IZHAAR-a short new ff on (RN):IMP:NOTE:ON:29. - Page 13

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!Priti!!😊
Hope you are fine dear!!😛
What an update sweety!!!!!!👏👏👏
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So much of emotions😭....so much of pain embedded in the hearts of both these lovers...😭😭😭.
I am spellbound!!!👍🏼
I am sure ki yeh unki rishtey ka anth nehi hai.....😊

Waiting to see what happens on pt 1857!!!!!!😛
Continue soon!!!!
Take care.


love
Riya.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

hi priti, sorry for late comment. lekin tumhare ud k bare main kya likhon yaar.......! chalo apne style main likhti hoon.

" duniya k fikar, din ki batain, khuda ki yaad

sab kuch bhula diya tumhare ud ne"👏

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Great update.....

very emotional.....the way in which naina consealed her emotions was tooooooo good.....poor naina....

yeh raj bhi na.....why does he not accept his own feelings....may be then he will be able to understand naina's feelings better.....

they have agreed to go to point 1857.....just hoping that the beautiful of that pleace will do its magic and these two will confess their love.....

because this clearly cannot be the end of their relationship.

waiting for the next update.....

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

THANX DEAR.

Abhi ko lagta hai ke ab Naina aa gayi hai toh Raj nahi jaa payega!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊HAAN.

Raj Naina se kehta hai ke woh kabhi laut kar nahi aayega!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Bechari Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

SO SAD NA.

Naina apne aasu chupakar Raj ki packing kar rahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭TERRIBLY SAD HAAN.

Raj ne socha tha Naina react karegi magar jab usne nahi kiya toh yeh bhi Raj ko pasand nahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Woh chahta kya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 Usse bhi rona aa raha hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭USE KHUD NAHIN PATA HAI.

Magar usne yeh kaise soch liya ke uske hone naa hone se Naina ko koi fark nahi padhta!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Ab yeh soch raha hai ke woh chain se jaa sakega!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒HAAN SO TOH HAI.

Naina ki baaton mein kitna dard shupa huya tha!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Aur Raj ko bhi woh baatein chub rahi thi magar usne react hi nahi kiya!!!! CHUPA LIYA APNE DARD KO AUR KYA.

Naina ka aap taiyaar kaise honge kind of does seem like a reference to the seen after the Appraisal test in Raj's room where she says Nahin and they stare at each other!!!!😊 😊 😊HMMMMM....

Naina Point 1857 par jaana chahti thi aur Raj usse lekar bhi jaa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Great!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳WOH NAINA KO KAISE MANA KAR SAKTA THA.

I hope Raj naa jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊Woh dono Point 1857 par apne pyaar ka izhaar kar de!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳ME TOO, HOPE THE SAME SWEETY.

Originally posted by: rlrl

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii cutie ,,,kaisi hai achha sun tera ye Update bahat achha tha aur pata nahin kab raj naina ko kahega ki wo sachme usse pyar karta hai hehehhe aur upar se wo jaa raha hai kyun jaa raha hai yaar wo aur wo dono PT 1857 jaa rahe hain dats gr8888 yaar too good...lets hope 4 de best yaar cont soon
lots of love Riti

PART 6

Jahan par raj tyayaar ho raha hai, aur sirf naina ke baare mein hi soche jaa raha hai, shuruat se lekar ab tak, undono ka yeh khubsoorat rishta kis-kis mod se hokar guzra hai, use apni aur naina ki pehli mulaqat baar-baar yaad aa rahi hoti hai, aur phir kis tarah se undono ke beech mein galat fehmi hoti hai, lekin phir dheere-dheere undono ka rishta ek mazboot vishwaas ki dorr se bandh jaata hai,aur raj ko toh is baat ki khabar tak nahin rehti hai, ki, kab, kahan, aur kaise naina uski zindagi ka ek atut hissa ban jaati hai, aur woh use dilon jaan se chahne lagta hai, lekin tab use yeh nahin pata rehta hai ki, uski yeh chahat adhuri reh jaayegi, phir undono ki zindagi mein ek aur toofan aata hai, jab un dono ke raaste alag ho jaate hain, aur unke beech mein phir se ek nafrat ki deewar khadi ho jaati hai, lekin kehte hain na, ki jahan par sachchai aur vishwaas hota hai, wahan nafrat aur galatfehmi ke liye koi jagah nahin hoti hai, isiliye toh in sab intehaano ko paar karke bhi raj aur naina ka rishta apni sachchai aur vishwaas ki kasauti par khara utarta hai.lekin aaj phir se un dono ka rishta ek aise mod par aakar ruka hua hai, jahan par do raaste hain,ek par who naina ke saath chal sakta hai, aur doosre par akele aur ab yeh raj ko hi taya karna hai ki woh kis raah par chalna chahat hai,yahi sab sochte-sochte raj apne room se bahar nikalta hai, aur jaise hi apne room ko lock karke, piche ki taraf turn karta hai ki use saamne corridoor se naina aati hui dikhayi deti hai, woh naina ko dekhta hi rehta hai.

(aur back ground mein raj aur naina ka LRL ka fav. Track chal raha hai)

Ab raj aur naina ek doosre ke aamne saamne khade hain, aur raj use bas dekhe hi jaa raha hai, raj ko dekhkar aisa lag raha hai ki mano who naina se kuch kehna chahta hai, par keh nahin paa raha hai, aur woh apni nazrein niche jhukha leta hai.

Kuch pal toh dono aise hi khade rehte hain, phir naina raj se kehti hai.

NAINA-toh chalein sir????..

Aur itna kehkar dono saath-saath kma se bahar nikalte hain.

NAINA-jii???..

RAJ-ek baat kahun????

NAINA-haan kahiye na????.

RAJ-aaj tum bahut khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

NAINA-(halke se muskuraate hue aur sharmaate hue)-thanky sir, waise aaj aap bhi bahut achche lag rahein hain.

RAJ-(halke se muskuraate hue)-really, thanx.

NAINA-(smile karte hue)-hmmmm.

RAJ-tumhe yaad hai naina, jab pichli baar hum dono point 1857, par aaye the tum kis tarah se mujhse baar-baar zidd karke keh rahi thi ki??????

NAINA-ki chahe jo bhi ho jaaye sir, main point 1857 par jaa ke hi rahungi, aur aap baar-baar bas mujhe wahan jaane se rok rahe the???...

RAJ-haan, magar kya tumne meri baat mani???????

NAINA-nahin, kyunki mujhe jaana tha????.

RAJ-tum sach mein bahut ziddi ho naina????..

NAINA-haan, main jo bhi thaan leti hoon, use karke hi rehti hoon.

RAJ-bilkul naveen par gayi ho, woh bhi ek baar jo mann mein thaan leta tha, toh use poora karke hi dum leta tha??????.

NAINA-aakhir bahan kiski hoon?????

RAJ-hmmmmm??????..

NAINA-waise sir ek sawaal poochon aapse?????.

RAJ-haan poocho na??????.

NAINA-aaj aapne mujhe mana kyun nahin kiya?????.

RAJ-(chaunk kar)-isliye kyunki???????

NAINA-kyunki??????..

RAJ-kyunki aaj main khud yahan par aana chahta tha?????.

Naina ek pal ke liye raj ko dekhti rehti hai, aur phir kehti hai???..

NAINA-iska matlab hai ki aaj mere saath-saath,aapki bhi khwahish poori ho jaayegi?????..aur kam se kam isi bahane aaj aap aakhiri baar mere saath?????..

Aur itna kehte-kehte naina ruk jaati hai?????.

Naina ki baat sunkar, raj uski taraf dekhne lagata hai???..

Aur phir kehta hai?????

RAJ-aham???.achcha naina, ek baat toh batao, ki mere jaane ke baad, tum mujhe bhul toh nahin jaogi na?????

NAINA-(seriously)-aapko kya lagta hai????.?

Raj naina ki baat sunkar, ek pal ke liye use dekhta rehta hai, aur naina bhi raj ko dekhti rehti hai, phir raj apni nazrein hata leta hai, magar naina abhi bhi sirf raj ko hi dekhi jaa rahi hai.

RAJ-kya baat hai naina,aise kya dekh rahi ho?

NAINA-kuch nahin bas aise hi???????

Achanak se chalte-chalte, naina ka pair ek pathar se takra jaata hai, aur woh girne hi waali hoti hai ki raj uska haath pakadta hai.

RAJ-samhal ke naina??????

NAINA-main thik hoon sir, aap pareshaan mat hoyiye, aur waise bhi ab mujhe akele hi khud ko samhaalna hoga, agar aap baar-baar yuhin meri madad karte rahenge, toh mujhe aapki aadat pad jaayegi?????

RAJ-pad jaayegi, toh padjaayegi, ismein itna sochne waali kaunsi baat hai naina?????

NAINA-aap shayad bhul rahein hain, ki aaj aap yahan se humesha ke liye jaa rahein hain??????..

Raj jo ki kuch palon ke liye yeh baat bhul gaya tha, naina ki baat sunkar, use achanak se yaad aa jaata hai, ki who jaane waala hai aaj.

RAJ-(seriously)-toh kya hua agar main bhul gaya hoon, tum hona, mujhe yaad dilane ke liye???????.

NAINA-sir chadayi aa gayi hai?????..

RAJ-ok, naina, toh ab samhal kar chadna ,pichli baar tum girte-girte bachi thi????????

NAINA-don?t worry sir, is baar aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga, main samhal kar hi chadungi, kyunki mujhe pata hai ki, ab mujhe akele hi chalna hai, zindagi bhar, pichli baar toh aapne mera haath tham liya tha, magar ab aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga???????

Naina ki baat sunkar raj use ek pal ke liye dekhta hi rehta hai.