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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

why did u stop dear

ab bas Raj Niana ko kah de ki vo uske liye kya feel karta hain plz

plz continue soon

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nihatri

@nihatri

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

dam good update yaar. u r good writer

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sana

@sanabmw

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

hii priti...

wow what a UD yaar ..tum mujhe kaheti hoo main accha likhati hoo but dear aap bhi kuch kam nahin ho😉bahot accha part tha raj ka naina aur usake baare main sochana phir naina aur raj ka saath main aana..sab bada accha likha hai tumne...👏👏aur naina ka baar baar raj ko kahena k ab use usaki aadat nahin rakhani chahiye mujhe yeh sab bahot accha laga..sach kahu..tumhaare is UD main kuch tha jo mujhe bahot sad kar gaya...aisa kuch jo sirf mehsoos kiya jaa sakata tha..aur sach maine wahi kiya😳do log ek dusare se itana pyaar karate hai but kabhi bol nahin paate...sach RN ki yeh baat sabse jayada pasand hai mujhe...wonderfull UD dear...👏👏👏

lots of love

sana😛

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

hi priti, aaj mujhe bura lag raha hai k yeh DJ'S ne tumhe apna writer kyuon nahin banaya yaar? kam se kam RAJ k exit hone se pahle hum sab yeh dekh pate. tumhare ud ne RAJ-NAINA k purane din yaad dila diya yaar. ur ud is just mindblowing, gr8, fantastic,fab. & emotinal. aab jaldi se next ud bhejo,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

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aarthi

@aarsow

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

itz realy gud,

very wel dun,

but RN shld tel their feelings for each other soon,

This is realy awesum,

Aarthi

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jane

@george eliot

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

too nice, lovely way to describe what's going on in both Raj and Pri's hearts,

now make them confess their feelings soon, can't hold it anymore

point 1857 gives me goosebumps, it's got such a romantic feel, am sooooooo glad you are using it in ur story😛

update soon, waiting for the next part

lots of love

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#137

fabulous....................bahut hi acchi tarah se narrate kiya emotions ko.....

beautiful

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Riti

@-Reeti-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#138

hiiiii Priti,..😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 bas aj rona araha hai ,bas kuch yaad agaya ki kya kahun bas dil kar raha hai zor zor se roun Par tumne aise kaise rok diya tum ye Kab khatm karogi me mari jaa rahi hoo unka milan padhne k liye 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 raj aur naina ke tarah lovers puri duniya me nahin honge kyun ki pyar ka izhar karna asan hota hai par pyar ko andar dabakar rakhna bahat mushkil hota hai ,yahi baat raj aur naina me special hai .😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ab jaldi UD kardo warna me mar jaungi.😭 😭 😭
lots of love Riti 😳 😳 😳

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362035

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
kaise point per stop kar diya...
very bad😭

Raj is not able to tolerate watever Naina is saying..but he deserves dis😉

waiting for the other part..

yaar your hindi is too gud..Kuch words to padne mein hi 5 min lag gaye😆

HII SUHANA THANX DEAR FOR UR COMMENTS, I AM GLAD, TABHIE TOH AAGE MAZAA AAYEGA SWEETY, TUMHE SACH MEIN LAGTA HAI KI MERI HINDI ACHCHI HAI, THANX YAAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Edited by pritib0 - 17 years ago

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362035

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Posted: 17 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: prerna1
why did u stop dear
ab bas Raj Niana ko kah de ki vo uske liye kya feel karta hain plz

plz continue soon

ROKNE KI WAJAH HAI DEAR, WARNA AAGE KA MAZAA AUR EXCITEMENT KAISE BADHEGA, THANX FOR UR COMMENTS PRERNAM AFCOURSE DEAR WOH TOH HOGA HI, WARNA FF KA TITLE SARTHAK KAISE HOGA. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

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