Kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet ki(RN) NOTE pg16 - Page 8

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Arwa

Thanx for the pm dear..I really love this fiction of yours..Seems more inspired by Shakespeare's Comedy of Errors.. I really love all the characters coz they r 1 in the whole world.... - thanks very much. hehehe yes they all sure are one in the whole world.

So Alekh is so very rude n arrogant..Doe he really love Neelu or he is just passing his time..Neelu hates all his friends but she is not wrong on her part..Alekh's friends r real stupids.Ali is still so very shy..I think he shud come out from dis image . - hmmm well he does love her but is just one of those who dont shower her with it. hehehe yeh Ali shall come out too.

Raj is a real Romeo here..But I hope this fiction is not as tragic as the real Romeo n Juliet where whose untimely deaths unite their feuding families... - hmmm dont worry yeh os tragedy ko comedy me banaya gaya hai

Raj is attracted to Naina in such a way dat he seems least bother abt her background..Their families r enemy..Why..some business rivelry???? - this shall come soon

Raj went out to search for Naina n ultimately he finds her standing in the balcony reminding me of the real play where after the ball, in what is now called the "balcony scene", Romeo sneaks into the Capulet courtyard and overhears Juliet on her balcony vowing her love to him in spite of her family's hatred of the Montagues. - yes it is similar to it after all yeh kahani hee Romeo and Juliet kee hai

Naina is so very dumb when she thinks dat God is answering her instead of Raj..n same act of foolishness is displayed by Raj where he was going to search for Kavita when Naina wanted to hear some real Kavita..It was very hilarious.. - ha ab dono hee kuch hadd tak paagal hai isme

So Now like real Romeo Raj is reciting the dialogues of the real play..Gosh how can any1 really reamember those lines...😆n wat has happened to Naina she wants Raj to recite those lines for her so she can b convinced for his feelings towards her.- kaha na dono paagal hai 😆 😆 😆

Raj called Shakespeare 1 twisted pervert..😆 - yes coz its true dear

I really loved this para ..It was too funny - i'm glad u found it so

Since I've read the whole Romeo and Juliet I've been dreaming of my own Romeo and I'd no idea that my prayers shall be heard so soon. Oh keep reciting, please keep reciting." She wrapped her arms around herself in a hug and swayed around.

That took the smile off his face as he realised that by saying those lines he had hit his own leg with the axe. He began thinking about the further lines but it was at this point that he had shut the book as it was just getting on his nerves. How was he to say anything further when he didn't even know what to say?"

But finally he is able to do wat he wish n sang a superb song to reveal his feelings for her

Even Neelu n Alekh r dancing on the same number..😛 - oh yes sab ke sab naach rahe hai

He finally manages to climb but Pooja the ultimate vamp throws him out from the balcony..Naina is so very worried for him n poor Raj he is not able to walk properly...😆 - hehehe Pooja the utlimate vamp? that was gud. ha bechaara kitnee mehnat se chara tha or girgaya

Why do girls go so gaga over him.He is hurt but still girls r over him as if he is some sort of trophy.n he too like this attention..Smart Raj. - ha yehi to oskee speciality hai my dear

Yudi too throws him from his feet..Why is every1 after him..Poor chap!!!! - bechaara kismat ka maara

What is going in Neelu's mind?Firstly she thinks that Alekh's friends r loosers den now she believes that they r gay too..Poor Raj n Yudi!!!!!

Neelu totally misunderstood the gud intentions of guys..She really needs to keep Alekh away from dis ha ha...😆😆😆 - ab aisa waisa dekhee gee to aisa hee soche gee na. hehehe yes she needs to keep him away

Navin is again so very jealous of Raj coz Ritu gives her whole attention to Raj instead of him n he wish to murder him..But wat will happen if he comes to know dat his enemy is becoming the wud b of her only dear sister..😳😳😳 - ab aaehga maza kyu ke ab hogi tom and jerry kee larai.

Do update soon n tc bye

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

OK....i swear i will behave myself.........but with ur updates, i just can't seem to resist being naughty.....hehehe....hahaha.....see, i am generally quite serious u know the booky-booky kinds....thats wat friends Think....but i guess u know better.....woh bhi in a matter of few days......hehehehehe.........chalo....i promise mein agala reply sharafat se karongi.....[it doesn't appy to ur fic LOST]..........hehe....par soch lo u may find it too boring......hehehe.........choice is urs.........hahaha😉

yeh alekh pagal hai kya...??? us ki GF us se naraz hai...aur use is baat ka zara sa bhi khayal nahin...!!!

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

I have never read Romeo n Juliet(the original one) but I don't think I'l need to read it....coz I think your version is much more interesting....😊😊 you are doing a lovely job dear...👏 each scene is hilarious....😆I have fun reading this fic....😆
Update soon....😃😃


Love,
Dhara...😊

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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!! - thanks alot

Raj could not believe that he fell in love for the first time and that too with the enemy's daughter!!!!! - yes it was shocking news

Aalekh went back to his drink as things like this never perturbed him much!!!😒 😒 😒 😒Yudi was worried about Raj but Shalini took him away!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - dono ke dono ek jese hee hai

Neelu is angry at Aalekh as he did not come to take her to the Fresher's ball!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - ha sabse bari baat hee bhul gaya wo

She called his friends loosers and she is not wrong!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe for sure

Ali said ke gaali deni hai toh izzat se dijiye!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣No wonder he got a slap on his arm for being so stupid!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab kya kare sab ke sab kiske le hee hai is fic me

Aalekh toh usse manane ki koshish bhi nahi kar raha hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Bechari Neelu pata nahi kaise uske saath phas gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha sach me

When Neelu compared Aalekh to donkeys Aalekh asked her to compare him at least to a decent animal!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣He is impossible!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - as impossible can be hehehehe

Neelu ne Aalekh ka hi drink ussi ke sar pe daal diya aur kaha ab woh puri tarah ek ghadha hi lag raha hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - wp bhi jaanti hai kese osko jawaab diya jai

Ali ne kaha ke Aalekh ko jaake Neelu ko manana chahiye akhir woh uski girfriend hai toh keh raha hai thats what he is regretting!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - all men are like that

Magar Aalekh ka bad luck tha jo Neelu ne yeh sun liya and grabbed his collar and reminded him ke wahi Neelu ke peeche padha tha!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - sahi me ose oski perfect jodi daar milee hai kyu ke wo bhi ek gundi se kam nahi

Ab finally woh Neelu ko mana raha hai but in the process Ali was displeased and Aalekh dragged Neelu out of the ball with him before anyone could say something!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - he has many of his tricks

Naina is really upset and and can't believe she fell in love with the enemy!!!!! - ha yaha bhi wohi haalat hai

Raj went out to search for Naina and came to her hostel!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He knew his heart would give him the sign and he found her standing at her window praying to God!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes thats what love is all about

This scene reminds me of the famous "Balcony scene" in the real play!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes that was the beautiful one out of all

Naina is talking to herself and looking at the moon and saying that why did he have to be from the enemy's house aur woh kyun aise aaya aur aise chalagaya??😔 😔 😔 😔 - poor her

Raj soch raha hai his name looks so magical on her tongue and wanted her to repeat it and he kept watching her and listening!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - paagal deewana bangaya hai

Naina soch rahi hai ke kaash woh Shekhawat na hota just as Juliet had wished that Romeo would not be a Montague!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep just like that

Naina is thinking about the parts belonging to him and smiling dreamily!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Raj also laughed at her innocence!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe this has a doube meaning

Naina again went back to reciting Romeo and Juliet and now wished to God not to make this the real Romeo and Juliet and prayed not to make her life a tragedy as she hates tragedies!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha she really doesnt want it to happen after all she doesnt want to die

She praying to God to make her and Rajveer unite forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes kyu ke wohi to onhe saath jore sakte hai

When Raj called her she thought God had personally come to answer her prayers!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣She is quite dumb!!!!! - kaha na sab ke sab kuch hadd tak kiske le hai is fic me

Naina toh Raj ki baat sun hi nahi rahi hai and is confused ke bhagwaan usse neeche dekhne ko kyun keh raha hai jab ki woh khud upar hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - hehehe naina bhi na ek original piece hai

When finally he said ki woh Rajveer hai tab jaake usne neeche dekha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha finally

She told him he was disturbing her conversation with God and Raj told her it was him from the beginning and he really felt like pulling his hair out!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - ab kya kare wo bechaara ose samjhaate samjhaate thak gaya

Naina is worried for him but he is not as he has got his love to protect him and has come to hear what Naina has still left to say!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - perfect jawaab diya na osne

Naina toh sharma gayi!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️But she did not want to give in so easily!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes kyu ke she knows how to play hard to get

Naina ko Raj se kavita sunni hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Raj toh uske liye wakai party se Kavita ko lene jaa raha hai!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆It was hilarious!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- hehehe ab oske baare me kahu wo bhi ek original piece hee hai

Naina slapped her head in frustration and explained she meant poetry what Shakespeare used!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab jaake akal aayee

Raj hated Shakespeare and he thought he had made a fool of himself because last night he had spent reading Romeo and Juliet!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He called Shakespeare one twisted pervert!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha sach hee kaha osne he really was

But Naina loves Shakespeare and thinks he was so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - oski biggest fan jo hai

Raj does not even know the P of poetry but Naina said its not easy to love her and how would she know he loves her!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she just loves showing her importance

Raj started reciting Romeo and Juliet again where there was the exact same situation but it was not making any sense to him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha phirse automatic mode pe aagye dono

But Naina loves Romeo and Juliet so much that she had memorized each and every dialogue of it and recognised this one!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ek number kee paagal hai

She loved the balcony scene and had dreamt about it being in her life!!!!!!😍 😍 😍 😍Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha finally wo sach huwa

Naina toh bahut khush ho gayi and Raj is feeing ke yeh toh itne mein hi maan gayi and khush ho raha hai!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 - dono bohat hee khush hai

Naina said since she had read the whole Romeo and Juliet she has been dreaming of her own Romeo and she had no idea her prayer would be answered so soon!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes God is very grateful on her nowadays

She wants him to keep reciting and wrapped her arms around herself in a hug and swayed around!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 - wo bhi ek paagal deewaani hai

Ab Raj phas gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Usne khud hi apne pair par kulhadri maree!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ab woh aage kaise bole!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Use toh Romeo aur Juliet bilkul pasand nahi hai!!!!! - bechaara kaha phas gaya

Ab Naina also gave a dramatic pose and started reciting the lines of the play and Raj automatically recited the following line of it!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - kaha na automatic mode me chal jaate hai

Naina toh aage bhi bole jaa rahi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Mujhe toh lagta hai dono pagal hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - correct dono paagal hee hai ek dujhe ke pyaar me

Finally Raj se aur nahi huya aur woh jo kehne aaya tha usne apne hi style mein kaha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - of course Raj or oska incredible style

He played the flute and she loved it and began swaying along with it!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳And then he began singing and sang a song to reveal his feelings!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - kishen kanhaiya hai to baasuri bajaehga to kya Radha nahi naachegee

The song is very nice and superb and perfect for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thanks. im glad u loved it

Aalekh bhi Neelu ko manane ke liye usse bike ride pe leke gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha oske style me

Aur yaha Naina also joined in with Raj and is dancing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Finally she said what he wanted to hear and he is so happy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - dono bohat masti karahe hai

Aalekh and Neelu are also dancing on the same number and romancing!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊This song suits them as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep it sure does

Raj finally managed to climb the pipe and reach her and was just going to seal the kiss jab Pooja aa gayi and in the whole process made him lose his balance and he fell down!!!!! - bechaara phirse oska badluck shuru hogaya

Naina was so worried and kept asking how he was but could not go down to help him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Raj is not able to walk properly!!!!!! - it really is sad

Ritu and her friends are giving him support!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He is hurt but they are still going gaga over him!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - ab kya kare wo hai hee aisa ke sab ko oski fikar lagt jaatee hai

Raj loves this undivided attention no matter how much he denied it!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉He groaned and the girls fussed over him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very smart!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 - he sure is smart. kanhaiya apni gopiyo ko bhi nachaana jaanta hai

But the girls were not ready to leave him even in his hostel room but he finally managed to get rid of them!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha kyu ke ab bohat hogaya tha

Ab toh Yudi bhi aake usse gira deta hai!!!!! Poor Raj!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He was really annoyed and all his frustration came out!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - after all it had been a tiresome night

Bechara Raj!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Woh mucchad Nair uske sapno mein se bhi nahi jaata aur kal phir se parade lagane waala hai un sabki!!!!! - yes Nair to bahi Nair hee rahega

Yudi was just helping Raj relax magar Neelu ne dekha aur kuch aur hi samaj liya!!!! Neelu bhi naa kya kya sochti rehti hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - wo bhi ek character isliye. loose character

First she thinks Aalekh's friends are good for nothing loosers and now she thinks they are gay too!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe ek prejudice ho to barte hee jaate hai

She think she has to keep Aalekh away from them!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆And now she starts doubting Aalekh's sexual orientation also!!!!!! - yeh to hona hee tha

But then she dismissed the idea and thought that Aalekh loved her and only her and was completely straight!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe pata nahi is neelu ka kya hoga

Navin is very angry as he thinks ke Raj has not only stole Ritu away from him but also brought her here till his room and now he wants to kill Raj!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - yes now he is furiated abt this

Navin toh sab kuch galat samaj raha hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Usse kya pata ke Raj uske pyaar mein nahi balki uski behen mein interested hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm for sure ab aaehga maza in the cat and mouse chase.

Originally posted by: vvdn

yaar fabulous update ...........keep updating poor RN ..