Piyu 's OnE ShOts ~ MaYuR~My FiRsT kiSs Pg 12

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

awesum ff yaar .... it brought tears 2 ma eyes....

Quote

Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

*reserved*

OMG Piyu!!! It was BRILLIANT!

I loved it to the core....I've really gotta go now but as soon as I come back I'll edit this and post a loooong comment because i loved this fic so much!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

zoe

@cute mayur

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

WOW!! OMGSHHH!!!

seriously i loved the story!!!! it made me cry..... its sooo well written!! ur such a great writer!!! its the best!! i loved it:) u shud maybe write ahead on how nupur would accept him or not.... idk... but i would love to read more... :)

Quote

Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Knowalot2

😲

This is the best Fan fic I have ever ever ever ever ever ever everread!!!!!!!!!!!!! in like my whole time on IF.

WOW!! ur a genius, I'm not even joking, did u make this whole story by urself??? I was literally rushing down the page wanting to read more and more.

I could never have imagined such a fab story, great concept and storyline..

omg omg omg...this is honestly , by god the best story EVERRRRRR!!!!

I'm honestly gonna tell every1 on IF to read this. Really unique and has a sophisticated storyline...and well written! LOVE the storyline!!!

👏👏👏👏

Kanya

yeah i wrote it but it my best friend 's idea.glad u liked it.
thank u for reading kanya😳

Quote

Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
Piyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yeh kya thaa👏 ........... beautiful ... wonderful .. so touching ,.. excellent .... ooooooooooo God Piyu ur frnd is a great writer teller her so .... u r a sweetheart for sharing all this with us ...👏

piyu it was like a pg from one's dairy .... so well written all the emotions of first love ... lost love regain love ... and Dia😡 should stay away from this couple.... how can Mayu even think about other girl than Nups ... I loved the way it was written .....👏

and Last Line I will carry u till v r old 👏

mind blowing 👏

👏

sana didi i wrote it...she just told me the story😃glad u liked it.
thank u for reading.......😳

Quote

Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
Piyu i know it is a story and very beautiful wriiten ...but this story touched avery vulnerable topic for me... so now u just have to hear my stand on it 😆

piyu i have serious issues with betrayal ... a man who see ur crying😭 ....c u at ur most vulnerable stage 😭and that thingmiking him go for divorce more firmly ... is a man who should not call himslef a man😡😡...

Piyu I cannot forgive a man who betrays me like Nup was betrayed... what is i had an afair ...??? will he forgive me ...?

I may forgive but i can never ever forget and this will ultimately kill my inner strength and my faith in me .... so if i had been nups i would not have taken anything from him and would have walked out on him ...

Let him have dia....bec now i can never ever trust him .......

i know i also can't forgive a person like this......but i wanted to end this on good note....thats why....😳

Quote

Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: angelz
this was a fab story i loved it soo much
hats off to you

it was awesome

=]

dia

thank u so much...i will surely write another one shot...😳

Quote

Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sportskp
this was the best!! omg i was so sad with mayu but then happy he realized he still loves nupur!! and that nupur was also giving him a chance..awww

thank u so much.glad u like it..i will surely write another one shot...😳