Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 3

Originally posted by: vvdn

you know what,
there is something fishy about ur fic.
i dunno y but whenever i read it i feel that Raj ek ajnabi hokar bhi AJNBI nahi hai..........😕
may be Naina is not mrs. Dhumdhere but she is surely Mrs.S.............
well u know what i want to say.
enjoying ur fic, so plzzzzzzz update soon.

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey absolutely awesome.👏

Raj is doing it all purposely na.😉

I hope is just want to make Naina jealous.😆

That's y he is nearing Archie;so she will feel bad .😛

Raj bhi na bahut shaitaan ladka hai.😊

he just wants to enjoy it.😉

But Naina is taking it all seriously.😉

Ab pata chalega kaun kis ka kya hai?😛

Nice selection of song n ladki ladka fight.😉
Vaise bhi saath rehte rehte insaan ko doosra koi accha lagne hi lagta hai.😳

Isiliye vo Raj ko kisi aur k saath bear nahi kar paa rahi hai.😭

Neelu knows it very well bus Naina nahi samjhti hai.😉

update it asap.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! - thanks alot

Naina has gotten the honeymoon suit!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏

So she is familiar to him jo woh uski khushboo se usse pehchaan gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep he's been after her for a long time.

Naina also knows him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ne mara hindo filmon ka sabse klished dialogue..............Tum!!!!!😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Matlab Raj uske peeche hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - that line always fits somewhere

Raj is mesmerised by her looks aur woh toh sher arz kar raha hai uspar!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Waah waah!!!😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - he's a charmer after all.

He was coming near her!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️And he covered her with his jacket!!!😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - phirbhi sharafat to bachi hai osme

Ab ek aur sher!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Waah Waah!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Naina gussa ho gayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab oska mazaak uraya to ghusse hogee hee na

I loved Naina aur Raj ka jhagda!!!😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj is irritating her so much!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj kehta hai theres enough room for both of them on the king size bed aur yeh honeymoon bed hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️So naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - very naughty indeed.

He pulled her in him and their bodies entwined!!!!😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Raj embraced and held her tight!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️How romantic!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina khudko chudane ki koshish kar rahi thi aur Neelu aa gayi!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Bad timing Neelu!!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - I love to interupt such moments

Naina hai ki Neelu ko samjhane ki koshish kar rahi hai aur Raj Naina ko hi galat prove kar raha hai aur usse pakad ke rakha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Very naughty!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab kya kare he's just made that way.

Waise Raj ko uska naam kaise pata chala??😕 😕 😕 - wo apne shikaar ke baare me her cheez maaloom kardeta hai to naam kya cheez hai. He knew her from the beginning of the tour.

Raj ne bahar do not disturb ka tag bhi lagaya tha!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is just too much!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he'll do anything to get a chance.

Naina attack kar rahi thi toh he lied ke towel gir raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ka usse gali dena and his replying was too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yeah it was as the best he loves to do with her is to tease her because he knows in the end she'll come to her.

Naina ko bed pe akele sona hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj bhi kam nahi hai nahi hata waha se!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Oh toh Raj shuru se hi usse flirt kar raha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina akhir jaake Raj ke saath bed pe soh hi gayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 - good for her? are kaha she made the wrong choice but now she couldn't help it, I mean who could.

Raj is being very naughty!!!!😛 😛 😛 😒 😒 😒Bechari Naina ko subah subah nature call ko answer karne ke liye Neelu ke room meindaur ke jana pada!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Neelu Naina ko kehti hai ke Raj ko satane ko!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊Waise she is fine with exchanging her place with Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉Waah Naina nahi toh woh taiyaar hai!!!😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kya baat hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - honey even I eould exchange places with her.

Neelu ne jab kaha toh Naina nahi mani!!😉 😉 😉Waah!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 👏 👏Aur jab kaha ke Rajveer sirf tera hai tab toh sharmane lagi!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏Haaaiii!!!!!😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - oska jaadoo jo chalgaya

Dumdhere.....yeh bhi koi naam huya!!!! Raj bhi naa kya naam rakha hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - that's not his real name by the way. He just made up a name that's why Naina got angry with the ridiculous name.

Usne aise kaha tha ke Naina uski patni hai aur woh dono honeymoon pe aaye hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he was just playing around to get her in his room.

Waise uski maafi magne ka style kaafi accha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Bouquet de kar aur uske saath note aur pool cafe mein wait kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - I couldn';t leave the charm out of him after all he is Raj.

Neelu toh impressed ho gayi par Naina naraz hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Neelu ne sahi kaha usse narazgi hai kis baat pe??😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina chahti hai ke Raj ke saath uska naam jude!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊She is flushing at the idea of being his wife!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaiii!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 Kya baat hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yeh andar kee baat hai.

Naina to Raj ko do teen lagana chahti hai!!!! Neelu is right usse sabak ussi ke andaaz mein sikhana hoga!!!!!

Raj has seen the affection in her eyes!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiii!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳Aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - of course.

Kya natak karti hai Naina!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Too good!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏She embarrassed him totally in front of others!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Aur daant bhi padaya public se!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - agar Rajveer sair hai to Naina sawa sair hai. wo eeth ka jawaab pathar se detee hai.

I loved it jab Raj ne Naina ke saamne haath jode!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 - aakhir ose haarna hee para osse.

Thank God they are still in the same room!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - they certainly are but let's see for how long.

But yeh kya yeh dono toh dono taraf gaye!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😔 😔 😔 😔 - don't worry dono ek dujhe se ziada tar alag nahi rehsakte and for that read the second part and you'll know.

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ko Raj se jhagadna accha lagta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊And she is jealous of other girls and especially Archie getting his attention!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina has made him her property in her mind aur kisi aur ko bardaast nahi kar sakti uske saath!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haan ab Raj toh uska hi hai naa!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neelu ne sahi kaha ke Naina ko jaake keh dena chahiye agar itna bura lag raha hai toh!!!! Woh jagah uski hai nahi un chikaliyo ki!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Neelu ne accha naam rakha hai un ladkiyon ka!!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ko lagta hai ke Raj chalu hai par woh usse apna deewana bana sakti hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina likes quarelling with him and thinks it her right!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Neelu is also teasing her for this!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Raj is getting too close to Archie!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Whispering and giggling!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Naina is hating it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Karna hi chahiye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko tour guide ne daanta toh Raj and Archie are giggling!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒How bad of Raj!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj was going to kiss Archie!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Very bad!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj is loving it ke Naina is hating him with Archie!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He wants just that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina also realises it ke Raj is trying to make her jealous!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛But she is disgusted and wants to kill Archie!!!! 😊 😊 😊 So do I!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😈 😈 😈 😈

Raj tripped Naina up and she fell down!!!! Thats very bad of him!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

The song was very nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Raj bilkul accha nahi kar raha hai Naina ke saath!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ab usse bike pe bhi pareshan kar raha hai aur giri toh giri ussi guide ke upar jaakar!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj kehta hai ke ladiyan slow learners hoti hai aur ab toh dono mein jung chhed gayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 Naina kehti hai ke ladkiyan ladko se better kar sakti hai sab kuch!!!!!!

The song was very nice and very suitable for a boy girl fight!!!!😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏

Raw eggs ka toh boys cheating se jeet gaye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Jet ski mein at least the results are equal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne Raj ko distract kiya and wins the arm wrestling match!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko bare chested dekh kar toh Naina behosh ho gayi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Well I hope they confess their love to each other soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳

hi,arwa72! i am the new one. isliye lost aur ek

ajnabi dono k liye yahan likh rahi hoon. ek

ajnabi is fantastic n lost is superb. lost main aise

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thank you

Naina ko Raj se jhagadna accha lagta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊And she is jealous of other girls and especially Archie getting his attention!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - of course who wouldnt be

Naina has made him her property in her mind aur kisi aur ko bardaast nahi kar sakti uske saath!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haan ab Raj toh uska hi hai naa!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - wo to hai.

Neelu ne sahi kaha ke Naina ko jaake keh dena chahiye agar itna bura lag raha hai toh!!!! Woh jagah uski hai nahi un chikaliyo ki!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Neelu ne accha naam rakha hai un ladkiyon ka!!!!😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - true they all are a bunch of leechers.

Naina ko lagta hai ke Raj chalu hai par woh usse apna deewana bana sakti hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina likes quarelling with him and thinks it her right!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Neelu is also teasing her for this!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - apna haq jamana jaantee hai wo.

Raj is getting too close to Archie!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Whispering and giggling!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Naina is hating it!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Karna hi chahiye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course she'll hate it as she only wants Raj's attention all for herself.

Naina ko tour guide ne daanta toh Raj and Archie are giggling!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒How bad of Raj!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj was going to kiss Archie!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Very bad!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - ab kya kare Raj hai hee flirt type ka to larki dekhi nahi ke phisal gaya.

Raj is loving it ke Naina is hating him with Archie!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He wants just that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina also realises it ke Raj is trying to make her jealous!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛But she is disgusted and wants to kill Archie!!!! 😊 😊 😊 So do I!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😈 😈 😈 😈 - hmmm she does hate her a lot and dont worry she'll be taken care of soon by our own Naina.

Raj tripped Naina up and she fell down!!!! Thats very bad of him!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - masti oske rag rag me bassi hai to kya kare.

The song was very nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Raj bilkul accha nahi kar raha hai Naina ke saath!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - everything's fair in love and war.

Raj ab usse bike pe bhi pareshan kar raha hai aur giri toh giri ussi guide ke upar jaakar!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj kehta hai ke ladiyan slow learners hoti hai aur ab toh dono mein jung chhed gayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 Naina kehti hai ke ladkiyan ladko se better kar sakti hai sab kuch!!!!!! - the typical stereotyoe thing jisme hamesha some how larke hee jeet te hai.

The song was very nice and very suitable for a boy girl fight!!!!😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 - thank you.

Raw eggs ka toh boys cheating se jeet gaye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Jet ski mein at least the results are equal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne Raj ko distract kiya and wins the arm wrestling match!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she also knows how to use her girl charm.

Raj ko bare chested dekh kar toh Naina behosh ho gayi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yeh she did after all me bhi hoti to hojaatee.

Well I hope they confess their love to each other soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh will do but theres still time for it.