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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: hiri
it was gr8 loved it wow loved veer and deepti's bro sis chemmistry keep writing shona...

esha

thx esha

yh veer n deepti scenes are nyc

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: anusha_123
Hey! I liked this part very much.
I'm waiting for the meeting of VV😉

Hope you post it soon

Thanks anusha

VV will meet soon

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Vinisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

ShOna YeW UpDaTed Da NeXt PaRT...😲....Mai tOh peeChe ReH gaYiii....😕

LeMMe reaD iT naO😛

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❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

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Vinisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Oh sO VEER wZ dOin' hiZ faVoRite Work...😆...BreaKfasT...😳😆

AwWw VEER iz Jus OwessUm...⭐️⭐️⭐️....He WanTz DipTi to TrouBle hiZ MoM sO Dat ShE DuzNt miZz em & DhaRam, a TrUe ResPoNsible Son...😛

LolZ...DhaRam ne ToH BangleZ se MaNa LiYa DiPti kO...😆...ab VEER tOh gaYa...😆😆😆
LolllzZz !!! 🤣 VEER GivZ sucH a CuTe and UnpRedicTabLe ReaCtiOnz wHen iT cUmz boUt hiZ MarriAge! 🤣

Oh God !!! DhaRam ki shaaDi kaRvAyeGa, 😆 anD hiMseLf reFerriNg iT tO as 'UmaR Kaid'' 🤣 DiZ bOy OlwAyZ ChaNgeZ sUcH tOpiCz...😆😉

LoLz iT seeMz VanShika Iz iN sUm dEEEp ThoUghtZ tONitE...😳😳😳

Wow...👏...OweSum dia ShOna..⭐️👏

Vanshika: ap janti hai....hum har rooz is chand mein uska chehra dhoondh te hai jo humare sapno ka rajkumar hai...aur humme yakeen hai woh bhi duniya ke kisina kisi kone mein humara chehra is chand mein dhoondh ta hoga

Lolz SanVi sHud beLev heR daTz sO tRue...😉

WoW wOw Wow !!! LiKed VansHika'z Dias sO MuCh... Itz LiKe BeleVin' sO MucH On SuMthiNg wHicH izNt tRue daT OnE daY Ur Belief MaKez It TruE...😃⭐️👏

GrEaTT uPdaTe ShOna...👏👏👏

iTz ReLLi GuD...LoVed VanShiKa'z DiaS n VEER'z ReaCtiOnz....

Vinisha_RAJAT 🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

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seema

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Hey shona
Another fanstastic update.... i Simpli love the two sisters expecialli Vanshika... she lives in her won world lo0ol...bit like me... alwaiz do what i think is ryt... n what ma heart tells me to....
Deepti tells veer to get a bhabhi for her...n veer jus shocked lol😆....dw deepti ure dream will surley come true.... 😉 lol...veer wants deepti to trouble his mum...badmaash kahi ka.

Seema <3 RT forevaa
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Edited by heaven princess - 16 years ago

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT
Oh sO VEER wZ dOin' hiZ faVoRite Work...😆...BreaKfasT...😳😆 yup...favourite work😆

AwWw VEER iz Jus OwessUm...⭐️⭐️⭐️....He WanTz DipTi to TrouBle hiZ MoM sO Dat ShE DuzNt miZz em & DhaRam, a TrUe ResPoNsible Son...😛yup is a resonsible son...maa ka kitna khyal rakh ta hai😆

LolZ...DhaRam ne ToH BangleZ se MaNa LiYa DiPti kO...😆...ab VEER tOh gaYa...😆😆😆Dharam was clever lol n veer wasnt...he gave a blank promise
LolllzZz !!! 🤣 VEER GivZ sucH a CuTe and UnpRedicTabLe ReaCtiOnz wHen iT cUmz boUt hiZ MarriAge! 🤣lolz yh...he was shocked wen deepti asked for a bhabhi coz i dont think he can give her that😆😆😆

Oh God !!! DhaRam ki shaaDi kaRvAyeGa, 😆 anD hiMseLf reFerriNg iT tO as 'UmaR Kaid'' 🤣 DiZ bOy OlwAyZ ChaNgeZ sUcH tOpiCz...😆😉lol he's smart naa...she didnt say wich bhabhi so he cleverly thought of getting dharam married n bringing sanvi😆...yup for him shaadi is like a punishment...n he likes to stay well away from the topic of shaadi

LoLz iT seeMz VanShika Iz iN sUm dEEEp ThoUghtZ tONitE...😳😳😳usske prince ke intazar mein hai

Wow...👏...OweSum dia ShOna..⭐️👏lol bohat sochna nahin pada tha...was looking out of my bedroom window wen i saw the moon...n i kinda heard something similar somewhere b4...cant remember where though...

Vanshika: ap janti hai....hum har rooz is chand mein uska chehra dhoondh te hai jo humare sapno ka rajkumar hai...aur humme yakeen hai woh bhi duniya ke kisina kisi kone mein humara chehra is chand mein dhoondh ta hoga

Lolz SanVi sHud beLev heR daTz sO tRue...😉 sanvi has accepted Dharam to be the ONE

WoW wOw Wow !!! LiKed VansHika'z Dias sO MuCh... Itz LiKe BeleVin' sO MucH On SuMthiNg wHicH izNt tRue daT OnE daY Ur Belief MaKez It TruE...😃⭐️👏yay axactly...vanshika is dreaming of a prince normally found onli in fairy tales n her family trys so hard to explain to her its not like that in reality but she onli believes one thing...that her prince is out their somewhere...waiting for her....n thats gonna be Veer obviously😃

GrEaTT uPdaTe ShOna...👏👏👏glad u liked it vini...abb i wont say thanks warna tum dato gi so heres for u 🤗🤗🤗

iTz ReLLi GuD...LoVed VanShiKa'z DiaS n VEER'z ReaCtiOnz....yup i liked vanshika's part too...lol veer as always gives a gd reaction😳

Vinisha_RAJAT 🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: heaven princess
Hey shona hi seema
Another fanstastic update....thx🤗 i Simpli love the two sisters yh thay are adorable
especialli Vanshika... she lives in her won world lo0ol...bit like me... alwaiz do what i think is ryt... n what ma heart tells me to....yh she lives in a fairy tale world and has her dreams...she will do watever she thinks is rite....im glad u can relate urself to Vanshika
Deepti tells veer to get a bhabhi for her...n veer jus shocked lol😆...lol Veer had not expected Deepti to say that at all...he thought she wud say soemthing like clothes or bangles so yh he was shocked.dw deepti ure dream will surley come true.... 😉 yyh it will sooner or later
lol...veer wants deepti to trouble his mum...badmaash kahi ka.lol he is a badmash😳

Seema <3 RT forevaa
xx

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Vinisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: **Shona**
updating...

Jaldi karo Shona.......Cant Wait Any More😕...Lolz! 😆

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Ahista Ahista Part 4

Before starting this part i would like to wish everyone a

|| Happy diwali ||

i hope the following year brings you

alot of happiness, success and u maintain gd health

May Lakshmi ji always shower her blessings on u!

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Dharam veer resumed their journey the following morning. Vanshika and Sanvi also got ready

early morning to set of to the other side of Amargardh where the ganpatti visarjan would be

taking place.

Vanshika wore a maroon lehenga whereas Sanvi was taking a long while to get ready,

she was feeling very concious about how she looked today.

Vanshika enters her older sisters room and sees her sitting infront of the mirror smiling

Vanshika: Rajkumar Sanvi...ap kahan khoyi hui hai

Sanvi realises Vanshiks's presence

Sanvi: kuch nahin...hum toh bas...

Vanshika: agar ap aaj tayar hone mein itni der laga rahi hai toh shaadi ke din kya hoga...

Sanvi blushes

Sanvi: Vanshika...is lehenge mein hum kaise laga rahe hai

Vanshika: sach bolu ya jhooth

Sanvi: bilkul sach

Vanshika: umm...did...sach..sach baat toh ye hai ke...ap...ap aaj BOHAT PYARI LAG

RAHI HAI

Vanshika laughs...she certainly achieved her goal by spreading tension across her

sister face

Sanvi: vanshika mein aaj tumko choodungi nahin

Vanshika hugs her sister...

Vanshika: humme lagta hai aaj toh Rajkumar Dharam ke hosh hi oodh jayenge...

apko dekh kar

Sanvi blushes

Maharani Prateeksha enters. Both girls take their mother's blessing

Prateeksha: Sach humari dono betiyaan bohat sundar lag rahi hai

Vanshika: maa jane ki puri tayari ho chuki hai

Prateeksha: teekh hai

she turns to Sanvi

Prateeksha: Sanvi humme sach sach baataye...ap is rishte se khush haina...

agar nahin hai toh abhi baata dijiye...humme Vanshika ke baaton pe dhyan diya tha...

Sanvi: maa hum is rishte se bohat khush hai...humme Aryanagar jaisa saasural mila hai...

maharaj Ajaypal aur Maharani Niviriti jaise saas saasur mile hai aur Dharam jaise jeevan saathi...humme toh swarg mil gaya hai

Prateeksha hugs her...

Prateeksha: bhagwan kare apki khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar na lage...Sanvi ap bahar jake

dekh lijiye sab dasiyan aur saman tayar hai ya nahin...Vanshika ap rukiye...humme apse

baat karni hai

After Sanvi enters Prateeksha faces Vanshika

Prateeksha: Vanshika hum jante hai humari baaton ka apko kal bura laga...par beta samaj

ne ki koshish kijiye...hum apki maa hai dushman nahin...humme apki didi ka rishta bohat

soch samaj ke kiya hai...hum jante hai Aryanagar mein woh dukhi nahin rahengi aur hum

jante hai Dharam bohat acha ladka hai...aur jahan tak pyar ka sawal hai...app dekhiye ga

woh apki Sanvi se bohat pyar karenge....

Vanshika: ji maa

this was all Vanshika could manage to say...she was lost for words

Prateeksha: jahan tak apki baat hai...toh hum apse wada karte hai apki shaadi apki marzi

se hogi...jahan ap chahe...jise ap chahe...bas usse jaldi se dhoond lijiye

Vanshika hugs her mother in gratitude

Both vanshika and Prateeksha go outside where Sanvi is waiting with a group

of dasis and one chariot...Vanshika had requested for a chariot and had complained

about how slow palki's were...not to mention she had given a long explaination

on how her "sapno ka Rajkumar" would take

her on a horse and be very fast at horse riding.😆

Both Princesses bi their mother farewell and she wishes them a safe and happy trip

Hours later the 2 Princesses arrive at the Ganpati mandir where the Visarjan would

soon begin. Some time later Dharam and Veer arrive on their horses

Sanvi and Vanshika weren't expecting them til later but of course Dharam and Veer

were fast horseriders and arrived much earlier

While waiting for Dharam Sanvi and Vanshika decided to go to the garden near by

and pick some flowers

Dharam asked veer to accompany him to the garden...he wanted to take some flowers

for the Ganpati puja

In his mind Veer douted this...he thught it was Dharam excuse to get flowers to make

a kajra for Sanvi😆

Veer: acha Dharam tum is taraf jao...hum udhar se phool le ate hai

Dharam: teekh hai...par jaldi ana

on the otherside Vanshika and Sanvi are looking at flowers

Vanshika: sisi hum us taraf ja rahe hai gulabi phool lene

Sanvi: teekh hai...wahi humara intazar karna

Veer is looking to the side while walking...he thought he saw something meanwhile

Vanshika is coming from the opposite direction examining a particular flower not

paying much attention to where she was going

Bang!....the two collided

Vanshika fell to the floor as she had collided very hard with something that

smelled realli good...she looked up to see what it was...

it was a boy...probably a year older to her...he was quite tall...had brown hair which

seemed well combed...he had a fair complexion and there was this kinda of magic

in his eyes that drew you to them...he smiles....it was almost magical...it bought

happiness to your heart after seeing that smile thought Vanshika....it was like she

was dreaming...dreaming of the prince she had only ever imagined to be her

soulmate....

he streched out his hand to help her up....she stayed gazing into fis face unable

to look anywhere else....

Dharam: veer ye kya kar rahe ho

Veer looks down at Vanshika

Veer: arre jaldi apna haath do...mere pas pura din nahin hai....

Vanshika suddenly realised what he said

Vanshika: haath de kar koi meharbani bani nahin kar rahe ho....aur waise bhi

humme tumhari koi maadat ki zaroorat nahin hai

Veer: mujhe bhi shokh nahin hai tum jaisi pagal ladki se baatain karne ka

Vanshika: pagal hum nahin...andhe tum ho....dekh kar nahin chal sakte

Veer: dekho tum mujhese takrayi thi

Sanvi comes looking for Vanshika

Sanvi: vanshika...ye kaisa shor hai aur kaun hai ye ladki

Sanvi looks at the two boys...her eyes meet Dharam's...she stares into them as

though lost in a world of your own...she felt there was something in them which

was drawing her towards them

Vanshika clicked her fingers infront of Sanvi's face

Vanshika: ap kahan kho gayi

Sanvi: kuch nahin...(she turns to veer) dekhiye jo meri behen ne kiya usliye hum

ap se mafi mang te hai

Dharam: iski koi zaroorat nahin hai...sari galti Veer ki thi

Veer looks at Dharam in disbelief

Veer trys to object but Dharam puts his hand over Veer's face...

Dharam: chalo veer humme jana chahiye

Dharam gives Sanvi a final smile and walks aways pushing Veer along

Vanshika: hai mata rani ye kaise kasie din dikha rahi ho😆 Amargadh mein

aisa batameez ladke bhi hai...ab ap hi yahan ki ladkiyon ko bacha sakti ho

Precap:

Veer: dharam humne toh suna tha ke Rajkumari Sanvi teekh tak dikh ti hai aur bado

ka adar karti hai...aur tameez se pesh ati hai par ye toh kuch alag hii namuna tha...

mujhe kuch gadh badh lag rahi hai

Enjoy,

Shona

Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Jaldi karo Shona.......Cant Wait Any More😕...Lolz! 😆 lolz vini update kar diya...u can read it now

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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