Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 85

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Posted: 15 years ago
it was so nostalgic and emotional..............
wish rn meet soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb...nice part...Kirti is soooo sweet.& Raj ! oh god he is changed so much...ab to khulke apne pyaar ko jatane laga hai...good
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Hiiiiiiii Mana🤗
How r u?

update was superb,awesome,fantastic,lovely.......too good👏⭐️👏⭐️
Raj dream about him n Naina was very beautiful😳😳😳 n gets annoyed wen he woken up😆😆😆
song suited with the situations perfectly👏👏👏
Raj n Naina missed each other so much😭😭😭
loved Kirti n Raj convo too much😆😆😆
Kirti teased Raj afterall woh Shalini ki friend no more doubt for it😆😆😆
Raj gets annoyed wen she talks about age difference😉😆
Raj worried for cadets coz of Nair but he didnt know about Lala 😡😡😡😡😡n that his cadets were know much more than him😃😃😃😆😆😆
loved it wen Raj irritates Kirti wen she asked him to told about KMA n Cadets and he told her about him,Naveen n Abhi n then Alekh😆😆😆😆😆😆
plllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaar ab toh RN ko mila do 😃😃😃😃😃😃
do cont soon

Luvs
Naina🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay....let me tell u....I read the 7 parts last night only....par ahem mauke pe electricity chali gayi....and net bhi gayi.....so comment nahi kar payi....lekin mujhe itna zarur yaad hai....tumne 4 parts bina Raj k tarpaya hai....though I wud admit I like the cadets' detremination n Gunny-naina's partnership out there.....however I LOVE RAJ!!! Now this is not sumthing new na....u must already knw how overjoyed I was to hav him finally!!!!!
I liked his rapport wid Keerti....she takes him as her younger bro....and thats a lovely thing!!! She also knws Shalu....which I had guessed as Raj stopped in the middle.....however she still didnt let Raj knw abt Naina's suicide attempt....well....Raj wud go crazy if he gets to knw....btw I loved the way he cherished his memories wid Naina.....and the way he was talking abt her....it was a really very sweet scene....
Anyways....I knw I shud be commenting realllllllly big on these parts.....but guess this is just not my tym yaar....main bahut zyada bz bhi hu....so am kinda hurrying up.....I knw u understand....so wont bore u more.....bye and take care.....and yeah....continue soon as u hav got bak Raj!!!
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Hiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeee😃

itna bada HII isiliye nahi bol rahi hun ki main aaj khush hun...!!! isiliye bol rahi thi ki main aaj baht dukhi hun...!!! aur apne tensions ko apne dimag se bahar rakhne k liy OL par hun...!!! kabhi kabhi hota hai...ki hum jo nahi chahte vohi ho jata hai...!!! 🤢
toh maam...ud tohhhhhhh...ek dam MAST tha...bole toh mind-blowing...awesome...superbbb👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
raj ne kitna romantic sapna dekha...n in fact hum ne bhi imagine kiya ki kaisa hua hoga voh scene...!!! main jyada aage nahi ja payi...!!! ab kya karen...raj bhi toh uth gaya tha na...😆 😆 😆
kya song select kiya tha tune...perfect...👏 👏 👏
naina n raj ek dushre ko kitna miss karr rahe hain...!!! par is fic ki writer ko toh tym hi nahi hai regular ud kar ne k liye...!!! sayad regular ud karti toh ab tak RN mil bhi gaye hote...
kirti ne bhi achhi khashi khinchai ki raj ki...tere dept ki jo hai...!!! tera hi asar hoga na us me...😛 😛 😛
rahi baat age difference ki toh...yeh itni badi baat bhi nahi hai...!!! miyaan-biwi me se kisi ek ko samajhdaar hona chahiye...tabhi zindagi ki naiyaa paar ho jayegi...!!! varna baki sab kuch toh RAAM jee k bharoshe hoga...!!! vaise yahan par naina thodi ziddi hai...aur raj baht samajhdaar...!!! par naina raj ki har baat maan bhi toh jati hai na...chahe late hi sahi...!!! isiliye kirti aur raj se kahna koi prob nahi hogi...😆
raj worried hai nair ki wajah se...par abhi tak use yeh nahi pata hai ki in sab k piche us k mentor ka hi hath hai...!!! lekin thank God...us k 6 packs ko toh yeh baat pata hai...😃

chal ab jaldi se cont karr...😃

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Happy Friendship day to all my reader friends!!!
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will be updating today..............😃
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Hi friends....
I know most of you have not commented yet...
but i want to update today...as today is special day for RN fans....
aur kyunki sabne abhi tak comment nahi kiya hai and kuch reservations baaki hai...toh i'll be replying to your comments later....
Aap plzz comment karlena...aur apne posts bhi unreserve karlena...
Now...UPDATE TIME !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PART TWENTY ONE:
" Achcha Veer...hum itne dinose ek dusre ko jaante hai, Tumne KMA ke baare mein, Cadets ke baarein mein....kuch nahi bataya?"

Raj smirked....he knew very well, whom she is really interested in.

" Oh KMA ke baarein mein.... you know main bhi KMA pass out hoon. Main, Naveen, Abhimanyu....hum teeno best friends hua karte the. Main aur Naveen toh roomies the...hum teeno ek dusre se bilkul alag the, par pakke dost the...."

" bas bas bas!! yeh tum mujhe baadmein batana....tum..tum mujhe apney Cadets ke baarein mein batao !"

" Cadets! okay....ummm...haan....sabse pehle Cadet Aalekh....woh..."

" VEER !!! "

" Seedhe seedhe point pe aao na!"

" Theek hai...mujhe Naina ke baarein mein batao !"

" Naina....", he began excitedly, " Woh itni determined hain, apne bhaai se bahot pyaar karti hai.....pata hai main usse kaise bulata hoon? Woh bahot ziddi hai,bahot impulsive....mujhpar bahot trust karti hai....agar main kisipar sabse jyaada trust karta hoon to woh hai Naina...Mujhse argue karti rehti thi...aur uske sabhi problems...choti choti baaton keliye..."

" SHUT UP !!! ", she screamed.

" Ab kya hua?"

" Kya bol kya rahe ho Veer? Ek baat mere palle nahi pad rahi hai....!!! I know I know tum usse bahot pyaar karte ho aur uske baarein mein kya kuch kahu aur kya na kahu aise tumhe lagta hai....par captain saab hum seedhe saadhe log hai...aap ek ek baat, dheere dheere shuru se bataoge toh kuch samajh aaye!"

He blushed and looked away.

Then leaned back on pillow,took a deep breath...and started...

" Naina....", he smiled, " Naina se main pehli baar KMA mein mila...waha par main Officer on Special duty tha....aur saath hi cadets ko Strategy and Communications sikhane keliye appoint kiya gaya tha...Main wall of fame ke saamnese guzar raha tha....ki dekha ki ek ladki ek photo haath me lekar khadi hai....maine jab usse naam poocha..."

" Wow !! Ek hi jhalak mein seedha naam?"

" Shut up! Woh waha Cadet thi aur main as a faculty member pooch raha tha..."

" ohk.."

" Jab maine usse naam poocha....toh she said it somewhat weirdly....it was Cadet Naina Ah' Singh..." , he grinned, at the memory.

Keerti smiled...

" Tab main nahi jaanta tha ki woh Naveen ki behen hai...usne yeh sabse chupaya tha...infact mujhe toh uspe spy hone ka shaq tha...."

He was telling her about Naina....

Keerti saw the glow on his face....the shine in his eyes...

Even she was lost in his narration....

Teri yaadein, mulakaatein, wo raatein aur baatein
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye

" You know Keerti, usse laga main uske baarein mein pata chalne ke baad Brigadier ko sab bata dunga...woh mujhe dushman hi samajhti thi...aur sochti thi ki main usse Academy se nikal na chahta hoon..." , he laughs , " Aur maine bhi usse challenge kiya...ki agar woh exams mein fail hui, toh woh waise bhi Academy se bahar hogi...phir uss din Suriji ki drill mein top karnein ke baad..."

He remembered her face....

There was slight pride...pride on proving herself...and a challenge...as if challenging him to do whatever he can, but she will stay in academy....

Then when he told her that her secret was safe with him,deep in his heart....she was staring at him....slightly confused,slightly happy......not able to express herself.....as if in daze......

And then,when he put forth his hand to shook hands with her....the way she softly clasp his hand and he held it firmly....for the first time....and for the life time.....

He was indeed missing her a lot...

Tere bina mera jiya, sataayein kyun piya
Yaadon ne teri mujhpe, ye jaadu kiya re

" You know I was very shy around girls...."

" You WERE??? Hospital ki saari nurses ko tumne behen bana rakha hai..."

" Okay....I am. Pata hai, jab main cadet tha, toh mere liye Fresher's par date bhi Naveen ne dhoondhi thi...jo ki thodehi der mein bore hokar chali gayi! Parr uss din, pata nahi....jab woh akele mein dance sikhne ki koshish kar rahi thi...I offered her to teach....uss din se pehle, maine kabhi dance itna enjoy nahi kiya tha!"

He smiled remembering their dance in deserted mess....

She hesitantly putting her hand on his shoulder...as he pulled her closer by waist...

As he held her hand and spun her to bring her closer....and again twirled her away,only to pull her in his arms......and leading her,as they danced together....

Their moves...swift,perfect.... as if they knew each other for years....

Perfectly complimententing each other's steps...!!

The feel when she landed in his arms on her back, as he dipped her.....

Her hand clasping his shoulder for support, while other one was entwined with his...

How they enjoyed together....smiling....dancing...laughing....!!!

Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye

Naina imitating Naveen as he admired this side of her and laughed heartily in their tent during mentorship camp...

Wo adaaon ki ghatayen, mere dil ko chhu jaayen

When he pulled her into the mud pool,while she had offered to help him...

He laughs....That night he was true to himself for the first time after Naveen's death ....

" .....I accepted to go into Solitary confinement.....main uske honour pe, dignity pe, kaise aanch aane de sakta tha...woh sab Maj. Bharghav ki chaal thi. Tab....solitary confinement mein mujhe ehsaas hua ki main usse chahne laga hoon....pata nahi kaise, par usse bahot pyaar karne laga hoon..."

Pyari yeh duniya saari, maine hai tujhpe waari
Dil mein, mere dil ne tujhse, yaari ki baazi hari re

While he narrated her everything...about Ritu being the spy, his engagement with Ritu, his revealing the truth to Naina, Naina's hatred....again gaining her trust....

How he was trapped in the Col. Shakti's Murder....

Salve making fun of his Love in the court....and raising the point of 'Crime for passion '.....

Abhi's witness against him...

Immense support and belief of Naina in him...

Undeterred trust of his six cadets...

Sentence for 14 yrs....

Attack on him...

He still kept some of his memories to himself....very special for him....

Like....that night during mentorship camp, when she said that whoever coming in his life will be the luckiest girl....

And the way he was staring at her,while she was drying her clothes after playing in mud pool....oh! what has gotten into him?? What things was he imagining then....gosh!(He blushed)

When she took out that leaf stuck in his hairs, .....

He was expecting something else then!!....oh! how foolish he felt....foolish in love....

And when he saw her in that red saree for the first time.....oh! he was behaving like a complete jerk!!

And when she hugged him after he told her about Naveen death , after her trial.....how soft she'd been in his arms, how warm'

Mere khayalon mein, khayalon mein'
Bas tum.....

The way they were lost in to each other's eyes....during concentration game...

meri nigaahon mein, nigaahon mein'

Bas tum .....

May be he didn't know...while he was narrating this to Keerti....a poor girl in Ambala was standing at the Hunting ground....lost...

Naina too remembered how she was lost in his eyes during the concentration game...

meri nigaahon mein, nigaahon mein'

Bas tum .....

A tear rolled down her eye...

wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa'

Her life was worthless without him...

suna mera jahan, bhooli main hu kahan
Jab tak hai jaane jaan, teri rahoon, Piya'
Wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa'

She sat on her knees crying as she remembered his and Abhimanyu's game that day....when she was the refree....

tu hai kahan

She wiped her tears determinedly....she will wait for him....till eternity....till he comes and makes her life complete....


Tera karuun intezaar, tu mere dil ka karaar
Itna hai aetbaar, manoongi na main bhi haar

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_I4VtrRR9M[/YOUTUBE]

As Raj finished his story, he turned to see Keerti.

She was lost....tears flowing from her eyes....

" Keerti..."

She looked at him.

" Veer....mujhe nahi pata tha ki....khair...I won't give any emotional speech...bas itna kahungi....itni mushkilo se hokar bhi tumhara rishta itna majboot hai...Don't let her go Veer....She is the one for you! Aur tumhe us se jyaada pyaar aur khushi bhi koi nahi desakta.... I'll pray that you both get all the happiness which you deserve."

He smiled.....

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Next day when he was thinking something very important,according to him, Keerti came running...almost panting!

" Kya hua keerti? Istarah bhaag kyun rahi ho?"

" Abhi abhi Shalu se baat hui...."

" Kya hua? sab theek hai na? Naina?" , he asked concerned.

Keerti picked up glass to drink water...

" Jaldi batao Keerti...", he said impatiently.

" Tumne na...mujhe khabri bana ke rakh diya hai..."

"Woh sab hum baadmein dekhenge ki kisne kya kiya hai, pehle..."

" Ohkkkkk....toh suno. There's one good news and one bad news." , Keerti announced. She always used to give 'Censored' version of whatever she would come to know from Shalini.....carefully dropping those things that will agitate him,or make him sad...

" Batati ho ya nahi?" , he said irritated.

" Batate hain....batate hain....pehle Good news ! Maj.Nair ko Naina se ek padi!"

" Kya?" , he asked shocked ," She....she slapped him?"

" Offo ! don't go by words buddhu ! Waha rifle drill chal rahi thi. And Maj. was abusing you....like he was saying ' I'm not amongst those faculty who act as nothing but a 'stunt'man and then turn into bloody murderers..... But good that he got what he deserved.. he is only worth that. Either he could entertain cadets by his stunts or murder persons. Am I right Cadet Singh?' and then he went on and on to provoke her...."

" Kameena! Woh chahta hai ki Naina kuch na kuch aisa kare jisse woh use Academy ke bahar phenk de. Aur now I'm really worried...Naina is very impulsive...woh...Khair...phir Naina ne kya kiya...I hope kuch..."

" Arey Suno toh ! Shalu said she was listening to all his bakwaas...Uske chehre par shayad hi koi expression tha....and then when he was abusing you directy,taking your name, frustrated by the fact that she was not reacting....Then that Nair said, ' Main toh bhool hi gaya...Woh tumhare Mentor the nahi? Tumhare jaisi traitor ke behen keliye perfect the ! Well....waise kya kya sikhaya hai tumhare BELOVED Captain Rajveer ne tumhe?'

Shalu guessed that He purposely called you as her beloved to make her lose calm....but what happened next was...."

" What happened? How did she react to that?", now he was very curious.

" Naina said ,'Sikhaya toh bahot kuch hai Sir. Aaj main jo kuch bhi hoon unhi ke wajehse hoon. Infact agar main aaj bhi academy mein hoon toh sirf Rajveer sir ki wajehse. par sabse badi baat unhone mujhe jo sikhayi hai woh hai Apni self respect ko banaye rakhna...aur ...yeh ki baatein kam aur kaam zyaada karna....kyunki unke hisaab se Bhonkne waale kutte kaat te nahi hai...' ,she said smugly."

Rajveer laughed," I'm sure uss muchchad ke samajh mein yeh nahi aaya hoga!"

" Exactly. Shalu said he was somewhat confused and shouted at her to be clear. Then she challenged him....

' Matlab yeh sir, ki aap mere Mentor ke baarein mein aisi bakwaas kar rahe hai...aur mere Mentor ka self respect mera self respect hua...toh I challenge you...why don't we shoot the target? Issi bahane aap bhi dekh lenge ki mujhe kitna stunt sikhaya hai Rajveer sir ne....'

"

" Woh pagal hogayi hai kya? Maj.Nair sharp shooter hai !"

" Yahi kaha uss major ne and haste haste challenge accept kiya. Phir Ladies first kehke Naina ko pehle hit karne kaha. "

" Well...she must have shot perfect target.That I know..." , he said proudly.

" Hmm....par jaise hi Nair ki turn aayi, it started raining somewhat heavily aur usse kuch dikh nahi raha tha,toh he refrained from shooting.Phir tumhari Naina ne start kiya , ' Kyun sir? Ruk kyun gaye? Aap target hit nahi karenge? Oh ! main toh bhool gayi ! aap Maj.Nair ho...mere Rajveer sir nahi. Woh toh perfect shooter hai...unhe shoot karne se pehle target ko dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hoti...aap toh yeh pehle bhi dekh chuke hai.I know aap yeh nahi kar payenge....Mujhe lagta hai ki aapko Rajveer Sir se bahot kuch sikhna chahiye....par...I'm so sad...kya kare ab harkoi meri tarah lucky toh nahi hota na ? Woh mere Mentor hain...And I'm Sorry par main apna Mentor aapke saath share nahi karna chahungi.'.....and you could very much imagine Nair's reaction. Kyunki usse describe karne keliye Shalu ko words nahi mil rahe the."

Raj was smiling all throughout. He was imagining his Naina Ah' Singh mocking Nair.

" Phir?"

" Next was like he was shouting at her and was giving her punishment but she didnt lose her cool and agreed but your friend came in mean time. He requested Nair and also asked why he was involving in such things and wasting the time of class.And also asked him what example he wanted to set in front of cadets by not completing his chalenge...and that too with a cadet."

Rajveer laughed heartily.

" Perfect Shot Cadet Singh !" , he said laughing.

Keerti didnt say what happened next. How that Nair punished her for nothing as soon as Abhimanyu left and also gave her detention today for some small mistake of her.

She felt like hating herself for hiding things from him, but she knew she had to do it for his own good.

" Waise keerti....itni achchi news sun ne ke baad bad news sun ne ka mann toh nahi kar raha...par main jaanta hoon ki tum batake hi dum logi. But uske pehle mujhe ek favour chahiye."

" Kaisa favour?"

" Woh...woh...actually..."

" Veer tum ekbaar sochlo aur phir batana but mere liye yeh news dena bahot important hai. Aaj ke baad tum Shalu ko nahi koi call karoge aur nahi koi anonymous letter bhejoge. Kyunki usse doubt hai ki yeh jo koi bhi kar raha hai woh tum ho."

" Kyaa???"

" Haan....aur ab issliye no more contacting Dr.Shalini."

" Parr.."

" Ab kya?"

" Keerti sirf ek baar.....parso...", he started but was cut by,

" NO !! I said no...means no. Ab tum kuch dino tak Shalu ko koi contact nahi karoge...na aaj,naa kal aur nahi parso."

" Please Keerti..."

" Veer !!! Are you out of your mind? aur aisa kaunsa important message bhejna hai tumhe shalu ko?"

" Shalu ko nahi Naina ko....Day after tomorrow is her birthday... please Keerti...please..."

" Veer I do understand...But please you try to understand. I'm Sorry I can't.."

Rajveer knew how stubborn Keerti was. But Naina's birthday and he won't wish...haah! this can't happen....He'll call shalu...or the best way call Naina over the phone at KMA...it has been a lifetime since he heard her voice....

While he was planning mentally, Keerti confiscated his phone.

" What the hell....what are you doing Keerti?" , he yelled.

" I guess you can very well see that. Please Veer...i'm doing this for your own good."

" I know that....but..."

" VEERRRR !!! PLZZZZZZZZZZ !!! "

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DONE !!! 😃
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_I4VtrRR9M[/YOUTUBE]

Hi friends...
This is my first attempt at making a VM...
I simply loveeeeeeeeeeeee this song and always imagined RN while listening to it...
My bigggggggggg thanks to Yogi...my tutor...
who taught me how to make VMs...taaki main usse fir kabhi pareshaan na kar saku...😆 😆 😆
Yogi big hug to you dear !
And also my early VICTIMS.....PREETO AND DEBS 😆 😆 😆 who were made to watch this VM first and give me their opinion...
ofcourse they said, it's nice ! 😈
waiting for your opinion now...
Yogi, Preeto, debs...tum log bhi bina dare apna opinion de sakte ho...😆 😆 😆
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago

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