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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07


Ye Naina bhi na fulltoose nautanki hai 😉 Raj ko bhi jala rahi hai aur apna bhi Archie se jealous ho rahi hai pata nahi kya hoga is ka?😕 - hmmm kuch bhi nahi kyu ke dono impossible hai

Neelu aur us k stupid plans 😆, Raj ko dekh kar Naina ne Raj k liye vo bhi kar liya jo vo nahi kar sakti,😛 haiiiiiiiiii kya baat hai excellent.😳 - hehe oh yes she did it as she wants to show him that she is also something

Raj bhi aakhir impress ho hi gaya Naina ko is tarah se dekh kar 😉 par ye Huda na pata nahi kahan se aa jaata hai.😡 - shaitaan her waqt ghalat waqt pe hee aata hai

Naina ko apne saath le gaya to bechare Raj ka muh ban gaya 😔 par aakhir raat me to dono saath hi honge na. - oh yes thats for sure

nice update dear. - thanks a lot

Kya baat hai aaj kal to Raj Naina k liye bahut saare gaane bhi gaane laga hai ab 🤗 mana raha hai us ko naraj ho gayi hai to😉. - now he has to make up or she'll get out of his hands

Naina bhi na bahut bhaav khaati hai but i know Raj mana hi lega us ko.😛 - he sure will

She really loves him so much 😊 n poor Huda bechare ka kaam bante bante reh gaya. Ye Archie ki kya aadat hai har jagah Raj k peeche pade rehne ki.😡 - huda or bechaara? sorry to tell you but my dear agar is fic me koi bechaara hai to wo hai raj. hehehe.

I hate her too much.😳 - gud the effect is working

good part.👍🏼 - thanks once again


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Posted: 16 years ago

next part coming up guys

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Arwa jaldi update kar!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Part 19

The rest of the engagement evening went quite smooth. Rajveer and Naina spent most of the time together with several intervals where they had to mingle with others due to the elders taking them with them and all. Even when they were apart they still couldn't keep their eyes off each other and became eager to be with each other again.

At dinner time Rajveer didn't leave one moment of not teasing her and on purpose kept holding her close to him making her feel uneasy and uncomfortable. She glared at him several times to let go of her but he pretended he couldn't understand and continued the act shamelessly.

After it all Naina was really annoyed with him and didn't want to listen to anything he had to say so she walked away ignoring him constantly. He kept perceiving but she didn't want to do anything with him anymore and wanted him to leave her alone. He wasn't going to leave her that easily so he tried grabbing her many times in his embrace and thought she was just pretending to be angry and all.

Naina was so steamed up now that automatically her hand got raised towards his cheek and she slapped him. Both of them became stunned as to what just happened. She stood there with her mouth open with shock and he stood there gradually going red with fury. He couldn't believe she actually slapped him. Up till now he had only been teasing her and he also thought that she was doing the same thing but this slap came as a surprise for him and now he just had had too much.

Naina: Raj wo'I'm sorry'(she tried stopping him but he walked off from there without listening to anything she wanted to say)

She went behind him in the desperate need to apologise for her imprudent behaviour but it seemed like Rajveer was very stubborn and he went and shut himself in his room. She knocked several times but he just didn't bother to answer her. This seemed serious and she needed someone's help and she knew who it was exactly. She went back downstairs to the hall and searched around for Aalekh.

He was by the food table with Neelu when Naina rushed over to them and perplexed them.

Neelu: Kya huwa Naina, tu itnee ghabraai huwee kyu hai?

Naina: (frowns) are bohat baree garbar hogayee hai (then she narrates the whole story to both of them from the beginning of the ceremony till the end)

Neelu: (shocked) tune ose thappar maardiya? Naina what were you thinking?

Naina: maine jaan bujke thoree kiya hai. Ab wo jaake mujhse naraaz betha hai apne band kamre me. Meree koi bhi baat sunne ke liye tayaar nahi. Ab batao kya karu me? (she was almost in tears)

Aalekh: tum fikar mat karo Naina. Me jaanta hu yeh Raj kee puraanee aadat hai.Bachpan se wo aisa hee raha hai. Jab ose oskee pasand kee koi bhi cheez nahi miltee to wo aise hee ruth ke beit jaata hai. Just give him a while and he'll come back to his senses.

Naina wasn't convinced but at that moment she had no other choice but to go on Aalekh's words and wait.

The wait was not that easy as every second felt like eons to her as she sat in the corner of the hall keeping her eyes out towards the stairs to see if Rajveer came or not but there was not much luck as it had been an hour now and he still hadn't come down. She went back to Aalekh.

Naina: Tumne kaha tha ke thoree dair me wo waapis aajaehga, lekin yaha pe to ek ghanta beet gaya or wo abhi tak nahi aaya

Aalekh: Dekho Naina ziada tension mat lo'

Neelu: (smacks his upper arm) kya tension na le ha? Tum saare mard ek jese ho, pehle to parehsaan karte ho or oske baad tension mat lo keh dete ho or phir'

Aalekh: (holding his arm as if it hurt) are per maine kya kiya hai ke mujh pe bharak rahee ho.

Neelu: Wo tumhaara dost hee hain na to phir tum dono ek jese hee ho. Ek to osne meree dost ko itna pareshaan karke rakha hai or tum keh rahe ho isse ke wo tension na le

Aalekh: (slaps his forehead) are meree maa'wese ghalati Naina kee thi kyu ke osne ose thappar maara

Neelu: ha ha tum to apne dost ka hee saath doge. Yeh mat bhoolo ke shuruwaat Rajveer ne hee kee thi

Aalekh: wo to bus mazaak karaha tha lekin Naina hee kuch serious hogayee or'

Neelu: (confronts him) to kya mazaak karne ka haq sirf tum mardo ko hee hai? Naina bhi mazaak hee karahee thi lekin it's so typical for you men to get angry quickly

Both of them end up in a heated argument

Naina: (separates them) Tum dono mera problem solve karne ke badle ek duje se fuzool kee behes karahe ho? Guys agar Raj neeche nahi aaya to you've to help me get up to his room. Ab mujhe sach much tension ho rahee hai ke kya wo theek to hogana

Aalekh: Don't worry Naina sab kuch theek hee hoga. Chalo mere saath me tumhe oske kamre me le chalta hu.

All three of them walk off towards the stairs and climb up towards Rajveer's room. Aalekh knocks several times but still Rajveer doesn't answer. Now it certainly is worrying so Aalekh takes them towards the way leading towards the terrace. Then they all climbed up and walked over towards the side of the balcony outside Rajveer's room.

Aalekh: me yaha char ke oske kamre tak pohoch ta hu or phir tum dono ko bata ta hu theek hai

He begins climbing but it is dangerous so Neelu clutches onto his arm and tells him to take care. He smiles and manages to climb up and is now outside the glass sliding doors. He peeks inside but Rajveer is not found so he becomes suspicious as to where exactly is he? He tries opening the doors but they've been locked. He comes back to the side and informs the girls that Rajveer is not in his room.

Rajveer: Looking for me?

All three turn back and see Rajveer standing behind them with his arms folded across his chest and he still looked displeased.

Naina: (walked up to him) Oh Thank God Raj aakhir tumse'

He raised his hand to shun her and walked away to the edge of the terrace with an unhappy face. He looked so adorable just like a spoilt child that she couldn't help but smile at his innocence. She walked up towards him and turned him towards her and then without saying anything she smiled and put both her hands on her ears and held them in the gesture of asking for forgiveness.

At first he stared at her but her innocent gesture soon brought a smile on his face and he had to break this stone wall. His smile made his face glow and his eyes twinkle which made Naina's heart melt.

Rajveer: chalo maaf kiya (takes her hands and lays soft kisses on them) dubaara aisa mat karna mere saath warna me to marr hee jaaunga

Naina: (covers his mouth) aisa kabhi bhi mat kehna Raj kyu ke bina Rajveer ke Naina ka koi moul nahi

Both of them hugged each other and held tight as if worried to let go. Aalekh and Neelu were also really glad to see that their friends had made up and now were back together and everything was back to normal. They decided to leave the love birds alone so walked out of the terrace. They spent some time together but this time Rajveer didn't want to put her in an awkward situation again so both of them returned back downstairs amongst people. That gesture increased the respect that she held for him.

Two days later

Rajveer: (on the phone) you know itna sab kuch hogaya hamare beech or maine socha ke I still haven't even taken you out on a date

Naina: (laughs) so to hai. Abhi tak to tumne mujhe properly propose bhi nhai kiya to soch rahee hu ke is insaan se shaadi karnee bhi hai ke nahi. Aadhi baat to hamesha mujhe hee yaad dilaanee partee hai to pata nahi shaadi ke baad mujhe hee bhool gaya to

Rajveer: very funny Naina madam (sarcastic laugh) per wo is bande ka aakhri din hoga jab wo tumhe bhool jaaehga.

Naina: ab rehne bhi do. Khoob jaantee hu tumhe

Rajveer: are tumne abhi dekha hee kya hai. Wese I think ke maine tumhe kaafi examples de diye hai apne pyaar ke lekin lagta hai ke abhi bhi kam hai. Lagta hai kee jald se jald oska intezaam bhi karna parega.

Naina: or tumhe lagta hai ke is baar tumhe yeh moka milega. Well let me inform you mister ke ab to hamara milna bhi mushkil hone waala

Rajveer: Kyu?

Naina: kyu ke'

Rajveer: hmm samjh gaya. (makes a face) you know tumhaaree yeh backward family sach me bohat hee na'

Naina: (annoyed) dekho Raj agar mere family ke baare me kuch bhi bolo na to me tumhe'

Rajveer: okay, okay my firecracker (laughs) ek to itnee jaldi bharak jaatee hai na bara maza aata hai.

Naina: Raj me phone rakh rahee hu

Rajveer: he he Naina come on'ok I'm sorry tumhaaree family bohat mahaan hai or wo bohat hee pyaaree hai bus khush. (she still didn't say anything) I know Naina tum abhi tak sunn rahee ho kyu ke tumhaaree dharkhan sun sakta hu me

Naina: gosh Raj tum itne impossible ho ke tumse koi ziada tar naraaz bhi nahi rehsakta.

Rajveer: hehe wo to me jaanta hu. Ab suno me apne pehle date ke baare me baat karaha tha to isliye me tumhe dinner pe le jaaraha hu

Naina: yeh mumkin nahi Raj'I mean ma or papa pata nahi maanenge ke nahi

Rajveer: to phir mera saala kab kaam aaehga?

Naina: Raj, bhaiyaa to onse bhi bare kharoos hai

Rajveer: wo sab me nahi jaanta. Me tumhe dinner per le jaane waala hu to bus. Or tum jaantee ho ke Rajveer Singh Shekhawat jo kehta hai karke rehta hai

Naina: uh per'

Rajveer: ah now just leave it Naina or tum bus aath baje tayaar rehna. Baaki sab mujhpe chore do.

Both of them cut the phone and then Rajveer thinks about how to tackle this problem. Then a light bulb switched in his head and he smiled. He was just going to perform the same act he had done before.

Rajveer: (on the phone) Hi Neelu'I need your help'

And he continued talking with her.

Few hours later Naina tried to talk to her brother about Rajveer's plan but she never got the opportunity and just then Neelu arrived.

Neelu: Hi Naina! Hi Navin bhaiyya

Navin was on the phone whilst Naina was trying to speak with him but he excused himself and told her to talk to him later after his phone conversation ends. She was disheartened.

Neelu: Kya baat hai phirse tera chehra itna utra huwa kyu hai

Naina: kabse bhaiyya se baat karne kee koshish karahee hu lekin wo hai ke sunne ke liye tayaar hee nahi

Neelu: aisee kya baat karna chahtee hai onse?

Naina: are kya batao tujhe. Ek to I can't believe ke is umar me bhi mujhe apne hee mangetar ke saath bhaar jaane ke liye permission lenee partee hai. Why is my family so backward?

Neelu: wo backward nahi hai Naina. Wo to tujhse bohat pyaar karte hai and are just looking out for you.

Naina: me jaantee hu per yeh baat Raj ko koun samjhaaye? Her baar aisee dhamki deta hai ke kya karu

Neelu: me jaantee thi ke yeh baat Rajveer se hee related hai. (puts her arm around Naina's shoulder) don't worry me tera problem solve karne hee aayee hu

Naina gave her a quizzical look and just then her father came.

Neelu: hi uncle! (goes and touches his feet)

Father: jeetee raho betee

Neelu: uncle aapkee permission ho to kya aaj raat ko me or Naina baahar jaasakte hai?

Father: (surprised) ha ha isme itna pooch ne kee kya baat hai.

Neelu: thanks uncle

After he leaves she looks at Naina and gives her a smile and cocks her eyebrows at her

Naina: seriously kabhi kabhi to me sochtee hu ke tujhe is family kee betee hona chaheeye tha. How do you do this all the time. Agar yehi sawaal maine poocha hota to osme se kitne 100 sawaal nikalte. Kaha jaarahee ho? Kiske saath jaarahee ho? Kitne baje waapis aaogee'wagera wagera

Neelu: (laughs at Naina's interpretations) tu bhi na Naina. Ab chal jaldi se tayaar hoja or mere ghar chal. Tujhe Rajveer waheese hee pick up karlega. (Naina stands there thinking about it) are ab ziada soch mat or jaldi chal.

Both of them walk towards Naina's room and begin sorting out what she would wear and that takes up all the hours.

Neelu's house

Naina has got all ready and Neelu helped her. She looked really beautiful and different.

Neelu: are wow Naina aaj Rajveer tujhe aise dekh ke sach much behosh hojaaehga

Both the girls laughed and just then the bell rang.

Neelu: ah lagta hai kaafi jaldi hai janaab ko

Neelu rushes down to the door and opens it to welcome a rather handsome man standing in a red silk shirt with a bouquet of red roses in his hand.

Neelu: (whistles) kya baat hai aaj to bare saj dhaj ke aaye ho

Rajveer: hi Neelu (smiles and then keeps looking inside as if searching for something)

Neelu: (sees him and teases him) uhhhh kise dhoondh rahe ho?

Rajveer: (innocent smile) ha wo umm'Naina?

Neelu: Oh wow flowers! (she took them from him) oh I just love red roses. Thanks so much

He couldn't do anything to stop her as she didn't give him a chance. He kept looking around for Naina but still there was no sign of her

Rajveer: ummm Neelu'wo Naina?

Neelu: Naina? Osko kya huwa?

Rajveer: wo yaha pe aane waalee thi na to wo'

Neelu: Naina yaha pe kyu aane waalee thi? Rajveer I think you've come to the wrong house.

Rajveer: to kya tumne'.oh god Neelu tum bhi na. Theek hai me chalta hu phir

He is turning around to leave when Neelu bursts out laughing which makes him stop and turn back to her.

Neelu: Oh my god Rajveer you're just too cute. Ab jisko lene aaye ho ose le to jao yaa ke date pe akele hee jaane ka irada hai?

Rajveer: Neelu tu bhi na (comes in and pulls onto her ear) sach me teri or Aalekh kee sahi hee jori hai. Ab jaa or ose jaldi bula ke laa, I'm getting late.

She just left him and went back up to the room and opened the door and saw how Naina stood with anticipation and Neelu just loved to see how desperate both of them were to meet each other.

She decided not to make them wait any longer so she sent Naina downstairs and handed her the roses. She stepped out of the room and gradually descended and Rajveer's gaze fell on her and he couldn't take his eyes off. She wore a red sleeveless dress with a slit coming till her knee showing half of her long creamy legs. It was as if she had transformed into this new person and at first he needed to confirm that this was really his Naina.

Rajveer: lagta hai sach me me ghalat ghar aagaya hu.

He turns towards the door again and is about to walk but she stops him

Naina: Raj me hee hu

he stops and looks at her in amazement

Rajveer: Naina? (walks towards her) aaj to sach much chand dharti pe aagaya hai. May I? (he takes her hand and lightly kisses it) pata nahi mere already ghayal dil ka kya hoga?

She just gave him a playful smack on the chest and laughed. Then both of them walked out towards his car and like a gentleman he opened up the door for her and then he went and sat at his side and he drove off. He didn't reveal to her where they were going and she was dying with curiosity.

Rajveer: Wese Naina tum jaantee ho na kehte hai ke pyaar me hamesha ek dusre se sach hee bolena chaheeye

Naina: ha, kyu ke pyaar kee bunyaad sacchai pe hee hoti hai

Rajveer: (wicked grin) tp phir iska matlab yeh huwa ke hum dono ko hamesha ek dusre ko sach hee kehna chaheeye. Jo dil me wo haina?

Naina: ha jo bhi ho kehna chaheeye (sees his grin and suspects he is up to something) tum kehna kya chaaraheho Raj?

Rajveer: well tumne kaha ke hame hamesha ek dusre se sach kehna chaheeye to is waqt mera kiss karne ka mann hai

Naina: (dumbstruck) What!

Rajveer: ha I mean itnee sexy or hot lagrahee ho is dress me ke mann karta hai ke tumhe abhi isee waqt'(he came closer to her and gestured how he wanted her)

She was appalled by his intentions and pushed him back. He just continued teasing her even more.

Rajveer: kya tumne hee to kaha ke sach bole na chaheeye to wahi karaha hu or tum ho ke'(she pushed his hands away from her) acha theek hai me kuch karta nahi bus bole ta hu phir. Aaj tumne yeh jo dress pehnee hai it just lights you up as if you're a bomb. Or phir yeh jo lambhi slit hai jo ke is waqt mujhe kaafi kuch dikha rahee hai jo ke mujhe kaafi distract karahee hai'(her eye fell down on her dress and she quickly adjusted it to an appropriate manner) or phir tumhaaree yeh low neck line to mind blowing or'

Naina: (she puts her hand on his mouth and grabs onto his shirt roughly) bus bohat hogaya Raj'

Rajveer: (struggling whilst driving and she removes her hand from his mouth) kya karahee ho Naina? I mean log dekhenge to kya kahenge. Meree izzat pe aise daaka mat daalo

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She just found him impossible so she didn't say anything and moved away from irately. He just laughed as she sat with her arms folded across her chest. He had to do something to cheer her up so he began humming a tune and then he began singing.

Rajveer: Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

She smiled and came closer to him and rested her head on his shoulder and linked his arm in hers.

Naina: phirse kaho, kehte raho, accha lagta hai

Jeevan ka her sapna ab saccha lagta hai

Rajveer: Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

They kept driving and the air became romantic and magical between them. Naina kept distracting him on purpose by kissing him on the cheek and then on tickling his ear and neck. He tried stopping her but it went in vain and she just had fun laughing.

Naina: taareef karoge kab tak, bolo kab tak

Rajveer: mere seene me saans rahe gee jab tak

Naina: kab tak me rahungee mann mein, haan mann me

Rajveer: suraj hoga jab tak neele gagan me

Naina: phirse kaho, kehte raho, accha lagta hai

Jeevan ka her sapna ab saccha lagta hai

They reached the restaurant where Rajveer was going to take her and then they both get out. Then he puts his arm out for her to link and then they both walk in. Naina was really excited and Rajveer was also happy to see her happy. They were taken in and then taken to their reserved table. Naina was impressed of how Rajveer had taken care of each and every detail from the beginning. He knew she loved roses which he brought and then he also knew she loved a quiet cozy place for dinner and that's what he had done. They had got a table in a far quiet corner. Then he knew she also loved a candle light dinner and there were candles too. Everything was perfect of the evening and she just loved the man who had taken such care of her likes.

After they had sat Rajveer leaned his elbow on the table and then leaned his face on his hand and just kept looking at Naina.

Rajveer: khush ho na tum mujhe paakar, mujhe paakar

Naina: pyaase dil ko aaj mila hai saagar

Rajveer: kya dil mein hai or tamanna, or tamanna

She took his hand and put it next to her cheek

Naina: her jeevan me tum mere hee banna

Rajveer: (he took her face in his palms) phirse kaho, kehte raho, accha lagta hai

Naina: jeevan ka har sapna, ab saccha lagta hai

Rajveer: Kya khoob lagti ho, bari sundar dikhti ho

Naina:tum pyaar se pyaare ho

Rajveer: tum jaan hamaree ho

Naina:tum pyaar se pyaare ho

Rajveer: tum jaan hamaree ho

Both were still emerged into each other but soon the waiter's sarcastic cough broke them apart and they felt a bit embarrassed. Then both of them put the menu cards in front of them to hide their red flushed faces and to pretend everything was normal. They ordered and then after the waiter left they let out a sigh of relief.

Naina: Wow Rajveer tumhe meree her ek pasand ka kesa pata chala?

Rajveer: jab dil se dil kee rah hoti hai, tab oskee pasand na pasand khud ba khud pata chal jaatee hai. (she smiled at him) Naina me tumhaare liye kuch laaya hu (he takes out a gift wrapped present from the back of his pants and then puts it in front of her.)

She looks at it with bright delighted eyes and takes it. Then she slowly unwraps it and is surprised.

Naina: Rajveer yeh to…

Rajveer: ha yeh tumhaaree diary hai. Jab tumne ise phaar ke mujhe de di thi tab mujhe itna affect nahi huwa tha. Lekin phir baad me maine tumhaare ek ek panne ko parha or phir tumhaare dil ko sahi tarha se jaan sakha. Jab tum mere paas nahi thi to yehi mera sahara thi or isee ke zarye hee me zinda reh paaya hu tumhaare bagair. (Naina was awed by the man sitting in front of him and she couldn't believe he loved her so much. Then she opened it up and saw how Rajveer had rejoined the diary into a proper book was now with all her pages carefully secured.) Maine tumhaare her wo dard ko mehsoosr kiya hai Nainwo a jo ke tumhe meree wajese mile hai or phir maine tumhaare wo her sapne ko bhi apne dil kee kitaab me utaar diya hai or ose main eek naye andaaz me likha hai take ab wo sirf tumhaare sapne nahi balke ab wo hamare sapne bangaye hai.

Naina: (held both of his hands really tight) I really love you Raj.

Then she sat back and began looking through the diary again amazed and then at some points embarrassed with her own thoughts. She couldn't believe Rajveer actually read all this and took care of it. He certainly did care about her a lot and she knew he was the perfect guy for her.

Just then she looked up from the book and shrieked. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. She quickly raised the diary in front of her face and hid behind it. Rajveer became alarmed at the sudden change of behaviour.

Rajveer: Kya huwa Naina? Achanak tum aise chup kyu rahee ho?

Naina: (from behind the book) Raj job hi ho peeche moor ke mat dekhna

Rajveer: (smirked) kyu aisa kya hai peeche?

Naina: Raj please trust me and don't look behind you.

Rajveer: Naina come on, yeh kya baccho jese game khel rahee ho. Tell me properly ke kya huwa hai

Naina: Oh God Raj. Peeche isliye nahi dekh sakte kyu ke peeche bhaiyya hai

Rajveer: (bedazzled) kya? (then he turned around and saw Navin sitting on a table with Ritu and quickly tunred back and ducked lower) yeh saala yaha kya karaha hai?

Naina: Raj…..(gritted teeth)

Rajveer: What? Okay ab kya karenge (both of them panicked and began moving around desperately but couldn't think of anything.) is pure shair me ose sirf yehi ek restaurant mila. Jee chahta hai ke abhi jaake ose do chaar…

Naina: Raj yeh waqt aise ghussa hone ka nahi. Ab yeh socho ke bhaiyaa se bachenge kese?

Rajveer: I don't know. Wese osse bachne kee kya zaroorat hai. Ham koi gunaah to nahi karahe to phir. Relax!

Naina: (annoyed with how he leaned back on his chair completely unaffected) Raj? Tumhe bilkul bhi farak nahi paraha. Tum nahi jaante ke agar bhaiyya ne hum dono ko yaha dekhliya na to phir kitna bara bawaal machega

Rajveer: I don't get it Naina I mean ab to hamaree shaadi hone waale hai to phir yeh roke kyu?

Naina: wo isliye kyu ke (stood up in excitement) they are just like that

Rajveer: (pulled her down) yeh kya karahee ho Naina? Sab dekh rahe hai.

Then both of them began thinking of how to get out of here when they were graced with another unwanted presence.

Neelu: Hi guys! To tum log bhi yehi aaye?

Rajveer: (agitated) nahi hume tum T.V pe dekh rahee ho. Seriously guys tum logo ko koi or jage nahi milee jo aagaye yaha hamara mazaa kharaab karne

Naina: (outraged) RAJ! (then she looked at Neelu who seemed quite hurt) Guys Raj kee baat ka bura mat maana, iska hain is waqt mood kharaab hai

Aalekh: Don't worry ham yaha rehke iska mood or khaaraab nahi karenge. Chalo Neelu.

Both of them walked off and the Rajveer felt bad

Naina: Kya Raj tum bhi na khamakha onko aise suna diya. Bhaiyya ka ghussa onpe nikaal diya

Rajveer: uffo ek to yaha sab ko mujhse hee shikaayat hai. Isse behtar to me hee yaha se chala jao.

Naina: tum baat ka batangar bana rahe ho Raj. I think you should go and apologize to them

Rajveer: What? (makes a face) maine kya kiya hai ke me maafi maangu. Dekho Naina they'll be fine.

Naina: Raj agar tum onke paas nahi gaye to phir me waapis ghar jaarahee hu (is about to leave but Rajveer stands up and stops her)

Rajveer: Are Naina…(innocent smile) aisa mat karna theek hai me jaaraha hu (he stands up reluctantly and turns to see where Aalekh and Neelu went) yeh sab hai na os sale Navin kee wajese horaha hai. Ose to me chorunga nahi

Then he walked off towards their table. He stopped midway and hid behind the pillar as he saw that Navin's table was just a few tables away from them. This was just great. Then he grabbed a menu card from a passing by waiter and then hid his face with it and began walking constantly peeking out to see if Navin was still there when he crashed with someone. The menu card fell and he was left aghast.

Navin: Rajveer? Tum yaha? What a great surprise.

Rajveer: (weak smile) ha wo me…aise hee aaya tha yaha. Suna hai ke yaha ka crab bohat accha hai

Navin: That's great. Tum yaha akele aaye ho

Rajveer: (laughs) kyat um bhi Navin, actually me yaha Aalekh…ha Aalekh ke saath aaya hu.

Navin: okay nice meeting you. (shakes his hand then he leaves from there.)

Rajveer sighs with relief and then rushes over at Aalekh's table

Rajveer: are yaar bohat garbar hogayee hai

Aalekh: Excuse me per kya me aapko jaanta hu?

Rajveer: are yaar Aalekh come on. (sees Aalekh's stern face) theek hai I'm really sorry mujhe tum dono se wo sab nahi kehna chaheeye tha. Ab meree baat to sun.

Aalekh: theek hai bata kya huwa?

Rajveer: are kya hona tha. Maine ek perfect romantic date sochee thi Naina ke saath per ose bhasm karne pohoch gaya os ka bhai

Neelu: Kya! Navin bhaiyya bhi yaha aaye hai? Margaye (she bit her lower lip)

Aalekh: Tum dono yeh kya kehrahe ho?

Neelu explained everything to Aalekh.

Rajveer: ab kya karenge. Agar os kharuso ram ne mujhe Naina ke saath dekhliya na to samjho ke pura full stop laga dega shaadi tak.

Aalekh: Don't worry Raj. Dekh tu yaha mere saath beit jaa or Neelu jaake Naina ke paas baithegee. Bus yeh Navin chala jaaehga oske baad phirse swap karlenge

Rajveer: Kya? Itna saara waqt barbaad karne ko keh raha hai mujhe

Aalekh: to wo to wese bhi hone waale hai na Navin se bachte bachte.

Neelu: Aalekh sahi kehraha hai.

She got up and went to Naina at her table and explained everything. Rajveer slumped down on the chair in front of Aalekh and sulked.

Rajveer: kise pata tha ke meree life kee sabse romantic date mujhe Naina ke bajai tere saath bitaanee paregee

Aalekh: Mujhe bhi koi shoke nahi hai tere saath yaha beithkar waqt beetaana.

Rajveer: per sale bata kya tujhe yehi hotel milee romance karne ke liye

Aalekh: yeh baat me tujhse bhi kersakta hu

Rajveer: me yaha pehle aaya tha to tu ja yahase

Aalekh: (annoyed) kyu? Kya yeh tere baap kee hai

Rajveer: Dekh Aalekh mere baap tak mat jaa (really irritated) mera dimaag pehlese bohat kharaab hai to ose or mat bana or jaa yahase

Aalekh: nahi jaaunga! (throws the napkin on his plate) kya karlega?

Rajveer: (rolls his tongue in his cheek and looks at Aalekh with menacing eyes) kuch khaas nahi, bus yeh (he grabs Aalekh's head and pushes it into the salad bowl and then laughs at him)

Aalekh is furious with him and he does the same with Rajveer. The girls are observing this and slap their foreheads as they both knew how immature the boys could become sometimes. They couldn't go up and stop them so just sat there watching the show. Just then they saw Navin standing beside them.

Navin: aaj sach much ittefaq hai. Abhi thoree dair pehle mujhe Rajveer mila yaha pe or ab tum dono bhi yahi ho. Wow!

He didn't know how both of them were not so feeling like jumping around because he had no idea of how he had just spoilt their romantic date. Then he suggested that they join him and Ritu. Naina and Neelu tried a lot to refuse but Navin was too persistent and they had to go eventually.

Then Navin went to the boy's table and was alarmed to see both them sitting with pieces of salad stuck in their hair and all.

Naivn: yeh kya haalat banaa rakhee hai tum dono ne?

Rajveer: ummm wo hum dono to bus…actually ham salad taste karahe the

Navin: (gives them a whimsical look) you taste it by putting it in your hair? (both the boys looke at each other and then began brushing it all out of their hair) Anyways guys guess what. Naina or Neelu bhi yahi hai to maine socha ke jab ham sab ek hee jage hai to kyu na saath me milke hee dinner karte hai

Both: Nahi Navin wo… (paused when saw both the girls sitting with Ritu) Ohhh!!!

Navin: ab chalo bhi

Both of them followed without much choice and then pretended to be surprised to see the girls there and said their hellos. The only good part was that atleast Rajveer got to sit next to Naina. After a while all of them cheered up and had fun as they had to accept that nothing could be done now and its better they just mingle together as friends and spend the time.

After dinner all of them were setting off when Rajveer pushed his chair and bumped into someone.

Huda: Well look who we have here? (gives them all dirty looks especially Naina)

Rajveer notices it and puts a protective arm in front of Naina and glares back at Huda

Rajveer: Dekh Huda mere raaste se hath jaa

Huda: (moves aside dramatically) ye lo hathgaya. Tere raaste se lekin Naina ke raaste se kese hataehga mujhe?

He went to touch Naina and Rajveer grabbed his arm and then became really furious and chucked it behind him.

Rajveer: khabar daar agar jo tune meree Naina ko chune kee koshish bhi kee. Tere liye bohat hee bura hoga.

The rest of them stood there watching the show. Navin and Ritu didn't know what was going on but Navin could sense that Huda was obviously the wrong guy here but what was he talking about Naina?

Huda: (laughed and began clapping) kamaal kee baat hai. Itnee jaldi isse bhi rishta rakh liya (addresses Naina and looks her down head to toe making her feel really uncomfortable)

Rajveer saw this and now he couldn't hold back anymore and he swung his fist round and wacked Huda on the face sending him on the floor. It created havoc amongst the crowd and the people got off their tables and shrieked. Huda's nose began bleeding and he became enraged too so he charged onto Rajveer and both of them got engrossed into a fist fight. Rajveer gave Huda many punches and threw him against the tables and chairs. Huda also managed to throw Rajveer here and there. Aaelekh and Navin both tried to free the two but they also got involved in the fight as they got thrown here and there. Naina was feeling awful that this was happening because of her and she couldn't see Rajveer in pain. But there seemed to be no stopping to this as both the men were two vicious animals.

The hotel manager soon called the police to stop this rowdy behaviour in his restaurant. The police came rushing in and both Aalekh and Navin tried separating Rajveer from Huda but it was impossible and in that they also got involved again. Then the girls came forward and tired helping but to the police all of them looked involved and all of them got arrested together.

Now all of them sat at the police station like criminals when they weren't. Naina sat next to Rajveer nursing his split lip whilst he winced in pain. Then Navin sat with Ritu trying to ask as to what exactly was going on out there and Neelu and Aalekh were explaining. Huda sat on the otherside with his wounds glaring at Rajveer and challenging him constantly. If they wouldn't have had been in the police station then both of them would have certainly finished their feud.

Then the police officer came and began shouting at all of them to be quiet. All of them looked at the officer and he appeared more of a clown than a strict officer. They felt like laughing but the officer made them shut up again.

Then he sat down on his table and addressed all of them. First he called Aalekh and was wuite rude with him. He kept getting angry for no reason and then Aalekh was feelling too hot and he saw how the fan was facing the other way for no reason so he turned it around towards him. It was put on high speed and as the air passed on to the officer it blew away the wig he was wearing which made all of them laugh but the officer quickly grabbed his wig and then made all of them quiet again. He summoned Aalekh to go back as he was useless.

Then Neelu came but the officer was really polite with her and made her go back and sit. Aalekh didn't like the way he looked at him and told the officer to stop staring but he just rebuked by telling him to sit down again.

Then Rajveer came and the officer saw the wounds and immediately called him the troublemaker and began accusing him of stuff. Rajveer kept getting angry but the officer made sure Rajveer remained in his limits and then sent him back. He was rather too polite with the women.

Last but not the least Huda came and began putting the whole blame on Rajveer and his friends. Rajveer got angry and got up and grabbed onto Huda's collar. The officer became furious and threw all of them inside the cell.

This was a nightmare. All of them sat in their pairs cursing the night and the events. They couldn't believe they were in prison and if this got leaked to their parents then they would certainly be dead.

Aalekh was feeling too sleepy so he slept on the stone bed whilst Ritu rested her head on Navin's shoulder and slept. Rajveer and Naina sat on the floor with Naina also resting her head on his shoulder.

Rajveer: I'm sorry Naina yeh sab meree wajese huwa hai

Naina: it's okay Raj…isme tumhaaree akele kee ghalati nahi. Sab kuch to Huda ne shuroo kiya hai

Rajveer: (put his arm around her shoulder) kya kya socha nahi tha maine is raat ke baare me. Kaha me tumhe ek perfect date pe lejaane wala tha or kaha ham yaha is kaal kotree me pohoch gaye

Naina: (holds onto his waist) me tumhaare saath hu yehi mere liye bohat hai.

All of them were sitting peacefully when suddenly Aalekh jerked up screaming like a girl. All of them began running around not knowing what happened and just then the officer came and silenced them.

Officer: kya hai! Itna shore kyu macha raha hai

Aalekh: wo…wo…wo yaha pe itna bara bicchoo hai

Officer: hehehe yah ape biccho to kya, chipkaliya or chue bhi milenge. Ab chup chaap so jao. Agar phirse kisee ne awaaz nikaalee to sab ko do dande parenge to apne aap hee chup hojaaehgee zubaan.

All of them became silent again and resumed their original positions.

An hour later the officer came and began banging on the bars waking them all. They jumped up and enquired what he wanted now. He told them that all of them could go as they got their bail.

They were happy as well as shocked as to who could have bailed them out. Then when they got out Rajveer was glad to see Sameera there. He went and hugged her.

Sam: as usual tum musibaat me phase or mujhe tumhe bacchane aana para

Rajveer: is baar I'm really glad ke tu aayee.

Sam: yeh to shukur maano ke maine tumhaara mobile try kiya or pata chala ke tum police station me ho is officer se. anyways ab jaldi yahase chalo.

All of them quickly leave the place and then all decide to leave to their homes. But Rajveer grabbed Naina and left from there before any of them could realize what happened.

Naina: Raj! Yeh kya karahai ho? Agar bhaiyaa ne dekh liya to…

Rajveer: (put his finger on her lips) ab mujhe kisee kee parwa nahi. Aaj maine tumse kaha tha ke hamaree first date hogee to abhi bhi raat baaki hai

Naina: lekin bhaiyaa ko kya…

Rajveer: oskee tum parwa mat karo sab me sambhaal lunga.

She didn't say anything further and followed Rajveer to wherever he was going to take her.

End of part

Next part- A SURPRISE!!!!!!!

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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Raj aur Naina spend most of their time together even though they had to mingle with the others!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

When they were apart tab bhi ek dusre se nazar nahi hatti and they are just eager to be together again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is teasing her so much and holding her close to him making her feel uncomfortable and uneasy!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

No wonder Naina is so mad and wanted him to leave her alone!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔But Raj is thinking she is just pretending to be angry and kept persisting!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina accidentally slapped him and both of them were shocked!!! Very bad!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aur Raj bahut gussa ho gaya aur chala gaya!!!!

Naina wants to apologize magar woh toh Naina ki koi baat nahi sun raha hai aur kamre mein bandh kar liya hai apne aap ko!!!! Ab Naina bhi kya kare usse suddenly hogaya bina soche samjhe!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina is almost in tears magar Aalekh kehta hai ke Raj bachpan se hi aisa hai!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Haan aur ab tak bada kaha huya hai woh!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar ek ghanta wait karne ke baad bhi woh nahi aaya aur Naina ke liye toh ek ek second beetana muskil ho raha tha!!!!

Aalekh aur Neelu se help maangi toh dono aapas mein hi ladne lage!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeha Hum Tum ki ladayi shuru kardi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh usse room dhundh raha hai magar Raj is not to be seen aur sliding doors have been locked as well!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Woh toh yaha hai unke peeche and they are shocked to see him and he is still looking displeased!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj toh muh fula ke chala gaya and Naina is smiling at his innocence!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ne kaan pakda toh Raj maan gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Akhir Raj bhi kab tak Naina se naraz rehta!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊His smile made Nainas heart melt aur kehta hai ke dubara aisa kiya toh woh mar hi jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne usse rok liya aur kaha ke bina Rajveer ke Naina ka koi moul nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiiiii!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The hugged each other and held tight!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Aalekh and Neelu were glad to see everything back to normal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is right ke itna sab kuch hogaya and he has not taken her out on a date!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He hasn't even proposed to her properly!!!

Naina kehti hai usse bhool gaya toh aur Raj kehta hai woh uska aakhri din hoga jab woh Naina ko bhool jayega!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat kahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ne Naina ki family ko backward kaha toh Naina naraz hogayi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Waise Raj ka sasural hai woh uske baare mein aisa bol hi sakta hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina is right ke Raj se toh zyada der tak koi naraz bhi nahi reh sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne toh Naina ke saath dinner ka plan bana liya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Aur uske liye use kiya apna purana funda use kiya aur Neelu ko pataya!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina wants Navin to help but he is busy!!!😒 😒 😒 😒Really Navin is no help at all!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina khud apni family ko backward bol rahi hai magar jab Raj bol raha tha tab toh naraz ho rahi thi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Neelu yeh kaam kitni asani se kar deti hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj jab Naina ko lene Neelu ke ghar aaya toh Neelu is pulling his leg so much aur roses bhi le liya Raj se!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj is right ke ke uski aur Aalekh ki bilkul sahi jodi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Neelu ne finally Naina ko roses de diye aur usse neeche bhej hi diya!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is looking sooo beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Her dress is just too good!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Raj ki toh nazar hi nahi hat rahi hai ush par se!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ko wakai laga woh galat ghar mein aagaya hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj kitna romantically Naina ki tareef karta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne yeh sach jhoot ki baat karni shuru ki!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Nautanki kahin ka!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆And then he said that he wants to kiss then and there!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Aur phir Raj ne jab Naina ke dress ki tareef karni shuru ki!!!!!😛 😛 😛My God Raj kitna naughty ho gaya hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne chup karwaya toh Raj bol raha hai ke log dekh rahe hai aur uske izzat par daka dalegi kya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

No wonder Naina naraz ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He is just impossible!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Ab gaana gaake Naina ko mana raha hai aur Naina maan bhi gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and excellent for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Naina khud Raj ko tang kar rahi hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊It is so romantic and magical!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Kitna pyaar karta hai Raj Naina se!!!😍 😍 😍 😍Usne itna saara arrangement kiya woh bhi sab Naina ke pasand ka!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

They were so lost in each other ke the waiter had to cough in order to bring them back from their dreamland!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ne Naina ki wahi diary wapas di with all her pages carefully secured!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊I really love him for that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He said ke yeh diary uska sahara thi jab Naina uske paas nahi thi aur ussi ke zariye woh zinda reh paya hai Naina ke bagair!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina has realized it now that Raj is the perfect guy for her aur usse zyada pyaar usse koi nahi kar sakta!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Navin aur Ritu ko waha dekh kar Naina was really shocked and the way she told Raj not to look behind him was really very funny!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is right ke isse poore shaher mein yehi restaurant mila tha kya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aur Neelu aur Aalekh bhi wahi aa gaye!!!! Just great!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Sabko yehi jagah mila tha aane ke liye!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Raj itna gusse mein tha ke usne Navin ka gussa Neelu par nikal diya!!!!

Naina ne accha kiya ke she sent Raj to apologize to Aalekh and Neelu!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Magar Navin se chupne ke chakkar mein Raj crashed with someone aur Navin ne usse dekh liya!!!!

Ab Neelu ko Naina aur Raj ko Aalekh ke saath baithna pada!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭How romantic!!!! What a date!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Sab chaupat hogaya!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj aur Aalekh he toh jhagadna shuru kar diya and they dipped each other's head in the salad!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆It was really funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

The girls can't even stop it and just had to watch it!!!😛 😛 😛 😛They are right the boys can really become immature sometimes!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Navin ne ab Naina aur Neelu aur phir Raj aur Aalekh ko invite kiya to have a family dinner!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Bechare!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj and Aalekh must have looked stupid sitting there with salad in their hairs!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

At least Raj got to sit next to Naina!!!! 😊 😊 😊Thats one good thing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Well this is the best in this situation I guess!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Huda yahan bhi aagaya!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Usne phir apni bakwas shuru kardi!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒How dare he try to touch Naina!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He is really sick!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj ne bahut accha kiya jo usse punch kiya!!!! 😊 😊 😊Now both are fighting and there is no stopping them!!!!

Poor Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔She is feeling awful that this was happening because of her and she couldn't see Rajveer in pain!!!!

All of them were arrested and taken to the police station!!!😔 😔 😔 😔This is the limit!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Their romantic evening was thoroughly ruined!!!! It just can't get any worse!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The police station scene reminded me of Dill Mill Gayye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda toh abhi bhi Raj ko challenge kar raha hai aur police station na hota toh they would have certainly finished their feud!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

The police officer appeared more of a clown and Aalekh's turning the fan which blew away the police officer's wig was just too funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

No wonder everyone started laughing!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣The police officer is polite with the girls but rude with the guys!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne kaha uski galti hai magar Naina ne sahi kaha ke sab ush Huda ne shuru kiya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne kaha ke woh Raj ke saath hai yehi uske liye bohat hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh bicchoo dekhke kaise chilane laga aur koodne laga!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆It was funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Sam bailed them all out!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is a lifesaver!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Warna pata nahi Raj ke dad ko pata chalta toh kya hota??😔 😔 😔 😔

Bahar nikalne ke baad Raj Naina ko legaya waha se!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Usse woh date pe lejake hi rahega!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Abhi toh raat baaki hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I wonder where he is taking her and what the night has in store for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Reply for part 18:
Sorry for replying so late...Update was fantastic.👏
Naina's father comes to know abt Raj n he calls his parents for d meeting.😊😊😊..Raj was so very excited n so was Naina..😊
This scene was really funny

"Father: (looks at Rajveer and then at Gehlot) to yeh hai tumhaare pita jo ke bijli beichte hai

Rajveer: (nearly choked on the drink he had been served whilst leaning forward. He quickly wipes it off and then looks at her father) ummmm…wo…sir…I mean wo to bus yuhi…

Gehlot: me samjha nahi aap kya kehna chahte hai

Rajveer panicks again and wishes that Naina's father wouldn't comment on his camaraderie yesterday or else he would certainly die sooner or later by the hands of his own father. Navin hid his muffled laughs behind his hand whilst Naina sat looking down towards the ground equally nervous. Not once has she shot a glance at Rajveer who by now had been dying to see her face. She kept praying that Rajveer didn't goof up and spoil everything as he always did.

Father: ji wo kya hai ke…

Rajveer: ummm dad yeh to sirf mazaak karahe the. (lets out a weak smile) aap bhi na 😆"

Raj is so very nervous.
Raj n Naina kitne romantically ek doosre ki thoughts ko pad lete hain wow..Love shud b like this only.They both r literaaly talking in their minds...😉😉😉
Raj is busy staring Naina on their engagement.Sahi hai they both r now officially binded with each other.
Romance karne ka koi bhi chance yeh dono hath se nahi jaane dete.Store room hi sahi😉😉😉
But Sam caught dem..Poor creatures..😆😆😆
The song was really nice ..............
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Reply for part 19:
Raj was busy teasing Naina ..She was quite annoyed at dis n slapped him by mistake..😕😕😕.Gosh how can any1 slap their fiancee.Raj got really upset n even Naina realized her mistake..
Thank goodness Raj n Naina have friends like Alekh n Neelu who r constantly helping dem in their problem solving..Even Neelu n Alekh started having heated argument over Raj n Naina issue..😆😆😆
This hum tum fight will never end.I think its continous n constant.😉
Finally Raj forgave Naina n both the love birds were one ...👏👏👏
Raj wants to take Naina out on a date but her family is really orthodox...But Raj is always ready with some peppy plan.. ...Naina wants Navin to help her but he is busy in some other things...these guys r impossible sometimes...😕😕😕
It's really easy for Neelu to conince Naina's parents..
Raj was so very excited for the date n so is Naina.Neelu is constantly pulling Raj's leg...Raj was awstuck to see Naina in dat attire..😛
Both of them had a very nice romantic chat ...But i feel dat u shud not b always honest with your partners n especially if some1 like Raj is your betterhalf.Bcos they can b qiute embarrasing sometimes.(look he wants to kiss here dere😉😉)
They both were so lost in each other dat d waitor had to cough in order to bring dem back from their dreamland.
It was really funny dat both Navin n Ritu were dere n Raj knew dat his best romantic date was spoiled.😆
Even Alekh n Neelu came dere too(All the romantic couples didn't had any better place to go😆😆😆)..Raj was so very frustated n he poked all his frustation on Alekh.
He went for n appology but Naveen caught him n he had to lie that he came up with Alekh.How romantic...Wat a date!!!!!Neelu was siiting with Naina n Alekh with Raj...😭😭😭
Both the guys acted really crazy when they dipped each other head in salad.
Naveen invited all of dem to have a nice family dinner..poor guys.
Where did this Huda emerged from????😡😡😡He is really sick n Raj did a gud thing by giving him hard punches.He desrves worse dan dat..
All of them were arrested n taken to police station.This is d limit..How their romantic evening was ruined.
Ispector was polite withg the gals but rude with the guys..Alekh is so very naughty...how can he play such a prank?All of dem were prisoned..I didn't knew dat whether i shud laugh or feel sad on their conditon..
Finally they were bailed out by Sam..She truely is awsome...But where is Raj taking Naina???????
U know how to tie up ypur readers..
Loved the update...It was really hilarious
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks very much sweta2005 for the appreciation. i'm glad u luved the part

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Reply for part 18:

Sorry for replying so late...Update was fantastic.👏 - its okay

Naina's father comes to know abt Raj n he calls his parents for d meeting.😊😊😊..Raj was so very excited n so was Naina..😊 - he sure was
This scene was really funny

"Father: (looks at Rajveer and then at Gehlot) to yeh hai tumhaare pita jo ke bijli beichte hai

Rajveer: (nearly choked on the drink he had been served whilst leaning forward. He quickly wipes it off and then looks at her father) ummmm…wo…sir…I mean wo to bus yuhi…

Gehlot: me samjha nahi aap kya kehna chahte hai

Rajveer panicks again and wishes that Naina's father wouldn't comment on his camaraderie yesterday or else he would certainly die sooner or later by the hands of his own father. Navin hid his muffled laughs behind his hand whilst Naina sat looking down towards the ground equally nervous. Not once has she shot a glance at Rajveer who by now had been dying to see her face. She kept praying that Rajveer didn't goof up and spoil everything as he always did.

Father: ji wo kya hai ke…

Rajveer: ummm dad yeh to sirf mazaak karahe the. (lets out a weak smile) aap bhi na 😆" - thanks i'm glad u had a laugh

Raj is so very nervous.
Raj n Naina kitne romantically ek doosre ki thoughts ko pad lete hain wow..Love shud b like this only.They both r literaaly talking in their minds...😉😉😉 - hmmm yeh really love shud be like this i agree.
Raj is busy staring Naina on their engagement.Sahi hai they both r now officially binded with each other. - yep ab oska haq banta hai

Romance karne ka koi bhi chance yeh dono hath se nahi jaane dete.Store room hi sahi😉😉😉 - can't get enuf of each other

But Sam caught dem..Poor creatures..😆😆😆
The song was really nice .............. - thanks for loving it




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