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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi guys im back with another new FF based on DV

Its called Ahista Ahista-credit for name goes to Vinisha_RAJAT aka vini

credit for all pix-vinisha_RAJAT aka vini as well👏👏👏

Updates:

Part 1-Page 1

Part 2-Page 3

Part 3-Page 6

Part 4 -Page 8

Part 5 -Page 9

Part 6-Page 11

Part 7-Page 15

Part 8-Page 19

Part 9-Page 22

Part 10-Page 22

Part 11-Page 25

Part 12-Page 25

Part 13-Page 28

Part 14-Page 30

Part 15-Page 33

Here are the main charectors:

Maharaj Ajaypal:

he is the king of Aryanagar. He is one of the best kings of the country.He loves his wife Niviriti very much. He is the father to Dharam,Veer and Deepti

Maharani Niviriti:

Niviriti is the queen of Aryanagar. She is the mother to Dharam,Veer and Deepti. she caes alot about her kids and advises Ajaypal often when he is having trouble making decisions.

Rajkumar Dharam:

Dharam is the oldest son to Ajaypal and Niviriti. He is handsome and shy and very obedient. He follows rules and regulations blindly. He loves his brother Veer and sister Deepti very much. Dharam's wedding is arranged with Rajkumari Sanvi whom he has never seen before...eventually they realise they are soulmates.

Rajkumar Veer:

He is the younger son and is very mischievious. He is the apple of Niviriti's eye. He isnt responsible and hates obeying people but always obeys Niviriti. He doesnt believe in marriage and love. He likes doing everything his own way. Sometimes is approach to life worries his father. Veer will eventually fall in love with Rajkumari Vanshika.

Rajkumari Deepti:

She is the youngest child to Ajaypal and Niviriti. She is therefore pampered alot and loved by one and all. She has charecteristic of both her older brothers...she is mischievious and shy. She obeys only those who she wishes to otherwise like veer she does whatever she likes.

Rajkumari Sanvi:

She is the beautiful Princess of Amargardh. Her wedding has been arranged with Dharam though she hadnt seen him,she has heard quite alot about his bravery.Sanvi is very obedient and responsible. She loves her family very much and is ready to sacrifice her happiness for others.

Rajkumari Vanshika:

Vanshika is the younger sister of Sanvi. Like her sister she is also very beautiful. She isnt very obedient and doesnt believe that she will get the Prince Charming she wants. She doesnt approve of her sister's decision of marrying Dharam without even seeing him. Things change when she meets Veer and slowly falls in love with him...

Other charecters:

Maharaj Amar:

he is Vanshika and Sanvi's father. He is a good friend of Ajaypal so therefore has arranged his older daughter's wedding with Ajaypal's older son Dharam.

Maharani Prateeksha:

she is Sanvi and Vanshika's mother. She is very happy that Sanvi will be getting married to Dharam. She loves her daughters very much and wishes that Vanshika becomes more like her sister

Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey shonaa..... yipeee ure bk with another ff.... i loved the plot..n character sketch please continuee soon!! looking forward to reading it

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ahista Ahista Part 1

It was a sunny morning and the atmosphere in the garden of Amargardh's Palace was so peaceful until

Maid: Rajkumari Vanshika...ap kya kar rahi hai...rukiye

A beautiful princess was running across the garden trying to find her older sister.

Vanshika: didi!...ap kahan ho

Vanshika got to the end of the garden where she saw her older sister Sanvi sitting besided the fountain of water

Sanvi: kya hua Vanshika...itna shor kyun macha rahi ho

Vanshika: woh Aryanagar se sandesha aya hai...Rajkumar Dharam apse Amargardh ke Ganpati visarjan mein milenge

Sanvi looks at her reflection in the water, she had big dark eyes, pink cheeks,fair complexion and a million dollar smile...her cheeks went even more pink when she blushed

Vanshika: is mein itna sharmane wali kaunsi baat hai...sab jante hai Rajkumar Dharam batsurat hai

Vansikha loved to tease her sister...Sanvi got up and chases Vanshika for a while but stops to inquire more from the dasis

Sanvi: arre ruko...Aryanagar se kya sandesh aya hai

Dasi: suna hai ke rajkumar Dharam apse Ganpati Visarjan mein milna chahte hai

Sanvi: aur?

Dasi: Rajkumari...apko itna beechain humne khabhi nahin dekha

Sanvi blushes but urges the dasi to continue

Dasi: aur jahan tak humme pata hai Maharaj ne manzoori deh di hai

Vanshika comes back to them....

Vanshika: kya baat hai didi...ap bohat khush lag rahi hai

Sanvi: Vanshika mein tumhe choodungi nahin...kya keh rahi thi unke bare mein

Vanshika: kin ke bare mein didi

Sanvi: Dharam ke bare mein

As she takes Dharam's names she blushs

Vanshika: kyunki maa ne bola hai humasha sach bolo...isliye mein sach keh rahi thi...

Sanvi: Vanshika aaj mein maa se tumhari shikayat kar keh rahongi

but just then another Dasi enters

Dasi: Rajkumari ji Maharani ne apko bulaya hai

Both sisters walk back in

On the other hand many miles away in Aryanagar Rajkumar Dharam walked into his younger brother's room....Dharam threw the curtains open

Dharam: veer uttoh

Veer: umm...sune doh na...

Dharam: veer uttoh...severa ho gaya hai

Veer: nahin mujhe suna hai

Dharam picked up a cushion and threw it at veer

Veer opened his eyes

Veer: kya hua

Dharam: humme woh...sandesh bhej diya...Rajkumari Sanvi ki liye...hum unse Amargardh ke Ganpati Visarjan mein milna chateh hai

Veer: Dharam ek baat batao

Dharam: hmm

Veer: tum ek ladki se shaadi kaise kar sakte ho

Dharam: toh kya humme gai(cow) ya bel se shaadi karni chahiye

Veer: nahin...par ek rajkumari...jaane kitne tewar dikhati hai

Dharam: tum kitni Rajkumariyon se mile ho

Veer: kisi se bhi nahin

Dharam: toh tum ye kaise keh sakte ho

Veer: aise hi...mein janta hoon

Dharam: achha jaldi se tayar hojao...maa puja ke liye intazar kar rahi honge

Veer: haan abhi ata hoon

Dharam: waise tum humare saath ah rahe hona...ganpati visarjan ke liye

Veer: ganpati visarjan ya phir bhabhi ke darshan😆😆😆

Dharam throws another cushion at veer and runs off before Veer can strike back

Veer: dharam mein nahin ah raha hoon

Veer smiled and got out of bed and went to get ready

Enjoy

Shona

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seema

@heaven princess

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Posted: 16 years ago

Eyy me first to commetn yippee lol

i loved the opening... simpli awser lol veer saing how can u marry a girl haha....😆
please continue soonn......(add a precap if u can)😳

Edited by heaven princess - 16 years ago

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Nima

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Posted: 16 years ago

ohhh my god...my shona is back....wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

love u dear.....muaahhhhhhhhhhhhh

havent read the first part.... will soon read it....🤗🤗

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heaven princess
Hey shonaa..... yipeee ure bk with another ff.... i loved the plot..n character sketch please continuee soon!! looking forward to reading it

hi Seema

lol im bak...i realli wasnt planning on writing any time soon but i got the idea so cudnt resist n decided on writing the FF

im glad u liked charecters n plot

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b
ohhh my god...my shona is back....wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
love u dear.....muaahhhhhhhhhhhhh

havent read the first part.... will soon read it....🤗🤗

lol yh i am bak agen

like i sed didnt want to write another FF but cudnt resist...hope u will like this as much as Vishvaas

its ok read in ur own time

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heaven princess
Eyy me first to commetn yippee lol

i loved the opening... simpli awser lol veer saing how can u marry a girl haha....😆
please continue soonn......(add a precap if u can)😳

lol yay the first comment on ahista Ahista

im glad u liked the opening

lol Veer cant come to terms that his bro agreed to marriage

yh will continue soon!

as for precap...will try to add from now on

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seema

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

lol yay the first comment on ahista Ahista ...lol hehe😆

im glad u liked the opening ..... 😊

lol Veer cant come to terms that his bro agreed to marriage ..lol..im looking forward to veers shetaniya...in ure ff i jus love dem

yh will continue soon! ..oki will w8

as for precap...will try to add from now on..oki ____ lol im not aloud to sai teh word so i'll jus do that