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Posted: 15 years ago
gve me sum tym sana plss.... may be by evening i will update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
ahhhhhhhhh koi toh continue karooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
sonam i am sorry dear 4th se exams hai aur abhi main bangkok chali gayi thi.. toh nahi ho paya... i can do al this after 15th only
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Posted: 15 years ago
someone please continue :)

Raviie.xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok i will continue.. sine sana was requseting me for a long tym..
so this update is dedicated to sana.. dnt knw whether it will be good or bad..

ok next day in college
mayur had gone for academic meet to shimla

corridor
g: samrat mijhe di ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai..
s: janta honn chashmish
g: pata nahi di theek se pahuchi bhi hogi yaa nahi... mujhe toh bahut chinta ho rahi hai
s: chashmixh.. um fikar maat karo.. woh theek hogi
g: ha woh toh hai phir bhi..di pehli baar kahi akele safar kar rahi hai
s: akele... kaha akele uske saath mayank hai na..
gunjan nods her head
sam coming closer to gunjan and says aur tumhare saath main
gunjan blushes..
s: aaye hai.. ek baat bolu
g: bolo
s: jab tuum sharmati hon naa toh bhaut cute lagti hoon
and then touches he r nose the way he always..
gunjan blushes harder
g: bas ab flirt karna band karo aur class ke liye chalo
gunjan starts moving and sam catches he r hand
s: chasmish (in a way as if he is tired and innocent bacha)
g: kya hia samrat
s: mujhe class nahi jaan ( making a puppy face)
g: samrat nahi.. hum classes bunk nahi karenge.... exams bhi pass aa rahe hai..
samrat now with a naughty smile
s: toh maine kab kaha ki tum bhi mere saath classes bunk karo..
gunjan looks that side coz shez nervous
g: woh woh....
s: kya woh woh kar rahi hoon
g:mujhe class ke liye der horahi hai mai jaa rahi hoon..
s: arrey ek min... main bhi tum,hare class main parta hoon
g: pata hai
s: toh saath saath chale
g: par tum bunk kar rahe the naa
s; nahi .. woh toh sirf asie hi tha... main tumhe chod kar kahi nahi jaane waala
both smile and go for shukla sirs class... they sit together..
in the class..
samrat holds gunjan's hand
g: kya kar rahe ho
s: pyaar
g: samraaaat
s: chashmish
g: pchh class main dhyan do
s: tum samne ho toh dhyan kahi aur kaise jayenga?
g: uufo samart .. sir abhi hume daatenge
s: acha main yeh band kar dunga agar tum mujhe kuch promise karo toh
g: promise kya
s: ki college ke baad pura din hum akale ghumge... as in DATE pe jayenge
g: DATE ?????
s: ha kyun?
g:nahi
samrat holds her hand more tightly and coes closer
s: sochlo
g: sochliya
s:paaka coing more closer
gunjan gt nervousand then said a yes
g: theek hia chlaenge ab pls chodo
samrat leaves her hand
i love u chasmish
next continue

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Posted: 15 years ago
great update .. was very good, loved all the SAJAN romances
chooo chweeeet ;D

add me to your pm list, n do pm me when you next update. thanks
will be waiting

Raviee.xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
IN SAMRAT HOUSE

door bell is ringing at door it was benji and armaan at the same time they both came.

Samrat open the door hey u guys come inside we are waiting for you guys .

armaan and benji went inside after samrat closing the door.

IN LIVINGG ROOM

G: Hey benji hey ammy.

Ar&B: said toughter heyy gunjan.

G: ammy ghar find karana mai koi problam to nahi whoi hai.

Ar: pari koi problam nahi whoi hai thanks for giving samrat address.

G: koi baat nahi ammy did u meet my samrat.

Ar: yea i did saw your samrat hahahahaha tell u what your choise is amazinggg he is super cool dude.

G: ammy sometimes mujhay bhot dar laghta hai kahi main apana samrat ko naa kho doo.

Ar: Pari itna acha insaan hai samrat wo kabhi nahi chay ga ka tum daro iusay khona say samrat such main acha hai ab tum mujhay samrat say nahi milwal rahi ho.

G: soo soory ammy i forget about samrat.

Gunjan calling samrat idhar ayo.
samrat went in living room.

S: heyy chashmish tumna mujhay bula hai.

G: haan samrat meet my childhood friend armaan this is my sweetheart samrat.

Ar: heyy samrat dude how are you.

S: i am fine dude meet my friend benji.

B: heyy dude nice to meet u gunjanis really lucky to have caring friend like you.

Ar: Pari is lucky she have super cool dude samrat is also nice person from heart.

S: Thanks dude.

S: chashmish tumhara pass koi plan hai dia ka liya.

G: samrat meara pass plan to hai lakin ammy ko yea karana para gaya .

Ar: guys kon say plan hai jo sirf main he kar sakta ho.

G: ammy meari ek cousin hai dia jo mujhay say bhot nafrat karti hai jo kissi bhi gandi haad thak jaya sakti hai i got rape coz of her.

Ar: WHATTTTTTTTTT THE HELL U TALKING ABOUT PARI U GOT RAPED BY YOUR COUSIN DIA.

S: dude this is true dia is also my ex best friend she used me as well and telly me fake story of herand chashmish.

Ar: I am in your plan pari what i have to do.

G: ammy sub girls tum par marti hai kay tum dia pata sakta ho apana pyar main i just want know ka ayasa kyoi kari rahi hai meara saat our samrat ka saat jab dia khud say such bati gi akhar kay chati hai hum say.

Ar: pari tum worried mat karna samrat tum say ek baat pucho dude tum too bhot acha person ho to dia jasi girl ka dost kasa ban gay she dont deserve your friendship.

S: dude plzzz just forget about dia right now i dont want talk about her your right dude she didnt deserve my friendship its just my mistike tht i trust her i though she was nice friend of me but i am wrong soo i dont wana talk about dia plzzzzzzzzzz.

Ar: ok as u wish dude soo samrat tell me how you met pari.

S: Chashmish our main hospaital main frist time miley tha.

Ar: heyy what guys saying u guys met in hospital in frist time most pepole meet at colloge our park.

G: that was true ammy me and samrat met in hospital frist time i will tell u story abou us how we meet?

Ar: just tell me your story plzz pari.

G: ok here we go it was few days back main community libray say wapas aya rahi thi main dhaka ka kuch goons samrat ko mara raha tha danda say dhori whoi jaldi samrat ka pass ayai thi on time when he about fell i hold him no one is there i try call for help then some saw us i tell him plzz help me to take the samrat in hospital plzz its emergency plzz guy help me i take samrat to hospital we reach hospital .

FLASHBACK

IN HOSPITAL

we reach hospital i said it emergency plzz nurse can call doctor plzz tht boy is soo injet plzz nurse.

NU: plzz lady be pashiant i u stay here i call doc.
nurse is left call of doctor.

Gunjan phone is ringing she pick it up.

G: hello dii how are you.

N: gunji main theek ho main bhot parashan hoo abhi tha to nahi ayai ghar .

G: di main hospital hoo kisi boy ko goons na bhot danday mara hai abhi bhi main na ius hold kaya ho hai doctor ka wait kara rahi hoo abhi phone rakho bye i think doctor it here.

N: byee take care you and boy .

call end

D: tht boy nurse take tht boy to ICU i will start op it was searies ingery .

D: lady thank you agar app time par na ayati na isa larka ko kuch bhi ho sakta tha app iss larka ko janti hai.

G: nahi doctor main ina nahi janti yy any problam doctor.

D: ya paper sing karana hai to hee hum iss laraka ka op kar sakta hai.

G: doctor main sing kar dhaty ho i dont care just save tht boy plzz doctor .

D: ok i will try my best thanks once again here is boy cell phone if any call for his friend jst tell them come to city hospital ok.

G: ok doctor.

doctor went I.C.U OP OF THT BOY.

Gunjan was walking then boy cell is ringingg.

G: hello

B: heyy samrat yaar kaha hai tu main kitna perashan ho raha ho abhi tha dia pass nahi poncha.

G: hello app ius larka ka friend hai to plzz jaldi say app city hospital aya jaya qq ka app ka friend u call samrat he is in city hospital.

B: WHATTTT samrat city hospatal hai i am coming thanks for tell me byeeeeeeee.

call is end

Benji arrive at city hospital.
benji saw beutifull girl sitting there he reach her.

B: hello app waho phone wali hoo na.

G: yes main wahoi hoo. Heyy iam gunjan bushan

B: heyy i am Benji main ho ius larka ka bestfriend.

G: then nice to meet u i am your best friend saver.

B: really thank you soo much for saving my friend can u tell me what happend to him.

G: i just saw some goose are hitting your best friend with danda on his head n shoulders i ran to him save him on time.

B: thankss.

G: no problam.

after tht boy op doctor came to us .

D: lady u can meet him now thanks for everything to save him .

G: no problam doctor.

B: hey doctor uncle how are you .

D: i am fine benji u and tht lady can meet my son now .

G: doctor plzz just call me gunjan plzz.

D: preatty name

G: thanks


now gunjan and benji went to see tht boy .


IN samrat hospital room

B: dude main to bhot dar tha kahi main apan sub say acha friend na kaho doo.


S: benji main theek hoo main kabhi tumhay nahi charo dude ya preety girl kon hai tumhar saat.

B: ya gunjan bushan hai jisna tumhay bachaya hai some goose say.

S: hey gunjan i am samrat shargill nice to meet u can we be friend .

G: sure samrat friends .

they both shake hands.

S: chashmish kay tum plzz ya bato i wana share with u something.

gunjan went to sitt near him.

S: main tumhra thank you kasa karo tum bhot achi ho mujhay jasa larka ko tum na save kaaya hai plzz .

G: samrat tum bhot acha insaan hoo i am glad tht iam your friend u are lucky to have friend like benji he is soo caring person ek baat yaad rakhan apani sari problam mujhay bata sakta ho u can trust me khabi apani masoom chara ko is super cool attuied me mata daba dana qq ka tum bhot cute bho hoo inocent bho ho jab hum baat kara ga tab tum samrat bana kabaat karo ga mujhay okk

S: ok chashmish tell u what ajj thak mujhay kisi nah inna pyara coment nahi kaya his eyes are now teary .

G: heyy plzz dont cryy samrat u dosent look nice in tears i dont want to see u like i promise i will take reveng for tht goose how hit u ek ek blood ka reveng loo gii i am not fread of tht goose .


S: how sweet of u chashmish phela main tum kabhi collage main nahi dhaka .


G: qq ka jab meara our di frist day tht to app nahi thay bb precite kar raha hi iusa baad main app ko kabhi nahi dhahka ajj miley hai frist time .

samrat hug gunjan she also hug him back .


samrat also discharge for hospital samrat and benji also drop gunjan at her house then they left.

Flashbach ends

now someone contuied soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome work safoo plz some one continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww come on someone pleassseeee Continue (:

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Posted: 15 years ago
i am contuied with pragya little ff story

Samrat went to pick gunjan from bhushan house

IN BHUSHAN HOUSE

samrat ring the door bell waiting for to open on door was open and it was gunjan on the door.

G: samrat plzz andar ayao outside kyon kara ho.

samrat came inside the house


IN LIVING ROOM

S: chashmish u look nice

G: thanks lakin main abhi tayar bhi nahi hoai .

S: lakin Chashmish tum wasa he bohot achi lag rahi ho

G: samrat plzz just wait here i will be back soon

S: jaldi anna plzz i am waiting here.

G: ok i will try my best just wait here.

gunjan left upstaris


UPSTARIS

nupur and gunjan room

G: suhani plzz downstaris samrat aya hai plzz jay ka samrat ka pass batay main just quick shower laya ka ayti ho

Su: acha theek hai main jaya rahi ho jaldi ayan .

G: thanks suhani

Su: no problam ab jaldi say bathroom jay.

suhani left for living room and gunjan went for bathroom.


IN LIVING ROOM AGAIN

Su : hey samrat kasa ho ajj to tum bohot handsome lag raha hoo nazar na laga she put eyeliner dot in behind samrat ear.

S: said thanks suhani your soo nice person.

Su: bas bas mahakan na laga janti ho kitni achi ho.

S: nahi such main tum nice person ho.

S: abhi thak chashmish nahi ayai suhani

Su: aya jaya gi woh bathroom main hai .

gunjan came back in living room she is wearing black and silver anarkali suit with matching silver earings and shoes

S&Su : together wowow lookingg dam beautifull

S: ajj meari chashmish sab say zyada khosurat lag rahi hai kisi ki nazar na laga .

G: thanks samrat ab chala waran hum late ho jaya ga date ka liya .

S: ha chalo na chashmish main kab say wait kar raha hoo.

G: how sweet mear cute samrat.

G: suhani main shahid late ayoo tho tum sleep kara lana our kuch kaha bhi lana ok dia main ya uday bhayia main say mara puchoo to kah dhan ka main samrat ka saat ho mostly uday hee poucha ga.

Su: ok gunjan dont worry about me enjoy your date with samrat.


samrat and gunjan left bhushan house.


they reach beautifull hotal samrat book for 2

IN THE HOTAL

G: samrat yea hotal to bohot acha hai i really Love it .

S: i am glad u love it.

S: Chashmish tum bohot hee beautifull lag rahii hoo ki main kushi say beoshhhhhhhhhh na ho he about fell gunjan hold him from his colar.

G: samrat i am sooo luck girl ka tum meri life main aya our itni sara kushayia dhayi hai.

S: chashmish ya kuch bhi nhi hai tumhra samana tum sab say beautifull girl ho i ever met .

S: may I have dance with my lovely sweet beautifull chashmish.

G: yes plzz u may dance with me.

they both danceing on songTum Miley from movie Tum Miley

song is end now they both went for there table they both order the same food rajma chawl .


S: bend on his keen he take gunjan hand and said Chashmish kay tum humasha ka liya meari life partner bano ki will u marry me main yea nahi janta ka baki sab kay shoch ga laking tum mara liya bohot kuch ho chashmish kay bato your sooo sepacil to me i will never hurt u .

G: in happy tears yes samrat main humsha ka liya tumhari life partner bana ka liya tyar ho tum mari life hoo samrat mujhay our kuch nahi chaya tumhra saat our trust he kafi hai I soo luckk girl i will be happy to become mrs gunjan samrat shergill I LOVEEEEEEEEE YOU SAMRAT.

S: I LOVEEEEEEEEEEE YOU TOOOOOOO CHASHMISH

and there order is arive and tyhey both finish there dinner

went for beach of sometime.

IN BEACH

S: i am soo happy chashmish ka u said yes been my life partner for ever Chashmish tum waqi sab say sweet person hoo our main kabhi bhi tumhay dhuk nahi dho gay humsha kuch rakho ga kyon kay tum mara pyar hooo main kabhi bhi tum hurt nahi dhak sakta .

G: samrat I am happy as well ka tum mara life partner ho mujhay our kuch nhi chaya god say kyon ka god nahi mujahy tum jasa sweet boyfriend and to be husband daya hai lakin ek cheese ka darr laghta hai ka koyi mujhay tumhay na chean laya main tumhay nahi kohna chati ho samrat.

S: plzz darna band karo mujahy ko tum say lagh nahi kara ga ya gi main humsha tumhra saat doo ga plzz smilee now

G: thanks samrat mara humsha saat dahna ka iam soo happy ab mujhay kisi say bhi darna ki zrrot nahi u will always with me i am soooooooo happy.

S: thts like my chashmish .

G: samrat bohot raat ho gi hai ab hummay chala chaiya .

S: ok chashmish lets go.

samrat and gunjan left the beach.


IN BHUSHAN HOUSE AGAIN

S: Chashmish kay mujhay good night long kiss nahi mil sakti

G: bhadmash theek hai phele eyes close karo.

Samrat close his eyes gunjan went soo close to him 1 cm close to his lips .

Gunjan franch kiss on the samrat lips both of them kissingg sooooo deep out of breath open your eyes now.

samrat open his eyes he said wow chashmish your wonderfull kisser ok gud night chashmish i never forget that date

G: thanks samrat u also good kisser and i am also never forget tht date byee have sweet dream see u at college.

S: byeee chashmish same to have sweet dream.

samrat left from bhushan house gunjan also went inside.

plzz someone contuied .








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