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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Happy holi Arwa Sorry for replying so late but I was little busy..know wat I am getting married on 27th April...😛 Update was too hilarious n I really liked the descrption of heaven as well as hell. So finally flashback has started ..How can any1 kiss at their very first meeting dear😆😆😆 anyways I really laughed while reading the update Do update soon

Hey its okay. HAPPY HOLI TO YOU TOO
And congratulations. Wow ur getting married. I hope u have the best wedding ever.
Thanks alot for loving this update and im glad to see u enjoyed it to the core.
Well it was love at first sight to sab kuch fast track pe hee hoga na hehehehehe
Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
finallyyyyyyyy u updated dis fic😆😆😆i know i know u hv to manage sooo many fics....sooo its perfectly ok....soo i guess d biggest mystry is solved....now i know why u named dis fic "kahani hamare romeo aur juliet ki"😆i was sooooo confused after reading all those lines in d update but den i came to know what were dey talking about.....i cant believe dis😲😲😲dey kissed in d very first meeting😲main to soch bhi nhn sakti ki pehli baaar ye haaal tha to aaage kya hoga....no actually kya kya hoga😳navin ko pata chalega to usse heart attack ho jaaayega😆aur issss stupid navin ko koi aur nhn mili thi ritu ke ilawa?????ika to taste hi kharab hai serial mein bhi aur yahan bhi😆aur ye kya sab milke mere raj ka mazaak udaaa rahe hain...usse ritu ke paas bhej rahe hain..par dekho bhagwaan ko bhi ye manzooor nhn tha....raj gira bhi to naina ki bahaaon mein😳areee haan ye bhi hatke tha...normally ladkiyaaan girti hain ladkon ki bahaaon mein par yahan to apna romeo gira apni juliet ki bahaon mein😃ab mujhe pata hai ye saala navin...ahhhh i mean raj ka hone waala saala navin naina ur raj ko dooor karte rehne ki koshish karega aur mujhse pitega...but den again tension ki baat nhn hai...apna raj hai na....vo kya kehte hain...dilwala dulhaniya le hi jaaayega....ahhhhh naaa romeo juliet le hi jaaayega😆
ok frm nw on i wont be cuming to india forums...plzzzzzz dont forget to post me ur updates.....i'll try and comment on every single of it....obviously not in xams...but u plzzzzz post me every update...i'll be reading them for sure and i'll let u know that by sending a thnx to u...by dat u'll be knowing that i m reading dem
lots of luv
seema
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

firstly haapy holi to u...

awesome updt. hamesha ki tarah.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

finallyyyyyyyy u updated dis fic😆😆😆i know i know u hv to manage sooo many fics....sooo its perfectly ok.... - yes finally i got the time hehehe

soo i guess d biggest mystry is solved....now i know why u named dis fic "kahani hamare romeo aur juliet ki"😆i was sooooo confused after reading all those lines in d update but den i came to know what were dey talking about.....- yep the mystery is solved. hehehe yeh it was there as a hint.
i cant believe dis😲😲😲dey kissed in d very first meeting😲main to soch bhi nhn sakti ki pehli baaar ye haaal tha to aaage kya hoga....no actually kya kya hoga😳navin ko pata chalega to usse heart attack ho jaaayega😆 - hahaha well it was love at first sight to yeh to hona hee tha na. hmmmm surely he would have had a heart attack. Well dekhto raho ke aage aage hota hai kya
aur issss stupid navin ko koi aur nhn mili thi ritu ke ilawa?????iska to taste hi kharab hai serial mein bhi aur yahan bhi😆 - are aisa kyu...well isme ritu is playing positive for a change to ab oske saath koi or nahi jamee na isliye.
aur ye kya sab milke mere raj ka mazaak udaaa rahe hain...usse ritu ke paas bhej rahe hain..par dekho bhagwaan ko bhi ye manzooor nhn tha....raj gira bhi to naina ki bahaaon mein😳 - ab kya kare raj hai hee aisa ke sab ko oskee taang kichne me maza aata hai. hamesha aisee baate karta rehta hai ke sab ko hasee aatee hai. True aakhir ose apni manzil tak pohoch na hee tha na.
areee haan ye bhi hatke tha...normally ladkiyaaan girti hain ladkon ki bahaaon mein par yahan to apna romeo gira apni juliet ki bahaon mein😃 - heheheh yeh it was different aakhir yeh puree fic hatke jo hai. isme sab kuch ulta hee hoga.
ab mujhe pata hai ye saala navin...ahhhh i mean raj ka hone waala saala navin naina ur raj ko dooor karte rehne ki koshish karega aur mujhse pitega...but den again tension ki baat nhn hai...apna raj hai na....vo kya kehte hain...dilwala dulhaniya le hi jaaayega....ahhhhh naaa romeo juliet le hi jaaayega😆 - hmmm well ab story me yehi twist hai to dekhte hai ke Raj kese apni dulhaniya le jaata hai.
ok frm nw on i wont be cuming to india forums...plzzzzzz dont forget to post me ur updates.....i'll try and comment on every single of it....obviously not in xams...but u plzzzzz post me every update...i'll be reading them for sure and i'll let u know that by sending a thnx to u...by dat u'll be knowing that i m reading dem
lots of luv - yeh sure
seema

Thanks a lot fanatic 21 for loving this update and a Happy Holi to you too.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sach yaar ye story to vakai me Romeo aur Juliet ki ho gayi. 😲 😲 😲
Raj ko bhi auratien k beech me rehna kuch jyada hi pasand hai mujhe lagta hai.😉 😉 😉 Kareena, Preity, Aish, Sush, Bipasha vow itne saari hot babes yahi soch raha hoga na 🤪 🤪 🤪 vo aur us ko itna bhaav bhi de rahi hain sab ki sab kya baat hai?😛 😛 😛 Raj ko bhi maza aa raha hai par is maze me bhi vo Naina ko nahi bhoola ek bhi pal k liye 😳 😳 😳. I am happy for that.😃 😃 😃 Love the song u choose.👏 👏 👏
Raj pe gals marti thi ye to sach hai hum sab hain na is ka example 😆 😆 😆 par us ko humesha us khaas ladki ka intezaar tha jo bus us k liye hi bani ho 😍 😍 😍 n i am shure Ritu nahi hai vo na.🥱 🥱 🥱 Raj k dost bhi na sab k sab kitne ajeeb hain humesha Raj ka mazak banae k liye ready aur kisi tarah se us ko ready kar k Ritu k paas bhejne hi vaale the 😕 😕 😕 ki thank god sahi wqat par Yudi k skets ne apna kamaal dikhaya aur Raj ko us ki khawabon ki ladki means Naina mil gayi 😊 😊 😊. Raj to lag raha tha chodne ko hi nahi ready tha us ko.🤗🤗 🤗
Pehli najar ka pyaar kamaal hai.🥳 🥳 🥳 Naveen kitna garam ho raha tha na Raj par jab vo Ritu ki or jaa raha tha 😔 😔 😔 par us ko bhi kya pata tha ki Raj to is se bahut accha deserve karta hai. Par Raj k confidence ki bhi daad deni hogi pehle mulakaat me hi Naina ko kiss kar liya us ne 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 bina soche samjhe aur Naina bhi mana nahi kar rahi thi balki vo to enjoy kar rahi thi.🤣 🤣 🤣 Ek nahi do do baar 😳 😳 😳 vo bhi. Accha hua tab Naveen nahi tha vahan varna Raj ki kya haalat hoti ye to vahi jaanta tha.😭 😭 😭
Raj ne Naina ko rokne k liye gaana bhi gaaya how sweet yaar 😃 😃 😃 aur dance bhi kar raha tha.😲 😲 😲 Again an excellent song n one of my fav 😊 😊 😊.Par pata nahi kahan se Naveen beech me aa gaya 😒 😒 😒 aur us k baad jo pata chala that was drastic kisi ne bhi aisa nahi socha hoga. Ab kya hoga dono kaise milenge ab?😕 😕 😕 Alekh ko bhi pata tha Naina kaun hai sivaay Raj k.🤪 🤪 🤪 Ek cheej aur dono ne ek doosre k liye jo dial maare the vo bade kamaal k the.👏 👏 👏
waiting for next part eagerly.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sach yaar ye story to vakai me Romeo aur Juliet ki ho gayi. 😲 😲 😲 - yes it sure is

Raj ko bhi auratien k beech me rehna kuch jyada hi pasand hai mujhe lagta hai.😉 😉 😉 Kareena, Preity, Aish, Sush, Bipasha vow itne saari hot babes yahi soch raha hoga na 🤪 🤪 🤪 vo aur us ko itna bhaav bhi de rahi hain sab ki sab kya baat hai?😛 😛 😛 - of course ab Raj hai hee aisa ke sab ke sab oskee deewaanee banjaaye. Or wo kyu na maza kare
Raj ko bhi maza aa raha hai par is maze me bhi vo Naina ko nahi bhoola ek bhi pal k liye 😳 😳 😳. I am happy for that.😃 😃 😃 Love the song u choose.👏 👏 👏 - Ha apna Raj Naina ke bagair kaha rehsakta hai. Thanks for liking the song.
Raj pe gals marti thi ye to sach hai hum sab hain na is ka example 😆 😆 😆 par us ko humesha us khaas ladki ka intezaar tha jo bus us k liye hi bani ho 😍 😍 😍 n i am shure Ritu nahi hai vo na.🥱 🥱 🥱 - oh yes i completely agree with u there hehehe. Hmmm well of course ritu nahi hosakti kyu ke future to sab jaante hee hai
Raj k dost bhi na sab k sab kitne ajeeb hain humesha Raj ka mazak banane k liye ready aur kisi tarah se us ko ready kar k Ritu k paas bhejne hi vaale the 😕 😕 😕 ki thank god sahi wqat par Yudi k skets ne apna kamaal dikhaya aur Raj ko us ki khawabon ki ladki means Naina mil gayi 😊 😊 😊 - ha unfortunately sab ke sab nalaayak hai per God is with him na aur ose jaha pohoch na tha waha pohoch hee gaya
. Raj to lag raha tha chodne ko hi nahi ready tha us ko.🤗🤗 🤗 - moka mila hai to thori haathse jaane dega
Pehli najar ka pyaar kamaal hai.🥳 🥳 🥳 - yes it definitely is
Naveen kitna garam ho raha tha na Raj par jab vo Ritu ki or jaa raha tha 😔 😔 😔 par us ko bhi kya pata tha ki Raj to is se bahut accha deserve karta hai. - yes he does deserve much better
Par Raj k confidence ki bhi daad deni hogi pehle mulakaat me hi Naina ko kiss kar liya us ne 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 bina soche samjhe aur Naina bhi mana nahi kar rahi thi balki vo to enjoy kar rahi thi.🤣 🤣 🤣 Ek nahi do do baar 😳 😳 😳 vo bhi. Accha hua tab Naveen nahi tha vahan varna Raj ki kya haalat hoti ye to vahi jaanta tha.😭 😭 😭 - well ab Raj ka jaadoo hee aisa hai ke Naina resist hee nahi karpaayee. hehe ha nahi to aaj wo marhee gaya hota
Raj ne Naina ko rokne k liye gaana bhi gaaya how sweet yaar 😃 😃 😃 aur dance bhi kar raha tha.😲 😲 😲 Again an excellent song n one of my fav 😊 😊 😊.- yes that is our Raj.
Par pata nahi kahan se Naveen beech me aa gaya 😒 😒 😒 aur us k baad jo pata chala that was drastic kisi ne bhi aisa nahi socha hoga. - ha kahani me twist aagaya
Ab kya hoga dono kaise milenge ab?😕 😕 😕 Alekh ko bhi pata tha Naina kaun hai sivaay Raj k.🤪 🤪 🤪 Ek cheej aur dono ne ek doosre k liye jo dial maare the vo bade kamaal k the.👏 👏 👏 - hmm lets see what they do after all Raj is not going to leave her now. Yes thanks for liking them.
waiting for next part eagerly.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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tumhe pata hai Arwa...jab bhi mai is fic ko padhti hun na...to mai yeh sochti hun ki...kash Shakespear zinda hote...to aaj is fic ko padh kar hasste hasste bichare mental hospital main admit ho gaye hote. kyoun ki un K story jitni tragic thi tumhari story utni hi jyada comic hai...!!! i m still laughing.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
vaise yeh kafi shocked ud tha. kyoun k maine jab padha ki Raj ne apni pahli mulakat main hi Naina ko kiss kiya tha...aur vo bhi do do baar...to mai hairan rah gayi. achha hua ki Naveen nahin tha vahan par varna RN ki pahli mulaqat Raj aur Naveen ki pahli muqqalaat ban jati.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
by d way Reetu k bina to rn fic hi adhuri hai...!!! pata nahin kyoun...par vo hamesha Naveen k kismat main hi likhi hoti hai.
sabhi Raj ka mazak uda rahe hain aur use wrong no Reetu k paas bhej rahe hain...lekin is main hairaniwali koi bhi baat nahin hai. kyoun ki yeh fic hi ulti hai to jo sidha hona chahiye vo bhi ulta hi hoga. aur vaise bhi mujhe pata hai ki kuch galat nahin hoga ...vahi hoga jo manzure Arwa hoga.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
dekha maine sahi kaha tha na...Raj gira bhi to Naina k upar. vaise sahi bhi hai...hamesha aisa thode hi na chalega k heroine hamesha hero k upar gire...kabhi kabhi scene ulta bhi to hona chahiye na.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
cont soon.😊
abhi do din k liye koi exam nahin hai... to mai in do dino main tumhare baki k do fics par bhi comments kar dungi.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: srojaleen

tumhe pata hai Arwa...jab bhi mai is fic ko padhti hun na...to mai yeh sochti hun ki...kash Shakespear zinda hote...to aaj is fic ko padh kar hasste hasste bichare mental hospital main admit ho gaye hote. kyoun ki un K story jitni tragic thi tumhari story utni hi jyada comic hai...!!! i m still laughing.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - sach me he sure wud have. I'm glad that u find it so funny and i can give u a gr8 laugh.

vaise yeh kafi shocked ud tha. kyoun k maine jab padha ki Raj ne apni pahli mulakat main hi Naina ko kiss kiya tha...aur vo bhi do do baar...to mai hairan rah gayi. achha hua ki Naveen nahin tha vahan par varna RN ki pahli mulaqat Raj aur Naveen ki pahli muqqalaat ban jati.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe waise is fic me kaafi kuch shocking cheeze hongi to be prepared. hmmmmm that wud have been fun per bechaare ko maar nahi khilwaani thi mujhe
by d way Reetu k bina to rn fic hi adhuri hai...!!! pata nahin kyoun...par vo hamesha Naveen k kismat main hi likhi hoti hai. - ha ab kya kare vamp to honi hee chaheeye and i guess kyu ke wo Navin ke saath pehle thee hee isliye sab ose hee rakhte hai
sabhi Raj ka mazak uda rahe hain aur use wrong no Reetu k paas bhej rahe hain...lekin is main hairaniwali koi bhi baat nahin hai. kyoun ki yeh fic hi ulti hai to jo sidha hona chahiye vo bhi ulta hi hoga. aur vaise bhi mujhe pata hai ki kuch galat nahin hoga ...vahi hoga jo manzure Arwa hoga.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hmmmmm sahi me yeh puri fic hee ulti hai. hehehe well itna bharosa to rakh hee saktee ho ke arwa jo bhi karegee osme maza to aaehga hee
dekha maine sahi kaha tha na...Raj gira bhi to Naina k upar. vaise sahi bhi hai...hamesha aisa thode hi na chalega k heroine hamesha hero k upar gire...kabhi kabhi scene ulta bhi to hona chahiye na.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yep kyu ke kabhi kabhi osme bara maza aata hai.
cont soon.😊
abhi do din k liye koi exam nahin hai... to mai in do dino main tumhare baki k do fics par bhi comments kar dungi.😊 - cool. Best of luck for ur exams.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! - thanks alot

The song is very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - i'm glad u liked it

I liked the special effects provided by the angels!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏The angels are really interested in his story!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - oh yes they sure are

Raj remembering Naina was so sweet and the way he described her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳No wonder the angels wanted to be in Naina's place!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe bechaaree sab ke sab.

Yeh angels usse itna importance de rahi hai and he is enjoying it!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊But even in this woh Naina ko ek pal ke liye nahi bhoola!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha ab pyaar kiya hai to kese bhool jaaehga ose

Now he is feeling sad but he wiped his tears quickly!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭The angels are trying to comfort him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab yeh judai bardaasht nahi hoti na osse

Angels said they won't be able to take him in the main area aur gate ke paas Salman aur Vivek hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe yaha bhi super stars se bhara hai

Raj is right this place is a circus!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Its worse than being alive kyunki tab kam se kam woh Naina se mil toh sakta tha!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - ha for sure. yaha aake bechaare ke kitna shena paraha hai

Now Raj starts telling them his story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes now begins the real story

Every Fresher had to find a senior to go with to the ball!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha new idea

Even in my B-School for the dancing part in Frehser's Welcome this was the rule!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Of course I did not attend so I did not have to do it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - oh really. u shud have it wud have been interesting

Two girls went in saying they were going by the rules and they are a couple!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha not lying here now

The entrance was flooded by same sex couples!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣What an idea!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Going to the party with a partner of the same sex!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - hehehe yeh something different

Raj KMA mein Kishen Kanhaiya banke ghoomta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Magar usse us khas ladki ka intezzar hai!!!!😍 😍 😍 😍How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ha wo hai hee bara hee cute

I liked the comparison between Raj and honey and the girls and bees!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - i luv it too isliye baar baar daal detee hu

Yudi is getting worried ke what if his date ran away!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Yudi pointed out Ritu as Raj's sabse badi deewani!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Ritu seems to be Rosalyn in this story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊- hmmm ab beech me ose to aana hee tha na. yeh Yudi is right cracker in this one

Raj is not interested in her but this friends are trying hard to convince him that Ritu is the one for him!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - dost hai ke dushman

Kya description diya hai Raj ne apni dreamgirl ka!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - ha he sure is so wonderful

Raj ki ek ek baat ka they are trying to explain ke Ritu mein hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Yeh bhi ajeeb hai bas Raj ka mazaak banana chahte hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - hehehe ha sab ke sab oske peeche pare hai

They are convincing Raj ke Ritu is the one for him and he became a pawn to their prank once again!!!! - poor him

Navin is getting angry ke Raj is going to Ritu!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Accha huya uske friend ne usse rok liya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes warna aaj phirse naya hungama khara hojaata

Poor Navin!!!! He has fallen for Ritu magar Ritu is more interested in Raj!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - ab yeh to hona hee tha na

His dialogue ke he is meant to be the flirt in this story magar usse yaha koi bhao hi nahi deta is too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - ha and i'm glad u found it so.

Yudi ne skates dala to make Raj fall but God ko toh kuch aur hi manzoor tha and he went sliding on them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes for sure. Oski kismat me kuch or hee likha hai

Instead of the heroine falling on the hero yahan ulta ho gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Yahan Raj gira aur Naina ne usse pakda!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yaha pe sabkuch ulta hee hoga boss

Naina can't take her eyes off him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳She had wished an extremely handsome guy falls into her arms and here he was!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Waah yeh Naina ki wish toh bahut jaldi puri ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼- ha Godis very generous with her i think. Jo chaha milgaya ose

Raj could hear soft notes playing!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊It reminded me of Shahrukh Khan in Main Hoon Na!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe yeh cud imagine him only

The song is very nice and apt for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm it sure is

As soon as Raj touched her he got a shock but it was just her vibrator!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab shock to lagna hee tha 😆 😆 😆

Raj realised he is in love!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He kissed Naina's hand and she gave a shy smile!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Naina is also definately in love with him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha yeh aag dono taraf barabar kee lagi hai

Their love at first sight was just magical!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yep the idea of love at first sight is magical in its own self

I loved Naina's answer to Raj's question of do you believe in love at first sight!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - sidhe sawaal pooch hee liya osne

Yeh toh accha hai they were standing behind the wall warna Navin ne dekha hota toh this would have led to a fight for sure!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ooooh yes aakhir villain jo thera

Raj kissed Naina and she also kept encouraging him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️They both felt they were in Heaven!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - haaaaaaai ab or kya kahu

Yudi is wondering ke Raj kaha gayab ho gaya!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕But Aalekh is less moved!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course kyu ke kaafi kam cheeze ose asar kartee hai

Toh Shalini beats up Yudi and he is scared of her!!!😛 😛 😛 😛They really are an item!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Shalini is dominating aur Aalekh hamesha Yudi ko bolta rehta hai to be a man!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe just so typical of them all.

Raj ne toh keh bhi diya ke he thinks he is in love with her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow kya confidence hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - bhoot bhoot ke bara huwa hai

Raj aur Naina toh Romeo aur juliet ke dialogues bolne lage!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Unlogo ko khud bhi samaj mein nahi aa raha tha ke woh dono kya bol rahe hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha dono hee absorb hogaye moment me or jo dimaag me aaya bole ne lage

Now Naina pulled him closer and they kissed again!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Kya baat hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊First meeting mein do baar kiss!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - certainly a shocker i know

Finally they both realised that they were ranting the dialogues of Romeo and Juliet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe ha dono ke dono ek hee khet kee muli nikle

Naina toh jaa rahi thi magar Raj toh usse jaane hi nahi dena chahta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗Usne realise kiya ke ab usse Naina ko twenty first century style mein patana padega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - yep aakhir wo hi to kaam karega is zamane me

Naina ko rokne ke liye usne gaana gaya aur dance bhi kiya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊And Naina also danced with him!!!! It was awesome!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - it sure was

His friends were surprised as Raj never danced!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm lekin pyaar sab kuch sikhaa deta hai my friend

The song is excellant and rocking and one of my favourites!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha aaj kal yehi to chal raha hai

It suited them perfecty and was just magical!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - hmmm sure can imagine it on them

But Navin dragged Naina away and Aalekkh stopped Raj and both came to know that ke jisse woh dono pyaar karte hai woh unke dushmaan ke khandan ka hai!!!! - ha aakhir me kya bomb gira done pe

Naina ne sahi socha ke really their lives were starting to sound like the original Romeo and Juliet!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Yeh toh hona hi tha akhir yeh hai kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet Ki!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes for sure. aakhir yeh kahani ossi se inspired hwui hai to oski tarha hee nazar aaehgee.


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Part two

This new set of news was too much to handle for both of them. Rajveer couldn't believe that he fell in love for the first time and that too with the enemy's daughter. Life couldn't have been more unfair. He just stood there watching at the space in which Naina stood a few minutes ago but now was gone. He just walked off abruptly without answering any of his friend's questions.

"Eh jaane de ose. Kuch dair akela rahega to apne aap theek hojaaehga." Alekh turned back to his table and sat down to drink as things like these never perturbed him very much. Yudi was however worried about Rajveer but Shalini came and took him away with her so he really couldn't do much about the issue either.

A girl dressed in a rather short red dress came storming through the couples in the hall and stood in front of Alekh with her hands on her hips and quite cross with him. He didn't really look up and kept drinking as if he hadn't even noticed her. "I think you forgot something?" she rolled her tongue in her mouth waiting for an explanation.

Alekh stopped drinking and looked up at her and gave a sheepish grin, "uh wo kya huwa ke…I mean I was going to come but you know…"

"I know exactly what happened. I quite remember you had said we'll be going together to the fresher's ball. You see something of the significance in that sentence?"

He stood up, "oh come on. I didn't do it on purpose, I mean I was going to come but I got…"

"As usual you got so involved with your so called looser friends here that you forgot that I've been waiting for you from the past hour."

"Hey who are you calling a looser?" Ali felt offended. "Hamaree bhi koi izzat hai to agar gaali denee hee hai to zara izzat se dijye." Pooja was standing behind him as his date and slapped on his arm for being so stupid.

The girl was waiting for Alekh to explain his actions but she saw how he was not making much effort as usual. She didn't know why she got stuck with him but her heart just got carried away. "Bhagwaan ne saw ghade peda kiye honge tab jaake tum aaye honge."

"Now that's just too much Neelu okay. Mera standard itna giroa mat okay. At least call me a decent animal…kyu sahi kaha na maine?" he asked Ali as he carried on drinking.

"You're just impossible." Neelu was frustrated with him now so she grabbed hold of the drink in his hand and dropped it all over his head. Everyone around him began laughing at him but he gave a glare at Ali and he stopped. He looked really funny with the drink all over him. "Ab puree tarha tum ek gadhe hee lagrahe ho." She walked off and Alekh was really annoyed.

"Yeh saali larkiyo ka maamla hee aisa hota hai. Thorisee baat pe bharak jaatee hai. Apne ko to is lafre se hee dhoor rehna hai." Alekh began wiping himself off and then he sat down again on the table.

Ali also sat down opposite him, "I think you need to go and apologise to her. I mean after all she is your girlfriend."

He sighed, "I know and that's what I'm regretting about till date." He pulled another drink from the waiter and began gulping it down. "wo saali kounsee manhoos gharee hogi jiske ander meree nazar uspe pari or wo mere gale pargayee."

"What!" Neelu had returned and was aghasted to hear that from him. "me tumhaare gale paree?" she charged towards him and grabbed onto his collar, "let me remind you that it was you who had asked me out first and it had been you who had been running after me."

"Are Neelu calm down," he laughed in a comical way and tried releasing her grip, "me to mazaak karaha tha." He looked around and saw people were looking towards them. "you know my rep around here…wo to bus kabhi kabhi dosto ke saamne aisa jhaar na parta hai. Come on you know I love you." He became coaxing her and she did release his grip. "Hush…jaan chutti." He sighed and saw she again gave him menacing eyes. He really got scared of those eyes as he knew how wild this Neelu could get. "I mean thank God tum aagayee mujhe in sab good for nothing loosers se baachene." He saw Ali was not pleased with him and was about to charge on him. "hmmm you know what yaha ka mausam kuch theek nahi lagta mujhe," he grabbed onto Neelu's arm, "let's go out. Come on." Before anyone could protest or say something he dragged Neelu out of the ball with him.

Naina had reached her room now and she was really upset about what happened. She couldn't believe that she fell in love with the enemy. Standing by her window she sighed as she looked at the moon in the sky which had been covered by the clouds. Her life also seemed the same way.

"Now which one is it?" Rajveer was walking down in the KMA ground towards the girl's hostel, searching for Naina's room. He knew that his heart would give him the sign and he'll definitely find her. "This is the hostel so now where is the room." He kept walking when he heard the loud DING DONG in his heart and he looked up and there she was, looking so serene under the moon light and picture perfect.

"Why did it have to be this way? Why did he have to be from the enemy's house? Rajveer, Rajveer kyu aise aaye tum or kyu aise chalegaye?" she kept talking to herself and then looked at the moon and saw the clouds had moved away. She smiled.

Seeing her in that way made him smile too and he went and stood under her room to listen further. "My name looks so magical on her tongue. Oh my sweet Naina keep repeating it." He closed his eyes and sighed as if absorbing her fragrance.

She continued conversing with her soul, "I don't want him to be the son of my enemy. Oh why did he have to be a Shekhawat?" she felt crossed but then calmed down again and leaned her elbows on the window sill and kept staring into space. "If I look at it his name doesn't mean anything to me because it is nor his foot or hand or lips or…" she began thinking about all the rest of the parts belonging to him and smiled dreamily, "or any other interesting parts belonging to a man." Rajveer also laughed silently at her innocence. "Oh be some other name. What's in a name that we call a rose which would not smell so sweet were he not Rajveer called." She slapped her head as she was going back into the Romeo and Juliet notion. She had to remember that this was not Romeo and Juliet or was it? She closed her eyes and folded her hands together into a prayer. "God please, I know last time when I prayed I'd said that this is the last time I'm wishing for something but can you please cancel that order and make a new list. Please, please can you make all of this go away and not make this the real Romeo and Juliet. I really hate tragedies so please don't make my life one too. Please make me and Rajveer unite forever."

Out from the shadows Rajveer walked out and stood underneath her room window. "Naina, my sweet, sweet Naina." He spoke in a soft voice so that only she can hear.

She opened her eyes in amazement, "wow God you seem to be really gracious on me tonight. You personally have come to answer my prayers." She was getting excited like a small child.

"Naina, listen to me. Look I've come to tell you something." He tried getting her attention towards him but she kept looking heavenwards believing that God was speaking to her.

"I'm listening God. Please give me good news." She still had hands folded as she thought she was still standing in front of God.

"Naina neeche dekho." He wanted her to look at him.

"Neeche? Per bhagwaan aap to upar hain na to phir me neeche kyu dekhu?" she was confused.

Rajveer shook his head in disbelief, "me jaanta hu ke bhagwaan upar hai magar me neeche hu."

She still looked perplexed, "I don't get it. You said you're up there in heaven and then you're saying you're down here on Earth. What am I supposed to understand?"

"Ufff…Naina me bhagwaan nahi Rajveer hu. Neeche dekho."

Finally she looked down and was shocked to find Rajveer standing there. "Oh my God, Rajveer what are you doing here? Please you must leave right now. And plus you're disturbing my conversation with God."

"Oho Naina, that was me from the beginning. You were not talking with God." He felt like pulling his hair out with this woman. "Naina I've come here to tell you something."

"Rajveer don't say anything. I'm afraid for you. Please leave from here before anyone sees you." She had this worried expression on her face.

"I'm not afraid as I've my love to protect me. Naina I've come here to hear what I've already have said but you still have been left to say. Please tell me what my ears are eager to hear."

She thought about what he said and became bright red as the very thought of it was making her blush to the core. This guy that she had just met was so amazing but she didn't want to give in so easily. "I'm afraid, sir I don't quite comprehend what you're trying to convey here."

"What do you want?" he scratched his head wondering did he miss anything till now.

"Kavita." She sighed looking at the moon and waiting for a whole lot of compliments to come her way.

He gulped and thought, "Ab is waqt me is Kavita ko kese dhoondunga." Then he looked over at her, "Naina itnee bheer me mujhe Kavita nahi milegee. Ask for something easier."

She frowned, "you said you love me and you can't even find Kavita for me." She turned away crossed with him.

"Naina come on…okay, okay I'll try and find Kavita for you." He began walking away and Naina turned around and wasn't happy to see him leave.

"Rajveer where are you going?" she called after him and instantly lowered her voice again making sure she didn't alert anybody.

He halted and looked towards her, "tumne hee to kaha ke tumhe Kavita chaheeye to me osse lene jaaraha hu. I think wo abhi tak fresher's ball me hongi." He continues to go and Naina slaps her forehead in frustration.

"Halt Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!" she ordered and he stopped in amazement. "When I said Kavita I meant poetry. You know what Shakespeare used."

He cursed under his breath as he hated Shakespeare. Last night only he had spent reading that crap Romeo and Juliet and tonight he had nearly made a fool of himself because of it. "Naina tumhe bhi kya bakwaas pasand hota hai. Shakespeare was one twisted pervert."

Naina got excited and cross, "hey don't you dare say anything about my Shakespeare okay." Then she goes back into a dream stance, "he was just so romantic."

Rajveer thought about what she said and just shook his head as now he would have to think something poetic for her. But how? He didn't even know the P of poetry. He scratched his head again and walked back under her room and thought of something. "Naina this is not easy."

"Rajveer mujhse pyaar karna bhi aasaan nahi hai. How am I to know you love me?"

He thought, "pehle pata hota ke itne paapar bele ne parenge to pyaar kabhi nahi karta" he kept wondering what to say when he remembered this scene he read last night in Romeo and Juliet where there was the exact situation. He smiled and began reciting. "Lady, by yonder blessed moon I swear. That tips with silver all these fruit- tree- tops-." Alright he knew that made no sense to him but it looked poetic enough and he hoped she would like it.

To his ignorance he had no idea that Naina had been in love with Romeo and Juliet to such extent that she had memorized each and every dialogue of it that she recognised this one too. Oh she had loved the balcony scene the most and since then had dreamt about it being in real life. Her life. She was so excited and thanked God. "Oh thank you God so much. Thanks a lot." He found her behaviour rather strange as to why she was thanking God. His answers were soon given, "you don't know how happy I am after you said that Rajveer."

"are wah yeh to bus itne me hee maan gayee," he spoke under his breath and then patted his back, "wah beta Rajveer you're the best."

"Since I've read the whole Romeo and Juliet I've been dreaming of my own Romeo and I'd no idea that my prayers shall be heard so soon. Oh keep reciting, please keep reciting." She wrapped her arms around herself in a hug and swayed around.

That took the smile off his face as he realised that by saying those lines he had hit his own leg with the axe. He began thinking about the further lines but it was at this point that he had shut the book as it was just getting on his nerves. How was he to say anything further when he didn't even know what to say?

"Oh wait, aage kee line to meree hai." She gave a dramatic pose and then began, "O swear not by the moon, the inconstant moon, that monthly changes in her monthly orbs, lest that thy love prove likewise variable."

He didn't understand a word but it was as if he couldn't help himself and automatically he recited the following line of it, "what shall I swear by?"

"Do not swear at all; or if thou wilt, swear by gracious self, which is the god of my idolatry, and I'll believe thee."

That was it as these thees and thys and thous were getting on his nerves. "Ab aage mujhse nahi hota Naina. Me yaha tumse kuch kehne aaya hu or wo me tumhe apne hee andaaz me kahunga." He took out a flute from inside of his coat and then started playing a tune. She was surprised at first but then loved his tune and began swaying along with it.

He looked up at her and began singing.

"yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

He put the flute away and looked up towards her as if putting his heart out to her.

"yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

Dekha maine dekha

Jabse tujhko dekha

Kuch bhi na socha na samjha

Dil de diya re

Hogaya re hogaya is dil ka kaam re

Hogaya re hogaya dil tere naam re

yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

On the other side of the KMA grounds Alekh and Neelu were also strolling around and Neelu was still not that happy with him and he was looking for all sorts of ways. He found a bike and came, speeding towards her and got her off guard.

"Maahi ve, o mere maahi ve."

Seeing him with the bike excited her and she hopped on behind him and then they sped off out of the gates.

"Sona sona mera maahi sona sona, sona sona

Sona sona mera maahi sona sona, sona sona"

Back to Rajveer and Naina and now Rajveer leaned against the lamp post and kept staring at her innocence.

"Tauba meree tauba tera nakhra kamaal hai

Tauba meree tauba tera nakhra kamaal hai"

She joined in.

"Taarif karne me tu bara bemisaal hai"

He kept staring at her

"sone sone mukhre pe zulfo ka jaal hai"

She twirled around dancing joyfully

"Mera naseeb hai tu, yeh mera khayaal hai

Hogaya re hogaya mujhko bhi pyaar re

He leaped with joy as finally she said what he wanted to hear and danced around in excitement.

"Hogaya re hogaya deewaana yaar ye"

yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

Neelu and Alekh had successfully left the grounds of KMA and now were lying under the starry night on the bike leaning on each other. Both of them were in deep thought when Alekh began.

"Bara hee puraana love ka takya kalaam hai"

Bara hee puraana love ka takya kalaam hai"


She hugs his waist resting her head on his chest

"Main hu teri tu hai mera charcha yeh aam hai"

He sat up and pretended he wanted to leave

"Chal hat jaane bhi de mujhe bara kaam hai"

But she prevented him from leaving and pushed him back against the bike

"Tu hee subha hai meri, tu hi meree shaam hai

Hogaya re hogaya mujhko bhi pyaar re

He smiled and pushed her off him and began dancing around and she joined him

"Hogaya re hogaya deewaana yaar ye"

yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

Now Rajveer had finally made his way towards the pipe leading up to her room and was slowly climbing it up to get to her.

"Dekha maine dekha

Jabse tujhko dekha

Kuch bhi na socha na samjha

Dil de diya re

Hogaya re hogaya is dil ka kaam re

Hogaya re hogaya dil tere naam re

He was nearly there now and she kept encouraging him to come on further.

yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover

Yo my love, my love jaane ja yo my lover"

Finally he had reached her and was just going to seal the kiss with her when unannounced Pooja entered the room alerting Naina and she turned around with a fright and in that excitement she accidently punched Rajveer in the face which made him loose balance and he fell down. "RAJVEER!" She looked down with horror as he fell down with a loud thud. "I'm so sorry, are you okay?"

The fall was quite bad and he lay there still recovering from the shock. His eyes were left wide as if he had become delirious or something. For a while he kept hearing this fluttering noise reaching his ears but couldn't see anything. Then something was being said to him in slow motion and he woke up from the trance and saw Naina standing up in her room looking down at him and shrieking about him being alright or not.

"Rajveer are you alright?" she was really worried and Pooja also came to her side after she heard the shriek and was surprised to find Rajveer lying down there. Both of them knew it must have hurt him a lot.

He just kept staring, still recovering. Eventually he was able to sit up and he felt his hurt head and let out a short groan, "I'm fine Naina." He stood up with some difficulty and now he felt demented. He tried walking but his legs were just crooked. "I think." He spoke under his breath as he made each step. She just kept staring after him but couldn't go down to help the poor thing.

Rajveer was walking back towards his room in the same manner. Soon he was graced by Ritu and two of her other friend's presence and when they saw him struggling they became hysterical and crowded over him.

"Oh my God RV what happened to you?" Ritu spoke as she held onto him.

"Yes what happened to you poor baby?" one of her friends took hold of his other arm and supported him.

No matter how much he denied he always loved this undivided attention from the girl cadets. He groaned further and the girls all fussed over him and supported him, helping him reach his room in the boys' hostel.

When they reached his room he gave them his heartfelt thanks and released himself from their grip. But they were not ready to leave him and kept fussing over him and saying he' will need help going in. He will need help changing and all sorts of excuses. However he did manage to get rid of them and rushed inside the room shutting it tight behind him. Running away from these girls was next to impossible. Just when he thought he was safe the door was barged open and he fell in front with a jerk onto the bed. What was with people and throwing him off guard tonight?

"Oh I'm so sorry RV I didn't know you were here." Yudi walked in casually not even bothering to help him up. "I thought the door was blocked. Why were you standing there anyways?"

"Jee let me think? This is my room so I CAN BLOODY WELL DO WHATEVER I LIKE!" He was annoyed and plus was really tired that all his frustration came out. His whole body hurt as if he had done some vigorous exercise.

"Yaar tu to aise akar raha hai jese wo Major Nair tere kamre me aagaya ho."

The very mention of Major Nair sent chills down Rajveer's spine. "Don't remind me man. Os saale mucchar ka chehra mere sapno mese bhi nahi jaata. Phirse kal parade lagane waala hai ham sabki."

"I know." Yudi also looked a bit dreary hearing Major Nair's name. He saw Rajveer was groaning massaging his muscles so he helped him relax.

From the girl's hostel opposite Neelu had returned and was just waving goodbye to Alekh and her gaze fell on the two in the room. She found it too curious as to what Yudi was doing to Rajveer and from her side it looked a whole lot than what actually was going on. The way Yudi was massaging and the way Rajveer was enjoying was only telling her one thing. She shook her head with horror. "I knew all of them were good for nothing loosers. I'll have to keep my Alekh away from this influence." Then she began wondering something, "kahi isliye to wo mujhse aise kabhi ukhra ukhra rehta hai?" then she dismissed the idea out of her head and made it clear that Alekh loved her and only her and was completely straight. She shut the curtains as the scene in front was making her sick.

As Navin was reaching his room he had seen the girls rushing out of the hostel and he had become curious as to what was going on. Then he heard them say Rajveer's name and that boiled his head further. This was the limit he thought that not only did he steal Ritu away from him tonight but also had brought her here till his room. Now he definitely was going to kill him.


End of part.

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