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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow what a hilarious part!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

naina was completely freaked out in today's part....poor rajveer and neelu...

the bar scene and the fight was very funny too🀣🀣....

glad that they did not get into trouble with the police...btw where did she get those handcuffs from

she announced in front of the whole crowd that they were a couple...and rajveer was so embarrassed...but it was too cute😳

ok so now they r handcuffed together and locked up in a room...i wonder what will happen now....neelu has all the reasons to get worriedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

all in all rocking update....good jobπŸ‘



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! - thanks a lot

Bechara Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Naina toh Huda ke saath hi ghum rahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - wo bhi to kam nahi, he's also going around with Archie.

Raj ko Huda ke koi jokes samaj mein nahi aaya!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›I am sure of that!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - because Huda is the biggest joke.

He tried to distract himself with Archie!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Accha huya Naina appears with Huda all the time!!!!

I loved the meri Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Finally he decided to teach Huda a lesson!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - yep finally he realised.

Naina is in Raj's batch!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Neelu is right!!!!😊 😊 😊Raj puri tarah se jal chuka hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Aur Archie Rajveer ka peecha nahi chhodti and not vice versa!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - Neelu is the clever one here

I loved Neelu's words!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊The ways she said everything would happen!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is also praying ke Neelu's words come true!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raj Naina ke paas jaane hi wala tha ke Huda aa gaya!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Hamesha galat time pe aata hai!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - Jo insaan hee ghalat ho oskee timing bhi ghalat hee hogi na

Raj got angry when Huda kissed Naina but instead of taking it out he kissed Archie!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ And Naina got angry!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Inka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - both of them are up to tit for tat.

Raj is looking gorgeous!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina is worried ke task kaise pura karegi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - even i wud be nervous standing next to him.

Raj is holding her hand!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Yeh kar kya raha hai!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

They got close again aur Raj is now holding her hand underwater!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is really being very naughty!!!!!😊 😊 😊 - as naughty as one can be.

Raj Naina ko aage jaane hi nahi deta!!!😑 😑 😑 😑And fighting like this they reach the finish line together!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊

The audience are applauding!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Raj Naina ko gode mein uthata hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Magar phir gira deta hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲How bad!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - he just loves annoying her

This reminds me of Shahrukh in Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge at the end of the song Rukh jaa o dil deewane when he drops Kajol!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊- hmmm interesting comparisan.

Ish Lifeguard ne toh Raj aur Naina ko disqualify kar diya!!!!!😑 😑 😑 πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Raj aur Naina ko special award mila!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 Thats great!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘- special logo ko hamesha sab kuch special hee milta hai

Naina usse tana mar rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Raj aane hi wala tha ke aagayi Archie!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Yeh Archie ka timing bhi Huda jitna hi kharab hai!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - dono ek hee nasal ke lagte hai .

Naina aur Raj Huda aur Archie ke saath mil kar ek dusre ko tana marne mein lage huye hai!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Hey Bhagwaan!!!!!

Raj kuch zyaada hi overconfident ho gaya tha ke Naina naa kar degi!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Naina ne haa kar diya!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj slapped Archie's ass!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Very bad!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - he was taking out Naina's anger.

Raj was late and Huda carried Naina out!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Raj gusse mein Archie ko hi bhul gaya!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - that showed who he really cared about really.

Accha huya Neelu thought that she had to do something!!!!! πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌAb wohi kuch kar sakti hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yep she'll have to come to the rescue.

Raj ush party ke bad room mein lauta hi nahi!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 Toh gaya kaha??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - hmm sochte rehjaaoge

Naina is looking very beautiful in that dress!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina ko bada confidence hai ke Raj hoga magar Huda aaya!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Naina ki acting bhi chalu!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - ab she has to keep the wheels rolling

Waise this scene is just like Kaho Na Pyaar Hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊When Amisha was waiting for Hrithik and her friend Atul comes!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 - another comparison. Yeh kya bollywood kee remix factory lagrahee hai πŸ˜†

Naina ne bhi Amisha ke hi tone kaha ke yeh toh shuruwat hai.Aage aage dekho hota hai kya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj is looking so handsome!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - as always.

Naina toh usse Archie ke saath dekh kar Huda ke saath dance karne chali gayi!!!!

How dare Huda touch her like that!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - ab kya kare koi roke ne waala bhi to nahi

Raj soch raha hai ke Naina ko aise kapde pehen ne ki kya zaroorat thi!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Well Archie is wearing even less clothes and you are making a big fuss of her!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 - my dear he doesn't care abt Archie, he cares abt Naina.

Raj feels he is her bodyguard and only he has the right on her body!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰Toh jao naa jaake kuch karo!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - i think we need to moitvate him.

Huda is pulling Naina closer!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Raj is also drinking!!!!!

Huda kuch zyada hi kareeb jaa raha hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑Uski toh main!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - are u dont need to get ur hands dirty, Raj hai na sambhaalne ke liye.

Naina is also getting uncomfortable and Raj noticed that!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” Toh kuch karte kyun nahi??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - he's a fool. a cute fool by the way πŸ˜›

Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She feels like crying but is still trying to be strong!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Why didn't Raj come to save her??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Raj finally confronted Huda!!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌHuda is talking so cheaply!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - one sick man

I liked it when Raj in answer to Huda's question ke kya woh uski private property hai said ki haa hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Good for him!!!!😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - finally he had to show Huda his place.

They were going to come to blows but Naina interrupted them!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Raj is stopping Naina from drinking the bear!!!!!😊 😊 😊But in sab mein he and Huda started quarelling!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - ,men- always dictating women.

No wonder Naina was annoyed with the two men deciding for her!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Magar ab toh she has drank three tequilla shots!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Mar gaye!!!!! - sach much me marhee gaye

The song was very nice!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊It suits them very well!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - thank you

Raj danced with her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - he had to be her knight in shining armour.

This reminds me of the film Na Tum Jano Na Hum!!!!!!😊 😊 -ugggggggggh Shaina u better not make another bollywood comparison.

Raj and Naina are really dancing very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Their salsa moves are great!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The moves began to get sensuous!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰And he held her tightly from the back!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiii!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - finally their feelings are coming out.

hmmm now read the next part quickly as well and give ur sweet extended comments. πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: mystified

wow what a hilarious part!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

naina was completely freaked out in today's part....poor rajveer and neelu...

the bar scene and the fight was very funny too🀣🀣....

glad that they did not get into trouble with the police...btw where did she get those handcuffs from

she announced in front of the whole crowd that they were a couple...and rajveer was so embarrassed...but it was too cute😳

ok so now they r handcuffed together and locked up in a room...i wonder what will happen now....neelu has all the reasons to get worriedπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

all in all rocking update....good jobπŸ‘



hey thanks very much
yep she is compltely tun now making Raj and Neelu's life a hell.
hehehe the handcuffs? well thats just a mystery now isn't it.
now nearly the whole town knows abt them and it was pretty embarassing but Raj managed to get out somehow.
yeh it is worrying but lets see what happens in the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
it was tooooooo goood...............
specially dat ba scene ....really hillarious.........
gr8 trick to win compitetion..............
absolutely njoyed rn..........n huda as always was at his annoyin best......
neelu was good too........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

it was tooooooo goood...............

specially dat ba scene ....really hillarious.........
gr8 trick to win compitetion..............
absolutely njoyed rn..........n huda as always was at his annoyin best......
neelu was good too........

thankyou very much
im glad u found it entertaining
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
thank you very much sweta2005
im glad ur appreciating this ff too and yeah i'll update it asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this is realy wonderful,

very humourous n funny,

RN were juz rockin,itz the best dear,

simply awesum n super,


gr8 contn,

Aarthi

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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
i jus cldnt stop laughing!!!!!! it was so great!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This comment is for third update u did dear.😊😊

Absolutely jhkaas update.πŸ‘

I like the way u expressed Rajveer and that girl Archie, she is just horrible with Rajveer.😑

Raj bhi aise show kar raha hai jaise us ko Naina ki nahi us horrible ladki ka kitna khayal hai aur nalayak ladka us k bandage ko kiss bhi kar raha tha.😑
Naina k baare me ek baar bhi nahi poocha ki ab vo kaise hai.😲😲😲
Poor Naina pehle to kuch nahi boli baad me baccho ki tarah foot foot kar roye hi jaa rahi thi.😭
Not fair Mr. Rajveer.
Phir vo telephone par Naina ne jo sounds suni my god too hot.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Jab kuch kar hi nahi raha tha Raj to hot kya?πŸ˜‰
Aagr Neelu na hoti to Raj k baare me Naina ko kaun batata aur Naina ji roti hi rehti baccho jaise.πŸ˜†
Neelu ka plan accha hai Raj ki band banaje k liye ab Raj ko pata chalege jab apni hi chaal ulti ho jaayegi.πŸ˜›
Huda bhi kam nahi hai mauka mila nahi laga chipakne kisi k bhi saath, poor baby Rajveer.🀒
Kya kya soch raha hai ab?πŸ˜•
Pehle nahi socha ye sab karne k pehle ab maza aayega Naina jab Raj ko aur pareshaan karegi.πŸ₯±
outstnading part yaar.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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