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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: CutieA
heyyy Shona...im vea so glad u made anotha FF! u simply have a veri special talent that u show share wid the rest of us! its onli fair dnt u think hehe....i love ur AA...its soooo shweet! i cnt wait for ur nxt part! cheers huni! xxx

Hey Ams

im glad u liked AA

lol yh i had to start another FF

aww thx

yup posted next part already...do read n comment

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Ahista Ahista Part 3

The following morning Dharam and Veer woke up early, they had to leave for Amargardh.

After breakfast they were leaving...Niviriti was standing in the hall when Dharam veer came accompanied by Deepti

Dharam: deepti bohat shararat mat karna aur maa ko tang mat karna

Veer: nahin Deepti..ma ko zara tang karna taki unhe meri yaad na aye

Niviriti: pagla

Ajaypal enters

Ajaypal: jaane ki puri tayari hogay?

Dharam: ji pitahji

Deepti: acha Dharam bhaiya app Amargardh se mere liye kya le ayenge

Dharam: humme suna hai ke Amargardh mein choodiyan bohat achi hoti hai...toh hum humari pyari behen ke liye har ek rang ki choodi leh ayenge

Deepti: ye hui na baat...veer bhaiya ap kya leh aoge

Veer: jo tum kaho

Deepti: soch lijiye...hum kuch bhi mang sakte hai

Veer: is mein soch na kya hai...mango

Deepti: humare liye ek bhabhi leh ana

Veer stops dead on his track

Deepti and Dharam try surpressing their laughter but unsuccessfully

Veer: haan bilkul...mein dharam ki shaadi wahi kara dunga...rajkumari Sanvi se

Deepti: aur apki

Veer: mujhe umar kedh ki saaza nahin chahiye...shaadi mein nahin karne wala

Niviriti: shaadi toh tumhari ho ke rahegi beta...hum bhi dekhte hai kab tak tum pyar se bachte ho

Veer: maa humme der ho rahi hai

Ajaypal: niviriti inki aarti kijiye

Niviriti does their arti n puts on the tilak. Both boys take Ajaypal and Niviriti's ashirwad, who bless them to have a safe and successful journey.

Veer had convinced his father not to send any soldiers with them...he managed to explain that him and Dharam were able enough to protect themselves so now DV were travelling alone on their horses...they continued riding for most of the day before stopping at nightfall at their small palace at the end of their state where they took rest.

Nightfall In Amargardh:

Sanvi: vanshika...jaldi karo humme kal nikalna hai

Vanshika: didi abhi kitni der hai Ganpati visarjan mein

Sanvi: tu janti haina humme wahan Rajkumar Dharam se pehle poonch na hai

Vanshikha: haa haa humme wahan jaldi ponch ke arti leh kar kadhe hona hai...Rajkumar Dharam ke intazar mein

Sanvi: ab ye ulti sidhi baateien bandh karo aur tayar ho jao

Vanshika indicates to the dasis what clothes she wants to take with which jewellery

Sanvi: vanshikha humme sach mein aisa lagta hai ke tummhe ek acha rajkumar kudh ke liye dhoondh lena chahiye

Vanshika takes Sanvi's hand and brings her to the window...she looks at the moon....

Vanshika: ap janti hai....hum har rooz is chand mein uska chehra dhoondh te hai jo humare sapno ka rajkumar hai...aur humme yakeen hai woh bhi duniya ke kisina kisi kone mein humara chehra is chand mein dhoondh ta hoga

Sanvi: pagal...aisa pyar aur aise rajkumar sirf kahaaniyon mein hote hai...haqeekat mein aisa thode he hota hai...aur tumhe ye baat swikar ni hogi vanshika...jaise aaj humara rishta juda hai Dharam ke saath...jisko na humne kabhi dekha hai waise he kal tumhara rishta judh sakta hai...hum mata rani se prarthna karenge ke aisa na ho...par agar aisa hua toh

Vanshika: hum aisa he shaadi ke liya haan nahin karenge...hum intazar karenge humare sapno ki rajkumar ka

Sanvi: vanishka...agar aisa koi na ho toh

Vanshika: aisa hai...koi na koi humare liye bheja gaya hai...woh hi humare sapno ka rajkumar hai...aur ek din woh humme zaroor mile ga

Sanvi: hai bhagwan ye ladki kab kahaaniyon aur haqeekat mein fark dekhna sikhegi

Vanishika: khabhi nahin!...kyunki humari haqeekat ek kahaani jaisi hai

Sanvi smiles at her sister who lived life as though it were a fairy tale...she did everything on her own accord.

Precap: Dharam and Sanvi have an eyelock

My apologys for having sme precap as last time...actually this part was going to be longer but i ran out of time so it got cut short...nways

Enjoy

Shona

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Ams

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

awww...shona! i simply love ur narration n dia's! cnt wait for nxt part! mwah cheers huni...u av made ma day or rather ma night! hehe.. nite huni xxx

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Bhuvana

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Posted: 16 years ago

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no problem at all shona.. tho short you updated regularly ! thats more important..

Aww I love the sisters love for each other n Vanshikas lovely dreams of a fairy tale wedding..

Loved Veers little sis teasing him.. its a beautiful family those 5 of them...

I feel sorry for Sanvi.. hope she falls in love with Dharam soon.

n I sureee hope Veer is well behaved with the lovely Vanshika

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: CutieA

awww...shona! i simply love ur narration n dia's! cnt wait for nxt part! mwah cheers huni...u av made ma day or rather ma night! hehe.. nite huni xxx

wow Ams u were quick to comment...normally wen i update at this time no one comments til next day

nways im realli happy that u liked this part n it made ur day no nite😆😳

thx🤗

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: bhuvana3
no problem at all shona.. tho short you updated regularly ! thats more important..
yh this is wat im gonna try n do...make updates regular

Aww I love the sisters love for each other n Vanshikas lovely dreams of a fairy tale wedding..yh i love writing the sisters scenes...vanishka lives in her own world...she lives in a dreamland

Loved Veers little sis teasing him.. its a beautiful family those 5 of them...its realli cute...the scenes between veer n deepti...the family is just perfect😊

I feel sorry for Sanvi.. hope she falls in love with Dharam soon.she will...sanvi and dharam are made for each other...they just have to discover that

n I sureee hope Veer is well behaved with the lovely Vanshika lol can u imagine what wud happen wen vanshika n veer meet...they wouldnt be well-behaved at all😆

thanks bhuvi for reading n commenting

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