mujhe pyaar hai FF .....open for all...do see - Page 11

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IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowow i like it plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG like it was amazing.......y dont u update dis FF....as d other updaters have vanished!
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy,
amazing part.
u continue this ff.u write so well and will b able 2 carry off the ff very well.
continue soon.
pls pm me wen u continue.
luv
Komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy
awesome part.
continue soon.
u write beautifully.
can u plz pm me wen u continue??
luv
Kinnari.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys i am back

I was busy b/c i went to DC.

ok here it goes.

He brings his face really close to hers while carressing her waist.

gunjan closes her eyes and then ................


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TRING TRING

it is samrat house bell.

S - who the he** is it

S goes and opens the door. There Benji is standing with collar up and hero pose.

Benji goes inside without asking S permission, and hugs G. S sees this and a small smile appear on his face. He loves that B thinks G as his sister.

😊

B goes to the arranged dinning table and starts taking a puri.

S- oh oh wait this is my house. you came without coming in, didnt wish me and starts eating the food.

B- well this is G's house too right! ( gunjan blushes).I came to my sisters house. And all this food is made by Gunjan so I can eat it.

S loves the way G and B are bonded. He wish he to could have a sister.

B-wait a sec. today is our BD. I thought gunjan invited causually. By the way HAPPY BIRTHDAY. (although he knows that is S BD he pretends)

S- (knowing that he pretends)- chalo give my gift.

S takes the gift and keeps it.
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I know it is short but I promise that i will continue later.


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Posted: 16 years ago
well it was amazing plss continue
ur going superb on ur way
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy
amazing part.
continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
luv
Komal.
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Posted: 16 years ago

i'll continue

now d celebration at sam's house is over and its raining heavily outside.gunjan knows that sam will offer 2 drop her.but only then

sam asks benji

to drop her.she is surprised.as soon as both of them leave sam also leaves in d rain on his bike.

Next-benji and gunjan r sitting in an auto and giong home.gunjan thinking sumthing.

Benji-kya soch rahi ho gunjan

Gunjan-mein..nahin to.. kuch nahin

Benji-main janta hoon, tum yahi soch rahi ho na ki hamesha to samrat tumhein khud ghar drop karta hai to

Phir aaj kya hua.zaroor samrat wahin gaya hoga jahaan who apne har b'day par jata hai.

Gunjan-kya! Kahaan?

Benji-apne purane ghar,jahaan usne bachpan mein apne sare b'days apne parents ke sath celebrate kiye hain.

Gunjan is amazed 2 hear this.benji drops her home and goes on.

D next day in college gunjan arrives a bit late and thinks that samrat wud already have cum.

She searches samrat but could'nt find him anywhere .She calls him but he doesn't pick up the phone.then d bell rings and she goes 2 d class.

She could'nt even see samrat in d class and gets worried.After d class she asks benji

Gunjan-benji kya tumne samrat ko dekha hai,mein subah se use dhoondh rahi hoon.

Benji-nahin to,meine bhi use nahin dekha.

Gunjan-u know woh phone bhi nahin utha raha I think hamein uske ghar jaakar dekhna chahiye.

Benji-gunjan mujhe thoda sa kaam hai,tum chalo main wahin pauhanch jaaonga.Or agar koi problem

Ho to mujhe bata dena.

Gunjan-theek hai..

And she leaves for samrat's house.

She reaches dere and knocks at the door,but no one responses.she finds that the door is open and enters inside and calls out

his name,but gets no response.then she enters d bedroom and finds that samrat is deep asleep.

Gunjan-yeh samrat bhi na abhi tak so raha hai,or main bekaar mein hi pareshan ho rahi thi. samrat chalo

Ab ooth jao.

She touches him and realizes dat he is having high fever.

Gunjan-OMG,samrat ko toh bahut tez bukhar hai.

She gets worried and calls benji for help.

Gunjan-hello benji,main gunjan boll rahi hoon,benji tum plz yahaan aa jao,samrat ko bahut tez bukhar hai.

Benji-kya!!gunjan tum tension mat lo,main tumhein ek doctor ka number deta hoon,tum unhe phone

Karke bula lo,aur main jaldi aane ki koshish karta hoon.

Gunjan calls the doc and waits for him to arrive.

D doc arrives and checks on samrat,his pulse,heart beat and temp.

Gunjan-doctor, kya samrat ka temp bahut high hai.

Doc-haan fever toh kafi zaada hai,I think mujhe medicine ki strong dose deni padegi.

Gunjan is very worried and now almost has tears in her eyes when she sees the

Doc preparing an injection for him.Now she becomes even more tensed as she doesn't want 2 c samrat in

Pain.the doc rolls up his sleeve and starts injecting. Samrat moves his head in pain and calls her name chashmishh….Seeing this gunjan holds his hand tightly and says -samrat bas ho gaya and a tear falls from her eye on his hand.

The doc finishes the injection and writes a prescription of medicines.he asks gunjan 2 take care of his food and

Medicines and 2 keep him away from cold.he leaves.

Samrat falls in sleep due 2 inj. and gunjan is sitting beside him holding his hand.she moves her hand on his hair with

concern.suddenly she remembers and dat she has 2 cook sumthing for samrat.she goes 2 d kitchen

and start preparing some food.after nearly an hour she hears a sounfd from samrat's room.hearing dat

she rushes 2wards d room hurriedly n sees dat sam has waken up.

Gunjan-samrau tumhein kuch chahiye tha to mujhe bula lete.

Samrat-kuch nahin bas pani….chashmish tum ab tak yahin ho ?

Gunjan-tumhein itne fever mein chod kar kaise ja sakti thi,mujhe dikhao mujhe apna haath

She touches his hand and forehead 2 check his temp.

Gunjan-thank god samrat,tumhara bukhar ab thoda kam hai,pata hai main kitna dar

Gayi thi.

Samrat-I m sorry chashmish, kal main kuch zada hi depressed tha,isliye tez bearish

Mein hi chala gaya aur aakar change bhi nahin kiya.chashmish main tumse kuch

Kehna chahta hoon.

Gunjan-kaho na samrat.

Samrat- u know aaj tak maine jisse bhi pyaar kiya who mujhe chod ke chala gaya.jab tum

Meri itni care karti ho to mujhe dar lagta hai ki kahin tum bhi mujhe….

Gunjan-samrat(keeps her hand on his mouth) kabhi bhi aisa khayal apne dimaag mein

Mat lana.main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon samrat aur tumhe chod kar kahin nahin jaaongi.

Samrat-haan chashmish,aur agar kabhi mujhse koi galti ho jae to chahe mujhe daant dena,maar lena

Koi bhi punishment de dena,par mujhe chod kar mat jana plz chashmish

He now has tears in his eyes and they both hug each other

Suddenly gunjan 's cell starts ringing.it's nupur.

Gunjan-hello.haan di bolo.

Nupur-gunjan tu kahaan hai is wakt?

Gunjan-di tum itni pareshan kyon ho …main to samrat ke ghar hoon.

Nupur-par tu wahaan kya kar rahi hai?

Gunjan-who di samrat ki tabeyat kuch theek nahin thi to use hi dekhne

Aayi thi.

Nupur-acha gunjan dekh maine abhi abhi TV pe dekha hai ki bahar riots ho rahe hain aur curfew laga hai ,tu plz

Kal tak samrat ke ghar se bahaar mat nikalna

Gunjan-par di.

The line disconnects

Now plz sumone continue.

sorry if too long .plz do reply

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG! it was amazing......plz do cont babes......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Its a really gud ff guyz,every mjht fan gets a chance 2 post sumthing
of dere choice.pls sumone continue it furder.its going in a really
gud direction.waiting for sum updates and replys.😊

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