IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 22

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Originally posted by: pritib0

THANX FOR THE COMMENT DEAR..............I AM GLAD THAT U LIKED THE UD..............AND I AM SORRY DEAR.....................THAT I HAD TO EDIT THIS PART............DUE TO SOME REASON..........WILL POST IT LATER..............

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!! THANKY VERY MUCH...

The way you described Raj and Naina were looking at each other was just awesome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX DEAR...ME TOO LOVE IT SWEETY...

Naina is right ke yeh dard ka rista bhi ajeeb hai hotho se nahi magar nazron se sab kuch keh jata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 TUMHE PATA HAI YEH LINES MAINE KHUD LIKHI HAIN ESPECIALLY FOR RN...

Raj aur Naina ke dil ka haal bhi unke nazre saaf-saaf bayaan kar rahi hai bas kehne ki der hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 ABSOLUTELY RIGHT DEAR...

Raj and Naina separated but they are still feeling each other's touch!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 JAB PYAAR ITNA GEHRA HO...TOH USE DOORIYAAN BHI NAHIN CHOO SAKTI HAIN...

Raj toh Naina maine tumse kehte kehte chup ho jaata hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 AB SAB NAZREIN HI KAHENGI...DIL KE JAZBAATON KO LAFZON KI AB KYA ZAROORAT HAI...

Raj Naina ke bagair ek pal bhi nahi jee sakta magar phir bhi apne jazbaaton ko dabakar rakha huya hai!!!!! LEKIN KAB TAK...

Even Naina can understand what Raj wants to say!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊But she cannot understand why he is holding it!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 AB NAINA HI TOH JO KI USE SAMAJHTI HAI...ITNA KI KI JITNA WOH KHUD KO BHI NAHIN SAMAJH SAKTA..

When Raj asked Naina ke woh saree pehenkar chadayi kaise karegi toh usne kaha Raj ko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 HAAN AB JAB FIKAR KARNE WAALA HI NAHIN RAHEGA TOH PHIR NAINA KYA KAHEGI AUR...

Naina said ke Raj ko uski zara bhi parwah nahi hai warna woh uske saath kabhi aisa nahi karta!!!!! AUR NAHIN TOH KYA AGAR PARWAH HOTI TOH AISA THODE HI NA KARTA...PAR YEH TOH NAINA KI SOCH HAI...MAGAR YEH HUMEIN BHI PATA HAI KI RAJ KO NAINA KI KITNI FIKAR HAI...

When Raj asked her Naina said woh apne aap se kyun nahi pucchta to which Raj got angry!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 AB RAJ BHI KAB TAK APNE GUSSE KO CONTROL KAREGA...AAKHIR WOH BHI INSAAN HI HAI...KAB TAK APNE JAZBAATON KO KAABOO MEIN RAKHEGA...

Raj aur Naina ke andar jo tufan chal raha hai you have described it brilliantly!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANKY VERY MUCH IT TOOK A LOT OF HARD WORK FOR ME...TO CREATE SUCH LINES...

Sahi kaha ke aaj unke in jazbaaton ke toofan ko behne se koi nahi rok sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 HAAN SO TOH HAI...PYAAR KA RANG HOTA HI AISA HAI...JAB EK BAAR CHAD JAATA HAI...TOH BAS GEHRA HI HOTA JAATA HAI...

Raj ne apne jazbaaton ko badi hi mushkil se sambhal kar rakha huya tha lekin ab ish toofan ko aane se koi nahi rok sakta khud khuda bhi nahi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN AB SACHCHE PREMIYON KE BEECH MEIN TOH KHUD BHAGWAAN BHI KABHIE NAHIN AATE HAIN...

Raj kissed Naina's eyelids and Naina also wants to live this moment to the fullest!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ WHAT A PURE AND DIVINE MOMENT OF TRUE LOVE...

It was like a dream come true for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj bhi usse bahut pyaar se nihaare jaa raha hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was sooo romantic and emotional!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ MAINE KAHA THA AB IN JAZBAATON KO BEHNE SE KOI BHI NAHIN ROK SAKTA HAI...

Aisa lag raha tha mano jaise ki aaj barso ke lamne intezzar ke baad do premiyon ka milan ho raha ho!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 AUR NAHIN TOH KYA HO HI TOH RAHA THA...

Raj was about to kiss her when he separated and he is thinking ke woh kya karne jaa raha tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 AB WOH BHI TOH BANDHA HUA HAI...AJEEB KASHMAKASH HAI...

Naina ki bechaini aur Raj's turmoil was aptly described!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX...

Naina slips and Raj holds her hand and then helps her in climbing!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 SAREE PEHNNE KA ANJAAM...HAHAHAHA...PAR RAJ HAI NA...

When they reached Point 1857 Raj did not leave her hand aur Naina ko Raj ka uske prati yeh lagaav bahut accha lag raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 THAT IS SO OBVIOUS DEAR...

Aaj ish jagah ki khubsoorati aur bhi zyada baad gayi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 SO TOH BADHEGI HI AB JAB RAJ AUR NAINA SAATH HAIN TOH PHIR KYA BAAT HAI...

The description of Point 1857 was beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX...

Chalte chalte Raj aur Naina ka haath ek dusre se takrata hai aur unhe wahi khubsoorat ehsaas hota hai jo ki kuch der pehle in dono ne mehsus kiya tha aur na jaane kabse mehsus kar rahe hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ BAS AB IS EHSAAS KO ZAAHIR KARNE KI DER HAI...

Nahi Raj Naina se apne dil ki baat keh raha hai aur nahi Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 DONO EK HI THAALI KE CHATTE BATTE HAIN KYUN...HAHAHAHA...

Naina is looking very beautiful in the pink saree magar sabse zyada yeh Raj ke pyaar ka asar hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ SAHI KAHA TUMNE SWEETY...

Raj and Naina both are praying at the wishing pillar aur dono ke hi naam ek dusre ke mann mein gunj rahe hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ISMEIN TOH KOI DO RAYA NAHIN HAI...

Navin aaya hai and he is saying ke woh kaise khush ho sakta hai jab ki woh do insaan jinse woh sabse zyada pyaar karta hai woh khush nahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 ABSOLUTELY RIGHT...EK DUM SAHI BAAT HI TOH KEH RAHA HAI WOH...

Navin ne Raj se kaha ke woh jaakar Naina se apne pyaar ka izhaar karde!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 KYUNKI WOH BHI JAANTA HAI KI RAJ-NAINA EK DOOSRE KE LIYE HI BANE HAIN...

Undono ki mohabbat ko ek rishtey ke roop mein dekhkar Navin se zyada khushi aur kisi ko nahi hogi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 AUR NAHIN TOH KYA...

Navin ne sahi kaha ke Raj aur Naina bas ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 NO DOUBT ABOUT THAT...

Navin is the best brother and the best friend anyone could have!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Usne sahi waqt par aakar Raj ko samjhaya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 ABSOLUTELY RIGHT DEAR...

Naina khaayi ki taraf jaa rahi thi and Raj ran towards her and held her hand!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Magar Naina toh rukhne ko taiyaar hi nahi hai and she is angry at Raj that he is going away and starts crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 AB RAJ KE BINA TOH USKE JEENE KI KOI WAJAH HI NAHIN HAI...TOH WOH AUR KAR BHI KYA SAKTI HAI...

Finally Raj confessed his love for Naina and said ke woh usse ek pal bhi dur nahi reh sakta aur usse khona nahi chahta aur usse bahut pyaar karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 HEY...HIP-HIP HURRAY...RAJ-NAINA-FOREVER...MADE FOR EACH OTHER...

Naina stopped hearing this aru Raj ki taraf apna haath badakar kehti hai ke usse vaada kare ke woh usse kabhi chhodkar nahi jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj uske hatheli par haath rakhkar kehta hai markar bhi nahi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 YEH HUA NA KHARE SONE JAISA PYAAR BHARA RISHTA...

Achanak Naina ka paon pahadi se phisalne lagta hai ki Raj uska haath tham leta hai and pulls her towards himself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Both are very close to each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiii!!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ HAII NAHIN KAHO HAII-HAII....OYE HOYE...BALLE-BALLE...

The scene and their feelings were described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX...

Bijli ki ghagadahat ki awaz se Naina hugged Raj and he hugged her back!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 KYA SAHI TIME PAR BIJLI KADKI HAI...

Naina also confessed her love aur kehti hai ke woh bahut pyaar karti hai Raj se!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ YA FINALLY SHE ALSO DID SO...

The proposal at Point 1857 was perfect!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX...

It started raining!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj naughtily said ke lagta hai aaj mausam bhi unpe meherbaan hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN SO TOH HAI..AAJ MAUSAM BHI DONO KE PYAAR MEIN CHAAR CHAAND LAGA RAHA HAI...

Naina kitna sharma rahi hai magar Raj usse khud se dur nahi jaane de raha hai!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ HOW ROMANTIC NA...

The descripton of Naina's beauty was mindblowing!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX DEAR...

Raj kissed Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ AAKHIR WOH PAL AA HI GAYA JISKA SABKO INTEZAAR THA...

It was very romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ THANX...

Finally Raj aur Naina mil gaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 HAAN...

The lines were beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX...

The story was beautiful and a great journey throughout!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Just mindblowing!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was one if the best short stories ever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 THANKY VERY MUCH DEAR...I AM TOUCHED...

The lines and descriptions were beautiful and sheer poetry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏I am speechless!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 THANKY-THANKY AUR KYA KAHUN...EVEN IAM SPEECHLESS TOO...

It was very touching and steering!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊You are a great writer and a great poet!!!!!👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 THANX A LOT...SWEETY...

Tumne sahi kaha ke yeh kahani ka anth nahi baalki haseen shuruat hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊