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Posted: 16 years ago
TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Goood !!!!

Rajveer is really gonna crazy.....n Naveen is so much of Nautanki 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mystified

arwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! i am gonna burst out laughing!!!!*holding my stomach tightly* u are such a brat u know that *evil grin* - hehehehe i luv the way how u comeplemented me and then insulted me too 😃


first u make my jaanu so restless and then u bring the evil brother in law to the picture and then u embarass him in front of his in laws.......*angry look* kis janam ki dushmani le rahi ho meri jaanu se!!!! - evil brother in law? thats a first 😛 my dear it was just too funny for me to resist so i had to do it and anyways Raj's character in this fic is meant to be of an over smartass

but seriously naina is so dumb....she almost blurted out about them in front of navin *sigh* talk about the limits of dumbness and u have her there.... - hmmm i guess we all have our moments

inke pyaar ko dekh ke my dil goes ummmmmmmmm ummmmmmmmmmm *swinging in joy and also dancing* - mine tooo

navin is such a devil yaar, kya kya chalta rehta hai uske mann mein *closing my eyes* baap re baap but raj bhi kuch kam nahi *blushing* - hmmm both of these are one of a kind even when they're not friends

and he hugged ritu!!!!! *panicky* aankhen kholkar hug nahi kar saktha tha kya...silly boy naina ke pyaar me andha jo gaya bechara.... - hmmmm andha to hogaya hee hai per lagta hai thora excited hogaya tha isliye

*threatening tone* u better not create any problems for my jaanu now...atleast let him have a happy wedding now aur agar tumne koi gadbad ki na toh mein.....................toh....................toh mein.................................................first flight pakad ke wahan aaoongi and pehle Mr and Mrs ahluwalia ka phir tumhara murder kar doongi ha ha...don think i am kidding, i am very very serious!!! - baapre itnee bari dhamki 😆 hmmm dont worry i also want to keep everything happy and well in his life now

see mera hindi tabhi bahar aati hai when i am mad *sly* so u better make a dhaam dhoom shaadi!!!with lots of dhamaaka and pataka!!! - its gud to see u do use it coz i dotn and i have to try and write it right. Hmmm dont worry there will be a lot of dhoom and dhaam

this was a very enjoyable part hun....but remember my warning and ya update soon.... - yeh i'll remember it

luv ya,
sofi😳



Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


amazing and too funny update dear.👏👏👏 - thank you very much

Kya Naveen bhi na kitna shaitaan hai mall se Naina ko le kar chala gaya bechara Raj Naina se baat bhi nahi kar paaya jee bhar k aur to aur Naina ka phone bhi switched off aa raha hai , ab aise me Raj se vaise bhi kya expect karte hain hum ki vo chup chaap baithega 😉😉😉? Man hua chala gaya Naina se milne aur ped par latak k mil raha tha 😛😛😛. Kya Naina ki maa bhi na wrong entry karti hain bechara Raj ped se neeche gir gaya aur us ko chot me lagi 😭😭😭 tab bhi pyaar ka junoon vaisa hi tha sir par.😳😳😳 - yeh Navin is being like a villain here per Raj bhi to kuch kam nahi or ose ab Naina se dhoore rakhta namumkin hai. Poor Raj i know per pyaar me sab kuch sehna parta hai

Naina ne bhi apni mom se accha excuse banaya ki kauwa aa gaya hai, 😉😉😉 obvoius baat hai kauwe raat me kahin dikhte hain kya 😆? Vo bhi gir jaaye uper se 😆😆😆. - true per jo pehle dimaag me aaya kehdiya.

Next day Raj itna masti me saj dhaj kar ready hua Naina se milne jaane k liye 😳😳😳 aur Naina bhi ready ho rahi thi gaana gaa gaa k.😊😊😊 I like this song n ur choice is really awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️. - yeh i luv the song too and i wanted to use it on RN for a long time and finally i got the chance. yipppeeee. I'm glad u also liked it and ha dono kitne khush the but it had to last for only some time

Par Naina ko jab pata chala ki Navin bimaar hai to Navin ko tease karne lagi aur ruk gayi ghar par 😕😕😕. Raj bhi poora dhakkan hai us ko laga ki Naina akele hai ghar me aur bewkuffon ki tarah vahan pahuch gaya 😉😉😉.Naina bhi na bolte bolte jyada bol jaati hai 😡😡😡, pata nahi kya hota agar Naveen ne guess kar liya hota to 😕😕😕?Accha hua Ritu ne baat badal hi di.😉😉😉 - ab kya kare they are all bunch of fools sometimes jo kehte kuch or hai or karte kuch or. Yeh Ritu understood and took care of the situation

Kya situation thi kamaal ki 😆😆😆, dono bhai behan apne partner k saath gaana gaane me aur romance me busy the 😉😉😉 aur Raj bewkuff Ritu ko Naina samajh kar hug kar liya us ne 😡😡😡 - hmmm situation to acchi thi per kya kare kabhi kabhi aisa hojaata hai

.Naina k parents ko bhi us time par hi wrong entry maarni thi 😕😕😕 na poor Raj bura faasa . Itna ready ho kar kya isi din k liye aaya tha 😲😲😲? Raj to ek shabd nahi bol paa raha tha un sab k saamne.😛😛😛 Kya sentence bola tha kamaal ka us ne.😆😆😆 - bechaara Raj phus gaya. hehehe it was meant to be funny and im glad u enjoyed it
Rajveer: Rajveer mera ji naam papa Gehlot ka naam beijhte bijli nahi bohat koi hamara Naina karobaar bara pyaar shaadi hai karta chahta karna hu 😆😆😆
Meri to hassi hi nahi ruk rahi thi jab Raj ne aisa bola 😆😆😆. Finally sach bola us ne aur sach bol kar aise bhaga jaise peeche bhoot pad gaya ho.😆😆😆 - im at ur service to make u laugh more
update soon.



Originally posted by: suhana_dixit


Hi Arwa

Thanx for the pm dear...Update was so very funny😆😆😆.I mean i was reading n laughing.My room-mate thought dat i have gone mad or something. - thanks and ur welcome. Hehehehe I'm glad i was able to make u laugh like mad

I can never imagine Rajev in such comic role n watever u wrote seemed so real that actually i was imagining the situation.- hmmm yeh in this fic he is a comedian from the start

Raj was pretty confident dat Naina's parents wud have no objections regarding his marriage with Naina. - well yeh ose koun refuse karsakta hai

Raj came to meet Naina in the middle of the nite n den was sitting on tree as if it was a sofa.Wat n imagination😆They r romancing as if they r sitting in a resraurant.😛😛😛 - thanks and yeh jab baat Raj kee aatee hai na to ajeeb or daring cheeze hee dimaag me aatee hai

Then when Naina's mother came she said that it was some crow.Howcome crows r flying in the nite like owls.Think of some gud excuse Naina. - yeh funny girl

raj n Naina were so very excited for their meeting .They were singing n dancing on such beautuful number but all went in vein..😉😉😉 - yeh per kya kare dunya zaalim hai

Even Navin is a big prankster.He wanted to spend some time with Ritu n dat's why he was faking abt his illness. - ekk hee khun ke jo hai dono Navin Naina

He really wished dat his mother shud go out as soon as possible.But naina is no less.Just to tease her bro she decided to stay back😆😆😆 .Wat Man!!!!!!! Naina was just abt to reveal dat she n Raj have crossed all limits in their relationship n dat too infront of Navin...😳n Navin too started asking stupid questions..Its gud for Naina that she ran away.- wahi to sometimes she can be a duffer but she knows how to control it at the right time

So Navin is in a naughty mood.😉😉😉..Raj n Naina 's conversation was too funny n a big confusion was dere.She was telling him something n he thought dat Naina is all alone..(These guys r really stupid)..😆😆😆. - yeh u cud say that, men are always looking for ways of taking the girl when she is alone. Thanks for liking the convo

All 4 of them r singing n dancing having a gala time.But Raj made it worse by holding Ritu in his arms n she thought that he is Navin..Raj was so very embarrased 😳😳😳... - popular objection by everyone. ab wo bhi to kabhi kabhi fool ban jaata hai or aisa kerdeta hai

But this was not the end of comedy of errors..Naina's parents came there n den watever happened was so ver hilarious.Situation was really comic.Raj was fumbling with nervousness n gosh wat nonsense was he talking.
Rajveer: Ji me wo... bij...bij...li dekhne aaya tha to wo...

Father: Bijli lekin hamne to koi complaint nahi kee thee

Rajveer: nahi...me...me...wo...bijli (thniks what to say ) bijli ba....ha beichne aaya tha.

Father: bijli beichne aaye the? (looks around) tumhaara saamaan to nahi dikhraha

Navin bursts out laughing
Ritu gets annoyed at him

Rajveer: (panicks)
s...s... saammaan...ha saara...ch...chori hogaya

Father: (looks at him and senses something fishy) sach sach batao kaun ho tum

Naina: Papa wo ye...

Father: Maine sawaal isse poocha hai Naina. Tu beechme mat bole

Naina: lekin papa yeh...

Father: Bus Naina tu andar jaa

Naina has no choice, she gives Rajveer a sorry look and goes inside. Rajveer tries to escape but Naina's father is adamant.


Father:
Tum batate ho ke me police ko phone karu

Rajveer: Rajveer mera ji naam papa Gehlot ka naam beijhte bijli nahi bohat koi hamara Naina karobaar bara pyaar shaadi hai karta chahta karna hu


Father:
kya?

Rajveer: (gulped and spoke in one breath) Ji mera naam Rajveer hai or mere papa lala Gehlot hai or hum koi bijli nahi beichte hamara bara karobaar hai or me Naina se bohat pyaar karta hu or shaadi karna chahta hu

Raj ran away but now how will Navin convince his parents????It was too funny. - i'm glad u had a ball. Hmmm well he had to go to save his life 😆 lets see how Navin does it.
Do continue soon😛😛😛



thanks a lot fanatic 21, rituka7 and prerna1 for the appreciation. I'm glad u all found it hillarious and yeh more is on its way.

Thanks nihatri and i'm glad u luved the part.

@vvdn - hey thanks and yeh both Raj and Navin are one of a kind always doing nautanki.
Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
What a funny update again after previous one yaar. 😆
Raj se ab doori nahi sahi jaati hai to kuch bhi kar k Naina se bus milna hai us ko kisi bhi tarah se.😉
Ghar pahucha aur paid par chada aur jab bus Naina ko kiss karne hi jaa raha tha tab bechare ka bad luck dekho Naina ki mom aa gayi aur vo paed se neeche gir gaya.
Agle din bhi Naveen ka mood tha Ritu se romance karne ka 😛 to pata nahi kyoun Naina ghar me rum gayi are Ritu to thi hi na Naveen k liye.😡
To peeche peeche Raj bhi pahuch gaya aur jo dhamachaukdi machaie my god.😆
Fir se wrong timming Naina k dad ne pakad liya us ko aur bechara kisi tarah se jaan bacha k bhaga.
It's all so funny yaar.😆
update soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey arwa
yaar fic is totally amazing
lots of part.... like when RAJVEER just fly on navin, and when he said a totally rubbish in front of her parents, their intimate secne at falt was totally rocking..
though didn't like that it happened but you potray it so well... i like you writting skill there amzingly great..... dont think i am backward minded or anything as i didn't like it.. it was just she hated him becoz she think he was like that but on first chance they both forget evrything... i would be even more nicer if they feel it but backout ... thats what i think ....it my opinion.....
else there roof scene was good lil dramatic but good......and rakhi she was amazing
but i wanna ask you a question....when i started reading till 7th part i fell i had already read this fic and than after that i got new update... did you ever posted somewehe else also...
or did i already read til 7th update in lrlf when she left from spain and he realize that he love her......
i know that i had already it somewhere but dont know where
but you are amazing serioulsy lost and ajnabi both are amzing fic
always make me laugh
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

What a funny update again after previous one yaar. 😆 - thanks a lot

Raj se ab doori nahi sahi jaati hai to kuch bhi kar k Naina se bus milna hai us ko kisi bhi tarah se.😉 - ek no. ka deewana jo hai

Ghar pahucha aur paid par chada aur jab bus Naina ko kiss karne hi jaa raha tha tab bechare ka bad luck dekho Naina ki mom aa gayi aur vo paed se neeche gir gaya. - ab kya kare bechaare ka bad luck hee kharaab hai

Agle din bhi Naveen ka mood tha Ritu se romance karne ka 😛 to pata nahi kyoun Naina ghar me rum gayi are Ritu to thi hi na Naveen k liye.😡 - she was just getting back at him for what he did with her and Raj

To peeche peeche Raj bhi pahuch gaya aur jo dhamachaukdi machaie my god.😆 - of course Raj ho or dhamaka to hoga hee na

Fir se wrong timming Naina k dad ne pakad liya us ko aur bechara kisi tarah se jaan bacha k bhaga. - bechaara hamesha phas hee jaata hai

It's all so funny yaar.😆 - thanks once again
update soon.



Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

hey arwa

yaar fic is totally amazing - thanks so much

lots of part.... like when RAJVEER just fly on navin, and when he said a totally rubbish in front of her parents, their intimate secne at falt was totally rocking..- hmmm i'm glad u appreciated it all

though didn't like that it happened but you potray it so well... i like you writting skill there amzingly great..... dont think i am backward minded or anything as i didn't like it.. it was just she hated him becoz she think he was like that but on first chance they both forget evrything... i would be even more nicer if they feel it but backout ... thats what i think ....it my opinion..... - yeh well i also wasnt going to put it in that early but their love has been prolonged for such a long time so i thought this step would put their relationship a step further and now show commitment perhaps she wud have backed out if this fic wasnt ending soon

else there roof scene was good lil dramatic but good......and rakhi she was amazing - thanks for loving that part
but i wanna ask you a question....when i started reading till 7th part i fell i had already read this fic and than after that i got new update... did you ever posted somewehe else also...
or did i already read til 7th update in lrlf when she left from spain and he realize that he love her...... - yes it was in that forum before.
i know that i had already it somewhere but dont know where
but you are amazing serioulsy lost and ajnabi both are amzing fic
always make me laugh - thanks once again for all the appreciation.


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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey sorry yaar is baar mai poore week kaafi jyada late ho gayi.😕
Mai yahan aa nahi paaayi yaar otherwise mai comment jaroor de deti.😔
Nice n comic update.👏😆
Ye Raj bhi na kuch karne se pehle mujhe nahi lagta kabhi kuch sochta hai . Din bhar mil nahi paaya Naina se to raat me us k ghar k bahar ped se latak kar milne gaya aur bechare ki kismat kharab thi ki Naina ki mom aa gayi us k kiss karne se pehle aur vo gir gaya.😒
Phir next day bhi bina Naina ki poori baat sune us k ghar me ghusa aur Naina k dad ne pakad liya us ko.🤔
Kisi tarh jaan bacha k bhaga bechara........................😉
Navin bhi kaafi funny tha is update me n songs u choose were nice too.😊 update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey sorry yaar is baar mai poore week kaafi jyada late ho gayi.😕

Mai yahan aa nahi paaayi yaar otherwise mai comment jaroor de deti.😔
Nice n comic update.👏😆
Ye Raj bhi na kuch karne se pehle mujhe nahi lagta kabhi kuch sochta hai . Din bhar mil nahi paaya Naina se to raat me us k ghar k bahar ped se latak kar milne gaya aur bechare ki kismat kharab thi ki Naina ki mom aa gayi us k kiss karne se pehle aur vo gir gaya.😒
Phir next day bhi bina Naina ki poori baat sune us k ghar me ghusa aur Naina k dad ne pakad liya us ko.🤔
Kisi tarh jaan bacha k bhaga bechara........................😉
Navin bhi kaafi funny tha is update me n songs u choose were nice too.😊 update soon.



hey thanks a lot for the appreciation

looks like u've finally caught up, gud.

yeh Raj bina soche samjhe hee kaam karta hai jab naina kee baat aati hai. 😉

but he's still the adorable sweet guy.

I'm glad u enjoyed this part and had a gr8 laugh.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj is really happy that everything is turning out so well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He thinks Naina's mom and dad will be easy to convince!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Bahut confident hai Raj!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛And now he has to meet her in the middle of the night!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Naina is now thinking about Raj and all that has happened!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She will hold onto him like super glue is she has to but won't let him loose from her!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Idhar bhi aag lagi hai aur udhar bhi aag lagi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is shocked to see Raj sitting on the tree!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Woh bhi naa aise baitha hai jaise sofe pe baitha ho!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ab ulte jawab bhi dega!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Naina bechari kitni daari huyi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne cute child like face banaya toh Naina bhi maan gayi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina aise kyun chali aayi aur usne Raj ko call kyun nahi kiya!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj kehta hai ke woh ab tak chain se nahi betha aur Naina ko uski parwah nahi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj bhi naa baccho ki tarah behave karta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina now pulled his cheeks like a chubby kid!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Now Raj is hugging her aur kehta hai yeh usse kareeb laane ke liye tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is right ke woh ek number ka deewana hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳I loved Raj's answer!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj kiss karne hi waala tha ke Mira ne bula liya aur Raj gir gaya!!!! Bechara!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina bhi naa!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kya bahana banati hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Raat ko kala kawwa??😕 😕 😕 😕No wonder Mira found it strange!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne yeh nahi socha ke raat ko kala kawwa kaise aayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Ab kehti hai nicche gir gaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Accha usse Raj kala kawwa nazar aata hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛It was hilarious!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Naina calling Raj kala kawwa!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj toh jaate jaate bhi keh raha hai ab unhe koi alag nahi kar sakta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj aur Naina ko toh ab sab kuch naya lag raha hai and they are singing and dancing!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and fits both of them perfectly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is remembering al the incidents and felt that Naina certianly was different from everybody!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina bhi bahut time laga rahi hai and finally wore red as he loves red!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha toh Raj ladkiyon ki tarah time lagata hai taiyaar hone mein!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He said a man has to always look good on display!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Well said!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊But now he wanted to look good only for Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj toh Sameera ka saath hi dance karne laga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Sam bhi janti hai ke uska bhai itna khush kyun hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin beemari ki haalat mein bhi Ritu ke saath argue kar raha hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Mira ne jab bahar jaana cancel karne ki baat ki toh Navin panicked!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Seems as if he is upto no good!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Ab he squeezed Ritu's hand to make her understand to make his mom leave and she was surprised and looking at him in disbelief!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Yeh Navin bahut shaitaan hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Navin ek number ka nautanki hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

But Naina said that she will also remain!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina is certainly no less!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yahan Navin usse bhaagane ke chakkar mein hai aur Naina jaane ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Lagta hai woh bhool gayi hai ke usse Raj se milne jana hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina ne accha jawab diya Navin ko!!!! Navin ne bhi usse Raj se baat karne nahi di toh and she also not going to let him have fun with Ritu!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Tit for tat!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Good for her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin ki sagai ho gayi toh kya usse license mil gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina toh almost batane hi waali thi ke they have crossed all lines in their relationship!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Accha huya she stopped in time and went away!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Ritu is right ke yeh Navin bhi naa kaise kaise sawal pucchta hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Magar Navin is so confused!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Navin ko loveria huya hai aur woh Ritu se ishq ladane ke mood mein hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Navin is just too naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Navin ko saala bulaya toh Naina ne kaha don't insult him!!!😛 😛 😛 😛But he is right ke saale ko saala nahi bulayega toh kya bulayega!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ne suna Naina ghar pe akeli hai aur khush ho gaya aur wahi aa raha hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊All these men think alike!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊

Raj is happy with the thought of being alone with Naina at her house!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊It was dangerous and exciting!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin toh yaha Ritu ke saath romance kar raha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and suits the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin baar baar aa jata hai aur Ritu baar baar pushes him off and sends him out!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj aake Naina ko flowers deta hai and then gives her a kiss on the cheek!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Only then Naina realizes!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊But yaha Raj bhi shuru ho jata hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ritu and Naina gets exchanged and Raj hugs Ritu from behind and Navin and Naina saw them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Its so embarrassing!!!!

Aasmaan se gire aur khajoor mein aatke!!!! Raj waha se jaa raha tha and he came across Naina's parents!!!!! Mar gaye!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Ritu ne Navin ko Raj ko bachane ke liye kaha magar usse toh khud ko bachane ki padi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj bhi kya excuse bana raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur yahan Navin has raha hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆No wonder Ritu got annoyed with him!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ke dad ne toh usse bhi kuch nahi bolne diya aur usse andar bhej diya!!!!

Raj ne pehle kya bol raha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Sab ulta pulta bola!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Bechara Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally he said everything in one breath and ran off!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏

Both the parents are just standing aghast at his speech!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Unhe toh samaj mein nahi aa raha hai ke kya ho raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! - thanks a lot

Raj is really happy that everything is turning out so well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He thinks Naina's mom and dad will be easy to convince!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 - yes everything is just perfect the way he wanted it to be

Bahut confident hai Raj!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛And now he has to meet her in the middle of the night!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 - sabar nahi hota na

Naina is now thinking about Raj and all that has happened!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She will hold onto him like super glue is she has to but won't let him loose from her!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kya baat hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - yep now she cant afford to loose him

Idhar bhi aag lagi hai aur udhar bhi aag lagi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - of couse dono taraf ek jesee aag lagi hai

Naina is shocked to see Raj sitting on the tree!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Woh bhi naa aise baitha hai jaise sofe pe baitha ho!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - aakhir raj hai to her waqt kuch alag hee karega na

Raj ab ulte jawab bhi dega!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Naina bechari kitni daari huyi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe he just loves teasing her

Raj ne cute child like face banaya toh Naina bhi maan gayi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naina aise kyun chali aayi aur usne Raj ko call kyun nahi kiya!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - he is just too adorable to resist. hmmmm kyu ke oska villain bhai aagaya

Raj kehta hai ke woh ab tak chain se nahi betha aur Naina ko uski parwah nahi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj bhi naa baccho ki tarah behave karta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - kahi na kahi abhi bhi wo baccha hee hai

Naina now pulled his cheeks like a chubby kid!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm it was cute

Now Raj is hugging her aur kehta hai yeh usse kareeb laane ke liye tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he knows how to get her close

Naina is right ke woh ek number ka deewana hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳I loved Raj's answer!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - well he sure is and he always has to have the right answer

Raj kiss karne hi waala tha ke Mira ne bula liya aur Raj gir gaya!!!! Bechara!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - her waqt wrong timing

Naina bhi naa!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kya bahana banati hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Raat ko kala kawwa??😕 😕 😕 😕No wonder Mira found it strange!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ab nervous hogayee or pehle jo bhi aaya wo kehdiya

Naina ne yeh nahi socha ke raat ko kala kawwa kaise aayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Ab kehti hai nicche gir gaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - funny and stupid girl

Accha usse Raj kala kawwa nazar aata hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛It was hilarious!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Naina calling Raj kala kawwa!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - it sure was hillarious and yeh coz he came in black and was annoying her

Raj toh jaate jaate bhi keh raha hai ab unhe koi alag nahi kar sakta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he has to keep her spirits high

Raj aur Naina ko toh ab sab kuch naya lag raha hai and they are singing and dancing!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ek nayi subah jo huwee hai

The song is very nice and fits both of them perfectly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thanks

Raj is remembering al the incidents and felt that Naina certianly was different from everybody!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmmm he finally realised

Naina bhi bahut time laga rahi hai and finally wore red as he loves red!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - as always

Accha toh Raj ladkiyon ki tarah time lagata hai taiyaar hone mein!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He said a man has to always look good on display!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Well said!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊But now he wanted to look good only for Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep a man always has to look gud and now he needed to keep Naina impressed al lthe time

Raj toh Sameera ka saath hi dance karne laga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Sam bhi janti hai ke uska bhai itna khush kyun hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - he is just too overjoyed and yeh she knows her brother inside out

Navin beemari ki haalat mein bhi Ritu ke saath argue kar raha hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Mira ne jab bahar jaana cancel karne ki baat ki toh Navin panicked!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Seems as if he is upto no good!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 - well he is also of the same tribe

Ab he squeezed Ritu's hand to make her understand to make his mom leave and she was surprised and looking at him in disbelief!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 - ose pata chalgaya ke wo badmaashi karne waala hai

Yeh Navin bahut shaitaan hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛Navin ek number ka nautanki hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - wo to hai hee aakhir ek hee khet kee fasal hai naina navin

But Naina said that she will also remain!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina is certainly no less!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she has to get back at him

Yahan Navin usse bhaagane ke chakkar mein hai aur Naina jaane ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Lagta hai woh bhool gayi hai ke usse Raj se milne jana hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 - hamesha bhool jaati hai kaam kee cheez

Naina ne accha jawab diya Navin ko!!!! Navin ne bhi usse Raj se baat karne nahi di toh and she also not going to let him have fun with Ritu!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Tit for tat!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Good for her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep ab wo ose maza chakaaehgee

Navin ki sagai ho gayi toh kya usse license mil gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Naina toh almost batane hi waali thi ke they have crossed all lines in their relationship!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 - kaha na hamesha bhool jaati hai

Accha huya she stopped in time and went away!!!! 😊 😊 😊 - per akal bhi jaldi aajaatee hai

Ritu is right ke yeh Navin bhi naa kaise kaise sawal pucchta hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Magar Navin is so confused!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 - it was gud that he was warna bechaaree naina to gai hoti kaam se

Navin ko loveria huya hai aur woh Ritu se ishq ladane ke mood mein hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Navin is just too naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh bukhaar sab ko laga huwa hai

Raj ne Navin ko saala bulaya toh Naina ne kaha don't insult him!!!😛 😛 😛 😛But he is right ke saale ko saala nahi bulayega toh kya bulayega!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - sahi kaha na osne aakhir wo oska saala hee to hai

Raj ne suna Naina ghar pe akeli hai aur khush ho gaya aur wahi aa raha hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊All these men think alike!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 - all men are like that

Raj is happy with the thought of being alone with Naina at her house!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊It was dangerous and exciting!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha some place where he wud get her all for himself

Navin toh yaha Ritu ke saath romance kar raha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - wahi to karna tha ose

The song is very nice and suits the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thanks once again

Navin baar baar aa jata hai aur Ritu baar baar pushes him off and sends him out!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - she is still annoyed with him for lying

Raj aake Naina ko flowers deta hai and then gives her a kiss on the cheek!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - the way he always manages to greet her

Only then Naina realizes!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊But yaha Raj bhi shuru ho jata hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - aakhir oske saath maze hee to karne aaya tha

Ritu and Naina gets exchanged and Raj hugs Ritu from behind and Navin and Naina saw them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Its so embarrassing!!!! - bechaara hamesha musibat me phas jaata hai

Aasmaan se gire aur khajoor mein aatke!!!! Raj waha se jaa raha tha and he came across Naina's parents!!!!! Mar gaye!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - - ose musibat me phas ne ka shoke jo hai

Ritu ne Navin ko Raj ko bachane ke liye kaha magar usse toh khud ko bachane ki padi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 - wo bhi to phas jaaehga

Raj bhi kya excuse bana raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur yahan Navin has raha hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆No wonder Ritu got annoyed with him!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - ab kya kare it was so funny what he was saying

Naina ke dad ne toh usse bhi kuch nahi bolne diya aur usse andar bhej diya!!!! - poor girl

Raj ne pehle kya bol raha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Sab ulta pulta bola!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Bechara Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ha bechaara hee hai hamesha bare log ke beech me phas jaata hai

Finally he said everything in one breath and ran off!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 - aakhir me himmat juta hee dee osne

Both the parents are just standing aghast at his speech!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Unhe toh samaj mein nahi aa raha hai ke kya ho raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - so much has been kept from them i guess. lets see how it all reveals and what happens next

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Posted: 16 years ago

Recap

Rajveer: (gulped and spoke in one breath) Ji mera naam Rajveer hai or mere papa lala Gehlot hai or hum koi bijli nahi beichte hamara bara karobaar hai or me Naina se bohat pyaar karta hu or shaadi karna chahta hu

saying that he runs away from there before her father can blast him with anymore questions.

Both the parents are left standing there aghast at the young man's speech and couldn't believe their ears. They needed answers and shot a glance at Navin who stood with a guilty face.


Part 18

Father: Yeh sab kya horaha hai Navin? Yeh larka kya kehgaya?


Navin: (nervously bit his bottom lip and then stepped forward) ummm…papa wo kya hai ke wo…umm…


Father: saaf saaf batao mujhe ke kya hai yeh sab


Navin: papa wo accha larka hai…me jaanta hu ose or wo apni Naina se bohat pyaar bhi karta hai


Both the parents take time to digest this and then the father sits down on the sofa.


Father: kitne waqt se yeh sab chal raha hai?


Navin: wo…(thinking about what to tell him as he himself doesn't know the duration but he had to say something) …yuhi kahi ek do mahine hogaye hai or…


Father: (stands up shocked) ek do mahine se yeh saara chakkar chalraha hai or tumne hame ek baar bhi inform nahi kiya. We had left her under your care Navin or tumne yeh dekhbaal kee oskee? (was angry) mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi Navin


Navin: per papa aap meree baat sunye to…


Father: (raises hand to shun him) Naina! Naina!


Naina hears the strictness in her father's voice and realises what must have transpired downstairs. She closed her eyes and let a sigh and then did a silent prayer that everything goes fine and then proceeded towards the door of her room and then began climbing down the stairs. As she did that all the resident's eyes were on her as if she had committed a huge crime ad was now going to be sentenced. Her each step made her even more nervous but then again she had to face this one day so better to get it done now.


Father: yeh me kya sunraha hu Naina? Kya Navin sach kehraha hai?


Naina: (eyes Navin and asks what he said but he just nods and remains silent) wo papa, darsal me…(her voice gets choked)


Mira: itna sab kuch hogaya or tumne hame ek baar bhi nahi bataya beta? Or mujhse bhi chuppaya


Naina: Ma…papa me maantee hu aap dono mujhse naraaz hai lekin yakeen maanye maine kuch bhi jaan bhuj ke nahi kiya. (goes to her father who had now turned away from her) papa please aap mujhpe yakeen kijye. Sach me Raj bohat accha larka hai papa. Aap ek baar osse milye to sahi. Please papa…(when she sees that he is not responding she goes over to her mother. Now her eyes filled with tears) ma…ma aap to samajhti hai na mujhe. Ma please wo bohat accha larka hai.


Mira: (comforts her daughter and then walks off to her husband) sunye, hame ek baar osse mil lena chaheeye. Ab baat is hadd tak pohoch gayee hai to behtar hoga ke ham ise aage barne se pehle sab kuch sambhaal le.


Father: tum theek kehrahee ho. (goes to Naina and embaces her) meree betee itnee bari hogayi ke mujhe pata hee nahi chala. Maine hamesha teree khushi chaaheeye hai Naina or agar yeh larka tujhe pasand hai to mujhe bhi koi aitraaz nahi.


She leaps with joy and hugs him back enthusisatically. Navin is also happy and takes the opportunity of hugging Ritu. Then Naina hugs her mother and is really excited. Then as she is going back upstairs her father lays the final bombshell.


Father: yeh sab to theek hai lekin ose pehle me parkhuna or agar wo imtehaan me safal raha to hee yeh baat aage baregee…


Naina slapped her forehead after turning away from her father of course. She knew this would mean another goofing up session by Raj and it would just turn disastrous. Oh God why was he so unfair. When she got in her room she rang him to make sure he was alright.


Rajveer: bohat jald yaad aagayee meree


Naina: galati tumhaari thi Raj. I was telling you before that I'm home with bhaiyaa but tumhaaree to aadat hai na aadhee baat sunne kee or phir…


Rajveer: agar tumne mujhe phone daatne ke liye kiya hai to me rakh raha hu


Naina: (realises he was pretty annoyed about the previous incident and didn't want to trouble him anymore) theek hai theek hai. Wese maine ek aisee khabar dene ke liye phone kiya hai jisse sunke tum chat se uchal paroge


Rajveer: (quite dull) ab aisee kya baat hai


Naina: well….tum jese gaye yahase osse ma or papa ko jo shock laga hai that was something else per osse fiada huwa kyu ke papa maangaye


Rajveer: ha, ha to isme kounsee nayi…(pauses and rewinds his mind back to what she just said.) kya! Phirse kaho?


Naina: ha (laughing) papa maangaye Raj or wo tumse milna chahte hai


Rajveer: (there is a breif pause allerting Naina and she becomes worried as to what happened but then she is thrown back) Yaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooo!!!!!!!!! (he begins jumping around in his room) Tum nahi jaantee Naina ke yeh sun ke me kitna khush hu. Ek kaam karta hu me abhi aata hu


Naina: ruk..ruko Rajveer. Pichlee baar bhi garbar huwee lekin is baar koi garbar mat karna. Abhi is waqt aake wahi hoga. Is baar jab tumhe aana hai na to apne parivaar ke saath aana hai


Rajveer: Kyu? (confused) come on Naina onka hamare personal cheez me kya kaam


Naina: ufffo Raj, tum bhi na. Tumhaare papa aake mere ghar mere ma papa se milenge tabhi to hamara rishta teh hoga.


Rajveer: hamara rishta to pehlse hee teh hochuka hai Naina to ab yeh saaree formalities kee kya zaroorat hai?


Naina: yeh sab zaroori hai Raj samjhe tum. Agar mujhse shaadi karnee hai to yeh saare reetee rivaaj nibhaanee paregee warna you can say tata bye bye to me samjhe. (she cuts the phone abruptly)


Rajveer: are Nain…kaat diya (shuts the phone and then smiles at her innocence)


Sameera: yu akele akele muskuraarahe ho, kya baat hai?


Rajveer: (sees Sam and gets excited and rushes over to her and hugs her fiercely) Oh Sam me itna khush hu itna khush ke kya batao kitna khush.


Sam: per huwa kya brother?


Rajveer: Naina ka phone tha or osne kaha ke oske ma papa hamare rishte se khush hai or ab mujhse milna chahte hai


Sam: wow! This is great news brother. Ab hame dairee nahi karnee chaheeye. Me abhi hee dad se baat kartee hu

She goes off leaving an even more elated Rajveer who just falls back on his bed drifting off to dreamland.

Next day

Rajveer, his father and Sameera all came to the Ahluwalia's residence with the appropriate ceremonial things needed when connecting two families for marriage. Rajveer sat nervously in front of Naina's father as after what he did yesterday he didn't know how he would react with him now.

Father: (looks at Rajveer and then at Gehlot) to yeh hai tumhaare pita jo ke bijli beichte hai

Rajveer: (nearly choked on the drink he had been served whilst leaning forward. He quickly wipes it off and then looks at her father) ummmm…wo…sir…I mean wo to bus yuhi…

Gehlot: me samjha nahi aap kya kehna chahte hai

Rajveer panicks again and wishes that Naina's father wouldn't comment on his camaraderie yesterday or else he would certainly die sooner or later by the hands of his own father. Navin hid his muffled laughs behind his hand whilst Naina sat looking down towards the ground equally nervous. Not once has she shot a glance at Rajveer who by now had been dying to see her face. She kept praying that Rajveer didn't goof up and spoil everything as he always did.

Father: ji wo kya hai ke…

Rajveer: ummm dad yeh to sirf mazaak karahe the. (lets out a weak smile) aap bhi na

Gehlot laughs too and sits back questioning no further. To Rajveer's surprise Naina's father also bursts out laughing and then patts Rajveer on the shoulder saying he is not what he expected but his dauhgter's happiness means a lot for him and if she saw the goodness in him then it certainly would be true. Both the families are relieved with that and they rejoice in the new alliance. The elders get busy with the formalities whilst Rajveer keeps staring at Naina's down casted face wondering when she will lift it. It was as if she read his mind as just that moment her eyes lifted and they met with his freezing on spot.

Rajveer thought: to aakhir me tumhe is nacheez pe daya aaheegayee. Kabse intezaar karaha tha is khoobsurat chehre kee tasveer apnee aakho me utaar ne ke liye

Naina thought: acha to aaj janab shayaari ke mood me hai

Rajveer thought: are yeh to kuch bhi nahi. Akele me to milo phir bata ta hu ke kis kis mood me hu aaj

Naina thought: (she makes a playful apalled face) besharam kahi ke. Her waqt dekho to sirf ek hee cheeze dimaag pe rehtee hai

Rajveer thought: are bhai hum to aise hee hai. Wese abhi bhi tumhaare paas waqt hai soch ne ke liye ke kya tum is besharam ke saath umar kaid guzaar ne ke liye tayaar ho. You know wese bhi mere peeche to lambhi line hai

Naina: (makes a face at him) ahaha aha lambhi line ke bacche agar kisee or larki kee taraf aakh uthaake bhi dekha na to me..to me…

Rajveer thought: oho to meree sweet see ghulaab jesee Naina ko sherni kee jaise ghussa karna bhi aata hai (laughs and shakes his head) yeh banda aap ke haath koi bhi saza jhelne ke liye tayaar hai

Naina thought: ek number ke nautanki baaz ho tum.

Rajveer thought: so to hu my dear. By the way tum aaj is purple churidaar me kaafi cute or khoobsurat lagrahee ho. You certainly are planning on blowing my senses away aren't you?

She didn't answer back and put her eyes down again blushing over his complement. She knew he would like her in any form as that was part of the love he showered over her.

Rajveer thought: haaai yu nazre hatake itna bara zulm mat uthao apne deewaane pe

She shot up her glance after that smiling at him and they continued giving each other loving glances. Rajveer gestured to her 'I love you' followed by a wink making her jump slightly and then she looked left and right to make sure no one was looking and returned it back.

Sameera: hmmmmmm yeh sab kya horaha hai brother

He came out of the trance and gave his sister a sly look as he saw she was teasing him for no reason.

Rajveer: kya horaha hai? Kuch bhi to nahi. Kyu tujhe kuch kehna hai

Sameera: ha bhai ab to hamaree kadar kam hee hogayi hai. Chal Sameera tayaar hojaa ab to or bhi sitam jhelne hai

Rajveer: ab apni yeh nautanki band kar…(looks over at the elders who seemed to have finished their talks) dekh wo sab yahi dekh rahe hai

The elders announce how everything has been fixed. They say that the wedding would be held a month from now as their pandit was present to take out auspiscious dates. Rajveer frowned at that thought as he couldn't wait that long but then when they announced how the engagement was two days from now he became happy again. As after that he would be bethrothed to her and will have the rightful right on her. Everyone congratulated each other and served sweets. The most happiest were Rajveer and Naina as finally their dreams were going to become true.

Two days later

The engagemnet function was being held at Shekhawat's palace on Gehlot's persistence. The whole place was lighted up with series of colourful lights and flower festoons. Colourful silk banners had been draped from stairs and ceilings transforming the whole venue into a festive mood. The guests had begun crawling in now and the place was full. Gehlot was busy conversing with them all and welcoming them whilst Sameera took care of the other formalities. The waiters roamed around serving drinks and snacks whilst they all waited for the bride and her family to arrive.

Standing in the corner with his eyes on the entrance stood Rajveer all dressed up handsomely in a white suit with a sky blue silk shirt. Aalekh was by his side. It had been two days since he had seen her and now he was dying to let his eyes feast on her beauty. How much longer was she going to take?

Soon his question got answered when he saw a number of familiar people stepping through the threshold. Slowly his heart began fluttering as his wait was about to be finished in a matter of few minutes. His eyes waited with anticipation when his heart began thmping loud and voices around him became echoes as Naina appeared through the threshold in slow motion. (hehehehe) She looked out of this world in a sky blue lengha and a halter neck blouse matching her complexion. Her matching jewellery adorned delicately on her wrists, ears, fingers and her neck complimented her serene beauty making her look even more stunning. He nearly lost his balance but Aalekh was there fortunately to support him and that's when his gaze also fell in the direction he was looking in. he also froze as soon after Naina, Neelu followed and she also looked beautiful. He had never seen her in traditional dress till date and now when he saw her in the olive green lengha he lost all his senses. Both the men kept gazing at their beaus and didn't even realise when all of them had been invited in by Gehlot and were now inside amongst the crowd.

Sameera: (clicked her hands in front of them both) yeh kya horaha hai yaha pe?

Both the guys move her out of the way with exasperation

Both: are beech me se hato you're blocking the view

She was irked by their rudeness and then gazed in the direction they were looking and slapped her forehead out of diebelief. It was true, love certainly made the man useless. She knew she won't be able to do anything about it so she left them.

Soon Naina's gaze met with his and she also stopped concentrating elsewhere and looked straight ahead at him. Nothing existed anymore but only him and his magnetic persona. She couldn't believe that tonight she was going to be joined with the most handsome man out of the whole world. She would be the envy of each and every girl in the hall and she just loved the notion.

Rajveer gestured with his hands as to how she was looking stunning and she lowered her eyes and gave him a shy smile. He just couldn't wait until all this stuff was over and then he could spend some time with her alone which he had been dying to do from the past few days. He had just the plan and he just needed to execute it. For the time being he was lost in her eyes and beauty that this song kept running in his head.

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

Ek hee baat per bigar thi hai

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

Ek hee baat per bigar thi hai

Tum mujhe kyu nahi mile pehle

Roz yeh kehkar mujhse lartee hai

It was as if she heard what his heart was singing and she looked up at him and her eyes became wide.

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

Ek hee baat per bigar thi hai

Tum mujhe kyu nahi mile pehle

Roz yeh kehkar mujhse lartee hai

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

She realised he was teasing her so she turned away with a frown and he just smiled at her cute expressions. Even in the crowd and in the distance both of them were only able to concentrate only on each other. He began walking towards her with style so people around won't realise it but she knew he was coming so continued pretending to be angry with him.

Ghusse kee wo teiz hai lekin dil kee behat acchee hai

Wo kaliyo se bhi naazuk hai or shehad se meethee hai

He was near her now but made sure the elders didn't notice and took in his hand some of her flowing tresses.

Chehre per hai, naram ujaale, baalo me kaali raate

Chehre per hai, naram ujaale, baalo me kaali raate

he slightly blew them away bringing a smile on her face but he saw that she did that only after listening to something funny. She hadn't even noticed him do anything.

Hasde wo to, moti barse, phoolo jesee hai baate

Hmmmmmm hmmmmm

He just kept smiling at her as he let go of her hair and began walking away. After he had turned around she also turned towards him as she felt this sense of detachment. She had acknowledged his presence but on purpose had ignored him but now that he left she didn't want him to.

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

Ek hee baat per bigar thi hai

Tum mujhe kyu nahi mile pehle

Roz yeh kehkar mujhse lartee hai

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

She searched around for him but couldn't locate him. Finally she found him in midst of a group of people where most were women and to her horror he was quite enjoying with all of them. Then she saw one woman come closer to him and whisper something in his ear and he began chuckling. She couldn't believe he forgot about her so soon. After some time he did look up at her and saw her pouting and tried to deny the incident but he knew how gullible she was and she just made a face at him and walked off. He excused himself from his friends and went over to make up with her. He caught her and quickly cornered her in the dark isolated back room near the hall.

Rajveer: Mujhko tumse pyaar nahi hai, rooth ke mujhse kehtee hai (he made her face him but she moved away irately but he caught her and in that her purse fell out of her hands and out popped numerous small post its) Lekin har kaagaz pe mera naam wo likhtee rehtee hai

She begins picking all the contents and he also bends down to help her but he prevents her from doing anything and holds both her hands and brings her closer to him.

Rajveer: Me bhi oska deewaana hu kese osko samjao

Me bhi oska deewaana hu kese osko samjao

Mujhse milna chore de wo to, me ek din me marjao

She covers his mouth and nods for him to never say that again. He smiles and removes her hand and lays soft kisses in her palms.

Rajveer: Kathai aakho waali ek larki

Ek hee baat per bigar thi hai

Tum mujhe kyu nahi mile pehle

Roz yeh kehkar mujhse lartee hai

Kathai aakho waali ek larki

slowly he began advancing towards her and their lips touched briefly as they were unable to dwell into that passion as they heard some commotion outside. Apparently people were searching for them as the ceremony had to begin but the bride and groom were missing themselves. Naina pulled back and began straighteing everything but Rajveer didn't care and pulled her closer again.

Naina: Raj kya karahe ho, log hame dhoondh rahe hai

Rajveer: to dhoondh ne do na. accha hai ke ham yaha pe hai koi hame dhoondh bhi nahi sakhenge.

Naina: (not pleased and struggles) chalo choro Rajveer isse pehle ke wo log yaha pe aajaaye. Agar hame aise saath dekh liya to bara hungama hojaaehga

Rajveer: relax Naina, tum itnee darr tee kyu ho? Dekho ab to hamaree shaadi hone waali hai to hame koi kuch nahi kahega.

They stared at each other and then were slowly advancing towards each other's lips again when the doors of the store room burst open.

Sameera: (shocked and covers her eyes with her palm) oh gosh I'm so sorry guys, I'm sorry

Naina moves away from him and straightens her slightly dishevelled clothes and hair.

Rajveer: (gives Sam a whimsical look) teree yeh knock kare bina aane kee buri aadat kab jaaehgee

Sameera: well excuse me brother (puts hands on hips) mujhe kya pata tha ke kuch log store room me bhi ghus ke milte hai warna me knock zaroor kartee. Haven't you heard of a lock?

Rajveer: hehehehe very funny. Ab bata ke itna hungama kya mach raha hai baahar

Sameera: (folded her arms across her chest) well jaha tak mujhe yaad hai ke aaj kisee kee sagai thi lekin lagta hai ke yaha pe kisee ko koi jaldi nahi. Ek kaam kartee hu sab ko yahee pe bhulaa letee hu

She turns around in the attempt to go and is just at the door when it strikes to Rajveer and he quickly runs and shuts the door and stands in front of her horrified.

Rajveer: tu meree behen hai ke dushman? Yeh kya karahee hai

Sameera: (laughing at his state) Relax brother me to sirf aap ko chiraa rahi thi. Wo to bhagwaan ka shukur maano ke darwaaza maine khola. Agar dad ya koi or ne khola hota to phir aaj to aap kee chuttee hee huwee hoti.

Rajveer: (sarcastically) so sweet of you. Ab bahaar jaa or sab sambhaal. Hum aarahe hai

Sameera: eh he eh I don't trust you guys anymore is liye me bhabhi ko apne saath le jaarahee hu

Before he could protest she grabbed Naina and was out of the room. He leaned on the door with despair but he geared himself up and decided that he'll finish off later anyways and he'll make sure they don't get disturbed.

Well after Naina and Sameera had gone Rajveer also went after a few minutes so people can't put two and two together. Then followed the engagement ceremony where Gehlot announced it and told both Rajveer and Naina to come on the small dias they had made and then both of them stood opposite each other. Rajveer gave her loving looks whilst she tried stealing glances away from him but it was easier than said. Sameera came over to him with the ring and then he picked it out of the case and then held it in front of her.

Rajveer thought: to begum is naacheez ko ijaazat hai?

Naina thought: tumhe ijazat kee kya zaroorat, yeh to tumhaara haq hai

Then she put her hand out willingly waiting eagerly for him to adorn her left hand finger with the sacred ring signifying their bond of a lifetime. He smiled and held her hand lightly and slipped the ring on the finger like a professional. Everyone clapped and congratulated and Rajveer took the oppurtunity and squeezed her hand in his plam carressing it making her quite uncomfortable in front of so many people. She gave out few weak smiles and then glaring at Rajveer to let go but he was enjoying it to the core. Then her turn came and he had to let go and she slipped the ring onto his finger and then everyone cheered. Rajveer put his arm around her bare waist and pulled her closer to him alarming her. She was too shocked to react and tried getting out thinking what people would say but he was not going to leave her. He kept smiling and posing for the camera but not letting go. She was getting embarrassed and couldn't believe he was doing this with her.

Naina thought: mujhe choro Rajveer

Rajveer thought: are abhi to kehrahee thi ke mujhe ijazat kee kya zaroorat kyu ke mera haq banta hai tum per. To phir ab wahi to jata raha hu

Naina thought: itne saare log ke beech sharam nahi aati

Rajveer thought: darling tumhe to pata hai ke me kitna besharam hu and you're stuck with me. Hahahahahahahaha

She didn't say anything further and just suffered. She was going to get back at him for everything he did and then he'll know who he messed with.

Person: hey Raj! Buddy aaj kee is haseen raat ko or haseen banade na apni aawaaz se.

Everybody: YEH RAJVEER COME ON! HHHHHHHEYYYYYYY!

Everyone begins cheering and clapping for him so he gives in and takes hold of the electric bass and then the mike but before beginning he announces.

Rajveer: aaj meree zindagee kee sabse haseen raat hai kyu ke aaj ke din mere paas wo sab kuch hai jiskee mujhe chaahat thee (gives Naina a loving glance) to aaj me yaha aap sab ke liye ghaana gaaunga lekin akele nahi. Me chahta hu ke wo shaks mera saath de jisne mujhe jeena sikhaaya or zindagi ke sahi maine sikhaaye. My darling and loving fiancee Naina.

He put his hand out for her to accept it whilst the crowd cheered for the loving couple who looked so made for each other in the matching blue attires. Perfectly complementing each other in every way. She gladly put her hand in his and followed him to the centre of the hall. Then he strummed the strings of the electric bass letting out a great tune and he was backed up with someone playing the piano for him.

Rajveer: lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

Maine jo chaaha tha, milgayee wo khushi

He smiled at her and she also joined in.

Naina: lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

Rajveer: lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

People joined in by gathering their couples and waltzing around the hall floor around the couple. Rajveer kept going around Naina playing the tune.

Rajveer: Me to bara, nadaan tha

Samjha nahi pyaar kya hai

Karta raha aawaaragi, na jaana kesee wafa hai

She went and held onto his hands and put them on her heart

Naina: zanjeer se koi kabhi, dil ko nahi baand paaye

Takdeer se chaahat mile daulat nahi kaam aye

She shook her thumb in front of him and he just shook his head in agreement and strummed more notes on the guitar

Rajveer: Kam na ho umar bhar pyaar kee bekhudee

Naina: lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

Rajveer:lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

Now everyone moved off the floor as Rajveer and Naina took over. He held her waist with one hand and her other hand with his while waltzing around the room staring deeply in her wondrous brown orbs. This was the place where he always wanted to be.

Rajveer: Jab pyaar ho, dil me basa, jannat lage saara jaha

Sabse bara, dhanwaan wo, jisko mile ulfat yaha

She rested her head on his chest

Naina: Jo pyaar me, de zindagee, chaahat pe qurbaan ho

Mushkil se wo humdum mile, jise dil kee pehchaan ho

He held her tight in his embrace forgetting about people surrounding them

Rajveer: Ishq to hai khuda, ishq hee bandagee

She pulled out and swayed along with him

Naina:lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

Then both held hands and moved along the crowd with everyone cheering and clapping for them. They were just involved in each other and nothiong else.

Both: lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

lagi lagi hai yeh dil kee lagi

Na samjho ise dillagi

it ended with a grand applause turning the evening something better than before.

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