IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 15

Originally posted by: nihatri

dam good update yaar. u r good writer

THANKS NIHATRI FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS, I AM TOUCHED, U THINK SO THAT I AM GOOD, THEN MAY BE I AM, BUT ITHINK THAT I AM JUST OK WRITER, ANY WAYS THANX FOR UR APPRECIATION DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: sanabmw

hii priti...

wow what a UD yaar ..tum mujhe kaheti hoo main accha likhati hoo but dear aap bhi kuch kam nahin ho😉bahot accha part tha raj ka naina aur usake baare main sochana phir naina aur raj ka saath main aana..sab bada accha likha hai tumne...👏👏aur naina ka baar baar raj ko kahena k ab use usaki aadat nahin rakhani chahiye mujhe yeh sab bahot accha laga..sach kahu..tumhaare is UD main kuch tha jo mujhe bahot sad kar gaya...aisa kuch jo sirf mehsoos kiya jaa sakata tha..aur sach maine wahi kiya😳do log ek dusare se itana pyaar karate hai but kabhi bol nahin paate...sach RN ki yeh baat sabse jayada pasand hai mujhe...wonderfull UD dear...👏👏👏

lots of love

sana😛

HII MERI PYAARI SANA KAISI HO TUM? I HOPE KI TUM ACHCHI HOGI, AUR TUMHARA ROZA BHI ACHCHA KAT RAHA HOGA DEAR, DEKHO DEAR MAIN TUMHARI FAN HOON, TOH MAIN TOH TUMHARI HI TAAREEF KARUNGI HAAN, AUR YEH TOH MERI KHUSH KISMATI HAI KI TUMHE MERI BHI KAHANO ACHCHI LAG RAHI HAI DEAR, AUR TUMHE LAGTA HAI KI MAIN ACHCHA LIKHTI HOON, BAS KOSHISH KAR RAHIN HOON DEAR,TUMHE MERI UD PASAND AAYI, I AM REALLY TOUCHED DEAR, AUR TUMNE SAHI KAHA, RN KE PYAAR MEIN JO BAAT HAI, WOH KISI MEIN NAHIN HAI, YAKIN MANO, MAIN JAB YEH PART LIKH RAHI THI TOH, EVEN , MUJHE BHI RONA AA RAHA THA, CHALO IS BAHANE MAIN SABKO THODA EMOTIONAL TOH KAR PAAYI, AUR KHAAS KAR TUMHE, TUMHARE COMMENTS MERE LIYE BAHUT MAAYNE RAKHTE HAIN DEAR, BAS AISE HI KARTI RAHA KARO.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

hi priti, aaj mujhe bura lag raha hai k yeh DJ'S ne tumhe apna writer kyuon nahin banaya yaar? kam se kam RAJ k exit hone se pahle hum sab yeh dekh pate. tumhare ud ne RAJ-NAINA k purane din yaad dila diya yaar. ur ud is just mindblowing, gr8, fantastic,fab. & emotinal. aab jaldi se next ud bhejo,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

HII PRIYA DEAR HOW R U? HOPE UR FINE SWEETY, TUMHE SACH MEIN AISA LAGTA HAI KI MAIN LRL KI KAHANI KO AAGE BHADA PAATI, THANX SWEETY, MAIN TUMHE RAJ AUR NAINA KE PURANE DIN YAAD KARANE MEIN KAMYAAB RAHI, I AM REALLY TOUCHED DEAR, AUR TUMNE MERI ITNI TAAREEF KI HAI KI KYA KAHUN, BAS THANX HI KAHUNGI TUMSE DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: aarsow

itz realy gud,

very wel dun,

but RN shld tel their feelings for each other soon,

This is realy awesum,




Aarthi

THANX AARTHI DEAR, FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS, I AM GLAD, U LIKED IT THANX, AFCOURSE THEY WILL SWEETY, JUST WAIT AND WATCH. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: george eliot

too nice, lovely way to describe what's going on in both Raj and Pri's hearts,

now make them confess their feelings soon, can't hold it anymore

point 1857 gives me goosebumps, it's got such a romantic feel, am sooooooo glad you are using it in ur story😛

update soon, waiting for the next part

lots of love

HII SWEETY, THANKY SO MUCH FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS, I AM REALLY TOUCHED, U LIKED THE UD, THANX A LOT DEAR, AFCOURSE DEAR THEY WILL, JUST WAIT AND WATCH, U R LIKING THE POINT 18 57 IDEA THANX DEAR. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

fabulous....................bahut hi acchi tarah se narrate kiya emotions ko.....

beautiful

THANX LIPI FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS, I AM GLAD. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

Originally posted by: rlrl

hiiiii Priti,..😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 bas aj rona araha hai ,bas kuch yaad agaya ki kya kahun bas dil kar raha hai zor zor se roun Par tumne aise kaise rok diya tum ye Kab khatm karogi me mari jaa rahi hoo unka milan padhne k liye 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 raj aur naina ke tarah lovers puri duniya me nahin honge kyun ki pyar ka izhar karna asan hota hai par pyar ko andar dabakar rakhna bahat mushkil hota hai ,yahi baat raj aur naina me special hai .😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ab jaldi UD kardo warna me mar jaungi.😭 😭 😭
lots of love Riti 😳 😳 😳

HII MERI PYAARI KAISI HAI TU? ACHCHI HI HOGI KYUN? MAINE TUJHE SACH MEIN RULA DIYA DEAR, TAB TOH PHIR TUJHE ZAROOR MERA US PASAND AAYA HOGA KYUN? MAIN TUJHE KAISE MARNE DOONGI, MARE TERE DUSHMAN........... TUNE SACH KAHA RN IS THE BEST....... AUR MAIN TUJHE NAHIN MARNE DOONGI SAMJHI KI NAHIN. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.

fantastic update.....full of emotions.....

Are yaar yeh dono zaroor milenge.....agar point 1857 par nahi milenge to kahan milenge......

The way in which you have written about their emotions....is tooo good...superb....

waiting for the next part....