Ahista Ahista|STOPPED WRITING-see PG 35| - Page 4

Originally posted by: **Shona**

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

Shona.u n ur brilliat FF's ... ⭐️

Aww 🤗

I enjoy reading alll😛 that puts a huge smile on my face

I couldn't comment on prev two FF's sry for that..... 😕😛😭 its realli ok...as long as u read it...

i started with ur first FF when u had already reached half of ur second FF....

now this time i m alble to catch up with ur FF in time.....😛 thats gr8

Loved d introduction part... 👏 i was so proud i actually wrote charecter sketches...coz with my first FF i didnt write the charecter sketchs til i had almost finished the FF...i was so lazy😆

sounds different than prev two's..😃 yup thats wat i was trying to do...make it a lil different

both are bro's finally n also rajkumari's also sis...😉😆 yh...i cudnt be bothered with have so many parents so made them biological bros...n the rajkumari r sis but complete opposite

n entry of new sis of DV .. good. some thing different...😳 yup i thought it wud be cool...n a lil different

My veer is as usual natkhat n his opp..too..😆 😆 lol yup he is always natkhat no matter wich FF he's in😆

and dharam savni are also adorable... 😳 in my first FF,Vishvaas i want sanvi n dharam togetehr but then i didnt do that...so it happened here...they are adorable😳

plzz update soon.. yh will try n update again today

loved it..muahhhhh 🤗im realli happy to hear that...thx Rash for reading n comments🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Hey thats not dun...😲...The name wz decided by both of us n Not me..!!! 😕u suggested it n i agreed to it

Shona gr8 Starting...👏...! Glad to find Mugdha again in a Bubbly princess role...wow...😳yup miss the sanyogita avtar so decided to go ahead with a simailar charecter here
Sanvi's Introduction very well described...👏glad u liked
Lolz Vanshika's dialogue..

Vanshika: is mein itna sharmane wali kaunsi baat hai...sab jante hai Rajkumar Dharam batsurat hai

🤣 She'z so gud !!! 😆 She wanna say wateva is goin in her Mind, lively n sweet !!!yh she is...she says it straight away n is a lil funny

O'o Maharaj Dharam n Sanvi both excited to meet each other...Itz their first meeting kya..??? 😉yay they havent met before coz dharam has been at a gurukul since young age and after he came back his wedding was arranged...they are really excited to meet one another

Vanshika is same like VEER, naughty !! Maa ki obedient beti saying the truth ! 😆yup she is very much like Veer

WoO VEER loves sleeping too...😳😳😳....Lolz Dharam will relli find it difficult to wake him up...😆this is the common thing between my previous FFs n this one...veer loves to sleep😆

Ohh Man !!! VEER iz so funny....🤣....'' tum ek ladki se shaadi kaise kar sakte ho?'' 🤣
Lolz VEER seems experienced even widout meeting...😆😆😆Veer is funny here...its as though Dharam is doing something wich is not ordinary....Veer has this typical image in mind where all princesses are tantrum throwers and very fussy and shy

He'z cho Naughty...'' Ganpati Visarjan ya bhabhi k darshan'' 🤣 After all ganpati visarjan toh ek bahana hai..😉😆yes from the whole part i liked this dialogue alot coz its naughty n true...dharam was onli going along so that he cud meet sanvi😳

Wah waH !! 👏 Cushion fight...😆😳

Greatt Update Shona....Liked da Character sketch of the Characters in the scene itself, by their behavior, dialogues ! im glad u liked it Vini 🤗🤗🤗

Continue Writing...🤗


RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Originally posted by: hiri

mind blowing hope they meet soon...

esha

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Hmmmm...🤔...Vanshika iznt happy wid Dharam n Sanv's Relationship....k ! It means she duznt belev in love still ......aha can predict a lot more seeing this...😆...It wud b interesting to read when Vanshika will fall in love...😳Vanshikha doesnt believe in love after marriage...she wants the prince charming type of love before marriage...but thing is she hasnt found anyone like that...also she doesnt want Sanvi to marry someone who she doesnt love therefore diagrees....yh will definately be interesting to see her in love

wO great dialogue by M prateeksha...👏 prateeksha is a fantastic mother just like niviriti
Ohhh Vanshika seems a bit stubborn bt is Gud enuf, bt agreed-she's right at her place...😳😛 She duznt know whats love so thinks all that is stupidity ! 😉😃she has a different view compared to her sister and mother

Got it !!! Siya is seedhi saadi, obedient and Mature enuf for her age while Vanshika is totally opposite....She relli loves her sis iznt it...😃yup correct
Relli liked Vanshika's Character It seems real, Different and Seems Quite Similar 😉shes a bit of sanyogita n vishva mixed

Lolz VEER n Deepti...😆...So Cute !!! 😳 VEER has a Great Chemistry wid his Sis....wud look forward for more VD scene...😃yh i liked teh veer n deepti part...reminds me of prithvi n pritha ....yup will include more VD scenes

Lolz Knew it....😆😆😆...Y VEER liked doing aarti so Much...😆 as at the end he can get loadz of Prasad...🤣 WoO VEER too loves eating Muaahhh...!!! 😳🤣yup veer loves prashad alot n therefore loves arti...veer enjoys his food

Dharam: pitahji veer ko pyar ho jaye usse pehli toh kayamath ah jayegi

Lolz...🤣 So true desperately waiting for that moment....😍 its true...veer doesnt like anythig abt love or marriage n doesnt want a princess in his life
WoO Vanshika will laugh much more when she'll meet VEER...aww d two sisterz love each other sO much...😳the two sisters realli look out for one another n love each other very much


RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍