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MoNayaHolicPrag thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmm sana y dnt yu try and write one part here since u write such gr8 ffs
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

hmm sana y dnt yu try and write one part here since u write such gr8 ffs

ok pragya i will write the next part only for u just give me some time 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

As soon as benji left sam turned towards gunjan

S:so chashmish lets go

G:ha chalo she said still blushing seeing sam as he was staring at her from up to down

They reached college and they were walking in corridor when sam saw dia with annie and started thinking what benji said to him gunjan senced the tense look on sam face

G:kya hua samrat

S:kuch nahi

G:kya baat hai ab ak toh acche the achanak I mean is everything alrght

S:yeh chashmish everthing is alright he lied

G:ok than lets go

S:where

G:class achoo……….

S:chashmish lagta hai tumhai kaafi sardi ho gayi hai

G:nahi samrat woh bas achoo…………..

S:dekha

G:achoo………pata nahi achoo……….achanak sa kaise aaaaachoo…….. shuru ho gaye acchoo………….

S:oh god chashmish tumhe kitni sardi hogayi hai lets go to doctor

G:no samrat its ok achoo………..

S:no ay u r coming c'mon

G:sam achoo…………… just than benji came

B:hi guys

G:achoo…………

B:uff…. Gunjan tumhai zukham hao oh god ab kya Karen

S:kya kare kya doctor ka pass chalet hai

G:achoo………….

B:nahi jaa saktai

S:kyun

G:achoo………….

B:kyun ki bahar barish ho rahi hai aur agar gunjan ko bahar la gaya toh gunjan ko aur sardi ho jayegi

G:achoo……….

S:toh ab kya karain he thought for sometime idea

G:achoo……..

S:come chashmish come with me he took her to canteen sit her I will be back in a min after some time he got back here come my chashmish special adrakh wali chai

G:thanx sam achoo………….

S:first drink it chashmish

G:achooo………………..i cant mujhe itna chikhain aa rahi hai achoo……….

S:ok hmm just drink a sip im sure u will be fine

G:ok achoo…………. She drank achoooooooooo because of her continuos sneezing her nose got red and with red nose she was looking more januable to sam he touched her nose achoo…………… she smiled

S:chashmish u r looking gorgeous with red nose she blushed hayye mai mar jawa blush karte hua toh tu kayamath dikhti hoon she blushed more hard and than again sneez achoo………… and than got up with tea In her hand just than dia came their and she slipped full tea on dia acidentlly while turning because of her continous sneezing achoo…………..achoo………….

This small part is for pargya hmm I did not got in mind much more scenes so I wrote a short one I hope u will like it dear

Plz some else continue guysssssssssss

Love

sana.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pragya if u want u ca continue or anyone else here can continue but plz continue yaar
MoNayaHolicPrag thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
how sweet sana thnx so much......
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Posted: 15 years ago
IN CANTEEN

D : heyy u ruined my dress gunjan i will never leave u i distroy your lifee u will never bhii happy in lifeee again u steel my sammy for me i will take reaveng from u for sure.

G: achoo i didnt achoo do at porpuse dia iam feel sick achooo.

Samrat to dia

S: dia tum na agar chashmish ko kuch kaha to mujhay say bhot bura hoo jaya ga zara bhi chashmish ki eyes main tears aya to main iuss nahi choro gay ek our baat dia tum jo plan kara rahi hoo chashmish ko tears dhana ko suno loo tum phela mujhay samana kara na hoo gaa i dont like tht people dia are friendship is over jo kuch kara hai tum kao agar chashmish ko zara bhi inuksan pouncha to tum ko mujhay say guzrana hoo ga for you now iam samrat shargill do not call me sammy our sam i am stranger for u if anyone hurt chashmish they face me frist.


D: Sammy u never call me dia u always call me candy now for that bitch gunjan u broke my friendship with u .

S: mind your tange dia i didnt want to break are friendship but u show tht how mean your are to your cousin sister if anything happend to my chashmish then forget tht iam your friend its not coz of chashmish is it u tht i broke our friendship i never thought tht u can cross your limits benji is always right tht ur not nice person i never belive benji tht ur not nice persone but now i know tht u will cross your limits your trying seprate me and chashmish then froget tht u will never seprate me and chashmish neverrrrrrr u can leave now .

D: samrat i will see u and tht bitch gunjan lets go annie.

A: sorry dia i am not going with u anymore u used me ur nerver my friend soo samm is right ur not nice persone byee for ever to our fake friendship.

D: FINEEEEE DONT COME WITH MEEEEEEEE ANNIEE I DONT NEED ANY OF U.

G: achooo dia tum na kabhi bhi friendship ko nahi samaja achooo tum sab ko order dhati ho hoo even samrat ko bhi achoo tum nay kabhi soucha ka samrat kay chata hai achoooo lakin samrat phir bhi tummraha saat date pay gaya chaya iusa acha laga yaa na laga lakin tummhra kushi kay liya woo gaya phir jab tak tum friendship ka meaningg samajo gii tab tak bhot late hoo jaya ga achoooo tum na khud samrat jasa acha dost kho diya hai. Dia ab tummhay koi bhi acha nahii samaja ga achooo ekk mistake kayy liya tum na apana sara friends kho daya hai achoooooooooo tum ab meara kuch nahi bagra sakti ho. soo byeeee diaaaaa


Dia letf canteen.

B: guyss joo hona tha hoo gay agar phir kabhi asa whao to hum sub mile kay iusa handle kara gayy whats say guyss.

G&S: said tougher u are right benji.

A: iam soo sorry samrat and gunjan i never though dia used me for her sake gunjan u are soo right she always give us order guys tell u onemore thing dia always want to used samrat soo she can take raveng for gunjan coz gunjan is more beautifull then her tht yy she is always jelouse coz samrat always with gunjan hee never give her attention to her soo she disied to take raveng.

all gang toughter said WHATTTTTTTTTT.



EVERYONE LEFT FOR THERE CLASSES

plzz can someone contuied


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Posted: 15 years ago
wow shafoo very nicely written
now plz anyone continue
u really wrote nice shafoo
hey pragya were r u dear plz continue
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
MoNayaHolicPrag thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing...
sana u r asking me to write i am not gud at all this....but still i will try wait for few mins
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok here i write

i will continue now its on sana's request
A: ha guys dia ne sam aur gunjan ki frendship ko break karne ki bahut koshish ki
sam was going red with anger....he wantd to slap dia hard
S: kya dia ne hamare saath yeh sab koshish ki.... mujhe laga woh meri bahut ach dost thi...par shayad main galat tha... he leaves from there
G: samrat meri baat toh suno..she goes behind them
G: samrat...
S:chashmish....dia ko yeh sab karne ki kya zarurat thi...
G: samrat hum iss bare main abhi baat nahi karenge.. tum gusse main ho.. tumhare ghra chalte hai waha par baat karenge theek hai
S: shayad tum theek keh rah ho
samrat and gunajn sat on he bike
sam started hs bike and they headed tyowards sam's house
they entered..
G: samrat tum change karlo tab tak main kuch khaane ke liye banati hoon
S:mujhe bhook nahi hai
G: par mujhe hia . koi baat nahi main ghar jakar kha lungi kyunki tum toh khaoge nahi
gunjan turned her face
samrat hugged her from behind
S: acha theek hai jo bana hai bana lo main bhi khaonga.....actual main mujhe bhi bhook lagi hai.. main dia ka gussa khane par kyun utaro
Gunjan turned..
G: hmmm..... ab jao aur change karlo
gunjan made snacks and gajar ka halwa
sam came down
gunjan was settlig the table
they both sat to eat
G:ab samrat bolo tum us samay kya bol rahe the
S: main kya?
G: samrat?? dia ke baare main
S: oh woh.. rehne do chashmish.. mujhe uske baare main baat nahi karni
G: samrat uspar gussa hone se pehle dia ko samajhne ki koshish karo.. mana woh galat thi... par lya tumhe nahi lagta galti tumhari bhi thi
S: meri galti.... shayad ha.. maine usse apna dost jo mana... par chashmish tum dia ka side kyun le rahi ho
G: samrat baat side lene ki nah hia.. pehle tum har waqt doa ke saath rehta the.. phir tu mere saath time spend karne lage iss wajah se shayad um dia ko itna samy nahi de paye..iss leye usne yeh sab kiya
S: woh mujhe bol bhi toh sakt i thi
G: ha par usse bura laga aur shayad gussa bhi.. aur gussa main log kai baar galat kadam uthate hia.. tumhe dia se baat karni chahiye
S":tum theek keh rahi ho par nahi main usse baat nahi karunga..
G: samrat plss mere liye
S: theek hai sirf tumhare liye
by the time they finish there food
gunjan gets up
sam also.. gunjan is abt to go to the kitchen
wen sam holds her hand
G: kya hua
Sam goes closer and hugs her
S: thnx chashmish
okk sum1 continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pragya what a nice part
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dear
arry kisna kaha ki tum accha nahi kihti OMG u r amazing writter
just FABULAS as me NAHI NAHI USSE BHI ZYADA
im serious
maina tumhare kafi sare parts pade hai different ff's mai tum bahut accha likhti ho
aur mera request par likhi im glad about it
thank u sooooooooooo much for writting it on my request dear
love u!!!!!!!!!!
plz continue any one
love
sana.

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