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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana866

wow pragya what a nice part

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dear

arry kisna kaha ki tum accha nahi kihti OMG u r amazing writter

just FABULAS as me NAHI NAHI USSE BHI ZYADA

im serious

maina tumhare kafi sare parts pade hai different ff's mai tum bahut accha likhti ho

aur mera request par likhi im gladabout it

thank u sooooooooooo much for writting it on my request dear

love u!!!!!!!!!!

plz continue any one


love

sana.

aww sooo sweet thanku soo much.... 😛 yeah ab aap bhi continue kare iske saath ya phir apne ff ke saath plsss.... waitng for the update like helll
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Posted: 15 years ago
IN COLLAGE

Samrat went to find dia he spot her sittingg in basketball court .

S: said dia i am looking for all over the collage and u sitting in bb court .

D: why the hell your looking for me goo from here i dont need any one right now goo samratt .

S: i am also not intresting to see u i am here coz chashmish said tht we need to talk about what u did was wrong.

D: why there is nothing to talk about.

S: there is alots of things to talk about friendship and trust and many more u hurt your own cousin sis chashmish as biggest heart ever what every u said in anger i know but its not right to insilet everone not good at all candy chashmish still cares for u what u said was wrong annie told us tht u always try to seprat me from chashmish friendship tht i have only her first u think what u said it mide hurt anyone our soo call friends just remember friend need each other dia please to understand what u doing was wrong if u dont trust anyone of us then its better we our not be friend anymore coz friends shoud be trust each other what ever we share dia dil say soucho chashmish na kabhi bhi tumhay hurt kaya our kabhi tum say ya kaha ka tum friends order qq dati ho our kabhi ya kaha ka tum itna gusa qq karti our raveng qq lati hoo .Chashmish dont hate u she love you damm it she cares for u .

D: samrat i am really sorry for hurting u and gunjan main kabhi nahi chati thi ka tum kabhi bhi gunjan ka krab jayo main jab bhi tum dono ko laga karna ki bhot koshies ki magar her bar mara plan fail ho jata such kahoo samrat mujahy kabhi bhi acha nahi laghta tha jab tum gunjan ka pass hota our bhot kush laghtay jo mujsay bradash nahi hota tha tab main shocha ka gunjan our tummhay lagal kar doo now iam feeling guilty now to hurt my sepical friends and gunjan i will say sorry to her personly coz i hurt her soo much i wana tell u something samrat now i am rageting for not see gunjan love for me.

S: what is it candy what u whana tell me i am listen goo on.

D: sammy i never tell any one that before i remember when i was walking in night some guy try to rape me but gunjay saw tht she rush to help on time she call eveyone accept u coz i said to gunjay dont call u i dont want u to now all thing and thts yy i trying to hurt gunjay i though she did this on perpose all the time i blame her she still help me she stay with me when this all happend again i saw tht guys one more time i was soo scare tht i hug gunjan she made to calm me down guy who try rape me same guy also try rape gunjan luck her mayank saw tht and he fight with those goons then mayank one of the guy hitt mayank on head tht and they runway gunjan and me take mayank to hospital then gunjan call mayank mom and nupur they both come to see him.

S: whyy candyy whyy u hide this from mee why didnt u tell me this it really hurtting me and i dont belive thouse goons try rape u and chashmish i will ask chashmish yy she hide this from me.

D: sammy plzzz dont ask gunjan tht i tell u all tht cozz gunjan ki koi jalti nahi hai its my fault tht gunjan hurt jab ka gunjan kuch bhi nahi kaya mujay bachan ka chakar main bachari khud pass gii tab jaya ka mayank waha pounch gaya mayank ko kafi chote ayai thi zada gunjan ko chote lagi thi even her chashma bhi toot gaya tha mujhay tab assas woha tha she is more cool person then all of us sammy tum bato tum wakii main gunjan say pyar kartay hoo.

S: frist all thanks for sharing i promise i dont tell anyone yesss candyy i love her likee crazyyy next time say jab bhi tum dono ka saat ayas hoo plzz mujahy zore batan i will teach those goons our any one mess with my love and friends i will kick those goons ass for sure.

D: sammy can we be friends again i promise tht i never hurt any one sepicaily your chashmish.

S: friends again plzz next time u let me everything dont hide any thing from me heyy i call her chashmish no one alow to call her chashmish only i can call her tht okk .

D: i know sammy only u call her tht just relex i am just messing with u and i will tell sorry to gunjan at home sammy can drop gunjan home cozz i am going with nupur dodo and mayank for shimila cozz principal said tht we have stay for 2 or4 days so ask gunjay to stay with u in your house i dont want her live lone at house just take her stuff from house than sammy and gunjay will stay in your house it is ok for u tht gunjan stay with u.

S: yaa its fine with me i will tell her soon i am soo happy my chashmish will stay at myy house iam luckk personeee.

DIA AND SAMRAT LEFT FROM BASKETBALL COURT

Plzz can someone contuied soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shafoo u really wrote well
plz u only continue next part and than after that part i will try to continue okkkkkkkk dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey wwo love;ly part plss sum1 continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shafoo
plz continue i want to read actually what u thought about it as gunjan and samrat next convowhat will be i mean samrat just now got to know that some one tried to rape gunjan too as she was helping dia but got saved by mayank so i actually want to read a nice part of samrat and gunjan talk if u dont mind can u write plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
IN GUNJAN AND NUPUR ROOM

DIA ENTER GUNJAN ROOM

D: said what the hell u think about i came here to sorry u noo way its soo easy to fool samrat dear i tell him all lie about my fake rape story tell u what i am going for shimila trip with dodo ,nupur and mayank take u stuff get out stay at samrat as long u want dont come back again.

G: what ever u thinking its really wrong ur hurting samrat feeling he is really trusting u and u useing me for u good i will stay with him dont hurt nupur di our mayank and stay out of troble dia u dont know what u losingg.

D: ohh doll what ever i dont care about any one got tht.

Dia left gunjan room

Gunjan is call samrat tring tringg

Samrat pick up his cell

S: hey chashmish whats up tum sound sad laga rahi ho kay baat hai plzz tell me .

G: samrat woh dia is usingg u plzz be carefull she tell me stay out of from bushan house live with u for ever i u coming u pick me now plzz i will tell u proper truth plzz i am all ready done my paking plzz pic me up.

S: heyy chashmish plzz dont cryy i am coming right now dia already tell me the truth so dont need to cry iam coming byee he hang is cell phone
call end

Gunjan is thinking what a bitch is dia she all lieying again she making her fake stories and making samrat to believe her.

Samrat is enter her room saw gunjan in her thought.

S: kaha kho gii plzz come on chalan nahi hai.

G: come out of her thoughts lets go samrat .

they left bushan house

ON THE CAR

S: chashmish may dhak raha ho tum bhot pershan ho kisi baat ko lay ka plzz tell me na.

G: pershan to hoo lakin tumhra ghar jay ka tumhay sub sush baato gi abhi kuch our baat karo hows your bb practies


S: achi thi wasa chashmish tum bhot cutee lage rahyy ho ayasa hee cutee rahana mujhay achi laghti ho ya jo tumhari eyes hai bhot beautifull hai and your lips are rosey pink i like them .

G: blushingg thankss your eyes are also deep and cear i just love your chochlate brown eyes.

S: wah wha chashmish mujahy nahii pata tha ka tum itna acha bola hai mear dil tum pay our fada hai.

and the both reach samrat house.

S: chashmish jii ghar aya gaya hai chala andar.

G: chala samrat jii .

both come out of car and take gunjan bags out as well

IN SAMRAT'S HOUSE

S: chashmish tum change kar ka drect mara room aya jana jo upstair right pay hai our left guest room i will put ur stuff in guest room so get change i will waiting for u in my room ok

G: ok thanks for everything samrat i will meet u in your room

S: no problam take your time when u change u can meet at my room.

gunjan left for guest room to change.

IN GUEST ROOM

G: is thinking samrat is soo nicee then yyy dia useing him maybe dia again lie again about her rape plzz god give me strant to tell samrat a really truth she come out of her thinking
went to take a bath after bath she come out of her to change. then by mistike samrat enter saw gunjan in towel he come close her and said chashmish u look hot in towle and hee left.


Gunjan change in her nighty dress and went for samrat room

IN SAMRAT'S ROOM

G: can i come in.

S: come in chashmish i am wating for u

G: samrat i guess dia tell you rape story about her and me but dia did it on perpose main dia ko save kaya tha iun goons say lakin woh goons dia na send kaya thay dia to save hoo gi thi lakin one of goon rape me but my luck mayank save me take me from goon one of goon hit me as well i really did ask help for dia to call u but she didnt call u at that time i try mayank cell to call u and on the sapker of cell then some other goon guy hit me mayank on tht head and tht when u heard u came i hug u i was soo scare of tht u take both of us in the hospatial i am the one who got rape and hit not dia she did all for her shake when she come to my room she said tht u soo fool easy tht u belive her fake story tht was the reall truth tht day i cryy so much it really hurt to beleive your own cosin sister coud do tht belevie me samrat plzz.

S: chashmish i beleive your i really dont beleive her candy did it on perpose to send tht goons and she telling me all liee about her rape and how she coud do that to hurt u soo much i really hate herr noww did anyone now about this chashmish.

G: samrat only u, mayank and benji now about this.

S: chashmish dont worry ab say dia tumhay kuch bhi nahi kar sakti hai joo tumara saat woha hai woo sub dia ka saat bhi hoo ga tab woh jay ka samji gi mara love ko bhot taklefe punochi hai i never ever talk to her again she used me for her shake.

G: samrat apana acha sayy payara say mood na kahrab karo i dont like your angry look forget tht right now will think about this some other time when u smileee my heart melt samrat soo i dont want u to be angry i know its really hurt u soo where is my sweet hug u come on samrat forget dia now come and hug i really missing your sweet hug .

Samrat and gunjan both hug each other.

S: you are right chashmish yy shoud i spoil my mood for tht bitch dia soo i lovee youu chashmish kay tum mara saat humasha raho gi meari wife baank will u marry me chashmish or may tumhay kabhi hurt nahi karo ga i always with u when u need me.

G: yes samrat i will marry u i alsoo love you main hummash tumra saat raho gi i aslo never leave you when u also need i always there for u.

SAMRAT AND GUNJAN FRANCH KISS EACH OTHER AND THEY BOTH WENT TO SLEEP DRAME ABOUT EACH OTHER .

PLZZ SOMEONE CONTUIED





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Posted: 15 years ago
hmm lovelyyyyyyyyyy shafoo fabulas
hey now u cntinue dea actually i would like too but im really dam busy these day and in my 3 ff's too so u guys keep continueing i will continue when i get time and again shafoo it was AWESOME FANTABULAS update dear
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
ur welcome dear but really u write really well AWESOME 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
IN THE MORNING IN SAMRAT HOUSE

Guest Room

Gunjan coming her room to samrat she is thinking yy not today i wear samrat clothes for change shoud i ask samrat for his clothes thts be better if i ask him she take her towel went for samrat room.

IN SAMRAT ROOM

G: knocking on samrat room door can i come in samrat

S: come in chashmish yy u always get permeation to come in my room.

G: coz i dont maybe u mide change soo tht yy i get permeation frist ok can i ask you samething.

S: yea sure what u wana ask.

G: can i brow your clothes for today for change i just though to ware your clothes for change i can ware it plzzzzzzzzzzzz.

S: yes u can take my clothes chashmish .

Gunjay hug samrat and said thank u thank u samrat i am reallyy happy she kiss on his cheeks and take his clothes and left samrat room to her room to take a bath.

Samrat is blushingg and thinking and tauching is cheeks whats with chashmish today she always wear her clothes now she want to ware my clothes iam soo damm happyy my chashmish is finely happy i cant wait to see her how she look in my clothes. samrat also went take bath.

IN GUEST ROOM AGAIN

Gunjay came out of bath she forget her clothes on the bed she heard some knokingg at the door she said who is there.

S: its me chashmish your samrat .

gunjan open the door she forget is in the towel .

S: chashmish u look hot in towel and wet hair really suit u

Gunjan realize she is in the towel ohh damm i forget my clothes on bed she said samrat come inside u can sit on bed well give me sometime plzz let me change frist .

Samrat came inside sit on her bed

S: chashmish it ok i am waiting for u so we will go toughter for breakfast table .

Gunjan said thanks and she went in bathroom to change after sometime she come out and wearing samrat clothes.

S: Chashmish u look damm cute in my pjs .

G: is blushingg and said thankss .

They both left the guest room

IN THE KITCHEN

S: chashmish what shoud we eat for breakfast?

G: how about all your favourite dishes i will make it for u.

S: Chashmish i really missing home food can make aloo ka paratwa plzzz chashmish bhot arsa hoo gay hai home food kahay wha .

G: yea sure samrat i will make it for u sweeti itana pyar sayy kaho ga to main hummasha tummhara liya tummhai favaurite dish bana doo dii lets makes aloo ka paratwa.

Gunjay making aloo ka paratwa and samrat holding her waist he said thanks chashmish.

G: no problam sweeti i really love to making for u something tht make me happy.

S: how sweet of u chashmish you really touch my heart what u said its really mean to me alots thanks.

G: plzz dont said thanks again.

they both finish there breakfast and left for living room

IN living room

gunjan and samrat sitting toughter .

S: Chashmish what shoud we do about dia she not here she is in shlima .

G: samrat jaha thak main dia ko janti hoo woh shlima main nahi hai woo shahid annie ka ghar hoo gi jahn tht mujhay yaad hai princi na sirf mayank our nupur di ko shlima baja hai koi dance compatician tha our uday bahiya ko miss tammana na bula tha he also stay for some 2 or 4 days with miss tammana.

S: WHATTTTTTTTT ARE TALKING ABOUT CHASHMISH DIA DIDNT WENT FOR SHLIMA .

G: yes samrat she didnt went to shlima when princi said tht only 2 people go from excel collage tht was nupur and mayank i was with them when princi anouncce tht i was there with them thts true.

S: can u tell me chashmish what dia said to u when u came with me in my house.

know gunjan is cryingg badly she hug samrat tightly she is still cryingg.

S: plzz chashmish calm down dont cryy plzz tell me what dia said to u when i saw your paking your all stuff.

G:mara main humat nhi hai abhi kuch kahana ki phir bhi bata dati ho dia said u soo easy to fool and beleive her fake stories to me dia said me get out from bhushan house for ever stay with samrat i dont want to see you face tht yy i call u pick me up from bhushan house i am not leaving u or sameone dont deserve u i cant talk right now plzz dont spoil your cute mood for soo called friend dia.

S: your right chashmish what we do now do u have any plan for dia.

G: i know someone who can help us frist we need to call benji then i will tell our plan u guys frist samrat u call benji right now tell him to come tommoro no your cell tht woud be nice better not to disterb anyone u call benji i will call my bestest friend he will dafently help me/

S: chashmish who is your bestest friend plzz tell naa.

G: ok he is my childhood friend from austrila every girl is crazyy for him he never hangout with them hee always hang out with me my uncle vikram rathod and his come to marona for some holidays he always play with me i share with him everthing samrat and sometime with di now iam sharing with u ever thing coz ireally trust u

S: soo u never saw him again .

G: nopeeee i never saw him it long time now if i saw him i will tell u frist soo u can call benji now i call him .

S: ok i call benji and u call you friend i really not mind gunjan about your friend whoever he or she is.

G: thanks for trustingg me

Samrat calling benji now tringg tringg pick up damm itt

B: pick is cell now he said hello who is it

S: benji dude it me samrat .

B: ohh hii samrat how are you

S: iam fine benjii can u come to my house tommoro plzz chashmish as some plan to tell us.

B: ok dude i will come tommro at your plzz byee thanks for telling me

S: no problam dude byee see u at my place.

call end

samrat left for living room

IN LIVING ROOM AGAIN

G: heyy ammy how are you

Ar : heyy pari iam fine what about u hows going everything

G: everything is fine ammy soo when are u joing excel collage.

Ar: tommoro i will join your collage soo to meet u i am soo damm missingg u pari.

G: iam also missingg u can come frist to samrat house tommoro then u may join excel collage after plzz.

Ar: okk pari i will come frist at your samrat house after tht i join excel collage byyee pari take care yourself.

G: byee ammy u also take care your self as well see u tommoro.

call end

Samrat went living room sit beside gunjan.

S: chashmish did u talk to your friend what he said .

G: yes i talk to him he will come tommoro at your place samrat he alsoo joining our collage how cool naa.

S: yea tht was cool i am happy for u chashmish he will help us as well.

G: yea tht for sure he will help us.

Samrat and gunjan left from livingg room .

they both hug each other .

S: goodnight chashmish
G: goodnight samrat sweet dreams

they both went to there rooms

plzzz someone contuied soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pragya plz tum continue karona mai karti thi par mera exams hai 25 tak so i cant im busy in studies so plzzzzzzz u continue
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sana

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