Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01)

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#861

Update was very good. And the VM was fantastic....each scene related to the events that you have recalled in the update. Superb!! 👏👏👏

Kirti is touched to hear Raj and Naina's story...she is shocked to know how much they have suffered and been through. And all she can wish is that they can be united together.😭

Raj is cherishing his memories with naina...specially the romantic ones which he did not tell Kirti about.😳

Naina also recalls the time that she has spent with her Rajveer Sir and prays to God to bring him back soon.😔

Kirti is smart for she does not tell Raj about all the details of Nair and Naina's encounter. Raj feels proud about how maturely Naina has learned to behave.

Raj is disappointed with Kirti tells him that he will not call Shalini again as she is getting suspisious. But Raj is planning to call Naina this time as it is her Birthday. But kirti takes away his phone.😉

Waiting to see how Raj will wish naina now...please continue soon

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362035

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Posted: 15 years ago

#862

awesoooome..
superb.....
wonderful...........
fabulous upd.
loved it......
thanx for the pm........

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poojabi

@poojabi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#863

yaar manali tumne to mujhe emotional kardya.mai colg se bhaagte bhaagte ayee aaj.aur ud para.mujhe khudpe itna gussa araha hai.1st august ke spcl day pe mai yaha thi hi nehi.aur ab mai kiski tareef karu update ki ya vm ki.i love both.par mujhe is baat ki itni khushi hai ki aj teen saal baad bhi rn ke lye hum sabke dil me jo ehsaas thi wo aaj bhi aisi hi hai.teen saal se hum ek khubsoorat sapna hi to jee rahe hai.bt kabhi ek pal ke lye bhi laga nehi ki rn ka jadu kuch kam hua hai.rn ko tum rn fans ne hi zinda rakha hai wo bhi itne pyar se.hats off to u.capt rajveer ne sachme hume jindagi jina sikha dya.jaha hum kuch is lye nehi karte kyunki humara faida ho.kisi ko tabhi aapna nehi maante jab koi khun ka rishta ho. capt ne hume pyar karna sikha dya.aur kya kahu?i am choaked.

Edited by poojabi - 14 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#864

Sorry for late reply..........😭

gr8 updt............ tooo good.........

luved keerti and raj's convo and also d way naina and nair's part was presented............superb!!!!!!!! 👏👏
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also njoyed d way raj was reacting to it........ 👏

congratulations on VM very nice.......... 👏👏👏
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gr8 updt.......👏

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#865

yaar...pahle mujhe ek baat bata...yeh VM ka full-frm kya hota hai...??? okk..okk...marna mat...main samajh gayi...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

VM ka jadu sach me chal gaya...!!! tujhe pata hai yeh VM kitne achhe se banaya hai tune...just too gud...suprebbb...awesome..!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

aur ud k bare me kya kahun yaar...fab...fab...fab...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Phewww...maine jo tera naya naam diya tha na...voh sach hai...koi bhi tere UDS padhega toh kahega ki maine sach kaha hai...!!! mujhe pata hai ki tu nahi manegi...!!! aur is me main teri kpoi help nahi kar sakti...kyoun ki kuch ek k paas dimag nahi hota...jaise ki tere paas jo bhi bacha kucha hota hai...use tere seniors le jate hain...toh bachega kya...!!! isiliye meri baat maan le...maine jo kaha vohi sach hai...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

tujhe pata hai...unhi sare scenes ko tune kitne achhe se describe kiya hai...oh goddd...mana...itz awesome yaar...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

sari story toh hum bhi jante hain...par kirti ko jab dukh hua na...tab kuch pal k liye main bhi purane din me chali gayi...!!! aur mujhe phir se laga ki LRL me RN ki aisi ending nahi honi chahiye thi...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

raj ka voh romantic scene k bare me sochna...ha ha ha...par voh kirti se nahi kah paya...!!! koi baat nahi mana k thru humain toh pata chal hi gaya na...ki Rajveer sir...naina k liye kya...feel karte hain...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

naina bhi toh raj ko baht yaad karr rahi thi...aur god se pray karr rahi thi kivoh wapas aa jaye...!!! tujhe pata hai...jab maine yeh news suni thi na...ki raj LRL chod raha hai...tab maine bhi god se pray kiya tha ki voh na jaye...!!! par as usall...god...meri koi bhi baat nahi sunte...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

kirti toh badi smart hai yaar...!!! matlab Juhi kitni smart hai yeh mujhe pata hai...par kirti bhi baht smart hai...us ne raj se kuch bhi nahi kaha...nair aur naina k bare me...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab rajveer sir apne fav cadet ko le kar proud feel karr rahe hain...yeh toh zahir si baat hai na...!!! unhone hi toh sab kuch sikhaya hai use...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab naina k birth day par rajveer sir wish karna chahte hain...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛!!! yaar...humain bhi intezar hai..plz jaldi cont kar...!!! jab ki mujhe pata hai ki tera jaldi baht hi late hota hai...

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

Dekho maine kitna kamal kiya hai ye waala update i mean part 20 padhne me kitna jyada time lagaya.
Sorry yaar for being late but i promise aage se nahi karoongi aisa, (vaise i know ye bhi mai pehle kai baar keh chuki hoon)
Nice update.
That morning dream of Rajveer was really beautiful n i know as Raj believes it will come true soon. Naina n Raj felt a same sensation for each other when Raj remembered her she started missing him too.
Keerti is really sweet, the way she wants to know about Naina is just like a sweet friend. She gives Raj so much chances to think about his love for Naina and to miss her so much.
Raj is right that somebody in KMA i mean Major Nair is that person, but now he should get well fast and try to prove himself innocent because Naina and her friends are in danger now.
Keerti has a sweet personality that professional and personal as well.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#867

U knw wat.....I hate you for making this VM.....I feel like crying now yaar....firstly I love this song....and most importantly I love Raj.....with these two together....I just cant help myself getting nostalgic....already ur writing had taken me bak in those days.....and u added wid the VM....huh!!
😭😭😆

But anyways....pains apart.....I hav to admit kya badhiya tutor hai Yogi.....it was sooooo beautifully done....most credits go to Yogi though...hehe....but c'mon tumne itni mehnat kii...thodi credit tumhe bhi de hi deti hu....ok??😉😆

Now jokes apart.....the update was brilliant.....wo flashbak portions kitne achhe the uska hint to main de hi chuki hu....as I said it took me bak to those days when I used to watch Raj on TV yaar.....however I loved the later part wid Naina almost bashing major Nair.....lolz....such a fun part....when Keerti said....'Nair ko Naina se ek padhi"....even I thought if she had slapped her....and then wid Keerti's denial....I thought I wish she cud actually slap him sumhow....but at the end I felt....it was even better that she did.....isse kehte hi...thappad ki gunj bhi nahi ayi....hehe. 😆😆😆⭐️⭐️⭐️

Totally Awesum....but now am thinking how Raj will wish naina....coz I knw he will find sum way to wish his Naina....but wat??? Hmm....ab wo bhala main kyun sochu?? Tum ho na.....soch hi liya hoga......so now that I hav read this part....u can cum up wid the next part....hehe. 😆😆😆Chalo......now take care.....and yeah....do try to continue soon doc.😛

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#868

G8 update this one dear.
Raj was telling each and everything about his and Naina's relationship to Keerti and she knows perfectly ki kaise Raj sab sach batayega. Seedhe se to batane waala nahi hai na. That description along with the lines of song was truly nice. Raj jaise lag raha tha apne saamne dekh raha hai har pal Naina ko. Keerti bhi feel kar rahi thi is baat ko ki kitne sacche dil se Raj chahta hai Naina ko. Tabhi to vo bhi chahti hai na ki Raj ko Naina mil jaaye.
Raj bhi shayad nahi jaanta tha ki jab Keerti ko vo bata raha tha Naina k baare me to vahan Naina bhi har pal mehsoos kar rahi thi Raj ko apne aas pass.Naina ko mehsoos hone ka matlab hai ki dono jaldi hi milenge ek doosre se.
Keerti ko sach me Raj ne messenger bana rakha hai. Sab se pehle gud news ki besabri thi aur accha hua Naina ne bahut impulsive behavior nahi kiya bahut cool way me jawab diya hai Nair ko. Aur challenge bhi kiya Nair ko. Ye alag baat hai ki Abhi k rescue me aane k baad me us ko punishment mil hi gayi.
Shalu ko shak ho gaya hai ki ye sab Raj kar raha hai. I think ab they must be alert warna pakde jaane ka dar hai. Naina ka bd hai aur Raj us ko wish na kare aisa to nahi ho sakta na. Kuch na kuch to karna hi padega.
continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

lovely part......... 👏👏👏👏..........Thanks Puri !
revisited whole RN story through words of VEER 😳 😳 😳.......
loved how he narrated every important moment..........from their first meeting to....last 😃 😃.......
awesome VM.........👏 👏 👏...................Thanks again.😊
wow....naina ....brave girl........👏👏👏.....gave good 1 to Mj.Nair.... 😡 😡.......& why wudn't she....afterall she is Rajveer's naina......... 😛 😛.......ofcourse !

😛 😛.........naina's b'day.......😛😛😛.......veer wants to call........ poor guy ....keerti took his cell....... he can have mine........😉😉😉😉.....He he he !!! I bet !! Everyone here will also lend theirs ...Including me ! 😆

plz.....let him talk to his naina....been long time........... 😛 😛 😛

overall part was very good 👏 👏......waiting 4 RN to meet soon........ 😳 😳..........
hope it happens much sooner than i'm expecting......... 😃😃.....
wud wait 4 next part continue ASAP....😃 😃😃

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: neha10.for.u
excellent vm dear....brought tears in my eyes...keep up the gud work
and abt ur fanfic.....its gr8....just RN ko jaldi milwa do....can't bear their separation and pain anymore

Thanks neha..

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