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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
WOW nice update Shona👏.. Love the gals mum too.. she is loving n paitent.. n does as much as possible for her gals 😛
I like the Veer n Vanshika takkar n Dharam n Sanvis eye lock... love at first sight😍
And whts the precap ?? A new prank of Vanshika ? LOL
waiting for next update ! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
heyy!!!.. wonderful update..... plsss update soonnn
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

WOW nice update Shona👏.thank u. Love the gals mum too.. she is loving n paitent.. n does as much as possible for her gals 😛

Yup shes a great mother
I like the Veer n Vanshika takkar n Dharam n Sanvis eye lock... love at first sight😍im glad u liked it...i thought ppl wud think its copied off prc...
yup DS are attracted to one another at first sight though its not exactly love
And whts the precap ?? A new prank of Vanshika ? LOL A big twist in the tale is coming up
waiting for next update ! 😛 wont keep u waiting too long

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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ashah03

heyy!!!.. wonderful update..... plsss update soonnn

Thanks ashah
im glad u liked it
yh will try to update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Shona Happy Diwali To Yew Too...🤗😃

Lolz Sanvi all lost in getting ready coz she wanna look best in frnt of his Boy...😉😆

Vanshika is so naughty...😆...Bechaari Sanvi ko tension de di...😆

Awww Shweety Sissy Hug Between em...😛

WoO i Liked M Prateeksha's dias...Sensible! Jus Like what a Mother can think n say to her daughters In some situation Lyk dis..👍🏼 Wow She's relli gud ! Though she knew Dharam is gud bt still firstly for her daughter's approval n den said sumthin', Paid attention to wateva Vanshika said coz it was bout her daughter's whole future!
Uh Ho...M Prateeksha dun hav to get tensed fO dat coz Vanshika k liye toh sabse accha Rajkumar hai....😍
She wud feel on top of d world on getting son - in laws like dV..😃

This One's Owesum...😆

In his mind Veer douted this...he thught it was Dharam excuse to get flowers to make
a kajra for Sanvi😆

VEER and His Thinking ! 🤣 He'z shO ChweeeeT jus like a Kid...😳

Shona...🤗🤗🤗......Wat a Description Hun! 👏 I lubd It Seriously....⭐️...Itz Owesum, Exactly Like Him..😳 WOW ! So True Magical Smile...😍...Seeing dat smile which can make 1000s of gals Crazy bout Him..
So True..!!! Da Dream Boy aka pRince Charming...☺️😃 Wow the way u xplained it...👏👏👏....He strched out his hand fO Vanshika..😳...Superb!!!

Oh Ho...VEER ko thodi der chup rehna tha na......Uske future ka sawaal hai...😆
Bola and Vanshika came out of her thoughts aur Unki Nok - Jhok Shuru...😆

Whoa! Owesum Scene Btwn DS !!! 👏 They dunno each other but still feels something for each Other...😛...They are strangers fo each ther bt still feels as if dey noe each other since ages...Greattt Scene!!! 👏⭐️


Huh Precap...🤔...VEER cant say something like this to RKi Saanvi and for sure it cant be Saanvi...
Ahha i Got It...for sure it wud be Vanshika and it seems we wud hav a blast and superb Nok - Jhok Scene Betwn V V soOoN....😳



RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Shona Happy Diwali To Yew Too...🤗😃 Same to u hun!

Lolz Sanvi all lost in getting ready coz she wanna look best in frnt of his Boy...😉😆lol yh she feels concious abt the way she looks😆

Vanshika is so naughty...😆...Bechaari Sanvi ko tension de di...😆yup she created alot of tension in sanvi's mind

Awww Shweety Sissy Hug Between em...😛

WoO i Liked M Prateeksha's dias...Sensible! Jus Like what a Mother can think n say to her daughters In some situation Lyk dis..👍🏼 Wow She's relli gud ! Though she knew Dharam is gud bt still firstly for her daughter's approval n den said sumthin', Paid attention to wateva Vanshika said coz it was bout her daughter's whole future! shes a cool mum...she cares alot for her daughters
Uh Ho...M Prateeksha dun hav to get tensed fO dat coz Vanshika k liye toh sabse accha Rajkumar hai....😍lol if onli she knew that now...she wudnt be tensed at all
She wud feel on top of d world on getting son - in laws like dV..😃hehe...wich wudnt be happy to hav son in laws like DV

This One's Owesum...😆

In his mind Veer douted this...he thught it was Dharam excuse to get flowers to make
a kajra for Sanvi😆

VEER and His Thinking ! 🤣 He'z shO ChweeeeT jus like a Kid...😳lol i loved this line....veer's thinking is so funny...

Shona...🤗🤗🤗......Wat a Description Hun! 👏 I lubd It Seriously....⭐️.glad u liked it Vini...i realised Veer didnt have a proper entry so i did the description here from Vansika's point of view..Itz Owesum, Exactly Like Him..😳 WOW ! So True Magical Smile...😍...Seeing dat smile which can make 1000s of gals Crazy bout Him..yup...so true
So True..!!! Da Dream Boy aka pRince Charming...☺️😃 Wow the way u xplained it...👏👏👏....He strched out his hand fO Vanshika..😳...Superb!!!im realli happy u liked this part vini....i tried to exlain veer in the best way possible...lol wen he streches his hand out its like he is an average prince but infact as soon as dharam cums he changes his attitude

Oh Ho...VEER ko thodi der chup rehna tha na......Uske future ka sawaal hai...😆
Bola and Vanshika came out of her thoughts aur Unki Nok - Jhok Shuru...😆this is veer naa...wrong time pe mu kholta hai😆yup vanshika's opinion on veer changes straight away

Whoa! Owesum Scene Btwn DS !!! 👏 They dunno each other but still feels something for each Other...😛...They are strangers fo each ther bt still feels as if dey noe each other since ages...Greattt Scene!!! 👏⭐️yh they do feel this thing...as though they know each other since long...its like an invisable connection


Huh Precap...🤔...VEER cant say something like this to RKi Saanvi and for sure it cant be Saanvi...
Ahha i Got It...for sure it wud be Vanshika and it seems we wud hav a blast and superb Nok - Jhok Scene Betwn V V soOoN....😳hehe...well next update will be fun to read...hopefully



RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
thata was mindblowing plz zont asap...
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
woohooo....wonderful update Shona! dey have met...finally! cheers huni! x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Woow shonaa.. yet again another fantastic update...
Veer thinking Dharam wants to make a kajra for sanvii lol...🤣 his thinkings are jus to funni....

😲VV bang into each other lo0ol.... aur pheli mulakat main hi fighting🤣🤣 teh cutest pair ever.....i loved the wai u descirbed Veer.... 😃

Dharam n Sanvis first eyelock...😍..

Sanvi and Vanshika's mum is realli nice.....kitni ache seh usne Vanshika ko samjaya tha...😛

Please update soon...w8tin impatiently for ure next update😆😉


Seema <3 RT forevaa
xx

Edited by heaven princess - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70

Ahista Ahista Part 4

After they get back into mandir Sanvi stops her sister

Sanvi: Vanshika who kaun teh'aur kyun jagda kar rahi thi unki saath

Vanshika: saari galti us bewakuf ladke ki hai'dikhne mein toh teekh taakh lagta hai par tawar dikhata hai'pehle humse takraya aur phir mafi bhi nahin mangi'aur upar se ye jatlata hai ke usne haath de kar bohat badi meharbani ki

Sanvi: aur tum usse kyun takrayi

Vanshika: hum nahin takraye'hum toh phool dekh rahe the

Sanvi: aur tumhara dhyan phool mein that aur us ladke ki saath takra gayi'.Vanshika who agar milega toh usse maafi mang lena

Vanshika: nahin humari koi galti nahin'uski thi

Sanvi: apni didi ke liye itna nahin kar sakti

Vanshika: maafi mang na zaroori hai

Sanvi: haan

Vanshika: teekh hai hum aisi maafi mange ge ke woh bhool nahin paye ga

Sanvi: kya matlab

Vanshika: kuch nahin'bas aise hi

Sanvi: chalo visarjan shuru hone wala hai

Both girls are at the front, surrounded by a few gruards who seem to be irritating Vanshika

Vanshika eyes were searching for the handsome boy whom she had encountered earlier today, she remembered how they collided, she recalled that attractive scent that he had, she revisited the feelings as they touched and how she saw him for the first time and how he had smiled, it was impossible to forget the look in those expressive brown eyes and the dimples on the upper part of his cheek below his eyes

Vanshika was smiling to herself

Sanvi: vanshika itni khush kyun ho rahi ho, jaise ki tumhe apna rajkumar mil gaya ho

Vanshika: aisi koi baat nahin'hum toh soch rahe the k eek bar visarjan ho jaye hum apke Rajkumar ko dekh payenge

Sanvi's cheeks redden slightly

Everyone was singing and dancing as the Ganpati murti was lifted and bought to the front and everyone began to walk towards the nearby sea'.everyone is throwing rang about singing ' Morya morya morya re baapa morya re'

Sanvi and Vanshika join in with the singing but don't play with rang though Vanshika wants to, Sanvi forbids, Vanshika obeys silently though she feels upset. Sanvi was looking around looking around for any signs of Dharam but with dismay that when she caught glimpse of the boy she had seen earlier, he was the one who she felt so drawn to, without reason. However hard Sanvi tried, she couldn't help but throw him secret glances, and he on the other hand was so engaged in taking part in the dancing along with what looked like his younger brother, the boy whom Vanshika had collided with.

They reached the sea after what felt like and hour and a half, then Ganesh ji's murti was visarjit into the sea, Vanshika bid him goodbye and prayed to Ganpati that next time he makes sure she has her 'sapno ka rajkumar' there with her when Ganapati returns on the next Ganesh Chaturthi.

After the visarjan all make there way back to the mandir or else home, at this point Sanvi is a little restless to get back, she was worrying whether Dharam had actually got there or not

Dharam also remembered that he had to get back and meet Sanvi, that's when his mind fell on the girl he had seen earlier, she looked like a fairy but Dharam knew he was almost engaged with Sanvi so thinking about someone else was wrong now.

Veer was eager to get back and find that 'batameez ladki' whom he apologised to and settle the scores.

Once they get back Snavi tells Vanshika to sit in the Resting room which was just for them 2 today while she goes to the other side and waits for Dharam there

Vanshika is a little tired so sits and has a maid fanning her and another cutting up her fruits and had guards outside her room

Dharam sees the guards and asks them

Dharam: Rajkumari kahan hai?

Guard: who undar hai, ap kaun

Dharam: Hum Aryanagar ke Rajkumar hai, Dharam

Guard: teekh hai ap undar ja sakte hai, Rajkumari apka intazar kar rahi hai

Dharam enters nerveously closely followed by Veer

Dharam looks around for Sanvi

Dharam sees a Rajkumari who is being fanned by a dasi

Vanshika: arre teekh se karo, humme bilkul hawa nahin ah rahi

The dasi replies ' ji Rajkumari ji'

Vanshika looks at her fruits

Vanshika: ye kya'phaal ko aise kat te hai'lagta hai kisi ne tumhe kuch nahin sikhaya sirf bej diya

The dasi looks at Vanshika in disbelief

Vanshika: humne maa se kaha tha, humari khaas dasiyon ko humare saath bheje par unho ne maana kar diya'ab mu kya dekh rahi ho'humme bohat thakan lagi hai peer dabado

The dasi obeys

Vanshika had a set of dasi who did all her work since Vanshika was a baby so she didn't like the work of these dasi who were new to her, she liked everything to be perfect the way her khaas dasis do for her so she was being very fussy and rude

Veer: dharam humne toh suna tha ke Rajkumari Sanvi teekh tak dikh ti hai aur bado

ka adar karti hai...aur tameez se pesh ati hai par ye toh kuch alag hii namuna tha...

mujhe kuch gadh badh lag rahi hai

Dharam nods in agreement

Veer: koi baat nahin'main hoon naa'ab zara pata lagate hai ke ye namuna hai kaun

Dharam looks confused but Veer smiles

Precap:

Vanshika: toh tum ho Rajkumar Dharam'humme aisa laga tha ke ye batameez ko maa aur pitahji pasand nahin kar sakte

Veer: ehh natchadi rajkumar kisi batameez keh rahi ho'batameez mein nahin tum ho

Vanshika: tumne humko batameez kaha

Veer: haan
Enjoy
Shona
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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