Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126

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sofia

@mystified

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Posted: 17 years ago

#331

reserved.....ok this time early will edit later😉

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yeay!!! me first me first....hurray

hey TM,

last time my heart was going ummmmm...ummmmm, now i am literally doin banghra he he as i am the first to comment and also because their engagement is over....

everytime i think something drastic is gonna happen and then u make it all tanda tanda like in this part i thought Mr and Mrs ahluwalia were gonna make their life hell but it went quiet smooth...its a different matter that if they created trouble i'd have murdered them😆 good that they paid heed to my warning😉....

TM, yeh raj naina kitna sochte hai....half of the time it was like raj thought and then naina thought😆 baapre bohat sochte hai!

and y does naina think raj goofs up all the time😡 excuse me, if i am not wrong then the girl has done pretty goofing up herself....

now that the engagement is over i am worried😕................

i am worried ki main shhadi pe kaunse side se aaoon😆 ladki ya ladka actually i should be coming from the ladki side coz otherwise i'd be a relative of raj, may be like a cousin eeeks!!! so i think i am from naina's side....whos side r u from?

ok that said and done.....

"mubarak ho bhai mubarak ho!! shaadi mubarak ho...."

catch u at the shaadi....until then take care😊

and ya
luv you 3456789..........

Edited by mystified - 17 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 17 years ago

#332

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#333

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Naina's parents wants answers!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Navin ko yeh bhi nahi pata ke yeh sab kab se chal raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

He makes it up aur his father gets angry on him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Dad nahi maane toh Naina ne apni mom ko mana liya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Accha hai that her mom convinced and convinced her dad!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Chalo they both agreead kyunki unhe Naina ki khushi chahiye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊This is great!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Navin mauka nahi chhodta ek bhi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉Ish beech mein he is hugging Ritu!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Naina ke dad ne toh imtehaan ki baat ki!!!! Naina is right it means another goofing up session by Raj!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Well kam se kam Raj itna annoyed hai dekhke Naina did not trouble him anymore!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne toh pehle suna hi nahi aur phir usse yakeen hi nahi aaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

And then he went mad with joy and began jumping around the room!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Naina was right!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usko abhi aana hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Ek baar aise aake jo huya itni jaldi bhool gaya kya??😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj bhi naa!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kehta hai parivaar ka kya kaam aur yeh saari formalities ki kya zaroorat hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He said unka rista pehle se hi teh ho chuka hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ne daat ke phone kaat diya tab bhi he is smiling at her innocence!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sam is very efficient!!! Khabar sunke hi apne dad se baat karne chali gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Bechara Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kitna nervous hai upar se Naina ke dad ne bijli waali baat kardi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Kitna ghabra gaya and nearly choked on the drink!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur Navin ko haasi aa rahi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina is also so nervous ke woh upar dekh hi nahi rahi hai!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Raj is dying to see her face!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

At least Raj covers up and both his and Naina's father burst out laughing!!!!! 😊 😊 😊Thank God!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Chalo Naina ke dad maan toh gaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊But how can he refuse hamare Raj jaisa ladka unhe milega kaha!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina finally read his mind and did lift up her face aur ab dono mann mein baate kar rahe hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Muh se baat nahi kar paa rahe hai toh mann hi mann mein baat ho rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉Wow!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj toh aaj shayari ke mood mein hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so naughty!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Akele le mein milke he wants to romance Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne sahi kaha usse besharam!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Raj bhi keh raha hai woh hai hi aisi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Abhi bhi apne peeche lambi line ki baat kar raha hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina ne gussa dikhaya toh kya style se mana raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ne usse sahi bulaya nautanki!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ab Raj usse compliment de raha hai toh she is blushing!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kya baat hai!!!👏 👏 👏 👏Raj ka andaz aaj wakai bahut shayarana hai aaj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab isharo mein 'I love you' bhi bol rahe hai and they are giving each other loving glance!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Really they are so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Sam ne pakad liya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Yeh Sam bhi bahut badi nautanki hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ek mahine baad shaadi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj se intezarr kaise hoga!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😔 😔 😔 😔Magar chalo engagement do din baad hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Raj and Naina's dreams are coming true and obviously they are the happiest!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is looking so handsome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Usse toh intezarr nahi hota!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina is looking so beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj ke saath matching!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj toh gaya usse dekhke!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Accha huya ke Aalekh ne pakad liya magar ab toh Neelu ko dekhke he also lost his senses!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab kaun kisse sambhalega!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Both are gazing at their beaus aur dono ko hosh nahi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sam bulane aayi toh usse hata diya because she was blocking their view!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣She is right pyaar insaan ko nikamma bana deta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Inpe ek sher yaad aaya........... 😊

Ishq ne hume kar diya hai nikamma
Ishq ne hume kar diya hai nikamma
Warna hum bhi thhe admi kaam ke........... 😊

Naina loves it ke now she is going to be joined by the most handsome out of the whole world!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

She would be the envy of very girl in the hall!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Ab kya kare Naina jaisi koi nahi hai toh unhe Raj kaise mil sakta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Naina is just looking at Raj and he is lost in her eyes and nothing exists for them anymore!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ishare ko usse compliment diya toh she lowered her eyes and gave him a shy smile!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aaj kal isharo mein hi inka sab kaam ho jata hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Haan ab inko akele chhod toh yeh log baat kare naa!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne plan bhi bana rakha hai uske saath time spend karne ka!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and suits them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ke paas aake ab he took in his hand her flowing tresses magar Naina toh usse notice hi nahi kar rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab jab chala gaya toh Naina felt the sense of detachment aur ab mila bhi toh ladkiyon ke saath!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naraz ho gayi toh he cornered her in the dark back room!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Itni bheed mein bhi mauka dhund hi leta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya innovative jagah dhundhi hai storeroom!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ka romance toh chalu ho gaya!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so romantic!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Magar kiss nahi kar paya bechara!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina toh darr rahi hai ke log unhe dhundh rahe hai but Raj does not care at all aur kehta hai unki shaadi honewali hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab unhe koi kuch nahi keh sakta!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is very naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

They were advancing towards each other when Sam came!!!!! Bad timing Sam!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Aur Raj bhi sharam naam ki koi cheez hi nahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊He is not at all embarrassed in front of his sister and telling her she should knock!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj bhi naa!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Storeroom ke door pe woh knock karke aayegi kya??😕 😕 😕 😕

Sam sab ko waha bulane ki dhamki deti hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Jab finally jaati hai toh Naina ko saath leke jaati hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj toh ring pehenate waqt bhi he is giving her loving glances and she is trying to look away!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Abhi bhi Raj ki sayari jaari hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Mann mein he is asking her and she said usse ijazat ki kya zaroorat hai yeh toh uska haq hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ring pehnate huye bhi he is squeezing her hand and carressing it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Bechari Naina she is getting so uncomfortable in front of so many people!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab toh Raj put his arm around her bare waist and pulled her closer and is now posing for the picture!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kya baat hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ke paas har baat ka jawab hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Mann mein keh raha hai ke Naina ne kaha yeh uska haq hai toh wahi jata raha hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Haq ka najayaz faida!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj bahut besharam hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Magar baad mein usse bhi pata chalega!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊

Doosro ke saamne bada sher banta phirta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Magar sher bhi sherni ke saamne bheegi billi ban jata hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ab toh tum uski biwi bannewali ho abhi se usse control mein rakho!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's words were so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He held out his hand and Naina put her hand in it!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiii!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

They are really looking made for each other in their matching attires!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation and them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Their dance to the song is so romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

They are just involved in each other forgetting about everything else!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

What an evening!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Finally they are engaged!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏The engagement sequence was just breathtaking!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago

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Deeya

@Deeya

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#334

Hey arwa,....

b4 commenting on the beautiful update.... i want to apologize for my absence and for not commenting on so many episodes.... due to certain turn of events... hope u will understand.,.... and now returning to the update...

it was awesum as ever.,...... loved the entire thing... sum hapiness finally...... loved the way raj got nervous infront of naina's parents..... and the entire engagement sequence was breathtaking..... waiitng eagerly for the next update!!! take care...

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Rituka

@rituka7

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#335

damn cool
awesome
finally they get engaged
too good
update soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#336

it was very very beautiful updt.............

both rn wer too good........also loved d way u described der thoughts n der d dialouges wer awesome....

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#337

Rocking update.............RN r too good.

luved it dear.........😛😆😳

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#338

Thank you sweta2005, rituka7 and vvdn for your lovely comments. I'm glad u all loved this update and appreciated it.

Originally posted by: Deeya
Hey arwa,....
b4 commenting on the beautiful update.... i want to apologize for my absence and for not commenting on so many episodes.... due to certain turn of events... hope u will understand.,.... and now returning to the update...

it was awesum as ever.,...... loved the entire thing... sum hapiness finally...... loved the way raj got nervous infront of naina's parents..... and the entire engagement sequence was breathtaking..... waiitng eagerly for the next update!!! take care...

hey Deeya its okay i understand. i hope everything is okay

thanks a lot for appreciating dear and i'm glad u liked everything from the beginning till the end.

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
it was very very beautiful updt.............

both rn wer too good........also loved d way u described der thoughts n der d dialouges wer awesome....

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hey thanks dear for appreciating.

i'm glad u liked talking through thoughts part.

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388456

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#339

sorry sorry sorry sorry...............well ,till jab tak tum maan nahi jati..........this was for not replying for the earlier update.....u know i have my exams this month so rarely able to come online......but ur fics are the first ones i always visit......

Now,i start out in my usual way.............u were(actually u are) excellent,fabulous,mindblowing.........now this is known as JHAT MANGANI PHAT BIYAAH.......ok don't mind the spelling...............hehehehe...........kya parents hai....pehli baar raj se mile aur woh bhi kis situation mein......hehehe....😃...bijli beichne ka business karte hue huye.....hahaha....😆.......phir bhi itni jaldi maan gaye ki do dino ke andar engagement bhi karaa di...........i just love them..............hehehehe.......

Naina definitely is going to keep him on his toes..........if he has to be loved he actually has to be the one following her orders.............hehehe......warna kahin woh tata bye bye na keh de........hahahaha.....

her father definitely was having loads of fun laughing his way away with gehlot aur yahaan raj ki phat rahi thi..........hehehehe............aur do pal ke liye bhi shaant nahi baaith sakte yeh dono......muh se nahi baatein kar paye toh maan hi maan..........i must say glue se kya fevicol se chipke huye hai........hehehehe.......kaphi well desperate kism ka banda hai raj..........jab dekho privacy chahta hai......not that we give him that for a single moment.........hehehehehe...........afterall hum janta hai....sab dekhte bhi hain aur jaante bhi..............hehehehe😃...

cumin to the engagement.....jo ki only 2 days baad thi(still it must have seemed like a 2 whole years....afterall v know raj.....hehehe).................it was lovely.......blue is my fave.......design my outfit also(u will definitely have lots of time for that.......not as less as 2 days...hehehe)........u made them look exceptionally good..........hehehehe.......well,raj ki engagement hai phir bhi naina ko jab mauka mile pareshan karta rehta hai.........anyways naina has to get used to it.......pure zindagi jhelna hai...........hehehe......aur aaj bhi ladkiyo ke saath.........good its naina(tolerant).....i would have said tata bye bye......hehehehehe😆.........

and wat a place to romance....so innovative STORE ROOM......hehehehe........off but sameera kind of becomes kabab mein haddi.......hehehehe........aur sharafat naam ki toh cheez hi nahi hai.........instead of feeling shy and embarrased in front of his lil sister he asks her to knock from now on.......bacchu tab pata chalega when she goes of doing such stuff in front of his eyes..........hahaha😆.....

phir ring pehnate samay.....off.....haq ka najayas faida......hehehe.........aur woh bhi sab ke saamane........hehehehe........uthale jitna mazza utha sakta hai.....abhi baad mein jab watt lagegi tab pata chalega........hehehe.......doosro ke saamne bahut sher banata phirta hai but u know na sher bhi sherni ke saamne bheegi billi ban jata hai........hehehehe..........ooo now i have started using similes and metaphors in my reply.....hahaha....itni ache writer ka positive effect ho raha hai.....u c sangati ka asar........hahaha

now i better end my reply before u start thinking who has started updating on ur fic.....u c its gettin quite long......hehehe....just my way of saying SORRY again......

and plz....gussa ho kar kuch bhi karo.......email ke through slaps and screams mail kar do(if dats possible....hehe) but itni badi sazzzzzzzzzza mat do.........anpe updates ke link PM kar diya karo.....(i didn't get one for this.....bas try maar liya.....i guess i was lucky).......

finally again it was excellent and brilliant............👏

luv....take care(u need to........warma hum sab ko updates ki kami ke wajah se serious illness ho jayegi...............hehehehehahahaha😃..........no on a serious note......take care....i aws just joking......hehe)

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@404_NotFound

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#340

hey the update was fantastic...the song selection was good..i thought it suited the situation very well...waiting for some more RN scenes...continue soon..