Kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet ki(RN) NOTE pg16 - Page 10

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Arwa

Sorry yaar aaj kal main theek se reply nahin de pa rahin hoon..Hope u understand.. - it's okay i understand. Thanks for commenting anyways.

Update was really hilariousn n raj is a big nautanki..He always behave like a maniac.😆😆- ha ek number ka nautanki hai

He is dreaming abt Naina n dancing away with Yudi..Even Yudi is so astonished.😆😆😆.Aajkal boys ke bhi affair chalne lage hain to koi bhi dekh kar doubt feel kar sakta.(like Neelu) - heheeh for sure per yaha per to bechaara Raj deewana bangaya hai or ospe sab doubt karahe hai

Raj started singing in between the drills n He pucked on Maj Nair ..Then he got punished too.

I cant really imagine Rajiv doing such things but again u make me do so by your writing skills.😊😊😊 - yeh its hard to imagine that way per i'm glad i'm able to make u imagine him like that

Finally Naina rescued him.. - ha ulta huwa or heroine hero ko bachaane aayee

Navin is teasing all the way but he really dont know it was his sis who actually bring down Raj in infirmary..Poor Naveen!!!!!!😆😆😆 - sach me jab pata chalega na to bara sa volcano phatega

Wat is the plan dats cookongin Raj's wicked mind..Its sure to b evil😛😛😛 - ab Raj ka kya kehna him and his crazy plans.

Do update soon

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

The part was so funny. Just fabulous.👏👏👏 - thanks alot for the appreciation

Firstly Raj was being ranbir Kapoor n singing "Jab Se Tere Naina" in a towel. And poor Yudi fell victim to his imagination. That was still ok. But then how cud Raj even imagine Major Nair as Naina? And also he made everyone fall by stumbling to his sack.- ha ek number ka deewaaan jo bangaya hai to kya karta hai kuch hosh nahi rehta

And then the upside down punishment. Yudi was so funny. Did he actually expect Raj to be alright even while hanging down from a tree? 😆😆😆 - hehehe ha Yudi is one crazy person in this fic

Aalekh just said it ryt Raj is a complete NAUTANKI. He began singing songs on Doston ki bewafai. And then he thought God has already cum to take him wid HIM. After falling down he began laughing like mad. Gosh its so fun to imagine Raj like this. Too gud.😳 - lol yeh it is. Jab me likhne beitee hu to ose aise sochtee hu to itna maza aata hai in writing. I'm glad u also had fun reading it

But Navin was taunting raj too much But then again our Raj has made up his mind to teach him a lesson in a civil way.😉😉😉 Oh such a gud boy!!! Just luv him. 😳😳😳 - ha wo bohat hee bara shareef baccha hai

Wanna knw abt his evil trick. W8ing 4 dat eagerly. PLS CONTINUE SOON. - sure ill try and do it soon.

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

omg girl, you really have to make your raj less of a deewana.....when he started his ranbhir imitation, I was sooo scared he might drop that towel....lol. thanx sooo much for the pm and yeah, can't wait to see what they've planned for navin

Originally posted by: srojaleen

so sorry yaar...!!! phir se late...!!! kya karun apne project ko le kar thoda busy thi. par janti hun...tum to daya ka sagar ho...karuna ka sagar ho aur to aur Ramanand sagar ho...isiliye tum mujh par to bilkul bhi naraz nahin hogi...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab itna maska lagaya hai to phir naraaz kese rehsakti hu

ok now abt d ud......😊

ud baht hi funny tha...!!! - thanks a lot

raj ko aise imagine karna...matlab dimag kharab ho jata hai...!!! God...ek baar use towel me dekha tha...Ritu k sath...LRL me...!!! ab tum ne use phir se pehna diya aur rajveer se ranveer bana diya.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe thats the whole idea my dear ke sab ka dimaag kharaab ho. yeh personality change hogayee

ab rajveer ranveer ban gaya aur sonam ko naina samajh kar gane laga...!!! yahan tak thik tha...lekin why yudi... tch... tch... tch...bechare ki izaat to aaj usi k dost k hathon lut hi jati na...!!! - kya kare paagal deewaana banchuka hai to koi or nazar aata hee nahi

vaise bhi us ki luv-life gastic ka shikar hai aur ab tum use 'diarrhoea' de rahi ho...!!! bechara yudi aaj to bach gaya...par pata nahin...raj ki is bimari ka koi hal nahin nikla to sayad vo kal us ka shikar ho sakta hai.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - u really crack me up. ha bechaare Yudi ko sambhal ke rehna hoga

pyar ka bukhar kuch jyada hi chadha hai us par...!!! warna use maj. nair naina nahin dikhai dete. matlab itni khubsurat ladki aur maj. nair k chehre par imagine karna...!!! aur raj unhe kiss bhi karne ja raha tha...!!! is ki to sach me satak gayi hai...!!! matlab yudi tak thik tha...magar maj. nair...un ki muchon se raj ko prob hoti na...kiss karte waqt.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - waake me he has lost it per pyaar me begaana bangaya hai

bhagwan kare...raj ka third shikar BC na bane...!!! matlab unhe koi khatra nahin hai raj se...!!! kyoun ki vo to karate jante hai na...isiliye achhi tarah se apni izzat ko lut te hue bacha lenge.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehehe for sure

raj ko ulti duniya ki saza mili hai...lekin yahan par bhi us ka nautanki chalu...!!! alekh aur yudi k liye ga raha hai...!!! ab agar maj. nair ko kiss karne jayega to saza to milegi hi na...!!! - yep itnee behuda harkat kee saza to milegee ose. per wo kaha sudharne waala hai

lekin alekh aur yudi k scenes yahan par funny the...!!! aur yudi ka bahain failaye raj ki taraf bhagte hue aana...just hillarious. aur upar se alekh k superb comments...too gud.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha, I'm glad u had a ball reading it

naina raj ko bula rahi thi...aur use lag raha tha ki upar se bulawa aa gaya hai...!!! jab ki bulawa to niche walon ne hi di thi...magar vo to ulta latka hua hai na...isiliye us ka dimag bhi ulta hi chal raha hai...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- ha kyu ke oska dimaag to chal nahi raha na theek se isi liye to aisee haalat me hai

lekin bechara zameen par gira...!!! kash apni naina bhi wwe ki champ hoti to use pooja ki help lene ki jarurat hi nahin padti...vo use apni bahon me hi utha kar infirmary tak le jati...!!! jaise ki Raj ne kiya tha... LRL me...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - u know maine socha tha yeh kyu ke isme sab ulta hai per phir mujhe lagake kuch ziada hojaaehga isliye nahi kiya. but he it was a comedy to isme sab chalta hai

yahan par huda ka kaam naveen kar raha hai...matlab sab ko pareshan karna...!!! naveen par baht gussa aaya mujhe...!!! par phir maine socha ki...apna raj hai na...vo koi na koi plan to bana hi lega.😛 - yes he is the trouble maker per Raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai

rajveer bhi naveen ko maza chakhane k liye kuch soch raha hai...!!! lekin...kya...??? hmmmmmmmmmm dekhte hain...!!! apna raj kya karta hai...!!!😛 - hehehe i'm sure u wud luv it too

mai ek do din me...EA par bhi comment kar dungi...!!! haan...agar mere net ka pet thik raha to...!!! varna mai to hamesha late-latif hoti hi hun.😆 - okay will be waiting

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Soooooooooo sorry darling,

naraj mat hona. Mai late nahi maha late hoon mujhe pata hai but pardon me mujhe bikul time nahi mil paa raha hai aaj kal.😔 😔 😔 - hey Vertika its okay. Mujhe koi shikayaat nahi

Khair jahan tak baat aati hai ud ki so that was simply jhakaas 👏 👏 👏. - thanks alot

Raj ne to jab se Naina ko dekha hai lagta hai vo apna dimaag hi kho baitha hai. 😆 😆 😆 Towel pehan k Saawariyaa bana hua hai ,😛 😛 😛 kahin us ki towel utar jaati tab kya hota?😉 😉 😉 - heheheeh ha tab zaroor hungama hota kyu ke im sure all the readers wud have gone mad

Naina ko har jagah dekhe jaa raha hai.😳 😳 😳 Yahan tak ki Yudi ko bhi pehle Naina samajh raha tha.😆 😆 😆 Accha hua time rehte hi confusion clear ho gayi.😛 😛 - pura ka pura deewana banchuka hai ot behcaare Yudi ko hee phas na tha

😛 Ground me bhi Naina ko dekhte hi clean bold Raj 😃 😃 😃 aur accha hua kuch pagalpan karne se pehle Naina ne us ko Nair k hawale kar diya varna pata nahi sab k saamne Naina ki kya ijaat reh jaati?🤔 🤔 - ha Naina ne bacha liya apne aapko warna apne Raj sahab to gaye hee hai kaam se

🤔 Par us ka result aisa hoga us ne bhi nahi socha tha.😳 😳 😳

Major Nair ka baccha humesha mauka dhoondhta rehta hai bus punish karne ka 😡 😡 😡 - ab yehi to uska kaam hai

. Ulti duniya ki saza dene ki kya jaroorat thi mere sweet se Raj ko.😒 😒 😒 Bechara help maang raha tha apne doston se par vo dono bhi kam nahi hain, is condition me bhi Raj ka mazak banane me lage hue the 😔 😔 😔 .Khaas kar k Yudi ka vo nautanki senti scene to kaffi funny tha.🤣 🤣 🤣 - ha bechaara per sab ke sab ek number ke nautanki hee hai isme. I'm glad u found them all funny

To Naina ko Raj k baare me khabar mil hi gayi na gals k through.😎 😎 😎 Naina kitna pareshaan ho gayi thi isiliye bahana bana k Naveen k paas se nikal gayi. - haa aakhir oska pyaar saza kaat raha hai

Is Naveen k baache ka to murder karne ka mood tha mera kaise Raj ko pareshaan kar raha tha.😵 😵 😵 - ha bohat hee bura hai

Naina ki awaaz sun kar bhi Raj ko mazak lag raha tha 🤪🤪🤪. Raj ko bachahte bachate Naina bhi infirmary me addmit ho gayi.😆 😆 😆 - heheeh yeh it was funny

Naveen abhi to bahut ud raha hai aur Raj ka mazak bana raha hai ki vo ladkiyon ka sahara leta hai par abhi us ko pata nahi hai na ki sahara diya kis ne hai?😛 😛 😛 Jab pata chalega tab us ki shakal dekhne layak hogi.😊 😊 😊- ha tab to bara maza aaehga

Raj bhi is time bilkul cool bana hua hai varna Naveen ki itne baatein vo kaise sun sakta hai 😕 😕 😕? Alekh bhi surprise hai us k is behavior se.😲 😲 😲 - well apna Raj to shareef baccha hai na isliye heheheh koi shiataani kaha karta hai 😉

well continue soon darling. - sure wud do

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hellooooooo didi.........dekho main yahaan par bhi tapak gayi[ok....dusri baar].......nahi, dekho maine promise kiya tha.....after all der aaye durust aaye....right.....hehehe....hence proved....😃......u know main bahut dino tak agar aapse bak bak na karun toh sad sad feel hone lagta hai....😆.....i hope u are fit, fat and fine.....tumhari tabiyat theek rahna bahut zaroori hai.........hehehe😃😃 - Hey Rajita gr8 to see u but sorry im quite late. ab kya karu tabiyat saath nahi de rahi aaj kal but hopefully ill get there soon.

Accha aap janti hai late reply karne ka ek phayda hota hai....woh yeh ki update dubaara padna padta hai memory refresh karne ke liye....meaning double mazaa......thus implying the utility of ur update increases....i hope u understand what i am trying to tell........😛.....don't consider it my justification of replying late in anyway.....i mean each word i say.......hehehehehe😆😆 - hehehehe its gr8 that u read it again and again. me to yehi chahtee hu ke entertain kartee rahu sab ko

Accha ab update......mindblowing.superb,fantastic,fabulous,excellent,magnificent,hilarious.....etc etc....woh yeh opening line bade dino se use nahi ki thi.....socha is update mein iska bhi comeback karaa doon...........hehehe😛😛😛 - thanks a lot coz it means a lot to me

Abhi tak Neelu was in a dilemma....issi tarah se chalta raha toh soon Naina and all of us will start doubting Raj's sexual orientation...... .....hehehe....ok Raj in the towel scene.....superb.....kash tum LRL ke creative team ka hissa hoti.............😉😉😉........... - hmmmm for sure i also wish i wud have ben taake aise or scene daal detee. well dont worrry kyu ke aisa sirf mazaak me hoga not seriously.

Yudi is so important in raj's life.............jab naina saath nahi hoti toh uski kami Yudi hi toh pura karta hai.....😉................but seriously bad for yudi....it this talk goes around KMA toh mil gayi Yudi ko ladki.......he must gear up to find a guy for himself...........hehehehe😃😃😃 - yeh my poor Yudi hehehee. Are oske saath to hai na Shalini to dont worry per phir bhi bechaara hai

OK i can understand Yudi par yeh kya hua........major nair.........MAJOR NAIR........🤢....suna tha log pyar mein andhe ho jate hai par itne andhe ki apne pyar ka chehra iss kadar bigaar de yeh nahi suna tha.........Plz raj ki aankhein theek karao......i am ready to donate my current year's scholarship....and i mean it........................ - hehehehe i luved how dramatic u became cud actually imagine ur eyes popping out lol. Sure oski aakhen karanee hee paregee examined per oskee aakhe hee nahi pura ka pura Raj hee ghayal hai.

Naina madam ne vaise hi bechare ki duniya ulat pulat ke rakh di hai....ladke-ladki mein bhi difference ka andaaza na raha bechare ko....anyways....ab Nair ne in reality ulti duniya dikha di.....aise harkat karega toh what does hi expect....ki nair usse candle-light dinner par lekar jayega.....vaise thanx raj tumne meri maan ki murad puri kar di.....thanx for puking on Nair's face............😆..................... - wow kya kya umeede hoti hai tumhaaree.. ..Ha ab to Raj gaya kaam se.

Doston ki dosti....maan gaye....aise dost ho toh life mein problem hi kya hai.....dushmano ki kami bhi yahi pura kar dete hai........hehehe😆😆😆....Raj is desperately trying to convine them......emotional blackmailing......dost dost na raha....pyar pyar na raha....ei zindagi hume tera aitbaar na raha........par alekh kitni asani se keh deta hai ki ek na ek din toh sabhi ko iss duniya ko chor kar jana hota hai.....how practical......😆😆😆 - ha aise dost ho to dushmano ki kya zaroorat per kya kare apna Alekh jo hai aisa hee hai.

....and yudi....utare ke bajaye running into his arms even when he is hung upside down................how romantic......😉............... - hehehehe yeh Yudi or Raj ki prem kahani

pure time Naina naina aur jab naina aa jati hai toh sochta hai bhagwan bula raha hai.............badiya hai....pyar mein dard ka ehsaas aaj hua hoga....the branch finally snapped....awesome.....abhi tak toh pagal nahi hua par another branch did the unfinished task.......... - hehehe of course

iss fic mein sab ulta hai....Raj naina ko apni baaho mein lene ke bajaye bechari naina 'trying' to lift him up......yar itna fatto lagta toh nahi hai....par asliyat ab saamne aayi jab do ladkiyo hi haalat khasta ho gayi utathe utathe.............hehehe😆😆😆 - ha sab ulta hee hai kyu ke yeh puri fic paagal hai. hehehehe after all itne dole shole yu hee to nahi banaye hai Raj ne.

And Naveen wala scene bhi sahi tha.....maarne jaate jaate ruk gaya....afterall bechare ki peeth mein dard tha.....moov lagao Raj.....and take some help from naina if required.....😉....... - ha wo to forun nikal paregee per kahi osse pehle Yudi na aajeye hehehe im sure u wud understand that

Waiting for raj's Civilized way of attack......jaldi se update karna..........aur Lost bhi update kardo plz.........all of ur fics are my fave par Lost ki taraf main thodi partial hoon............u remember i started replying from that fic onwards............bye...take care..........😃..... - for sure i'll try my level best for it.