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Posted: 16 years ago
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reserved~~
will be back as soon as i can😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

ThE LoVeLy DiVoRcE ~ LaSt PaRt (SaNa_)



Mayank drove fast to reach home ... he cannot wait to tell Nups how much he loves her and how sorry he is ...

He pulls the break of the car and went to search of Nups ... " Nupur " .. but the house was completely empty . Mayank called her name again and searched every room . A fear is mounting inside his heart and he desperately called her name. He went to their room but saw that all her things have been removed . He opened the closet and saw that there were only his clothes while there was no sign of Nupur's clothes.

Mayank ran downstairs to check the kitchen but it was empty too. As he turned On the side table ,he saw a note along with a brown envelope ...He picked the note with shaking hands and read

Dear Mayank ,

I am glad I met u so that I could love u even though it never lasted . I think even on the day of marriage I knew that I lov u more than u could ever love me . I am glad u have now found Dia whom u love more than any one else. I wish u all the happiness with her . I knew about her from the beginning .First I denied myself that you will not hurt me like that but later slowly everything was in front of my eyes. I will not ask u why u did it because Mayank just remember a married woman can also get attracted to someone . However there is always a point when u say " No '..this is wrong ." bec u love ur current partner and u respect him . I wish u had loved me enough to stop yourself . This thing only proved me one ting that u never loved me and I can never live with a man who doesn't respect me enough and who doesn't love me. I am glad we decided with this divorce. Thank you for the LoVeLy DiVoRcE. Now I can remember r moments of happiness with smile and not tears. In the envelope there are our divorce papers on the terms we agreed . I have not taken anything only full custody of our son. Goodbye Mayank wish u all the best in life "

Mayank slowly drop on the Kitchen floor and sat on the floor. He kept on shivering and kept on reading her lines with tears running down his cheeks .. He never realized when he fainted but the next day when he opened his eyes . He was a dead man walking . A man who breaths but doesn't feel.

Epilogue :

Nupur migrated to Australia and lived with her aunt. Two years after the divorce she met her college friend by accident and they started talking just as they used too . Zain was happy to meet Nupur again . He will never tell her how much the news of her marriage had broken him and that he came to Australia for his further studies. However now she is divorced and he wanted to remove the pain you could see in Nupur's eyes . Slowly Zain mended Nupur's heart and a year later he confessed his love which he had for her since college days . Nupur cried in his arms and said if he had told her before she would have never married Mayank.

"Then we would not have our son with us" : Zain reminded her . He explained her that everything happened for a reason . He is glad that it happened so that they can now cherish their love forever . Nupur married Zain and lived a happy life . Zain adopted her son. They together had six more children. A pack of triplets boys. Who were followed by three daughters. Nupur whenever remembered Mayank it was not with pain only as experience in life . She still wishes him well and hope he finds as much happiness with Dia as she did with Zain.

Mayank never was able to forget Nupur . He was never able to recover from her loss. He tried to find her but never was able to do so . Dia when saw that field is clear for her she tried to trap Mayank . Mayank doesn't care one way or the other . He married her but could never respond to life again. It was as if he was standing outside his body and viewing the world with dead eyes . Dia after 3 yrs of marriage with Mayank ran away with his best friend . A man who was richer than him . Mayank doesn't care what dia did . He had already lost his love .He divorced Dia who took a huge chunk from his money and property as her settlement. They don't have children together so there was no custody battle.

Mayank was thus left alone. Girls flocked around him but he had already lost the one who mattered . He understood the meaning of Love when he lost it and he died regretting what he did to her . Mayank when died alone as rich but unhappy man. His muttered words as doctor told the press was " Nupur it was you . I Love you ."

SANA..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
@Sana
@AmmyluvsRidzy

= WOW..what a story and what an ending😲, this shud become a movie😊

well done to both of u👏👏👏
I'm so glad that I read ur FF😊




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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Piyu...
Amazing. Simply amazing. That's all I can say. 👏👏
Firstly, when I read the title of the fic, I was a bit hesitant to read it because I cannot bear to read a unhappy ending especially with Mayur!!
But I did read it...and I'm glad i did!
Y'know when it started...so romantic how he carried her in he house...
But then Dia! I had never expected Mayank to be dishonest to Nupur!
Ahhhh....I wanted to slap him a hundred times to get his senses back in place!
It was so bad...Nupur was so terribly hurt...I was feeling so bad reading that.😭
And then when she put that condition for him to carry her everyday for a month...it was so sweet a gesture of hers to just try to gather their sweet moments together!
So Mayank started feeling the love again....wah Mayu ab akal aa rahi hai...
And that line " I married her, I'm supposed to hold her until I'm old..."
It was incredibly heart touching....
You made it a happy ending but after what he did na he didn't really deserve one...but I was happy you made a happy ending or I would have cried. I was on the verge after reading the first part!
You did a brilliant job with it!
Keep it up....! You have to write more after this!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sana, that brings me to your part..
If the first part had me on the verge na....yours finally made me cry.
Y;know I've read so many books but there are barely a few I've read that made me shed a tear or two but I was feeling so bad for him that yeah I shed a tear.
😭😭😭
Oh I said i thought he didn;t deserve the happy ending after what he did but it didn;t have to be this bad!!! Poor Mayu...he was completly devestated...and Nupur didn;t even leave one last thing as her reminder....
And he married Dia...😒....never got happiness.
Died a lonely man....still chanting Nupur's name from his mouth.
I hope she finally knew how much he loved her....
But at least Nupur got a happy ending even if it wasn't with Mayank....
And omg...6 kids!
But I still wish she'd have somehow sorted out something with him...ended on friendly terms...😔...at least.
because I can't bear to see them like this!
Ahhhhh!
But all that apart...you did a fantabulous job yaar!
I didn't know you wrote this well...hats off!
Amazing!
I'd definitly say that you should wite more FF and um, possibly a happy ending....? hehe...
GREAT JOB!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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🤗 thank u all for liking it ...... and stop crying ..................😆😆😆... i told piyu u guys will cry ......... sorry guys but man just gets away too easily with betrayal . In my story i said once let the hero knows what usually the girls face .....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
@ nidhi ... i am writing something in my personal life and if i start ff ...i have to throw other idea out of window ......😉... which i don't want to do ...as it is important ...😛

@😆😆😆....................yah ... i cannot read sad ending ... neither watch sad films .😆😆😆 but somehow end up writing them 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

SANA..................
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🤗..................... Koi baat nahi nihu ... koi baat nahi 😆😆😆.... it was reveange for all girls who were betrayed and were left alone for another girl 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

ThE LoVeLy DiVoRcE ~ LaSt PaRt (SaNa_)



Mayank drove fast to reach home ... he cannot wait to tell Nups how much he loves her and how sorry he is ...

He pulls the break of the car and went to search of Nups ... " Nupur " .. but the house was completely empty . Mayank called her name again and searched every room . A fear is mounting inside his heart and he desperately called her name. He went to their room but saw that all her things have been removed . He opened the closet and saw that there were only his clothes while there was no sign of Nupur's clothes.

Mayank ran downstairs to check the kitchen but it was empty too. As he turned On the side table ,he saw a note along with a brown envelope ...He picked the note with shaking hands and read

Dear Mayank ,

I am glad I met u so that I could love u even though it never lasted . I think even on the day of marriage I knew that I lov u more than u could ever love me . I am glad u have now found Dia whom u love more than any one else. I wish u all the happiness with her . I knew about her from the beginning .First I denied myself that you will not hurt me like that but later slowly everything was in front of my eyes. I will not ask u why u did it because Mayank just remember a married woman can also get attracted to someone . However there is always a point when u say " No '..this is wrong ." bec u love ur current partner and u respect him . I wish u had loved me enough to stop yourself . This thing only proved me one ting that u never loved me and I can never live with a man who doesn't respect me enough and who doesn't love me. I am glad we decided with this divorce. Thank you for the LoVeLy DiVoRcE. Now I can remember r moments of happiness with smile and not tears. In the envelope there are our divorce papers on the terms we agreed . I have not taken anything only full custody of our son. Goodbye Mayank wish u all the best in life "

Mayank slowly drop on the Kitchen floor and sat on the floor. He kept on shivering and kept on reading her lines with tears running down his cheeks .. He never realized when he fainted but the next day when he opened his eyes . He was a dead man walking . A man who breaths but doesn't feel.

Epilogue :

Nupur migrated to Australia and lived with her aunt. Two years after the divorce she met her college friend by accident and they started talking just as they used too . Zain was happy to meet Nupur again . He will never tell her how much the news of her marriage had broken him and that he came to Australia for his further studies. However now she is divorced and he wanted to remove the pain you could see in Nupur's eyes . Slowly Zain mended Nupur's heart and a year later he confessed his love which he had for her since college days . Nupur cried in his arms and said if he had told her before she would have never married Mayank.

"Then we would not have our son with us" : Zain reminded her . He explained her that everything happened for a reason . He is glad that it happened so that they can now cherish their love forever . Nupur married Zain and lived a happy life . Zain adopted her son. They together had six more children. A pack of triplets boys. Who were followed by three daughters. Nupur whenever remembered Mayank it was not with pain only as experience in life . She still wishes him well and hope he finds as much happiness with Dia as she did with Zain.

Mayank never was able to forget Nupur . He was never able to recover from her loss. He tried to find her but never was able to do so . Dia when saw that field is clear for her she tried to trap Mayank . Mayank doesn't care one way or the other . He married her but could never respond to life again. It was as if he was standing outside his body and viewing the world with dead eyes . Dia after 3 yrs of marriage with Mayank ran away with his best friend . A man who was richer than him . Mayank doesn't care what dia did . He had already lost his love .He divorced Dia who took a huge chunk from his money and property as her settlement. They don't have children together so there was no custody battle.

Mayank was thus left alone. Girls flocked around him but he had already lost the one who mattered . He understood the meaning of Love when he lost it and he died regretting what he did to her . Mayank when died alone as rich but unhappy man. His muttered words as doctor told the press was " Nupur it was you . I Love you ."




OMG Sana!!!
this is beautiful!!! i dont think i hv words good enuf to describe this update! it actually made me cry .. ur a brilliant writer!!!
i dnt knw what else to say except that i loved it from the depth of my heart!👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OH MY GOD... PIYU .. Tu to chupi rustam nikli... You're so FAB... It's actually the first ff that's actually touched my heart..... U should continue writing more... You're AMAZING............ And about SANA... Sweety your part made me cry... I gotta tell u 2 girls that it's actually the first ff on IF that has made me so much senti.. Though I'm not a very emotional person... So HATS OFF to u both... Wrote more great onesz.. N sorry sweeties for commenting late .. U know na I was busy in exam prep... Loadsssss of luv .. Aisha ..

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