Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
thanks a lot rituka7 and sweta2005.
i'm glad u've appreciated this part and hope u'll continue reading further.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
supercool dear
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
thank you very much fanatic21 and prerna1
yeh I was looking for a good sensuous song and this one just came up and I'm glad u've appreciated it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
itz awesum n 2gud,

luved tat song,realy awesum song,

this is realy 2 gud,




Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
nice part arwa...

ok these two are hopeless each one is trying to irritate the other rather than bridging the gap between them😡😡😡...( i hope u r not angry at this comment coz that's wat i felt)

glad that neelu is trying to help but i doubt huda's intentions🤢🤢🤢...

so they are talking about a bet😲😲😲...does that mean that raj is trying to win naina and doesn't love her😕😕😕....but since u haven't mentioned their first meeting yet i think we'll have to wait and watch....

well i saw that u've mentioned it resembles a film, may be since i haven't seen it i have all these doubts😕😕😕...

u know wat i loved about all these parts is the appropriate use of smileys that really helps in understanding the expressions and they are funny too😆😆😆....

good going.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: aarsow

itz awesum n 2gud,

luved tat song,realy awesum song,

this is realy 2 gud,




Aarthi

thanks alot
yeah the song was something i thought wud fit with the feeligns i wanted t express so im glad u appreciated it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: mystified

nice part arwa...

ok these two are hopeless each one is trying to irritate the other rather than bridging the gap between them😡😡😡...( i hope u r not angry at this comment coz that's wat i felt)- no im not angry as i always appreciate the reader's opinion. They are hopeless at the moment but thats how they'll build their relationship.

glad that neelu is trying to help but i doubt huda's intentions🤢🤢🤢... - yeh Neelu is the saviour and Huda is the destroyer.

so they are talking about a bet😲😲😲...does that mean that raj is trying to win naina and doesn't love her😕😕😕....but since u haven't mentioned their first meeting yet i think we'll have to wait and watch....- hmmm all shall be revealed in due course.

well i saw that u've mentioned it resembles a film, may be since i haven't seen it i have all these doubts😕😕😕...

u know wat i loved about all these parts is the appropriate use of smileys that really helps in understanding the expressions and they are funny too😆😆😆....- thanks.

good going.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

sorry guys wrng post, I'll be posting it again later.

Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Naina toh Huda ke saath hi ghum rahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ko Huda ke koi jokes samaj mein nahi aaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛I am sure of that!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

He tried to distract himself with Archie!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Accha huya Naina appears with Huda all the time!!!!

I loved the meri Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Finally he decided to teach Huda a lesson!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina is in Raj's batch!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Neelu is right!!!!😊 😊 😊Raj puri tarah se jal chuka hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Aur Archie Rajveer ka peecha nahi chhodti and not vice versa!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😒 😒 😒 😒

I loved Neelu's words!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊The ways she said everything would happen!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina is also praying ke Neelu's words come true!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj Naina ke paas jaane hi wala tha ke Huda aa gaya!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Hamesha galat time pe aata hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj got angry when Huda kissed Naina but instead of taking it out he kissed Archie!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 And Naina got angry!!!!😛 😛 😛Inka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj is looking gorgeous!!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina is worried ke task kaise pura karegi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj is holding her hand!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Yeh kar kya raha hai!!!!😕 😕 😕

They got close again aur Raj is now holding her hand underwater!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is really being very naughty!!!!!😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ko aage jaane hi nahi deta!!!😡 😡 😡 😡And fighting like this they reach the finish line together!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

The audience are applauding!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Raj Naina ko gode mein uthata hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Magar phir gira deta hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲How bad!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

This reminds me of Shahrukh in Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge at the end of the song Rukh jaa o dil deewane when he drops Kajol!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ish Lifeguard ne toh Raj aur Naina ko disqualify kar diya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj aur Naina ko special award mila!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 Thats great!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina usse tana mar rahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Raj aane hi wala tha ke aagayi Archie!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeh Archie ka timing bhi Huda jitna hi kharab hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina aur Raj Huda aur Archie ke saath mil kar ek dusre ko tana marne mein lage huye hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Hey Bhagwaan!!!!!

Raj kuch zyaada hi overconfident ho gaya tha ke Naina naa kar degi!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Naina ne haa kar diya!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj slapped Archie's ass!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Very bad!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj was late and Huda carried Naina out!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj gusse mein Archie ko hi bhul gaya!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Accha huya Neelu thought that she had to do something!!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Ab wohi kuch kar sakti hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ush party ke bad room mein lauta hi nahi!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 Toh gaya kaha??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina is looking very beautiful in that dress!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏

Naina ko bada confidence hai ke Raj hoga magar Huda aaya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Naina ki acting bhi chalu!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Waise this scene is just like Kaho Na Pyaar Hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊When Amisha was waiting for Hrithik and her friend Atul comes!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne bhi Amisha ke hi tone kaha ke yeh toh shuruwat hai.Aage aage dekho hota hai kya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is looking so handsome!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina toh usse Archie ke saath dekh kar Huda ke saath dance karne chali gayi!!!!

How dare Huda touch her like that!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj soch raha hai ke Naina ko aise kapde pehen ne ki kya zaroorat thi!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Well Archie is wearing even less clothes and you are making a big fuss of her!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡

Raj feels he is her bodyguard and only he has the right on her body!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Toh jao naa jaake kuch karo!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Huda is pulling Naina closer!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Raj is also drinking!!!!!

Huda kuch zyada hi kareeb jaa raha hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡Uski toh main!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina is also getting uncomfortable and Raj noticed that!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 Toh kuch karte kyun nahi??😕 😕 😕 😕

Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She feels like crying but is still trying to be strong!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Why didn't Raj come to save her??😕 😕 😕 😕 😔 😔 😔

Raj finally confronted Huda!!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Huda is talking so cheaply!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I liked it when Raj in answer to Huda's question ke kya woh uski private property hai said ki haa hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Good for him!!!!😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

They were going to come to blows but Naina interrupted them!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj is stopping Naina from drinking the bear!!!!!😊 😊 😊But in sab mein he and Huda started quarelling!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

No wonder Naina was annoyed with the two men deciding for her!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Magar ab toh she has drank three tequilla shots!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Mar gaye!!!!!

The song was very nice!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊It suits them very well!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏

Raj danced with her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This reminds me of the film Na Tum Jano Na Hum!!!!!!😊 😊

Raj and Naina are really dancing very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Their salsa moves are great!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The moves began to get sensuous!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉And he held her tightly from the back!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiii!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5
The dance had ended but Rajveer and Naina were still engrossed in each other that they didn't let go. He rested his chin on her shoulder whilst she was still breathing heavily with her eyes closed. The closeness was sending different vibes throughout her entire body, making her tremble with desire. His light breath felt like lava on her bare shoulders and the light stubble on his chin felt itchy. Both of them didn't want this proximity to end.

Huda came and pulled her hand.

Huda:
😒 Come on Naina, mujhe lagta hai ke ab hame chalna chaheeye.

Rajveer: 😡 Huda, Naina ka haath choro

Huda: stay out of this Raj

Rajveer: 😡 mene kaha leave her alone

Huda pushes Rajveer away a bit. This enrages Rajveer 😡😡 and he comes forward and punches Huda in the face. Huda collides with a guy who simultaneously collides with a woman. the woman's boyfriend gets annoyed 😡 and punches who fell on her. That guy gets thrown on a table where two guys are drinking beer. It gets all spilled so one of them charge on the fallen guy 😡, but they miss and instead hit another guy.

This carries on, eventually leading to a bar fight, where everyone are hitting each other. 😆

Rajveer and Huda were still fighting oblivious to what was happening around them. The whole bar had turned into a circus where people were smashing bottles furniture on anybody they could find.

Naina found a hideout behind the bar counter and she kept on peeping up to see what was happening. Since she was drunk she thought everyone were dancing and just having fun 👏 She just kept giggling 😆 everytime someone fell on the counter.

Finally the bar tender managed to call the police but one guy came and snatched the phone from him whilst another guy came and pulled him in the fight.

After ten to fifteen minutes the police could be heard whistling in which made everyone run around. Rajveer was about to punch Huda but he froze and dropped his collar and left before the police caught him. Huda also ducked out of there.

As Rajveer ran he passed by the bar counter and saw Naina sitting on the stool and drinking. He was dumbstruck but soon came to his senses and went up to her.

Rajveer:
Naina, yeh kya karahee ho?

Naina: Bare smart bante ho 😛 Dekhai nahi deta?

Rajveer: 😒 Naina chalo yahase

Naina: 😔 nahi mujhe yahi rehna hai

Rajveer: raat bohat ho chukee hai, ab ghar jaana hai 😳

Naina: are raat to abhi shuroo huwee hai 😊 let me eeeeeeeenjoy! 😆

Rajveer: Come on leave this (took the glass out of her hand) Chalo utho

Naina: you know what Rajveer, you're such a shweetie muchy 😆 (struggling to get up)

Rajveer:
I think ab tumhe apne kamre me jaana chaheeye.

Naina: (she's delusional) yeah.

She's not able to walk properly so Rajveer supports her but she protests. Then he has had enough 😡 so he carries her in his arms and rushes out of the club before the police got to them.

Naina: (giving blows on his chest )
I said leave me! 😡 put me down! Leave me!

Rajveer: (puts her down aggressively) Chup! 😳 Bilkul khamosh 😡

Naina: (innocent child face) Chup horahee hu 😔 Daante kyu ho?

Rajveer: Daant nahi raha hu. Samjha raha hu

She starts crying like a child 😭 really loudly. Rajveer becomes embarrassed 😳 and looks around at passer bys.

Rajveer:
😡 Naina, stop crying

Naina: 😭 Pehle tum mujhe kaho I'm sorry.

Rajveer: Okay I'm sorry

Naina: Aise nahi 😒

Rajveer: kya matlab? 😕

Naina: (still wailing 😭) aise daant ke nahi. Pyaar se kaho

Rajveer: (frustrated with her behaviour 😡 but he had to stop the attention they were getting so he suppressed his anger and forced a smile) 😊 Okay Naina. I'm sorry. Ab chale.

Naina: Pehle waada karo ke phirse nahi daantoge.

Rajveer: Me waada karta hu, okay.

Naina: sachi muchi 😛

Rajveer: (through grinded teeth) 😡 ha, ha sachi muchi. Ab chalo

He pulled her towards the lifts and then as they were waiting he realised she had left his hand and had disappeared. He panicked 😲 and began searching her in the lobby when he saw her exiting through the main doors. Rajveer hurried over there to bring her back but she was quicker than him and had disappeared somewhere.

Rajveer:
Kaha chalee gayee yeh

He looked around in circles but still didn't find her. The state in which she was in, it wasn't safe for her to be alone. Then he began walking when he spotted Neelu.

Rajveer:
Hey Neelu 😊 tumne Naina ko dekha?

Neelu: My, my. 😃 itnee raat ko Naina ko kyu dhoond rahe ho?

Rajveer: Neelu yeh mazaak ka waqt nahi hai 😒 I desperately need to find her.

Neelu: I'm sure you do 😉

Rajveer: uff! 😡 dekho Neelu Naina ne bohat saaree sharaab pee lee hai to is waqt wo nashe me hai to God knows kya kar bethegee 😔

Neelu: What? 😲 Rajveer tumne ose shaarb pee laadee?

Rajveer: yeh waqt jagra karne ka nahi hai. We've got to find her.

Both of them go together looking for her when they end up in a fair. There are too many people around so Rajveer and Neelu are having a hard time finding Naina.

Soon Rajveer spotted her showing herself off in front of a group of guys. He shook his head 😒 and went over to grab her away.

Rajveer: (holding her around the shoulders)
Tum yaha kya karahee ho?

Naina: Hey Raaaaaajvvvveeeer, tum mere dosto se mile? 😃 (pointing towards each one) Yeh Monu, yeh Bablu, yeh Chintu, yeh 😆

Rajveer: Naina me inse baad me miloon ga. Is waqt tum ghar chalo 😳

Naina: nahi 😔 mujhe nahi jaana. Mujhe nahi jaana (throwing tantrums like a kid)

Rajveer:
okay! 😳 nahi jaate. Lekin yaha se to chalo. (walking her away from those guys)

Naina:
Raaaaaajveeeeeeeer! You're such a shweetie muchy 😆 (pulled his cheeks)

Now he was getting annoyed with the way she kept on doing that. He held her hand and attempted to make her walk back to the hotel with him but her force was stronger and she kept on making him walk the other way.

Naina:
😃 Hey dekho, giant wheel (leaped with joy ) chalo na.

Rajveer protested 😒 but she pulled him with her and by force he had to sit with her. She began screaming and howling every time the wheel went up and she even attempted to get up at times but he pulled her down, making sure she behaved. It was hilarious 😆

Once they got off, now Rajveer again attempted to walk her back but she was more interested into something else. A group of boys were dancing in the middle, so Naina pushed through the crowd and joined in. She was fooling around 🤪 and the guys messed around with her. Rajveer pushed through the crowd and grabbed her away but she shook his hand away 😒 and went back to dancing this time Rajveer literally dragged her away.

Rajveer:
😔 pata nahi yeh Neelu kaha rehgayee (then he saw Naina slipping away again) Hey ruko!

He rushed after her.

Naina: (peeking from behind a bush)
😆 Raaaaaajveeeeeeeer!

Rajveer: Naina waha kya karahee ho? 😳 jaldi se yaha aajao warna...

Naina: 😆 pakar sakte ho to pakarlo

She runs away from there and Rajveer tries to obstruct her but she escapes by ducking under him. It happens quick so he doesn't get time to stop her.

Rajveer:
God! 😡 yeh larki mujhe paagal kardegee.

Naina: Raaaaaaajveeeeeeer! 😆

Rajveer: Naina!

Both of them continue the cat and mouse game for a while, when both of them end up at a booth, which makes them stop. Naina stops because she's in wonders 😍 after seeing the sign and Rajveer stops because finally he caught her.

Rajveer:
bohat hogaya Naina. Ab chalo (grabs her hand)

Naina:
ha chalo (she's delusional and begins walking towards the booth rather than with Rajveer. She manages to pull him with her)

Rajveer:
Naina yaha nahi 😒 (attempts to pull her but she resists and continues walking)

the booth was an entrance to a stage and both of them only realised that when they got out. Rajveer is dumstruck 😲 but Naina is excited 👏 seeing the crowd cheer 🥳 and clap 👏. She began waving back to them and blowing out kisses.

Rajveer stops her from doing all that and to prevent from further embarrassment begins taking her back from where they came from but suddenly the spot light appears on them so they freeze.

Commentator:
Hey ladies and gentlemen 😃 I think we've got a new entry

The crowd cheered 🥳 and clapped 👏 whilst the commentator went towards Rajveer and Naina on the stage and they had no choice but to turn around.

Commentator:
Hey guys 😃 (He put his hand on the mike and talked with them aside). Who are you and what are you doing here?
Rajveer attempted to tell him but Naina got excited and spoke before him.
Naina: actually we...
Rajveer: (grabbing her back) actually we came here by mistake, come on Naina let's go.
Naina: No Raaaajve....
Commentator: hey are you the Naina and Rajveer of the swimming competiton.
Rajveer was going to nod in disagreement but Naina had other plans and she nodded like an obedient child and then the worst happened. Both of them got dragged in the front.
Commentator: hey guys guess what, we've got two very special guests with us tonight. These two have created a sensation with their performance in the swimming competion this morning. We've got the special couple here.

The audience were excitied now and began roaring and whistlling.

Commenator:
Isn't this great guys? So let me guess you came here for publicity?

Rajveer: 😳 actually we...

Naina: (pushed him aside and took the mike) We've come here to celebrate 😃

Commentator: Really? Your success so far?

Naina: No actually me kuch aap logo ke saat share karna chahtee hu

Rajveer became worried and tried to stop Naina 😒 but couldn't show it in front of the audience so he forced a smile in front of them whilst glared at Naina.

Naina:
ab hum dono Rajveer or Naina nahi rahe 😆 balke...

Rajveer pinched 😵 Naina to be quiet but she ignored it and kept smiling 😊 like a clown.

Naina:
Now we're Mr. and Mrs. Dumdhere

Commentator: Dum what? 😕

Rajveer: (near her ear) yeh kya kehrahee ho? No Naina, no! 😲

Naina: Yes. hum dono ne shaadi karli. And here's my shweetie hubby (pulled his cheeks again) 😃 Mr Dumdhere. (laughed 😆 like a crack head)

Commentator:
Wow! that was a surprise 😛 Looks like these two hit off quite well and looks can be very deceptive. Well guys here's the newly wedded couple Mr. and Mrs. Dum...😕 what was it? oh yes 😃 Mr and Mrs. Dumdhere

Everyone cheeered 🥳 and applauded 👏 as an embarrassed 😳 Rajveer dragged an over excited Naina off the stage before she showed herself up even further. He couldn't belive she actually brought the Dumdhere part again. He couldn't believe she actually remembered all that still. It had been just a made up name for a temporary joke.

Once they were out again, he held his head with frustration and sat down on a step, whilst Naina kept twirling around in circles.

It was at that time when he saw something he had never seen before. She looked innocent and her face was sparkling. she looked like a fairy who was dancing around in her fairy dust. He was so mesmerized 😍 by looking at her that he never realised her coming towards him.

Naina:
Raaaaaaajveeeeeeeeeer! (she sprinkled water over him)

Rajveer: (startled)
😲 Naina! (got up to chase her)

She began running away and escaped him many times when he grabbed her hand and twisted it behind her. Then he brought her closer to him and then the laughter finished when they had become really close. Both stared into each other's eyes. Both had mutual feelings about wanting to melt into each other's arms but there was a part of them which told them to maintain the distance.

Soon Naina again got out of his grip and ran away, feeling shy 😳

Rajveer: (followed her)
Naina rukh jao 😳

Naina: 😆 he, he, pakar sako to pakro

Rajveer: Dekho agar tum nahi aaohgee to me jaaraha hu

Naina: acha? 😔 mujhe chore ke chale jaohge?

Rajveer: Ab tum aana hee nahi chahtee to...

Naina: theek hai

Rajveer: Me mazaak nahi karaha hu 😛

Naina: 😆
jese tumharee marzi

Rajveer pretends to turn around and leave when he sensed Naina coming behind him.

Naina:
Raajveeeer! apna haath do

He smiled 😊 and turned around to put his hand out. As soon as he did that she clicked a pair of handcuffs on him with one side on her hand.

Rajveer: 😲
yeh kya kiya?

Naina: Ab tum mujhe chore ke kahi nahi jaa sakte 😃

Rajveer: 😡
Naina tum...

Neelu: Oh thank god! Rajveer tumhe Naina milgayee. Itnee dair kaha the tum log?

Naina: Hey Neelu 😆 (drooling over Rajveer ) Tum mere pati se milee?

Neelu: 😕
what?

Naina: Here meet my husband 😃 my shweetie muchy Mr. Dumdhere.

Rajveer gave an innocent smile 😊 and then tried to explain to Neelu but Neelu stoppd him when she saw the handcuffs.

Neelu:
Oh GOd Naina! Or yeh sab kya hai? 😲

Rajveer: I think we should take her away, ise pehle ke wo or damage kare.

Neelu: Lekin iska kya karenge? 😕 (pointing towards the handcuffs.)

Rajveer:
ise baad me dekhenge, filhaal meree madad karo 😳

Both try and drag Naina out from the fair and finally reach the hotel.

Neelu:
Rajveer, under jaane se pehle you better remove the handcuffs 😔 I mean log kya kahenge?

Rajveer: wese bhi logo ne aaj kafi dekhliya hai 😛

Neelu:
Phir bhi

Rajveer: okay (looking towards Naina) chalo Naina 😳 mujhe chaabhi dedo

Naina: Kounsee chabhi?

Rajveer: In handcuffs kee. Come on now be a good girl 😊

Naina: 😆 chaabhi chaheeye? (shows him the key)

Rajveer:
ha (attempts to grab it)

Naina:
chaabhi chaheeye? 😆 (still playing around with it)

Rajveer:
Naina come on! 😡

Naina:
Theek hai yeh lo (throws it in the fountain)

Rajveer: 😲
No Naina! (tries to stop her but its too late. He's really stunned 😲)

Naina: (laughing 😆 like a cracked pot)
Ab kaha se laoge chaabhi?

Now Rajveer had had enough. He picks Naina up in his arms and carries her inside, ignoring her protests. Now he was going to take her up to her room no matter what. If this is what she wanted then that's what she'll get.

Neelu:
Rajveer tum ose mere kamre me hee sulaado

Rajveer: 😒 nahi Neelu, phir tumhaare room mates ko bhi pata chal jaehga. Remember me bhi iske saat hee rahoonga. Don't worry 😊 me ise iske kamre me sahee salamat sulaadoonga.

Neelu: Okays. Me subah miltee hu 😊

She got off on her floor and looked at them with tensed eyes. The way Rajveer stood with Naina in his hands was completely messed up and as the lift doors closed she prayed that both of them behaved and didn't do anything wrong.

Rajveer managed to get up to their room eventually and as soon as he opened the door he rushed to the bedroom. Then he laid Naina down, but she kept moving from here to there.

Naina:
Rajveer to ganda hai 😆 Rajveer to ghadha hai 😆

She kept on shaking her feet and hands, whilst he tried to control her and take off her shoes, that too with only one hand. Then she pulled him closer to her which made him land on top of her.

Naina:
Rajveer to bohat pyaara hai

Both stared into each other's eyes 😍

Naina:
I love you Rajveer! (she fell back on the pillow laughing 😆 and soon fell asleep)

Rajveer was surprised 😲 after hearing that and then stared at her sleeping. She looked like a small child, so sweet, so cute, so innocent. He lightly kissed her forehead and then soon fell asleep too on top of her.
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