Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

hey Riyaa thanks a lot

hmm yep now its him who is possesive about her as she is going in the amrs of the wrong man and he knows that.

hehehee im just a normal person you all are the stars who give me so much credit.

Quote

aarthi

@aarsow

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

wooooooooow thz sounds gud,

realy awesum update n briliant,

2 gud contn sweety,

Aarthi

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: aarsow
wooooooooow thz sounds gud,

realy awesum update n briliant,

2 gud contn sweety,

Aarthi

thanks a lot for appreciating

Quote

Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj toh Naina ka khayal rakhne ke bajaye ush chudail Archie ka khayal rakh raha hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ko laga tha ki woh uska khayal rakh raha hai!!!! Poor her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Usse toh rona aa raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj kuch zyada hi close jaa raha hai Archie ke!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Accha huya Naina ne vase todke interrupt kar diya!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Great cast for Archie!!!!😊 😊 😊

Archie offered Raj to take her to her room and he went with her!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

O God!!! What a perfectly horrible nightmare!!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Poor Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭Wakai mein kitna daravna tha!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina phone karegi ki nahi decide karne mein hi itna time laga rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ufff!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼Just like Preity in Kal Ho Na Ho!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shukar hai ab usse akal aayi ke phone karne se pata nahi chalega ke kisne kiya hai!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼

Phone pe awazon se toh Naina ko laga ke someone is making out in Archie's room!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She is so broken down!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Puri raat roti rahi yeh sochke ke woh Raj hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Magar Raj bhi toh Archie ke saath gaya tha uske room mein!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina toh Neelu ke saamne bhi roye jaa rahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Par Neelu ne toh yeh kaha ki puri raat Raj party mein tha aur uske saath Archie nahi thi!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Aur baad mein bhi woh lobby mein tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Toh Archie ke room mein kaun tha??😕 😕 😕 😕

Neelu ne sahi kaha!!! Raj Naina ko bas jalana chahta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

All the things Neelu said made sense and finally Naina is seeing sense too!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Think of the Devil and the Devil is here!!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

Aur yeh Huda padh gaya Naina ke peeche!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Isse aur koi kaam nahi hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Neelu ne kya idea diya hai!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Kisi aur ladke ke saath ghumo aur Raj ko jealous karo!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very good!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neelu ne devil ke upar devil ke horns bhi dekh liya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for her!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Neelu ne dhundh liya devil matlab ladka aur woh bhi Huda!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ne sahi kaha chipku lagta hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔

Naina ka natak shuru ho gaya!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Huda is surprised but thinks she is attracted towards him!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼Good!!!!

Naina is feeling so bad doing all this!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Neelu ne sahi kaha!!! Yeh salwer pahenke thode hi jaa sakti hai!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Bikni diya toh Naina ne pehene se mana kar diya magar jab dekha ke Raj ke paas Archie bikini mein ghum rahi hai toh maan gayi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko bar chested dekh ke Naina started getting weird thoughts!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Good for her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Yeh Raj bhi Archie ko bikini mein dekhe hi jaa raha hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Very bad!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina is looking so sexy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Raj toh flat ho gaya usse dekhke!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usse dekhke Archie ko bhool gaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Waah!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ladki dekhi nahi ke chalu!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj Naina ko apni possession manta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda is the wrong type of guy!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡And he has made a bet!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Raj better do something and fast!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj ne Huda ko dog bulaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Very good!!!!

But dogs toh wafadar hote hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina toh Huda ke saath swim karne gayi!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj toh bilkul jal gaya and wanted to beat up Huda!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Nek kaam mein deri nahi karte!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj ne haath diya aur Naina ne nahi liya!!!! Bechara!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne usse mana kiya toh Naina nahi maani!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Par usne push kiya aur Raj pool mein gir gaya!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Bechara!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I hope both of them confess soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Quote

arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! - thanks

Raj toh Naina ka khayal rakhne ke bajaye ush chudail Archie ka khayal rakh raha hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ko laga tha ki woh uska khayal rakh raha hai!!!! Poor her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Usse toh rona aa raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - yeh she's really upset seeing him with Archie when nothing happened to her.

Raj kuch zyada hi close jaa raha hai Archie ke!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Accha huya Naina ne vase todke interrupt kar diya!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - she can't allow it to happen.

Great cast for Archie!!!!😊 😊 😊 - thank you it was ur suggestion.

Archie offered Raj to take her to her room and he went with her!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

O God!!! What a perfectly horrible nightmare!!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 - nightmare se bhi bura tha per acha jhatka diya hai na.

Poor Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭Wakai mein kitna daravna tha!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina phone karegi ki nahi decide karne mein hi itna time laga rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ufff!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼Just like Preity in Kal Ho Na Ho!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab hesitation to rahegee wo nightmare ke baad.

Shukar hai ab usse akal aayi ke phone karne se pata nahi chalega ke kisne kiya hai!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼

Phone pe awazon se toh Naina ko laga ke someone is making out in Archie's room!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She is so broken down!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Puri raat roti rahi yeh sochke ke woh Raj hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - poor her, she really thinks its Raj and now she's heartbroken.

Magar Raj bhi toh Archie ke saath gaya tha uske room mein!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina toh Neelu ke saamne bhi roye jaa rahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - needs a shoulder to cry on as shes had enough.

Par Neelu ne toh yeh kaha ki puri raat Raj party mein tha aur uske saath Archie nahi thi!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Aur baad mein bhi woh lobby mein tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - she's a life saver.

Toh Archie ke room mein kaun tha??😕 😕 😕 😕 - hehehehe sochte rehjaoge

Neelu ne sahi kaha!!! Raj Naina ko bas jalana chahta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

All the things Neelu said made sense and finally Naina is seeing sense too!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Think of the Devil and the Devil is here!!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈 - yep he had arrived.

Aur yeh Huda padh gaya Naina ke peeche!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Isse aur koi kaam nahi hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - naina ke liye to accha hai na, oska kaam hojaaehga

Neelu ne kya idea diya hai!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Kisi aur ladke ke saath ghumo aur Raj ko jealous karo!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very good!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she has experience.

Neelu ne devil ke upar devil ke horns bhi dekh liya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for her!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - she has the eye for it.

Neelu ne dhundh liya devil matlab ladka aur woh bhi Huda!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ne sahi kaha chipku lagta hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 - well Huda hai hee aisa or shakal pe hee likha hai.

Naina ka natak shuru ho gaya!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Huda is surprised but thinks she is attracted towards him!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼Good!!!!

Naina is feeling so bad doing all this!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - she can't stand Huda

Neelu ne sahi kaha!!! Yeh salwer pahenke thode hi jaa sakti hai!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Bikni diya toh Naina ne pehene se mana kar diya magar jab dekha ke Raj ke paas Archie bikini mein ghum rahi hai toh maan gayi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course maan jaati warna Raj ko oske paas keech tee kaise

Raj ko bar chested dekh ke Naina started getting weird thoughts!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Good for her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - wo to hai aakhir he's so bloody hot.

Yeh Raj bhi Archie ko bikini mein dekhe hi jaa raha hai!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Very bad!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - kya kare aadat se majboor hai

Naina is looking so sexy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Raj toh flat ho gaya usse dekhke!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usse dekhke Archie ko bhool gaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Waah!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ladki dekhi nahi ke chalu!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 - Naina is after all Naina or Raj to betaab tha ose aise dekhne ko

Raj Naina ko apni possession manta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she is.

Huda is the wrong type of guy!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡And he has made a bet!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Raj better do something and fast!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 - yes he will do something don't worry.

Raj ne Huda ko dog bulaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Very good!!!!

But dogs toh wafadar hote hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 - yes but in this case he is one of the wild dogs who need to be put in the jungle.

Naina toh Huda ke saath swim karne gayi!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj toh bilkul jal gaya and wanted to beat up Huda!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Nek kaam mein deri nahi karte!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - yes he was really heated up and now it wont be far before he does teach him a lesson.

Raj ne haath diya aur Naina ne nahi liya!!!! Bechara!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - ab oskee baaree hai beechaara banekee

Raj ne usse mana kiya toh Naina nahi maani!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Par usne push kiya aur Raj pool mein gir gaya!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Bechara!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I hope both of them confess soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm lets see what happens and how long it takes.

Quote

Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

wow what an update

plz continue soon

Quote

arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

thanks prerna1

im glad uve appreciated the part and yeh I'm updating in a few minutes.

Quote

arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Part 4

They all have ten more days in Spain and there is a sports festival going on so many decide from the group to join it and so do Rajveer and Naina. Several events take place.

It is Rajveer and Naina's first competition and everyone are quite nervous. Rajveer feels terrible 🤢 because from the past three days he continuosly saw Naina hanging out with Huda. Always laughing 😆around with him and making it as if Huda was really funny. Rajveer never understood their jokes, but Naina always seemed to laugh at it. The only joke he could understand was Naina being with Huda.😆 He had thought that by being with Archie Naina will realise her inner urge for him and will come flying in his arms but instead she went and found comfort in another man's arms. Why did it have to be Huda? Everytime he tried to distract himself with Archie Naina and Huda always ended up there and Rajveer ended up feeling miserable. He sat in the changing room wondering.

Rajveer thought: is Huda ka kuch karna parega. Saale kee himmat dekhee, 😡meree Naina ke upar dore daal raha hai. Ab waqt aagaya hai ose dekhane ka ke Rajveer se panga lena bohat bhaaree parta hai. Ose me yeh shart kisee bhi keemat pe jeetne nahi dunga.

It was time for the competition to begin. It was a swimming competition and there were batches who went. Naina was unfortunately in the same batch as Rajveer and she felt really nervous. She waited ?imaptiently in the changing room.

Naina: Neelu mujhe bohat ghabrahat horahee hai 😔

Neelu: Kyu?😕 Tune to bohat practice kee hai

Naina: Me ye competition kee baat nahi karahee. Me jo Huda ke saat karahee hu, ose lekar ghabrahat horahee hai

Neelu: Come on Naina! 😒 You signed up for this to ab tujhe isko anjaam tak pohochana hai. Mujhe results to already dikrahe hai.😃 Rajveer puree tarha se jal chuka hai.

Naina: tujhe kese pata?

Neelu: Meree jo yeh aakhe hai na ose aisee cheeze dekhai detee hai jo dekhai hee nahi detee. Are jab bhi tu Huda ke saat ghoom tee hai na to Rajveer ka chehra utar jaata hai or oskee nazre tujhpe se hat thee hee nahi. You can clearly see how much he hates you being with him.

Naina: Phir bhi wo Archie ka peecha nahi choreta 😔

Neelu: Correction. 😳 Archie Rajveer ka peecha nahi choreti

Naina: Jo bhi ho, per dono ek saat hee hote hai. Neelu kahi is khel me koi garbar na hojaye. 😔 Aisa na ho ke Rajveer mere paas aane ke badle mujhse itna dhoore chala jaaye ke me chahkar bhi ose na boola saku

Neelu: Tu khamakha pareshaan horahee hai. Aisa kuch nahi hoga. Rajveer tera hai or tera hee rahega.😃 Ab bus thore din kee baat hai, tu yeh khel chaalu rakh phir dekhna wo khud chalkar tere paas aayega or tujhe hamesha ke liye haath pakar kar apne saat lejayega.😍 Phir Archie to kya, dunya kee koi bhi taakat tum dono ko alag nahi kar paayegee.

Naina joined her hands together and prayed that Neelu's words become true.

One more batch comes and complete the competition. Finally it is Rajveer and Naina's turn. She covers herself with the robe and prepares to go out. Rajveer was going to come to her when he saw Huda with her instead.

Huda: I've come here to wish you all the best (kisses her on the cheek)

Rajveer's nostrils flared up again.😡 He gets even more frustrated when he sees Naina blushing. How dare he touch his Naina?

After Huda leaves, Naina hopes that Rajveer would also come because she saw him standing there when Huda kissed her. She knew how much he was burning inside and it ?was about time he took it out.

Unfortunately to her dismay he didn't come to her instead he was greeted by Archie and he kissed her on the cheek. Naina turned red with fury 😡and stomped out.

By the pool...

All the competitors were ready, Naina walked up to her position and Rajveer followed who was right next to her. Their was anxiety as to how will she complete the task with him right beside her and looking so God damn gorgeous. Why did he have to look like a sex God? She was still lost in her thoughts when the whistle blew and everyone dived in and she was the last one.

Once half way Rajveer delibrately held onto her hand tightly preventing her from going ahead. She struggled and did a double flip before time which caused a slight caus for other swimmers. He still didn't let go, so she was forced to finish it just like that.

She was able to elbow him in the second lap so she got free. He made an 'ow' face but had to continue.

The lifeguard outside saw the tiff between the two and wasn't happy 😔with what he was seeing. Rajveer and Naina were being hazardous to others and were just fooling around. Just before they started their third lap he stopped them at the side and told them behave or they'll be pulled out. Both of them nodded and got back.

Both of them started off seperately but soon somehow got close again.

Rajveer was just not ready to leave her alone so he grabed hold of her hand again but this time he did it discretely underwater.

he still doesn't let go and she struggles. Now they're on their last lap and she is determined to win and he is determined to prevent her. Both of them are being destructive for others but they don't care and are going ahead pushing everyone else. She tries kicking him away which just ends up kicking someone else

He throws her away from him then pulls her towards him still going ahead as now the finishing line is nearer. Naina wants him to let go and both of them are ready to kill each other and they do end up with Naina strangling his neck and sitting on top of him. They don't even realise that they've reached the finish line together.

The whistle blows and it ends. Both Naina and Rajveer stare into each other's eyes and are pulled out by the lifeguard after scolding them. The audience however are applauding for them and Rajveer picks Naina up in his arms alarming her. He is just laughing and getting all the attention from the audience and then he does the unexpected, throws her on the floor whilst he goes and bows in front of the audience. She sits there with her mouth open.😲

Lifeguard: 😡 what the hell were you guys doing out there? Your irresponsible behaviour could have endangered so many lives as well as your's. I told you before 😳 to keep your personal differences aside and to continue without anymore obstructions but you didn't listen. Now there will only be disqualification for both of you.

He stormed off. Rajveer got frustrated 😡 and left, kicking away a box of floats, whilst Naina also left. The competition held no importance for them anymore.

outside the competition had finished and now the announcer was going to announce the winners of that day.

Announcer: Today's competition has been really superb 😊 where the performances were considered from good to very good to excellant. I would like to applaud 😃 all those who participated. But this is a competition where there are winners and there are losers. I would like to announce those participants who have succeeded today for the medals. First the runner ups...

He continued saying all the names. Rajveer and Naina's name had still not been announced. Neelu waited impatiently on the bleechers.

Announcer: There's been a last minute recalculation, eventhough these particiapnts had broken a few rules they did show excellant swimming skills and therfore the jury has decided to award them a special award of best teamwork and great self esteem. Ladies and gentlemen the particiapnts for this category are - Rajveer and Naina.

The whole crowd roared with claps 👏 and cheers and whistles 🥳. Neelu leaped with joy and ran inside the changing room but Naina had already left. She checked the lobby and there she saw her staring in the mirror at one side and Rajveer with his eyes closed on the other side.

Neelu: 😃 Naina! Naina! Naina! You wont believe it. Are judges ne tum dono ko ek special award ke category me daal diya hai. Onko tumhare performance itna pasand aagaya 😊 ke they just couldn't decide what to do.

Naina: Thank God (hugged 🤗 Neelu) warna kuch log to ose barbaad karne pe tule huwe the 😡 (glanced over at Rajveer, who also just stared at her)

Neelu: Oh I'm so happy 😃😃

Rajveer decided to come over to her when Archie came running and hugged 🤗 him.

Archie: You were mindblowing! 😊 Ab to tum yeh festival jeet ke hee rahoge. This calls for celebration. 👏 I think we should all have a party.

Rajveer: Of course we should (then looked over at Naina) per isme hai na zyada boring logo ko mat bulaana 😛 jo parties, clubs, or discos se dhoore rehte hai. I mean khamakha masti kharaab kardete hai. And you know I love action 😉 (pulled Archie towards him)

Archie: Only the cool people will be invited 😆

Naina hated the way Archie talked and everytime she saw her opening her mouth she felt like gagging her. She was thinking of answering back when Huda came.

Huda: 😃 that was some performance Naina!

Naina: 😊 thankyou Huda

Huda: Tumne to kamaal kardiya warna kuch log to 😒 tule huwe the barbaad karne per (referring to Rajveer)

Naina: ab kya kare, kuch log hote hee hai aise. Dusro ko neecha deekhana onkee fitrat me hota hai.

Huda: anyways forget that. I think we should have a party 😊

Rajveer almost laughed 😆 at that because he knew that Naina would decline him as she hated parties.

Naina: (notices him smirking) Of course. 😊 me to kehtee hu ke hame sab ko bulaana chaheeye, taake wo hamaree khushi me shaamil ho. Ab chaahe wo khush ho ke na ho 😛

Rajveer thought: Okay Naina you want to play hard ball, then I'm game.

Rajveer: Hey Archie tumhe nahi lagta ke yahape bohat garmee hai 😛

Archie: 😆 Oooh! I'm always hot! 😉

Rajveer pretended to laugh 😆. Naina made a face 🤪 and imitated her. Oh Archie was so stupid.

Rajveer: Lets go (he got her off him and slapped her ass)

Naina: (in her mind)Gosh he's such a...😡 uggh! (out loud) Huda, Oh God 🤢 i think me girrahee hu. Please hold me.

she pretends to be woozy and Huda quickly catches her and then holds her tight. With the corner of her eye she can see Rajveer getting angry 😡 so she continues.

Naina: Mujhe lagta hai ke kuch hawa kee zaroorat hai 😔 Please Huda carry me outside.

Now Rajveer got up immediately. There was no way he was going to let Huda do that but he was too late because he already had her carried in his arms and was walking off. He saw how comfortably she had rested her head on his chest.

Rajveer: 😡 God damn it! (he kicked the metal stool and stormed out of the lobby leaving a confused 😕 Archie. Neelu however was observing their charade for a long time and knew that both of them were obviuosly in love with each other but were in denial because of the ego now. She had to do something.)

Evening...

Naina was getting ready in her room. She did wait for Rajveer to come there too but he didn't. In fact since that night of the party he hadn't returned back to the room. She was surprised 😲 as well as curious as to where exactly did he go. She stood in front of the mirror looking at her blue bandeau strapless dress, making adjustments so it doesn't appear too short. She felt uncomfortable 😔 wearing it but Neelu had forced her. there was a knock on the door.

Naina: 😊 zaroor Rajveer hoga. I'm sure wo mujhse maafi maangega or aise mujhe dekh ke behosh hojaehga.

She goes to open the door with excitement 😃 but it soon dies 😔 down.

Naina: Huda? 😔

Huda: Wow! kya maardaldene ka irada hai?

Naina: Oh Huda darling 😉 you're looking so hot (kissed his cheek)

Huda: wow! 😲 lagta hai aaj kuch alag hee baat hai.

Naina: yeh to shuruwaat hai. Aage, aage dekho hota hai kya 😊

Huda: 😊 chale?

She linked hands with him and both went downstairs to the night club where the party was held.

Night club...

Loud music, dancing people, smoke and drunken smell welcomed Naina which instantly gave her a headache.🤢 at first she had thought that she would be able to handle it but now she wanted to change her mind.

Naina thought: Yeh Rajveer aaya kyu nahi 😔 abhi tak? kahi wo...

Just then she saw him come in. Oh he looked great as ever in black jeans and a black shirt.

Naina thought: Great, 😃 yeh akela aaya hai. ab me...

Her excitement died 😔 when she saw him pulling Archie towards him. That crazy slapper 😡 looked even more a tart in a malt gold sequin halter dress. As she saw them coming closer to them she took Huda's hand.

Naina: Chalo na, dance karte hai

Both of them went on the floor and joined with the others.

Rajveer's eyes immediately fell on them and he was displeased 😒 with the view. He hated how Huda had held her so close to him and that too in a place which was inappropriate.

Rajveer thought: Kya zaroorat thee ose 😡 aise kapre pehen ne kee? ose to me...

Archie: Raj chalo na dance karte hai

Rajveer: um...tum joa me thoree dair me aata hu.

Archie: Okay 😊 Jaldi aana 😉 (kisses him on the cheek and then walks off mingling with her friends)

He sat on the bar stool with his eyes fixed 😍 on Naina and Huda. He felt as if he was her bodyguard and only he had the right on her body. He ordered a drink and each time Huda pulled her closer he ordered another drink. 😡 before he knew it he had drank 5 - 6 glasses already but still the fire in him 😡 hadn't died. Then he noticed something and that was that Huda had started getting too close to her and she was feeling uncomfortable 😔 There were times when Naina tried moving his hands away but he didn't seem to budge. Rajveer was ready to kill Huda when...

Naina: Huda mujhe pyaas lagee hai

Huda: Okays tum joa or betho 😊 me kuch drinks lekar aata hu.

Naina goes to the table relieved to get out of Huda's grip whilst he went to the bar. Tears 😭 had welled up in her eyes but she held them back, promising herself that she will be strong. Why didn't Rajveer come to save her?😔

Huda: Two glasses of beer

Rajveer: Kaafi maza aaraha hoga tujhe ha?

Huda: 😃 ab jiske paas itnee hot item ho 😉 to osko maza aaehga hee na

Rajveer: (rage 😡 filled his eyes) Dekh wo shart waalee baat ek hadd tak theek thi per ab kuch ziada horaha hai, Leave Naina alone

Huda: 😒 kyu darr gaya ke me shart jeet jaaoonga? or wese bhi wo koi teree private property hai kya?

Rajveer: 😡 ha hai, so you better keep your distance. 😳

Huda: Thats funny 😃 because i never saw your name on her. Oh come on Raj, 😈 tum bhi to wohi chahte ho jo me chahta hu to phir mil baat 😉 ke khaate hai na.

Rajveer grabbed Huda's collar in anger 😡 and Huda was about to punch Rajveer.

Naina: Huda 😲 tumhe drinks laane ko kaha tha or tum...

Huda: ab kya kare (removing Rajveer's hand from his collar) kuch logo ko to aadat see hai dusro ke maamlo me parne kee. Khair anyways here's your drink (hands her the glass of beer)

Rajveer: (taking the glass away from her) 😒 Naina yeh drink tumhaare liye theek nahi hai

Naina: kyu? 😕

Rajveer: This is beer and I don't think you can handle hard drinks.

Huda: Raj, why don't you let her make her own decision (grabs the glass from him and gives it to her)

Rajveer: 😳 mene kaha na Naina tum yeh nahi pee saktee

Naina: 😡 phirse order karahe ho mujhe? Excuse me, me chaahe jo bhi karoo, wo meree marzee hai 😛 (attempts to drink, but he manages to grab it away again)

Rajveer: I'm warning you 😡 tum yeh handle nahi karsakhogee.

Huda: Raj 😡 why don't you leave her alone

Rajveer: Yehi baat me tumse kehraha hu 😡 leave her alone!

Naina was annoyed 😔 with both the men deciding for her so she pushed both of them out of her way and grabbed hold of a shot of tequilla on the counter. In anger 😡 she took it and without thinking drank all three shots. Then she turned wild 🥳 and went dancing around back on the floor.

Both Rajveer and Huda were left aghast 😲

After five to ten minutes Rajveer noticed that Naina had disappeared so he went around looking for her. She was drunk and God knows what state she would be in.

When he got near the dance floor he noticed a crowd had gathered around. He pushed his way through and was surprised to see Naina in the middle with her head bowed as if she was in a dance position. She had gone and ordered them to play an Indian song and they had no choice but to oblige as she was all over them. Then she came and stood again and the music began and she moved with it.

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi ek daur tha, waqt hee or tha jab wo the ajnabee
dono tanhase the per wo kehte kise baat jo dil me thee

Rajveer had to do something before she made a fool of herself, so he made his way towards her and then grabbed her by the waist and pulled her closer to him. both of them stared 😍 in each other's eyes and then automatically matched their steps with the music.

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi ek daur tha, waqt hee or tha jab wo the ajnabee
dono tanhase the per wo kehte kise baat jo dil me thee

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee

Everyone cheered for them whilst they set the dance floor on fire with their salsa moves.

Ghumsum,ghumsum rehte the dono (Rajveer brought Naina closer to him)

phir bhi dil me kehte the dono
koi sapna, hambhi to paaye

ek din, toote ghum ke wo ghere (he twirled her around and scooped her)

jhilmil, jhilmil aaye saavere
mausam badla, jaagee fizayeh

Wo milgaye, wo khilgaye (he pushed her out and in as as they went around) aur pyaar hohee gaya

jo chaha tha, wo paaya to hosh hee khohee gaya.

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee

Now the heat had risen between them and the moves began becoming quite sensuous.

hole, hole, ab wo deewaane
gun gun gaaye, dil ke tarane
sun sun jhoome, saaree hawaein

dharkhan, dharkhan, hai behkee behkee
tan man, tanman chaahat hai mehkee
sapne, apne, jadoo jagaye

Inhe dekhoge, to jaanoge kya hai nasha pyaar ka
yehi sochoge, yehi chaahoge, sung rahe yeh sada

Pyaar kee yeh kahani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi kya hai jawaani suno
ek larka tha, ek larki thee
wo bhi ek daur tha, waqt hee or tha jab wo the ajnabee
dono tanhase the per wo kehte kise baat jo dil me thee

Now the steps became a bit quick and he kept twirling her around. Gradually he slowed down with him holding her tight from the back and with her breathing hard and having her eyes closed.

end of part

okay guys some of u might find this one not that exciting but more is to follow so do with this one for the time being.

Thank you.

Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago