I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 111

Originally posted by: pinky901

Awesome part dear Thanks Pinky...😃

I'm glad u updated the fic after so long Actually I am having sum problem wid the laptop....isiliye kuch zyada hi der ho gayi....however am glad u didnt forget it all..😆

U describe everything very sweetlyThanks dear....am glad u found it sweet....😃

Pls do cont so soon now

Pls don't take so much of time again and pls write the bit more longer part then thisYeah I knw this was a much shorter part....but I promise next part will be lot longer!!😃

Luv u dear

Take care!!!!U tooo take care dear....and yeah...I'll try to UD very soon!!😃

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
superb part
waiting for next
update soon

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

very cool part............ loved AYAAN-ASMI phone conversation..............Hey Puri....am glad u liked the part n Ayaan-Asmi phn convo!!😃. wondering......kitna bill aata hoga.😆................Hehe....maine socha hai mobile company me koi connection hoga inka....warna ye to budget k bahar chala jaata....😆😆
part as a whole was simple sweet.........Well I knw it was simple...but am glad u found it sweet!! 😃😃........ Ayaan shadowed other characters the whole part............baaton mein kisiko jitne nahi deta.............Thats his specialty....he cant let any1 else win....btw u must hav understood this fic is totally focused on Ayaan....isiliye mostly wo overshadow kar deta hai....kya karu I cant help myself.😆
loved him to much.................coincidently........same occassipon happening in Rajeev's real life too....... but in ur fic u are a step ahead.....fic shadi tak pahunch gayi.......Yeah....u said such a true thing....waise Rajeev ki shaadi to early next year hai....so I dont think we can w8 that long...😆😆...warna main rok deti...😆😆

continue soon as soon as possible.....😃I'll try my best Puri.....thanks for the comment dear.😃

Originally posted by: sania_58

hmm, nice part

finally tune update kar diya.Yeah....finally kismat ko mujhpe rahem aya....and maine jaise taise manage kiya....though am not very happy wid the part!!

lekin iske liye main teri aarti bilkul nahin utarungi I dont expect that either.....tum log mujhe pitne nahi aye...yehi bahut hai mere liye...😆

kyuki update karna teri duty hai.

Laptop kharab, bad luck, kintu loadsheeding big problem, just hate it Yeah....its creating a havoc....yaar!

well ebar update e ashi,

Ayaan & Asmi conversation was so cute

loved it

too good Thanks yaar....am glad u liked their baseless convo as well...😆😳

then the music school scene,mindblowing

kid 2 ka asmi ke saath flirt karna,he he Am glad u liked the music skool part too.😃

lastly engagement scene was awsome

yaa love was in the air Koi shakh?😉

tor update e naa kichu unque bapar thake, jeta porte khub bhalo lage,

concept ta kintu unique naa holeo reader ke dhore rakhar ability ache.Really?? Actually ami jani amar concept ta quite known....but am glad j ta sotteo ei fic keu pore...😆😆...and thanks for being so sweet yaar....majhe majhe....amar nijeri bhalo lage na UD....jmon ebarer ta....yet u appreciate....thank u yaar!!

amazing part

u rocked dear

beautifully written

great going Dhonnobaad!!

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: spvd

hello sweetheart..........Hey Deepa..........very glad to see u here after along time......Am more than just happy to be here....though I'm not bak full fledged....yet its gud to hav a glimpse...😉........theres always a magic or some charisma in ur each update dear......................liked it very much...........Ohh...I'm glad u liked this simple part as well....u knw mujhe UD karte waqt hi pata tha....there's not the usual thing in this part....kuch khaas nahi tha...but am glad u r not disappointed!!.........the casual convo and dialogues are beautiful.....Thanks!!.............the kid 2 i was expecting something from him and i wasnt dissapointed..........Phew....am glad abt that...lolz.......and the way ayaan reacted was awesome......Everything abt him is awesum na...😆............muali is wrong that their life will be boring.....................ayaan hai na uski aur asmi ki zindagi colroful banane ke liye...................ayaan ka hote huye aisa ho sakta hai???????????? naaaaaaaaaaaaaa..........So true...jahan Ayaan hai waha boredom kaise ho sakta hai?? they just dont go along!!😃😃...............loved the unique piece dialogue, the coochy coo scene was adorable and awesome.......and also the line kya isne abhi abhi tumpe line mara was fantastic dear...........Awe...u picked up sum sweet things from this part...and yeah...isse mujhe laga....at least there is sumthing in this part....ye reply padhke mujhe sach me sukun mila Deepa!!.............what does tahelte tahelte and hani karak mean?????????????ayaan loves blackmailing mauli and where did he go?????????????and he reached on time and before asmi................now thats surprising.......Hmm....bcoz he has got a surprise yaar...hehe.............loved the convo where ayaan explains what they feel outside the school.......I am glad u loved it...😃......cant wait to read further..................cont soon dear.......I'll try my best dear! And yeah...u said thanks for the PM....I say....U r always more than welcum!!😃😃.............

hope ur lappy gets repaired soon so that i rather v all will be happy...............Yeah....even I am w8ing to happy wid my lappy....😕😆

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

awesome part Hey Ammu....am glad u liked the part...thanks dear.😃
both ayaan and asmi conversation and kinjal samay and mauli convo was very gooodddddddddd loved reading it Am glad u loved the convos....and u were not disappointed!!
amazing fantastic superb very nice part Thanks for the appreciation dear.
cont soonnn tc ammu

I'll try my best to continue soon dear....u too take care!!

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hiii Hiii Mana....😃

I know I am late in commenting...but. u wer SUPERLATEEEEEEEEEEEEEE in updating...so...😉 Haha....even I was wondering why u r saying u r late....when I hav been ahead of u in that regard...hehe!

I just hope your lappy gets repaired soon...Me too....

Coming to Update...It was very nice....Thanks.

And cutest of all was ofcourse AYAAN...ah...and Asmi...😆....Wah tum to kaafi humble nikli yaar....main hoti to Ayaan pe hi khatam kar deti....no Asmi....😆😆...but yeah u r actually very sweet....and am glad u found them cute....for obvious reasons....😆

Ayaan saying ' poori zindagi mein itni lambi chutti nahi milegi...' was damn funny 😆 😆 😆Am glad u thought it was funny....kyunki mujhe iss part me zyada achhi cheezein nahi mili...😆

These two really talk about anything and everything....AND NOTHING....😆 😆 😆So true....kitna sahi samajhti ho yaar.

Those kids were really very naughty !! 😆 😆

Ayaan ki bolti bandh karwadi !!! 😆 😆 😆 Now dont they deserve an awards for that?😉 Lekin main nahi dungi unhe koi award....😆😆

AB ye Ayaan firse kaha gayab hua tha???Surprise....surprise!!😆

Pratyush praising Ayaan and Asmi loving it and then admiring Ayaan was very nice....Am glad u liked it....waise Pratyush ka character maine introduce hi kiya th Ayaan ki tarif karwane k liye....😆😆

Well Sumi...Update soon this time.😊 I'll try Mana....seriously!!😃

Waise dekha....iss reply par kitne LOL emoticons hai....😆😆😆...there I go again!!😳

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Nice part Sumi....!!!!

These are so very cute pre marriage parts...!!!! Continue soon....!!!

Originally posted by: nisha1984

hey awesome update.................Hey Nisha....am glad u liked the part dear.

Aryan is such a cutiee...............No doubt on that I guess....😳😳

Loved the scenes between Aryan & Asmi..............Am happy to knw that dear.😃

wedding preparation scenes were awesome as well.............I hope u like the wedding scenes better....😉

please update soon..............I'll try my best to do that soon dear....till then....thanks for commenting!!😃😃

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hey Sumi...baht dino baad yaad aayi tumhe hamari...!!! mujhe pata hai ki tumhara lappy kharab hai...aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki aise probs kitna horrible hota hai...!!! yaar...aaj kal IF k bina toh jaise zindagi adhuri hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Madam aapko sab pata hai....aur ye mujhe bhi pata hai...😆😆.....aur IF bina zindagi kitniiiiii horrible hoti hai....ye mujhe filhaal sabse achha se pata hai....😆😆

AWESOME one...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks Priya.😃

Asmi aur ayaan ka convo kafi mazedaar tha...ek dushre ko chedte hi rahte hain...!!! aur jab ayaan kuch jyada chedta hai toh Asmi blush karne lagti hai....perfect couple...!!! yeh dono kitni baat karr lete hain yaar...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Exactly....inke baatein hoti to mazedaar hai...lekin thodi baseless hoti hai na? Agar aise hi chalta raha....to ye hum sab DIMAGLESS pe bhari padh jayenge....😆😆...isiliye sochti hu....fic jaldi se end kar dungi...😉😉

ab samay ko yeh dekh kar hairani ho rahi hai...!!! voh sayad bhul gaya...jab us ki shaadi ho rahi thi toh janab fone se chipke rahte the...asmi ko bhi room se bahar bhej dete the...!!! See...mujhe sab kuch yaad hai...he he he...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Maan gaye tumhari memory ko yaar....u actually remember it all....😳😳...and haan....Samay ne khud to aish kar liye...but it was like...khao piyo aish karo....par phir sab bhul jao...😆😆

samay shayad sahi kah raha tha...shaadi se pahle sayad sabhi yahi feel karte honge...ki kahin kuch gadbad na ho jaye...aur sab kuch galat na ho jaye...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

May be....aisa hi lagta hai...ab mujhe to experience hai nahi....to bas keh diya...😉😆

ab us school k bachhon k bare me kya kahna...??? aaj k bachhe...toh bado ko bhi chuna laga dete hain...!!!Hai na? Kya zamana aa gaya hai...😆😆 unhone Ayaan ko chup karwa diya...jise koi bhi chup nahi karwa sakta...!!! vaise us kid 2 ki batain baht achhi thi...ayyan bichara toh use jawab dete dete thak gaya tha...!!! vaise vahan par jane ka idea bhi toh usi ka tha na...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Hmm...aur uski bharpayi bhi Ayaan ne hi kii...wo baccha to usike saamne Asmi pe line maar raha tha...but Ayaan kuch nahi kar paya....😆

ab Ayaan na toh kabhi badla hai aur na toh kabhi badlega...!!! har baar asmi ko dekh kar kho jata hai...par tarif kabhi nahi karta...uff...yeh ladka hai allha...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Well....Suhana dii ne usse isliye THE GR8 Ayaan ka khitaab diya hai....😆😉

asmi ...ayaan ko le kar proud feel karna toh jayaz hai...vaise bhi ayaan hai bhi aisa...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Bilkul sahi....😃

plz jaldi se cont karna...!!! hope ki jaldi se tumhara lappy phir se tumhare paas aajaye...thik ho kar...aur humain bhi ek romntic aur awesome-blowsome sa ek aur ud mil jaye jaldi se...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Even I want to make the wedding parts awesum blossom for u all....lekin Priya...mera lappy to abhi bhi mere paas hi hai.....I mean abhi tak thik hone gaya hi nahi hai....😆😆....waise ye thoda kaam kar raha hai...isiliye ye reply ho raha hai.....😆😆..but haan...its still not enough to UD...coz ye ek word k baad 5 sec ka break leta hai....😆😆

take care😃

U too dear....and yeah....I will try to UD soooooon.