Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 93

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice parts and lovely fic enjoyed it thoroughly from beginning till end.

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Arwa

Happy Holi!!! 😊 Perfect ending for a beautiful fiction..👏👏👏 - hey Suhaana thanks a lot

seems Raj's luck always desert him when he need it the most..That lady was so furious to find Raj in her room and Naina was mad with rage to see her hubby with other woman.. - hehe yeh poor him

Poor Raj !!! the starting of his honeymoon was so disasterous..😆 he was trying hard to convince Naina but she is too stubborn.. - well ab kya kare biwi oski hee hain to yeh trait osme bhi aana hain na

finally Raj was back to his old tricks..climbing pipes seems to run in his blood..but he is indeed too daring..he wanted to clear his position as soon as possible..😆😆 afterall he can't stay like this on his honeymoon..😉 - of course and he wont stop until he succeeds

Naina's anger melted after seeing Raj in such a poor state..Both Raj and Naina whad a perfect honeymoon. ab onka pyaar itna strong hain ek duje ke liye ke wo ek duje ke bagair reh hee nahi sakte.

they remembered their first meeting and thereafter all their encounters..both r so happy with each other.They r indeed too romantic..😳😳😳 romance seems endless between the two..😉 - yes it sure does

but 4 children r too much in today's time..😆😆😆 these two have no control over their passion 😆😆😉 - hehe yeh they r always out of control

and then both have the nerve to blame the other for this😆😆😆 - of course that's wat happens

It was a happy ending to their fairy tale romance.. - i'm glad u liked it

Raj was indeed too much of a casanova in the beginning but Naina's love changed him completely..her true devotion towards him changed his outlook too.he became a devoted son,a loving husband and caring father. - yes all happened for the gud cause of love

Both Raj and Naina were lucky to have friends like Alekh and Neelu along with a very loving and understanding family who supported them at every step...😊

Love indeed changes a person completely...😊 - yes it does change everything

Now I hope that u'll start updating Lost ...😃

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So coming to your wedding update i know i am too late but kya karoon idhar udhar k chakkar me time hi nahi mil raha tha reply karne ka.

Anyways apni kahani nahi suanti hoon reply karti hoon wedding update k liye. 😆 😆 😆

Naina was nervous and it happens toe every bride before marriage chahe vo jitne bhi bold and bindaas kyoun na ho. 😭 😭 😭 - yes indeed as it is the day from when everything will change forever

Too sweet and i was really laughing hard when i read Raj's desperation to see Naina and to meet her in alone. 😆 😆 😆 He just wanted to bring her away from there. 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe yeh that's him

As soon as he saw Naina there he ran to her oh my god he was really funny that time. 😆 😆 😆 Us time us ne jaise daudkar Naina ko varmala pehnai hai that was amazing. 😆 😆 😆 - ab kya kare sabar toote raha hain

Ye guys kitna try kar rahe the ki Raj ka sir Naina k aage nahi jhuke but Raj hai na vo apni Naina ko kabhi bhi pareshaan nahi hone deta hai aur mazal hai kisi aur ki aisa karne ki. 😛 😛 😛 - of course that's why he is an ideal husband

How sweet, kitne sweetly us ne varmaala dalwaayi hai. Mandap phera all was really nice and i liked that.😃 😃 😃 Raj kitna pareshaan hai na ki jaldi se us ki shaadi ho jaaye Naina se. 😆 😆 😆 - I'm glad u did and as i said he has lost patience by now

That phera's & the abbreviation was awesome and i liked the way u wrote that. 👏 👏 👏 - thank you

As usual girls i mean saaliyon ka ek hi kaam hota hai, jeeju k shoes pe najar rakne ka aur jeeju k bhaiyon ka kaam hota hai girls pe najar rakhne ka jo dono teams kar rahi thi. 😆 😆 😆 - yep isi me maza hoti hain aadhe waqt to

That all shoe stealing scene was funny and awesome,👏 👏 👏 Shaina Varun, Ritu Naveen and Alekh Neelu were cute there but sab se jyada maza to tab aaya jab Raj ne kaha ki koi bhi shoe us ka nahi hai. 😆 😆 😆 - haha wahi to trick thi oski sab ko sataane ke liye

But Raj is really nice jeeju he gave the money they wanted. 😉 😉 😉 - that he sure is

Vidai time finally came and Naina ihas finally left her parents house forever. 😭 😭 😭 - indeed it was a sad moment mixed with happiness

Ok so now one more reply on next update.

Suhaagraat one. 😉 😉 😉

Raj was desperate to meet Naina but these people can not make that easy. All the rituals were being done by Sameera and that was nice. - yes she took care of everything properly to fill in their mother's place

Ok so these sisters and girls can never leave the opportunity to blackmail her brother and saare ladke bhi itne desperate hote hain apni wife se milne k liye to yahan koi un ko itne asaani se milne kahan deta hai? - oh yes wahi sahi moka hota apni baat manwaane ka

Khair ab ye rasm to poori honi hi hai na, Raj ne bhi Sameera ko pareshaan to kiya thoda sa par kitna jyada pareshaan karta apni pyaari se behan ko. - he luvs her too much to not fulfil her demands

Good gift she gift. Finally he was with his Naina all alone as he wanted. - yes finally poor guy

Par ye Raj k saare devil doston ne jaan moojh kar dono ko disturb karne ka plan bana rakha tha. Kuch aur nahi soch sakte the jo alarm clock me alarm set kar k rakh diya. - hehehe wo sudhar nahi sakte jab tak wo raj ke dost rahenge

Raj bechara dhoondhte dhoondhte thak gaya ki Naina ko us ka gift de kar us ne kaha change kar lo aur so jaao, that's funny. Yahi to vo sab chahte the na. - well not really they just wanted to have fun.

But Naina bhi acche se jaanti hai ki sote hue sher ko kaise uthana hai, us ne bahut acche se Raj ko kuch yaad dilaya aur feel bhi karaya ki un ki first wedding night aise hi chali jaayegi. - yes she had to take the initiative since she didnt want the special moment to get out of her hands

Bus ab kya tha, Raj ko sab kuch samajh me aa gaya aur shayad aage kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai abhi mujhe na………….that was truly hot, passionate & beautiful too.😳 😳 😳 Whenever they do romance it is beautiful and u make it outstanding too. 👏 👏 👏 - thanks a lot for loving my romantic scenes. RN makes it beautiful

Lovely ending and a bit hilarious too. 👏 👏 👏 - thank u very much

Raj went on a honeymoon of a month, I think only Raj can make this possible and I think now I shouldn't say more about their love encounters, they are truly amazing and super hot. - hehehe well oski hee itni capacity hain ke chalte rahe

Naina left him one day and when she was back Raj was busy watching T.V. and all that ladies and obviously Naina will feel irritated after all leaving his hot and sexy wife he was watching those good for nothing girls ( from Naina's POV) - yes any woman would feel offended

But Naina showed him another side of her while made Raj drool over her but she doesn't know that Raj had another plans for her and he gave her a sweet surprise by that message. - oh yes lets say dono kuch kam nahi hain

After that all scenes were cut by our Arwa sensor board but lovely while reading that. I liked that disc scene and the song u used EK AJNABI recalled us the title of the Fic. - hehehe well i have to remain some boundaries due to this forum. well im glad u luved the song as yeh it was a tribute type to this fic

One year later:-

Oh Raj had become very hard working and how can we expect from her not to romance with his beautiful wife which is his right. - sab kuch hojaye wo nahi chorega

Ohoo he got his leg fractured and now he is completely dependent over Naina. Poor Naina how much work she can do and how can be she happy after a tiring schedule. - yep bad times are knocking on the door

It's her obvious reaction that she can be frustrated and irritated after hearing Raj's childish complains. Raj should understand her situation before complaining like a school kid and on another hand Naina should also think about Raj's condition. - haan dono ko milke yeh problem ko solve karna hain

This argument was really needed after all we can't see always lovey dovey scenes. These small fights and arguments develop an interest in a relation. Often people say na more sugary things make the taste boring so spice and chili is needed too in life otherwise life becomes monotonous and dull. - exactly or reality me aisa hee hota hain ke larai jhagre arguments chalti rehti hain

Now they understood each other's importance and will try to understand the situations now and will think about each other with empathy. Raj was snobbish and Naina was rude and both realized their mistake and sorted out soon it was nice. - yes it was understood by both

Raj has cooked many dishes just for Naina and it proved that how much he loves her and Naina too realized her mistake both were really cute in that scene. - aaaw yes. jhagre bhale jitne bhi ho agar waapis koi sorry kehta hain wo isliye ke oske dil me mohabbat abhi bhi baaki hain

Finally Neelu and Alekh got married on same date when our RN celebrated their anniversary. Raj...oh god he wants three cute girls and Naina wants a baby boy now it reached up to four and really u fulfilled their wish too. - yes one big happy family

Raj is really very shameless how he can behave in front of kids like this? When Naina sad baby he was thinking that Naina was joking, but he already has two time experience of being a father thank god it was not three times but in first time she gave birth to twins and both are opposite in nature one is like Raj and second is like Naina. - yes wo kabhi sudrega nahi warna maza kaha aayega. Well dono ka asar to aayega hee na baccho ko equally

Raj can always win the bet, how can Naina think of wining a bet when Raj is ready to win that. Sneha, Suhana and Simran and now Prem has also come in their lives making it complete. But u know four kids are more than enough to handle, I can never imagine to handle four kids. - yes difficult indeed but it seems sweet to write and read abt a house full of kids

Their children are happy and more than that Raj & Naina are happy to have a lovely baby boy, now in this way Naina's wish has been fulfilled. - yes definitely their family is complete

All selection of names from Ekta's shows hai na but whatever it is all was great. - ab kya kare mata ke naam itne acche hote hain

Here comes my view on the whole fic of yours.

Well done and really great work Arwa,👏 👏 👏 first thing I would say about your fic is it's always easy to start a FF but it's not easy to finish the FF.😛 😛 😛 We had a lot of good writers here who started lovely fics but never end up those fics. but u did that and made me feel that how much u love RN like us. - thanks very much for loving my fic and yeh i know its very hard to finish something especially a story. Yes passion for RN gives motivation to continue

Ek Ajnabi, the journey has started being a short fic and it ended up same too 😊 😊 😊 but if I remember exactly u wrote it for RN FF competition na but changed that in to a sweet story we wanted to enjoy fully. - yes i had never intended of making it this big but all u guys support helped me to come so far.

Raj and Naina met first time like strangers in a hotel in to their Europe trip and spend some lovely time together 😉 😉😉. Who knew that the famous Casanova Rajveer Singh Shekhawat can ever love a girl like this? 😉 😉 😉 He just made a bet with Huda to make Naina drool over him and yeah it happened after all it's Rajveer's charm which can never be failed. 😳 😳 😳 - certainly wat started as bad turned into something beautiful by the end

Naina was the first in both of them who realized that she has started liking Rajveer 😉 😉 😉 but he was busy with his life than and he realized when Naina left him all disheartened and with a broken heart.🥺 🥺 🥺 I still remember two scenes mainly one was the beech scene and second was the hand cuffs scene and I loved both of them a lot. 😃 😃 😃 - aaaw thanks a lot for liking both of them.

One more is there when Huda tried his best to create misunderstandings between Raj & Naina and he got successful in it with help of the girl 😡 😡 😡 ( I don't remember her name). 😛 😛 😛, he was just sick.😵 😵 😵 Thank god Raj realized his love for Naina and came back to her on time. 😳 😳 😳 - wo to ose aana hee tha warna zinagi bhar pachtaa ta

Enjoyed that scene in the gym and the most funny one when Raj planed with Neelu to bring Naina in the park and he wanted to say sorry to her.😉 😉 😉 When he said"lagta hai tunky me paani khatam ho gaya hai" I still remember it and it was damn funny. 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe yeh those funny moments and im glad u have remembered the story that well

And the confession when Raj was about to fall from ladders and Naina finally accepted him and his love.🤣🤣 🤣 The lovely journey started from that and their passionate romantic encounters made them super hot.☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Naina and Raj's family trip and their families approval for marriage, every thing was lovely & I liked that so much.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - glad u did and thanks a lot for the appreciation

Raj's all pranks, the ghost one and in the hospital when he had some fight with Huda that was cute and lovely. - hehehe yeh he was a big prankster in this one

Now to the wedding and honeymoon to four kids everything was perfect and I loved whole the story which made us love them even more.🤗 🤗🤗You know sometimes I feel that whenever I read RN fics I start to love them more than the previous time. - truly i also get that feeling most of the time which helps to write further

Awesome work Arwa, keep on rocking and writing such wonderful RN fics.🤗🤗🤗- thanks a lot vertika and i hope u continue reading my fics and love them just like this one.

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

So its the end!! Dont really like ends...but still this left a smile on my face!!😊 Firstly sorry for the delay in replying, was lil busy wid studies...but now am back.😃 - i know ends are generally sad but im glad this one made u smile

And to start wid the part...the honeymoon portion was amazing!!👏⭐️ I didnt think it wud start off in such a way where Raj wud not be allowed in his room.😆😆 But then he was Raj!! Did sum crazy stunt to get into his room whereas he cud easily get a spare key!!😆😆🤣 But u knw wat Arwa Dii, this is the specialty of Raj in this fic. He is crazy sumtyms and that makes him really adorable!!😳😳 - yeh had made him like that from beginning so had to maintain till the end


The romance portion was perfect!! U r a master at that...wat more to say!! And I always love the way u bring in the songs and gel them in the part wid much expertise!! 👏 - aaw thanks for liking all of them and my writing



Now after honeymoon, they r back. months hav passed by and Raj got fractured!! That was really sad...but I wud say if there r no such difficulties in lyf then u dont really knw who means wat to u!!😉 - exactly such incidents help bonds grow stronger


On their anniversary, Aalekh and Neely got married as planned...hehe. Cool 👏👏⭐️ - yes friends forever


And then came Raj's princesses...he won by 3:1 😆 as finally Prem came into their lyf!!😳😳 - well he always seems to win in this fic


It was a beautiful fic, quite different from the liked of LRL fics..😳 it was rather light, funny and enjoyable along wid being romantic and lil emotional too.😃 Guess quite a perfect mixture it was!!👏👏 - thanks very much for finding all of this in this fic


Thanks for writing this beautiful fic for us...hope to read Lost more regularly now...and a new fic is always welcum!!😉 - surely wud try to become regular yet sometimes its hard and i get to update once in three months

*** Arre Puri ka reply padhke yaad aya...wud looovvveee to read Romeo-Juliet one...😆😳...I truly love that one😳*** - surely wud try to bring that one up again