😊
"Our meeting was more than fate.
God knew you were my soul mate.
Your timing is never wrong.
Now we share a bond so strong.
Our time together means so much.
Each moment intensifies the need to touch.
Your love has reached my deepest soul.
Longing for you to daily hold.
May our love and need continuously grow.
Forever, LOVE, NEED, PASSION to each show."
I really want to see some cute romantic moments between dem😃
Continue soon
Bye
I have collected these poems since I was thirteen..I have dem written im my diary..😃
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sumi
Is fic ko itne dino baad updated dekh kar sach me dil khush ho gaya!
Really great!
No doubt Asmi is surprised to see the romantic side of her fiance. Hum bhi kafi surprise huye hai. But its good. Finally he is getting over Pari...:)
Phone conversation kafi sweet thi. No doubt ayaan ko apni jaan pyari hai. IB officer hua to kya hua, har admi apni gf se darta hai...:D
Viase ye baat to sahi hai- ayaan ko itni lambi chutti fir kabhi nahi milegi...lekin agar usey chutti nahi mili, to Asmi se maar bhi to khayega...I think u shud do something abt this Sumi.
It was really sweet of him to meet those kids like that...ussey kya laga, saare bachche Ghajini ki aulad hote hai jo sab bhool jaye?
ha?
I wonder ye usne kis film me dekha k baar baar shadi se pehle sausral nahi jana chahiye
Kinjal aur Samay ko shadi k pehle aur baad ka kafi experience hai...badiya hai, they can advice Asmi nd Ayaan. though Im sure they dont need it.
Bechara Samay...bekaar ban gaya
Ab Asmi se chote bachche bhi flirt karne lagey hai...man Ayaan ko comp dene ki himmat! ye agar kuch saal bada hota, to iska kya haal hota na! Ayaan ka reaction dekhne layak tha!
Ayaan bhi kafi samakhdari ki baate kar leta hai...aur flirt bhi karta hai!
wow
Ab ye Ayaan shadi se pehle bhi stuntman bana fir raha hai...Isko pata nahi hai, agar Asmi ko pata chal gaya k ye yaha nahi hai, to wo usey kisi layak nahi chodegi, Mauli se badla lena to door ki baat hai!
Ayaan shayad kabhi nahi sudhrega..aur na hi Asmi ko publically koi compliment dega...phew...style hai boss.
Mauli aur Nishant sari zindagi yuhi ladte rahenge! mast hai entertainment to fix hai humara.
Its really good k Ayaan k juniors usey itna respect karte hai.
Beautiful ud
Ab jaldi mere sone se pehle ud post karo!
Tace Care
Sur

P.S. Suhana Di, congrats on moving to US and best of luck to you nd your husband! love you!
:D
Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Me Likey Likey Likey !!
Aur ye saari officers Ayaan ki shaadi ki khushi mana rahe hain...peeche se saare chor party karenge !! Hahah !!
Lovely part.....LOVEEEE Ayaan !!
Cant wait for the Shaadi !! Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome part dear
I'm glad u updated the fic after so long
U describe everything very sweetly
Pls do cont so soon now
Pls don't take so much of time again and pls write the bit more longer part then this
Luv u dear
Take care!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
damn cool
superb part
waiting for next
update soon

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very cool part............ loved AYAAN-ASMI phone conversation............... wondering......kitna bill aata hoga.😆 😆 😆 😆................
part as a whole was simple sweet................. Ayaan shadowed other characters the whole part............baaton mein kisiko jitne nahi deta.............
loved him to much.................coincidently........same occassipon happening in Rajeev's real life too....... but in ur fic u are a step ahead.....fic shadi tak pahunch gayi.......

continue soon as soon as possible.....😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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hmm, nice part
finally tune update kar diya.
lekin iske liye main teri aarti bilkul nahin utarungi
kyuki update karna teri duty hai.
Laptop kharab, bad luck, kintu loadsheeding big problem, just hate it
well ebar update e ashi,
Ayaan & Asmi conversation was so cute
loved it
too good
then the music school scene,mindblowing
kid 2 ka asmi ke saath flirt karna,he he
lastly engagement scene was awsome
yaa love was in the air
tor update e naa kichu unque bapar thake, jeta porte khub bhalo lage,
concept ta kintu unique naa holeo reader ke dhore rakhar ability ache.
amazing part
u rocked dear
beautifully written
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello sweetheart...................very glad to see u here after along time..............theres always a magic or some charisma in ur each update dear......................liked it very much....................the casual convo and dialogues are beautiful..................the kid 2 i was expecting something from him and i wasnt dissapointed.................and the way ayaan reacted was awesome..................muali is wrong that their life will be boring.....................ayaan hai na uski aur asmi ki zindagi colroful banane ke liye...................ayaan ka hote huye aisa ho sakta hai???????????? naaaaaaaaaaaaaa.........................loved the unique piece dialogue, the coochy coo scene was adorable and awesome.......and also the line kya isne abhi abhi tumpe line mara was fantastic dear........................what does tahelte tahelte and hani karak mean?????????????ayaan loves blackmailing mauli and where did he go?????????????and he reached on time and before asmi................now thats surprising...................loved the convo where ayaan explains what they feel outside the school.............cant wait to read further..................cont soon dear....................

hope ur lappy gets repaired soon so that i rather v all will be happy...............

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