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@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1091

awesome part both ayaan and asmi conversation and kinjal samay and mauli convo was very gooodddddddddd loved reading it amazing fantastic superb very nice part cont soonnn tc ammu

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1092

hiii

I know I am late in commenting...but. u wer SUPERLATEEEEEEEEEEEEEE in updating...so...😉

I just hope your lappy gets repaired soon...

Coming to Update...It was very nice....

And cutest of all was ofcourse AYAAN...ah...and Asmi...😆

Ayaan saying ' poori zindagi mein itni lambi chutti nahi milegi...' was damn funny 😆 😆 😆

These two really talk about anything and everything....AND NOTHING....😆 😆 😆

Those kids were really very naughty !! 😆 😆

Ayaan ki bolti bandh karwadi !!! 😆 😆 😆

AB ye Ayaan firse kaha gayab hua tha???

Pratyush praising Ayaan and Asmi loving it and then admiring Ayaan was very nice....

Well Sumi...Update soon this time.😊

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1093

Nice part Sumi....!!!!

These are so very cute pre marriage parts...!!!! Continue soon....!!!

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Nisha

@nisha1984

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1094

hey awesome update.................

Aryan is such a cutiee...............

Loved the scenes between Aryan & Asmi..............

wedding preparation scenes were awesome as well.............

please update soon..............

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1095

Hey Sumi...baht dino baad yaad aayi tumhe hamari...!!! mujhe pata hai ki tumhara lappy kharab hai...aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki aise probs kitna horrible hota hai...!!! yaar...aaj kal IF k bina toh jaise zindagi adhuri hai...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

AWESOME one...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Asmi aur ayaan ka convo kafi mazedaar tha...ek dushre ko chedte hi rahte hain...!!! aur jab ayaan kuch jyada chedta hai toh Asmi blush karne lagti hai....perfect couple...!!! yeh dono kitni baat karr lete hain yaar...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

ab samay ko yeh dekh kar hairani ho rahi hai...!!! voh sayad bhul gaya...jab us ki shaadi ho rahi thi toh janab fone se chipke rahte the...asmi ko bhi room se bahar bhej dete the...!!! See...mujhe sab kuch yaad hai...he he he...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

samay sayad sahi kah raha tha...shaadi se pahle sayad sabhi yahi feel karte honge...ki kahin kuch gadbad na ho jaye...aur sab kuch galat na ho jaye...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

ab us school k bachhon k bare me kya kahna...??? aaj k bachhe...toh bado ko bhi chuna laga dete hain...!!! unhone Ayaan ko chup karwa diya...jise koi bhi chup nahi karwa sakta...!!! vaise us kid 2 ki batain baht achhi thi...ayyan bichara toh use jawab dete dete thak gaya tha...!!! vaise vahan par jane ka idea bhi toh usi ka tha na...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

ab Ayaan na toh kabhi badla hai aur na toh kabhi badlega...!!! har baar asmi ko dekh kar kho jata hai...par tarif kabhi nahi karta...uff...yeh ladka hai allha...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

asmi ...ayaan ko le kar proud feel karna toh jayaz hai...vaise bhi ayaan hai bhi aisa...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

plz jaldi se cont karna...!!! hope ki jaldi se tumhara lappy phir se tumhare paas aajaye...thik ho kar...aur humain bhi ek romntic aur awesome-blowsome sa ek aur ud mil jaye jaldi se...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

take care😃

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1096

Superb update

Ayaan is enjoys teasing Asmi while all she can do is blush.

Samay is surprised to see Asmi and ayaan talking over the phone for soo long. But samayji yeh bhul gaye hai ki shaadi se pehle who bhi aise hi batein kiya karte the.

Mauli thinks that couples shadi ke pehle itni batein kar lete hai ki shadi ke baad kuch bachta hi nahi.

Samay on the other hand had the most sweetest explanation. He says that both the groom and bride to be are soo nervous ki kahin kuch ho na jai.

Asmi and Ayaan go to meet the kids at the music class. Saare bachein sawal kar ke un dono ka bura haal kar dete hai.

Ab ayaan aise jaldi mein kahan chala gaya? what is he upto now?

Dono ke outfits bahut beautiful hai. Ayaan , asmi ko dekh kar kho jata hai.

Asmi feels very proud and happy to hear Pratyush priase Ayaan.

Please continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1097

sumaiya dear i'am here with my comments on the part you have posted.. sorry comment karne mein thoda late hogayi.... well the part was very nice.. the story is progressing very well.. asmi & aryan are so very sweet.. unke phone conversations se lekar unke mulaqaaton thak sab kuch is soo cutee... aur yeh aryan aur asmi kitne betuke, meaningless baatein karthe rehthe hai phone par.. lekin mere hisaab se in choti choti baaton mein, in choti choti khushiyon mein hii unka pyaar chupa hua hai.. i agree with samay's explanation kii there is a nervousness in both the bride & groom's mind kii kahiin woh apna rishtha kho na de, kahiin woh ek dusare ko kho na de.. aur issi wajah se these long phone calls give both of them a sense of security.. hmmm.. mauli ko yeh baat abhi samaj mein nahii aayegi, kyunke yeh baat sirf un logon ke samaj mein aathi hai jinhe kabhi pyaar hua hotha hai.. aur mauli ko tho abhi pyaar nahii hua hai.. lekin is baat par main mauli se kehna chahoongi, mauli fikar not bohat jald tum bhi pyaar mein girogii, mujhe iske poore asaar nazar aa rahe hai.. aur mujhe tumhara dulhe bhi wahii par dikh raha hai.. hai na wahaan asmi ka best friend nishant.. waahhh kya jodi hogi asmi ka best friend weds aryan ki best friend... hehehe..nicee... very nice... tho phir se aryan has called asmi to meet him.. & they go to the music school & spend some time with the kids.. woh kid 2 is sooo sweett.. kitne pyaare sawaal kartha hai.. aur aryan ko irritate kartha hai.. too funny... hahaha... ab main soch rahii hoon yeh kya mystery hai aryan kaha gaya jaldi mein woh bhi for a day without telling asmi... hmm... i think shayad woh is baat ka arrangement karne gaya hoga kii asmi's dad attends asmi & his wedding... this is my guess... next the function secene was nice... good that shaadi mein abhi bas kuch hii din bache hai aur taiyaari zoron-shoron se chal rahii hai... aryan ka asmi ko tease karna mujhe achcha laga... unke beech mein bhale hii khatti meeti nok-jhok chalthi hogi, rootna manana tho chaltha hii rahega but they both make a damn sweeettttttt pair..... pratyush ka aryan ko praise karna mujhe bohat achcha laga.. after all our hero aryan deserves all the praises... now i wish the shaddi comes in the wink of the eye & asmi, aryan tie the knot & they are bind in the sacred relationship of marriage.... keep up the good work going.... very well written....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Dear jaldi se next part post karna.. waiting for the next part eagerly..😊

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1098

Hiiii sumi....

Fabulous part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ayaan n asmi such a cute n lovely couple.... ..Samay ne tikh hi kaha yaar ki ye dono bina kisi topic ke hi ghanto baatein kar sakthe hain ..but i loved their phone convo ..its so cute ....Ayaan saying ' poori zindagi mein itni lambi chutti nahi milegi ...too funny 😆 😆

The kids r so naughty..specially the kid 2 ..wo kitne sawal poocha tha ..bechara ayaan to tak gaya jawab dete dete..utna hi nahin wo kid asmi pe line bhi marr raha tha 😆 😆 😆

Ayaan ko kaha bhejdi tune bich main ??? usne mauli ko bhi nahin bataya where he is going

Ayaan n asmis dresses r so beautiful ...ayaan to asmi ko dekhtha hi rehgaya

Pratyush is so nice ..usne ayaan ki kitni taarif ki..actually karni bhi chahiye..ayaan hain hi aisa ...asmi felt so proud about ayaan

totally loved the whole part dear...wish tumhari lappy jaldi tikh hoajaye n we get lovely uipdate soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1099

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Hi Sumi

How r u??? Hey Dii....am gud!! How r u??😃It has been a really long time..How were your exams..Exams were ok....jaisi karni waisi bharni...😉😆...

I want to tell u that I shifted to US..Rishabh got a gud job dere so we decided to move..Thanks for informing....and yeah....all the best!!😆

Tumhara pyara lappy theek ho gaya ki nahin???Nope....not till now!!

Now coming to the update,it was really gud..👏👏👏Thanks Dii.

Asmi n Ayaan r one really cute couple..Ayaan was teasing Asmi n she was blushing..😆😉😉Hehe...ye dono lagta hai kuch aur kar hi nahi sakte.😆

They can talk non-sense for hours.😆😆Yeah...and still they find it so enchanting!! 😆😉😳

Samay was surprised to see his sister talking like dis..But why is forgetting dat he too behaved in a similar manner when he was getting married to Kinjal..😃😉Right...khudki karname bhul gaya....aur ab behen ki baari ayi....to sochta hai phn pe itni der se kyun lagi hai?😆😆

Mauli was somewat right..Shadi se pehla boys n girls itni baatein kar lete hain ki shadi ke baad kuchh kehne ke liye bachta hi nahin..😆😆Really Dii??😆

But samay ki reasoning acch thi..Shadi se pehle koi bhi door nahin rehna chahta kyunki sabko hi yeh darr rehta hai ki kahin kuchh ho na jaaye..Though I dont kwn aisa hota hai ya nahi...bas aise hi likh diya...😆

Waise aajkal ke kids kuchh zyaada hi smart ho gaye hain..Ayaan ko bhi unhone chup karwa diya😆😆Waise kid 2 ki baatein hain bhi cute..Yeah...isiliye to Ayaan k paas bhi shabd kam padh rahe the...kya zamana aa gaya hai!!!😆

Ayaan uske questions ke answers dete dete thak gaya tha....😃😆The kid deserves an award for that...right?

yeh Ayaan ja kahn raha hai???Kahin Asmi ko koi surprise to nahin de raha???Its definitely a surprise!!😉

I can really imagine Ayaan wearing that sherwani..It was really cool.Ohh...am glad u liked it...pata hai meri dii ne kaha...ye achhi nahi hai...but am glad aapko achha laga!!

he was lost after seeing Asmi but he wont admit it..after all he is THE great Ayaan..Exactly....andar se laddu phut rahe the....lekin upar se aisa dikhata hai jaise koi fark nahi padhta....wat to say...THE Gr8 Ayaan!!😆😆 Dii....aap kya mast naam deti hai usse!!

Pratush really respect Ayaan a lot..Afterall he is such a gud officer..😃That he surely is....and he is of course an inspiration for Pratyush!!😆 Actually mujhe Ayaan ki jini bhi taarif karni hoti hai....main Pratyush se karwati hu....isiliye to usse introduce kiya tha....warna as u can see...uska kuch khaas kaam nahi tha...😆😆

Asmi was feeling so proud of her husband..he is indeed MAD(My adorable Darling)Wowwwww Dii....MAD ka itnaaa achha full form....gosh!! Its sooooooooo adorable Dii!!😳😳

God has really been kind to them.😊

"Our meeting was more than fate.
God knew you were my soul mate.
Your timing is never wrong.
Now we share a bond so strong.
Our time together means so much.
Each moment intensifies the need to touch.
Your love has reached my deepest soul.
Longing for you to daily hold.
May our love and need continuously grow.
Forever, LOVE, NEED, PASSION to each show."

Do I again need to say it was again lovely n again perfectly perfect to the present situation!!😳😳

I really want to see some cute romantic moments between dem😃Donno how...but I'll ty to do that.😆

Continue soon

Bye

I have collected these poems since I was thirteen..I have dem written im my diary..😃Ohh....thats such a sweet thing!! But I wonder....how do u always get the perfect match?? U r just gr8 Dii!!😃😃

Thanks for the wonderful comment Dii....I'll try to UD soon...warna pata chala aap log bhul hi jaoge iss fic ko....kyunki iss amnesia ki shuruwat mujhse already shuru ho chuki hai....😆😆

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1100

Originally posted by: togepe30
Me Likey Likey Likey !!Am glad u likey likey Vandu....hehe.
Aur ye saari officers Ayaan ki shaadi ki khushi mana rahe hain...peeche se saare chor party karenge !! Hahah !!Pata hai maine bhi yehi socha tha....but then mujhme jo Ayaan wali aatman hai usne kaha...."kya sirf main hi akela IB officer hu?? Nahi na....lekin ye meri ek lauti shaadi hai....hai na?? To bas sabko chhutti do....mujhe saare apni shaadi me chahiye".....ab Ayaan ko main mana to kar nahi sakti....to bas sabko chhuti dilwa dii...😆😆

Lovely part.....LOVEEEE Ayaan !! I guess...he was the only thing to love abt this part....warna mujhe sach me iss part me bahut zyada maza nahi aya!!😆

Cant wait for the Shaadi !! Continue soon !!Even I wnat to bring the shaadi part soon....I hope I can manage that....and yeah...I'll try to UD soon!!😃

Luv,

Vandu