IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 12

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

😭💔😭pata hai priti tumne mujhe rulaaya hai iss ud mein....sach mein main ro rahi hoon......iska matlab pata hai kya hai......ki mujhe tumhaara ud bhut pasand aaya aur mujhe pata hai ki next ud mein main bhut khush hone waaali hoon...............arre raj aur naina point1857 jo jaaa rahe hain.❤️.....ab jaldi se next ud karo warna zor se gussa karoongi...........hahahahahahaha.......just kidding......but seriously i just loved dis ud and i hv high hopes 4m d next........

ab khush maine comment kar diya yaaar.....kya karoon thodi si lazy hoon........nhn actually bhut lazy hoon.🥱......byeeeeeeeee and ud soon aur haan iss baaar bada sa kyunki ye ud bhut chota tha yaar padne se pehle hi khatam ho gaya......

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

simply awesome...............very very nicely described emotions

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Raj is really getting on my nerves now..Why is he so sacrificing always n hurting the other person i'e Naina??????

Wat does he wanna proove after going away??????

Update was really touchy

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

superb.cont soon.........

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hiiii,
update is just toooooo good. it's so touchy.😭 n i mean it. the way Naina reacted it's touvh my heart, am waiting for next update on hope that point 1857 help's RN to confess thier feeling's.........😊

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII HOPE U R ROCKING

UR UD IS MIND BLOWING, TOO GOOD ,AWSOOOOOOOME,

FANTASTIC,TOUCHING

REAL LRL KI YAAD DILADI RULA DIYA YAAR

AB AAGE KYA BOLU

I AM JUST SPEECHLESS

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UD

LOVE DEEP.

Originally posted by: george eliot

hi dear,

sorry was busy with my own fic too much, and got a writer's block😆 so sorry for the late reply, ur update is absolutely amazing, brilliant description, tooo touching scenes, wonderful re-creation of emotions, i loved the way you portrayed both their minds, love's best when it's there and yet not confessed, that makes it sooooooooooo intense..........

keep updating, eager to read what happens next

Originally posted by: rlrl

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Priti Dear Ud bahat achha tha ki kya kahun mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki iska aur ek part bhi hai .jo ki tum age jakar UD karogi hai na okkk par yaar itna emotional part kaise likhi ho mujhe bahat rona araha tha par royi nahin hehehe.😉 par han tum sach me bahat azyada emo part likhti ho.

Ab Raj -Naina point 1857 par kya karenge m sure un dono ka ek Hug scene to hoga hi undono me confession to hoga hi sach jaldi d karna okk jaldii se kardena .par yaar ye Raj kyun nahin bolta naina ko
bahat sochta hai ye Raj 😆 😆 😆

I hopw ki Next Ud me In dono ka confession hojayega jaldi se Ud karna okkk fasssttt.ok bye TC plzzzzz update Soon lots of love . Riti 😛

Originally posted by: sweta2005

aawesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hey priti.......

what a UD dear.....😃

raj naina ki baat se shock hota hai aur naina bechaari sad hai ..waise RN dono sad hai bas bol nahin rahe ..aur raj ki feelings tumne bade acche se batai hai mujhe bahot accha laga....aur abhi ki line k zarurat nahin padegi hmm sahi kaha usane...😊😊aur ab naina raj k saath point 1857 par jayegi i m sure waha se dono saath hi aayege..😳very nice UD dear....👏👏